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Posted: 15 years ago
luvly write up sonali !! it really cheered me up ! keep up da gud wrk dear !! 👍🏼👏

-Luv Niki
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey sonali..............sorry for not commenting n part 1 and 2 as i knew there is more coming up..............thanks a ton for this lovely scenario.........🤗

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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks everyone for your comments. Let me get some studying done then maybe I'll be back with more. Sneha no worries, thanks for taking the time to read and comment, really appreicate it!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Fab update Sonali !!
Glad to see an update from you ... totallyyyy PriDalicious ! 😉
Rach
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Posted: 15 years ago
@Sid-- just caught up with your last two scenes!! awesome aweosme stuuf, loved the whole PriDa getaway planned by Sameer and all, great job!! Loving ur scenes!!👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey sonali.....all the parts were simply gr888888888888888888888888👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼 and wonderful👏👏👏....i enjoyed reading all the scenes😳😳😳....you are a very good writer👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼...soo keep writing...will be waiting for more parts😊.
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Posted: 15 years ago
aww...loved it...please update again soon!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Written by pridaholic fiction no 16(valentine's day)
I know that this may not be upto the mark but still i have written it coz i know the cv's are not going to show us anything for it. please do bear with me.
The clock struck 6 of the evening and Damini was busy pacing up and down the room, it was Valentine's Day today and Prithvi hadn't even wished her, she had thought that he would be planning a surprise for her but his indifferent behavior and normal attitude brought her face to face with reality. "Damini he does not even remember that what is today otherwise he would have at least wished you once" she thought to herself disappointed. She was seething when Prithvi entered the room. He had been enjoying the very sight of her since the morning; he too had been waiting to wish her badly but he wanted to surprise her, he sat in the office whole day planning it for her, and now when all the arrangements had been made he had to subside her anger.

Damini turned away to hide her anger and disappointment from him, but was caught completely off guard as he embraced her from behind and interlocked his hands with hers and held her tightly and lovingly. "What happened you are behaving differently today" he hid his smile and tried his level best to keep his tone innocent. "Oh great that means he has completely forgotten, and see his guts, knowing that I am mad at him he is holding me in his arms. Now I will tell him what happens when you forget important days of your life Mr. Prithvi Saxena" she struggled very hard to get out of his grip but it was too strong for her.

"Prithvi dekho mujhe chodo, warna'" "warna kya Damini, tum kya karogi " he smiled sarcastically at her. She was now at the edge of an outburst, just when Prithvi loosened his grip and let her step ahead. She turned sharply and was about to speak something when he fiercely pulled her into a kiss. She struggled at first but had to give in as he did not show any signs of leaving her now. She slowly reciprocated the kiss. When he felt that her anger must have subsided, he gently pulled apart. She had cooled down by now. Slowly he took out a packet from the wardrobe and handed it to her "jao taiyaar ho jao we are going for a dinner" she smiled puzzled at him but then went inside to change.

She came out to see a dazzling Prithvi in a maroon shirt, white coat and white trousers. He looked as if she would just collapse if looked at her even once, but this was not the case. He was staring open-mouthed at her; she herself was in a white and pink saari edged by a silver lining. They both could have stayed like this, lost in each other's eyes not even fluttering an eyelid. He came out from his trauma first, and walked towards her, leaned in, tucked a flick of her hair behind the ear and placed a kiss on her cheek. "Beautiful" he whispered and she blushed, lowered her eyes until he interlocked their arms and started taking her out. They walked to the car which was filled with the smell of tulips and a beautiful melody was adding a mesmerizing effect to it. He opened the door for her and made her sit in it. They drove away Prithvi holding her hand all the while, they both shared short eye locks for the rest of the journey, smiling each time they did so.

They reached a square. As they stepped inside she saw that the path on which she walking was covered with rose petals. She halted to a stop where a signed board of red color had a message written in white "I will be your valentine for now, for ever even after eternity" she had tears in her eyes as she read it and then looked at him. She felt touched at the arrangements he had taken pains to make for her and she had all the while thought that he didn't remember. How could she even have thought that a person who was so caring like him could forget? Her thoughts vanished away when she felt a finger wipe off her tears. He smiled at her and then held out a rose for her "will you be my valentine" he asked. She grabbed the rose and clutched him into a hug. She was crying but shedding only the tears of joy and happiness, in this moment she could feel all the love and care that he had for her. He consoled her saying "agar aise hi roti rahi toh tumhaara makeup or mera coat dono kharab ho jaayenge" she pulled apart and chuckled, then wiped her tears and slapped him on his arm and again hugged him. When they finally pulled apart he asked again "will you be my valentine" she nodded in agreement and placed a kiss on his cheek "for now, for ever even after eternity" she smiled and he smiled back.

He then took her to the dinner table. It was inside a porch and was covered with a white ceiling; the lights were kept on the ground around it, giving a heavenly effect to it. He made her sit and then himself. They fed each other the food all the while looking into each other's eyes. He then asked her to remove the lid of the last tray which was placed in the center of the table. She removed it and found a small chocolate cake in the shape of a heart spelling "Prithvi ❤️ Damini" she squeezed his hand as he fed her a piece of the cake. She then herself fed him a piece of it. When they had finished he got up from their and held up is hand for her.

She took it and smiled as he took her to another patch of grass which was covered by some lights and a soft and romantic song was playing. Soon they were dancing on it, completely lost in each other's arms. Damini was finally happy to know that what she meant to him and he was happy to have her in his life.

Edited by pridaholic - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wohoo sid ...V-Day special 😉
Will read and comment tomz ..
Ab PM mat bhejna ... 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow Sid what a scene!!! Awesome job!! Could totally picture it!! Ahh so romantic of Prithvi!! Wish we could have had some kind of V-Day special!! but thanks for writing this beautiful piece on PriDa!!

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