TERI CHAAHAT ME...R-N LOVE STORY..THE END - Page 20

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Posted: 17 years ago
Too good!!!Awesome!!!!

Bechara Raj!!!Uske dad ne Naina ko uske maike bhej diya aur woh kuch kar bhi nahi paya!!!! 😭

Naina bhi bahut dukhi hai!!!!Bechari!!!Bahut pyaar jo karti hai Raj se!!!! 😭

Naina ne sahi kaha Raj apne dad ke saamne toh chuha ban gaya tha!!!!Usko kehna chahiye tha!!!! 😡

Beejee ko saza ki baat nahi karni chahiye thi!!!! 😡

Par Nilima ne kya idea diya hai!!!! 😛

Naina ko neend bhi nahi aa rahi hai uske bagair!!!!How sweet!!!! 😳

Raj aaya chupke se!!! 😆

Aur dono phir ek dusre par ilzaam lagane lage!!!!😆 Par dono ne khana nahi khaya!!!! 😊 😊 😊 Ohhhh!!!!! 😭

Beejee bhi kuch kam nahi!!!! 😛 😛 😛 Dono ko akela chhod kar chali gayi!!!! 😉 😉 😉

Unki bhi love marriage huyi thi!!!! 😛 Wow!!!She eloped with Naina's Dadajee!!!! 😆 Kya baat hai!!!! 😆

Raj ne sahi kaha!!!!Ab Naina ko bhagane hi padega!!!! 😆

Raj ne kaha Naina se uske haath se khana khilane ko!!!! 😛 😛 😛 Naina ne dhamki di aur usko apne haath se hi khana padha!!!! 😆

Dono ab chup chup ke milenge!!! 😳 Jaise shaadi se pehle milte hai!!!! 😆 Great!!!! 😆 😆 Mazze lo romance ka!!!! 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!Awesome!!!!

Bechara Raj!!!Uske dad ne Naina ko uske maike bhej diya aur woh kuch kar bhi nahi paya!!!! 😭

Naina bhi bahut dukhi hai!!!!Bechari!!!Bahut pyaar jo karti hai Raj se!!!! 😭

Naina ne sahi kaha Raj apne dad ke saamne toh chuha ban gaya tha!!!!Usko kehna chahiye tha!!!! 😡

Beejee ko saza ki baat nahi karni chahiye thi!!!! 😡

Par Nilima ne kya idea diya hai!!!! 😛

Naina ko neend bhi nahi aa rahi hai uske bagair!!!!How sweet!!!! 😳

Raj aaya chupke se!!! 😆

Aur dono phir ek dusre par ilzaam lagane lage!!!!😆 Par dono ne khana nahi khaya!!!! 😊 😊 😊 Ohhhh!!!!! 😭

Beejee bhi kuch kam nahi!!!! 😛 😛 😛 Dono ko akela chhod kar chali gayi!!!! 😉 😉 😉

Unki bhi love marriage huyi thi!!!! 😛 Wow!!!She eloped with Naina's Dadajee!!!! 😆 Kya baat hai!!!! 😆

Raj ne sahi kaha!!!!Ab Naina ko bhagane hi padega!!!! 😆

Raj ne kaha Naina se uske haath se khana khilane ko!!!! 😛 😛 😛 Naina ne dhamki di aur usko apne haath se hi khana padha!!!! 😆

Dono ab chup chup ke milenge!!! 😳 Jaise shaadi se pehle milte hai!!!! 😆 Great!!!! 😆 😆 Mazze lo romance ka!!!! 😳

well..aage kyaa hoga..kuchh malum nahi..par Raj bawal zaroor karega..Naina aur Raj ki nautanki..ki joint venture..bahut hulchul machayegi..

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Posted: 17 years ago
nice ud.RN part is 2 funny 👏 .plz cont soon.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
the update was very funny😆.it is very interesting to see a totally different kind of a fiction dedicated to Raj and Naina.thank u.update soon😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
plz update soon...........
waiting eagrly 😭 .....
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Posted: 17 years ago
yaar raat toh ho gayi when will u update
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Posted: 17 years ago

jab Raj ghar lauta..chupke se apne kamre me jaa raha tha..tab corridore ki light jali..

Omveer khade the..

Raj--dad..aap abhi tak soye nahi?

Omveer--nahi..beta..jab bachcha nadan ho..aur shaher me aag faili ho..to har baap ko jaagnaa hi padta hai..

Raj--main night walk k lia gaya tha..

Omveer--yeh neend me chalne ki beemari kab se hui beta?

Raj--neend me chalna nahi dad..night walk..khana zada khaa lia tha..hazam karne k lia tahelne gaya tha..

Omveer--jaha tak mujhe yaad hai..tumne to dinner kia hi nahi....fir hazam karne ka sawal hi uthta..

aise me Raj ne zor se dakkaar li...


Nilima(man hi man)--ab yeh ladka gaya..

Omveer--itni lambi dakkaar..kaise beta?

Raj--gas ho gai hai na dad...!!!isi lia..

Omveer--chal murga ban..

Raj--dad...

Nilima--itne bade ladke ..

Omveer--tum nahi jaanti Nilima..yeh ladka..kitna badmaash hai..

Raj ko baki ki raat murga ban k corridore me rukna pada..

aur fir jab usko laga..ab koi khatra nahi..woh chupke se chala gaya bedroom me..

tab subha k 5 baje the...

bahut zor ki neend aai Raj ko..

woh so gaya..

subha 10 baje uski neend khuli..kyon ki Nilima uske kamre ka darwaza zor zor se knock kar rahi thi..

Raj utha..aut fir darwaza khola..

Nilima--kyaa hua tujhko?

Raj--5 baje to main sone gaya..to..kyon puchh rahi hain aap?

Nilima--achha sun..fresh hoke neeche aa ja...nashta kar le..

Raj--thik hai..

aise me Raj k mobile par Naina ka SMS..

shaam k 4 baje University gate par woh khadi rahegi..

Raj neeche aayaa..taiyaar hoke..

Omveer paper padh rahe the...

Raj--Good Morning dad..

Omveer--very good morning Sunny boy..aaj tumko chalna hai mere saath..ek property dealing ka case hai..office se 2 baje nikalna hai..

Raj--lautenge kab?

Omveer--raat ho jaayegi beta..

Raj--par dad..

Omveer ne bahut hi cold voice me puchha,"any problem Sunny?"

Raj ghabra gaya.."no problem..at all..its ok.."

Omveer--Good..

Raj office chala gaya...

Nilima--kyon kar rahe ho aisa?kyon sata rahe ho bechare ko?

Omveer--sach Nila..shaadi k baad insaan koi kaam ka nahi rehta..

Nilima--jaise k tum..yaad hai..tumhari haalat kyaa hui thi?sara kaam to mere sasoorjee samhaalte the..aur fir Raj paida hua..aur jab se Raj bada hua..Raj hi business dekh raha hai..

Omveer--ab lag rahi ho tum Naina ki sasooma... Naina jaise Raj ko jali kati sunati hai..tum bhi mujhe aise suna rahi ho..well..kaun kehta hai..k saas-bahu rivals hote hai?

Nilima--hmm..

Omveer--waise kal raat ko tumne hi Raj ko idea dia tha na..Naina se milne jaane ka..?

Nilima--nahi to..yeh kyaa bol rahe ho?

Omveer--Naina ki saas ho..saas hi raho..Naina mat bano..kyaa nautanki ladki hai!!Raj par ..yeha tak k tum par bhi achha asar hua hai uska..

Nilima--achha..chalo main tumhari davai laati hoon.. kal Doctor k paas chalna hai tumko..blood pressure check karvana hai..yaad hai na?

Omveer--jee Patnishree..

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Raj office k raaste par tha..raaste par car rok li usne..

Medical store se usne Julaab ki goliaan kharidi...

aur gaya office..

12 baje Omveer office aaye..

1 baje lunch karna hai..

Raj ne Omveer k sabzi me Julaab ki golian mila di..

Omveer ko loose motion hoga..to kaheki property.. aur kaheki deal?

Chapraasi plate laane gaya..tray me unka khana rakha tha...aur tray ka kinara table se bahar aa gaya tha..Raj ki secretary ne dekh lia..woh thik karne aai..

aur tray ko samhaal k table k centre me rakh dia..aur jis direction me Raj ne rakha tha..us direction me nahi..bal ki ulte direction me..

plates lekar Chapraasi aayaa...aur Raj ne apni sabzi utha li..jaisa usne dekha..k jis tarha uski sabzi ka bowl rakha tha..

khana shuru kia..

khane k 5 minute baad..

Raj intezaar karne laga..k kab Omveer daurenge toilet ki taraf..

par unpar koi asar hi nahi..par Raj k pet k andar tarha tarha ki harkat hone lagi..

Omveer Raj ki cabin me aaye..."Raj..beta..yeh property k papers hai....arre yeh kaha gaya?"

Raj apni jagah par nahi tha..

toilet se paani ki awaaz..

Raj nikla.."yes dad.."

Omveer--haa..yeh papers dekhlo..

Raj--abhi..ooh no..

Raj fir se gaya toilet..

aur fir..aur fir gaya toilet...........

Omveer pareshaan ho gaye..

4 baje..Naina ka phone aayaa..

Raj tab apne cabin k sofe par leta hai..Doctor aake injection deke gaye usko..

Raj ka phone Omveer ne recieve kia..

Naina--Raj..main wait kar rahi hoon tumhara..

Omveer--haa..Bahu ..kaisi ho?

Naina chauk gai..

Naina--Pairipauna Papajee..

Omveer--Jindi reh..par Raj ki to haalat bigad hai.. usko Julaab hua hai..

Naina--kyaa?

Omveer--haa betajee,to tum dono aaj milnewale the..?hmm,tabhi main kahoo k property dealing k bare me Raj itna argue kyon kar raha hai...aur ek baat bataoon..Raj ka yeh Julaab..ek bahut hi High Class Magazine ki taraha launch hua hai..k samajh me aataa hai..k bina Editor k yeh ho hi nahi sakta.. aur Editor to Raj hi hai..

Naina--jee Papajee?

Omveer--Raj k Coat k pocket se mujhe Julaab ki golian mili hai..

Naina--oohh no..

Omveer--oohh yes..aur..Raj ko to tumse milna tha na?to itna bada bewakoof to woh hai nai k khud hi julaab ki golian khayega...aur maine notice kia hai..k lunch k baad se Raj ko aisa hua hai..

Naina--jee..

Omveer--haa...aur shayad usne mere khane me milaya tha Julaab ki golian.. aur ghalti se woh khana uske plate me gaya..

Naina--jee..

Omveer--sab samajh me aa raha hai..anyways..Raj to aaj milne aa nahi sakta..tum apne aap ghar chali jaao....thik hai na?

Naina--Jee..Pairipauna..

Naina ne phone cut kar dia..

Raj udhar chilla raha hai.."haiiii.,,,main mar gaya..arre..bachao..."

Omveer--apne baap k khane me Julaab ki goli milaayega..nateeja to bhugatna hi hoga na beta..aur Naina ko maine bol dia k woh ghar chali jaaye..aaj to tu jaa nahi paayega..na..usse milne..

Omveer chale gaye Raj k cabin se...jaate waqt..ek Employee ko bol kar gaye k.."thodi der baad..Raj ko ghar pahucha dena.."


Edited by yakkudimag - 16 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
my god..........
u r too much
m laughing like anything

bapre........its almost 2:30am..............and m laughing like hell...........


kya comment likhoon yaar.........

this ws as awesome as ever............i love this fic too......no matter what my mood is, whenevr i read this fic i m in splits..........

wowwwwwwwww.......... 😆

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: daisy_luvs_ ff

my god..........
u r too much
m laughing like anything

bapre........its almost 2:30am..............and m laughing like hell...........


kya comment likhoon yaar.........

this ws as awesome as ever............i love this fic too......no matter what my mood is, whenevr i read this fic i m in splits..........

wowwwwwwwww.......... 😆

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thanks a lot..but..this is not the end of nautanki....picture abhi baki hai..

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Posted: 17 years ago

Too good!!!Awesome!!!!

Bechara Raj!!!Woh toh gaya!!! 😭 Usko murga bana diya saari raat!!! 😆 Usko bhi tabhi dakar lena tha!!! 😛 😛

Subah ko bhi property deal ke chakkar mein faasa diya!!!! 😭 !!!Bechara!!! 😭

Omveer aur Nilima ki baatein were too funny!!!! 😆 Kaun kehta hai saas-bahu rival hote hai!!!Naina ki saas toh ussi ki tarah hai!!!! 😆

Omveer ne sahi kaha!!!Usse jali kati suna rahi hai jaise Naina Raj ko sunati hai!!!! 🤣 Omveer aur Nilima bhi bilkul Raj aur Naina ki tarah jhagad rahe thhe!!!! 🤣

Raj ne Omveer ke khane mein julaab ki goliyaan milane ka socha!!! 😆 Par uski stupid secretary ne sab gadbad kar diya!!! 😡

Raj toh baar baar......... O God!!!! 🤣

Omveer samaj bhi gaya aur ussi ne Naina ka phone uthaya!!!! 😛 Poor Naina!!!! 😭 😭 😭

Bechara Raj!!!! 😭 Naina se milne jaa bhi nahi paya aur uski yeh halat ho gayi!!!! 😆

Iteda ishq mein rota hai kya

Ab aage aage dekho hota hai kya........😊 😉

Edited by Shaina_b - 17 years ago

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