Diaries of the 'firecracker' ~

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Posted: 16 years ago
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There will be a moment


There will be a moment when he doesn't hide things from me,
A moment when he answers every question of mine,
A moment when he doesn't avoid meeting my eye,
A moment when he is the one to wish to initiate a dance badly, without me even hinting at that,
A moment when he wants our dance to go on forever,
A moment when he doesn't leave me abruptly,
A moment where he accepts that we are equals,
A moment where he appreciates that very fact, cherishes it,
A moment when he doesn't get restless in my company,
A moment when he doesn't cover his jealousy with lame excuses,
A moment when he doesn't destroy a beautiful evening,
A moment when I can tell him he looks mad hot when he's angry,
A moment when he doesn't behave like an idiot when he is with me,
A moment when he enjoys my company as much as I do his,

A moment when he tells me every story that he has lived, every smile that he has smiled, and everything that he has witnessed,

A moment when I completely own his soul, his heart, and his mind..

There will be a moment like this, someday, some place.

A moment…that moment..



-Damini 'firecracker' Gujral~


*******

*rambling*

I know maybe it's not the time in their equation when Damz is so in deep that she thinks all of these things. But I think she might have thought at least some of these things when Prithvi got mad for no apparent reason at all and left her there abruptly after a beautiful evening..And we'll never know for sure. Because these shows mostly keep the feelings of their female protagonists secret until breaking point arrives and they have no choice. We know Damz is so serious with her crush on Pri that she inquired about his marital status, and Damz is kinda passionate and intense. So, who knows, maybe she thought all these things. 😛😆

And anyways, this was just written for fun, not in a serious mood at all, and I was having a secret laugh writing this..Had nothing better to do, so this popped up..😛 And the bolded part was purely mine, 😆 though Damz might have thought that too. .😉




Bring on the snark..:-p

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Posted: 16 years ago
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AWESOME YAAR...................you surely got talent...............if this killer wkends can bring such awesome things from u ...................i wont mind wkends from now on then..................coming to PRIDA................after the promo and precap.................i really want Pri to do something SOOOOOO PASSIONATE.....................which we will watch with our jaws dropped
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Who-I-Used-2-Be

There will be a moment


There will be a moment when he doesn't hide things from me,
A moment when he answers every question of mine,
A moment when he doesn't avoid meeting my eye,
A moment when he is the one to wish to initiate a dance badly, without me even hinting at that,
A moment when he wants our dance to go on forever,
A moment when he doesn't leave me abruptly,
A moment where he accepts that we are equals,
A moment where he appreciates that very fact, cherishes it,
A moment when he doesn't get restless in my company,
A moment when he doesn't cover his jealousy with lame excuses,
A moment when he doesn't destroy a beautiful evening,
A moment when I can tell him he looks mad hot when he's angry,
A moment when he doesn't behave like an idiot when he is with me,
A moment when he enjoys my company as much as I do his,

A moment when he tells me every story that he has lived, every smile that he has smiled, and everything that he has witnessed,

A moment when I completely own his soul, his heart, and his mind..

There will be a moment like this, someday, some place.

A moment'that moment..








Bring on the snark..:-p

ok here goes
*proceeds to aim and FIRE*
and that my dear
When it happens
brace yourself...
That moment will be dynamite😆
Edited by current - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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that was very very good!...how do you capture the character so nicely...i think you're going into the character more than the actors themselves lol...no worries...it's way to pass the time on the weekend...
damini, hun, there will be a time when you can do alll this...you just have to wait a while...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Who-I-Used-2-Be

There will be a moment


There will be a moment when he doesn't hide things from me,
A moment when he answers every question of mine,
A moment when he doesn't avoid meeting my eye,
A moment when he is the one to wish to initiate a dance badly, without me even hinting at that,
A moment when he wants our dance to go on forever,
A moment when he doesn't leave me abruptly,
A moment where he accepts that we are equals,
A moment where he appreciates that very fact, cherishes it,
A moment when he doesn't get restless in my company,
A moment when he doesn't cover his jealousy with lame excuses,
A moment when he doesn't destroy a beautiful evening,
A moment when I can tell him he looks mad hot when he's angry,
A moment when he doesn't behave like an idiot when he is with me,
A moment when he enjoys my company as much as I do his,

A moment when he tells me every story that he has lived, every smile that he has smiled, and everything that he has witnessed,

A moment when I completely own his soul, his heart, and his mind..

There will be a moment like this, someday, some place.

A moment'that moment..



-Damini 'firecracker' Gujral~


*******

*rambling*

I know maybe it's not the time in their equation when Damz is so in deep that she thinks all of these things. But I think she might have thought at least some of these things when Prithvi got mad for no apparent reason at all and left her there abruptly after a beautiful evening..And we'll never know for sure. Because these shows mostly keep the feelings of their female protagonists secret until breaking point arrives and they have no choice. We know Damz is so serious with her crush on Pri that she inquired about his marital status, and Damz is kinda passionate and intense. So, who knows, maybe she thought all these things. 😛😆

And anyways, this was just written for fun, not in a serious mood at all, and I was having a secret laugh writing this..Had nothing better to do, so this popped up..😛 And the bolded part was purely mine, 😆 though Damz might have thought that too. .😉




Bring on the snark..:-p



@blue: Sarah🤗 This is soooooooo soooooooooooooo good especially the blue one..... And firecracker, u have a thing for coming up with nicknames, u know.. will try to add more...
And for once i am really happy that i caught ur post on the weekend, early think it has been a while thogh..
😳

@zainab: Dynamite, Oh YES!!!!
👏
Edited by Shwetha! - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OH I like the firecracker thing Sarah....I see u call her that too...LOL we think alike. And the moments were described to perfection..........I think u should do one for prithvi too....I bet he has a lot of the similar moments on HIS wish list.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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There will be a moment;

When he smiles at me the moment he sees me,

When he smiles when he thinks of me,

When i smile at him he gives me his assuring and at times that naughty smile of his,

When he misses me as much as I do him,

When his face lights up the moment he sees me just like mine does,

When he holds my hand for no particular reason,

When he gives me a hug for no particular reason,

When he sneaks in a kiss for no particular reason,

When he teases me and jokes with me with free abandon,

When he discusses his deepest buried secrets, worries and desires,

When he turns to me for support, encouragement and assurance just like i do,

When he is completely at ease with my family just like i hope to be someday,

When he trusts me with his life and that of his family just like i do,

When he stops bringing our previous or existing working relationship between us,

When he realizes that i don't care about the money or the status,

When he realizes that i l love him for who he is,

When he realizes that he loves me for who i am,

When he realizes we complete each other,

When he realizes that We Love Each Other, Truly Madly and Deeply...


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Posted: 16 years ago
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That was a delicious read Sarah! ... love your poetic approach to writing, it makes things so much more beautiful. (I am telling you, Pridaholism is making us do all sorts of things!) I just hope that someday Damini would actually feel all of those feelings! ... That angst, that want.. oh, I would like to see what it does to our feisty Damini!

@Shwetha, just read your additions, and absolutely loved them! .. my favorite was "when he realizes that we complete each other" ... how romantic!

Edited by coolfire - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@Sarah....it was awesome.....Like....I dont understand...what r u doin here....u shud b someone in the creative heads...so that these creep shud LNMDJ polls n stuffs shudn't even arise...it will break part all previous records of trps.......I wish....
It was soo romantic n soo intense n passionate.....hhhh...loved dem sooo sooo muchh

And and and shwetha......u were fantabulous....loved ur addition.....it was great again.....

Hats off to u both.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Who-I-Used-2-Be

A moment when he tells me every story that he has lived, every smile that he has smiled, and everything that he has witnessed,

A moment when I completely own his soul, his heart, and his mind..

There will be a moment like this, someday, some place.

A moment'that moment..

Sarah, this was beyond beautiful!! 👏
I'm in love with your post! It's so magnificient that I'm speechless... Can't say anything that would do justice to this...
If I may continue...
In that moment,
He will look into my eyes and know what I feel for him...
I will read his love for me in his eyes...
He will hold me to his heart and NEVER let go...
I will kiss all his pain and fears away...
We will find our eternity...
Edited by diya86 - 16 years ago

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