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Posted: 15 years ago
PART 14
Saxena Brothers House
Both Sameer & Varun entered the house simultaneously. One look at them told Pri that they'd done their job as he could see the same helpless,anxiety on their face as he had a few mins ago. The 3 of them didnot say anything for a long time all of them were lost in their own world! Pri gently Patted on their shoulders,trying hard to calm them down, & the 2 of them cried their heart out , the 3some sharing a group hug!! It was becoming more & more difficult for Pri to control his emotions ,he too wanted to cry out but remained strong for his bros sake. Finally the 2 calmed down a bit & Pri broke the silence & said ' We've already given the girls a lot of pain but now we have to amend our mistakes. It wont be easy to win them back. So its time for action now. Remember the promise we'd made to Ila Aunty, we have got to find the real murderer, we will not enter the G M without the culprit now ,to justify Ila aunty.

GUJRAL MANSION


Damini went to Avni 's room, she'd called Rosh there too unaware of the fact that they already knew the truth! She entered the room & was surpised to see the 2 of them already weeping. The 2 of them immediately came upto her & hugged her, all of them crying into each other's arms.




Edited by Cool_Rads - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Note: this part is only for back ground purpose & hence short! Next Part will be posted tomorrow & would be longer with more emphasis on PriDa


Edited by Cool_Rads - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Dana Marie

please please update soon


will update tomorrow!
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Posted: 15 years ago
rads good work .will wait 4 ur update
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Cool_Rads

Sia: Where's ur feedback!



emotional one.....pri again standing strong.....jus wanna give him a big🤗
very well written dear👏👏 could envision it wid GK's acting

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Rads... Liked the update but its very short.. Pls do update fast
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Posted: 15 years ago
good like it dear but need to be big and dear sorry may be i rply late these days but u know me lilbusy
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Rads, don't know how i have missed the last few parts, really sorry for that! Just caught up with everything!! It was great!! really waiting for how the guys will make it up to the girls now!! last part was really emotional!!next time tumhe mujhe PM karna hiii hooga!! 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice update..Rads..😃

looking forward to more..

-- Mru
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Rads ! Loved this part ! Do continue ... and if you dont mind a small suggeston from my side ... Please dont introduce the PTC or kill Ila in the story ! I'm sure you wont nah ? Next update jaldi likho !! Rach

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