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Posted: 17 years ago
#81
Wow!!!Aalekh is just great!!!

I loved Naina's plan to make him scream and shout and get it out of him!!!!I think it is great!!!

And I loved the interview!!!Raj almost said it that he loves her.And Naina being so formal and giving him phone number and address was too funny!!!

Address of the house where he had climbed pipes and lives next door to and number that he must have called zillions of times....ha ha 😆 😆 😆 !!!

But I hope that Raj's heart wins!!!The Raj that loves Naina comes back soon!!!!

Naina bhi usse theek karne ke liye kya kya seh rahi hai......sach hai pyaar karte ho toh uski khushi sabse zaroori hai!!!!! 😊

And I knew ke Aalekh aate hi sab theek karega!!!!

Lekin agar Raj office mein nahi hai toh kaha hai??
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update plzzzzzzzzzzzz asap now only with long part asap.
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@rani..

thnxx thnxx a lott!!.....mann this timee too much unwanted praise frm u..well thnkuuu is all i can say...if u rellii lykd evry bit of it...wers my hat den?...lol!...well i hv nothing against catss but once this crazy cat got onto me in my frnds housee nd since den i jus hv dis weird feeling for them....

@shilpa
heyy thnx for readin my fic...nd glad u lykd it...hope u cntinue readin i try my best to update ervydayy soo rmmbr to chek again.....thnxx oncee again

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@shaina
the plan was excuted by the character naina but i thght of it...lol!...all credit is goin to naina.. 😊 ....yuupp that interview was a bit of comedy in my fic..i lyk to have a bit of evrythn especially comedy othrwise it bcms borin...raj kahan gaya next updtt mein dekho...lol!..

@swetaa..

patience my frnd patience next updtt in sme tym...

Edited by cool~~gal - 17 years ago
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nice ud 👏 .plz cont soon........
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PART-8

Aalekh reached C&G...

He went straight to Raj's cabin he dint find im there...He actually saw his secretary there..

Aalekh--Heyy you must be the new chic??

That girl looked up at him with raised eyebrows...

Girl--Its calledd a secretary...

Aalekh--Oopss soryy baby!..

Girl--Whatever..

Aalekh--I am Aalekh and you??

Girl--Rosy..

Aaleh--Pleased to meet you rosy..

Rosy--Boss told me about someone like you...He was so right...

Aaelkh--What did that pig tell you about me..

Rosy--Yeah he said there is this black-haired creature who looks like a human by default but is a chimpanzee at heart...he loves flirting around and above all he is one stinking ass...

Aaelkhh was wide-eyed..

Aalekh--Did Raj tell you stuff like that??

Rosy--Shows how well you knoe him...He doesnt even talk to anybodyy off all the people you think he will have the time to desribe some weirdd friends of his to me....godd if he speaks properly to me its enough...i dunt care about his half human half chimpanzee friends...

Aalekh--So how dare you cook up stuff about me..What the hell do you mean byy looks like a human by default?..

Rosy--Listen I ev got much better work to do...Justt go down the floor youll get better girls than me....trut me...you could kill some time flirting with them...

Aalekh--Your too much....What kinda peolpe has Raj hired man..I'll tell him to fire you...

Rosy--He wont do that!..

Aalekh--Dunt be over-confident!..

Rosy--I am confident!..He wont throw me..

Aalekh--and miss Rosy what makes you say that?

Rosy--(read this a little fastt))Well I am the only person who willingly wears a kneee-length skirtt without complaining when i come for work...He triedd about 22 girlss preciselyy and rejected all of them coz they refused to wear a knee-length skirt...And boss wantedd some one who would wear a knee-lenght skirt..so he called me back...and i m sure that he wont throw me again this time ...

At that Aalekh burstt out laughing!..

Aalekh--Raj is one sample other people hire the one whose ready to wear the leastt and this guy wants someone who wears knee-length stuff....gosh!..MY weird friend!..

Rosy kept the file she was holding down..(seriously said)

Rosy--You knoe from what i knoe about him...Hes gott sme problem in life..Some thing which he doesnt share with anyone...its like killing him from within...hes mentally too depressed...I dunnoo maybe I am wrong..But thats what i feel...

Aalekh then remembers why exactly he was here

Aalekh--You'r right!..He is a pig...But now i remmeber i need to speak to him where is he?..

Rosy--He is'nt around aalekh...I havent seen him for some time now...why dunt you ask the receptionist..she could guide you....shes female you see she could help...

And rosy has this big smile...

Aalekh--Heyy dunt mistake me for that kinda guy..Its not that i am crazy boutt hot women...but justt nyway..Ill go and ask d receptionist..

Rosy--Yupp seeya..

Aalekh--seeya..

He walks towards the door...turns behind..

Aalekh--Rosy..

Rosy--Yup..

Aaelh--Your sweett and kind..just the perfect secretary for raj..

Rosy smiles --Thanku..

Turns and turns behind again

Aalekh--rosy

Rosy--Yup..

Aalekh--Raj loves your knee-length skirt...

Rosy-Thanku..

Walks two steps and turns

Aalekh--Rosy..

Rosy--Yup..

Aalekh--Your sexy..

Rosy--Umm...Thanku!....

Aalekh--Rosy..

Rosy--Yup..(irritated this time)

Aalekh--Bye..

Rosy--Bye!..

ANd Aalek comes out...Shakes this rosy girl outta his head...and back to naina and raj...

Aalekh--Bahut hogaaya fliritn...abb naina ka socch...Yeh idiot kahan hoga..

Aalekh goes to the receptionist...She says Raj is out of office..

He looks around for some more time....And spends sme 20mins there

Aalekh goes out and finds shyamlal there(driver)

Aalekh--Kidhar hain woh?

Shyamlal--Pata nahi sahab badee gusse mein thee gaddi leke chaley gaye..

Aalekh--TU idhar kya kar raha hain phir gaddi toh tu chalta hain na??

Shyamlal--Unhoon mujhe ghar janey ko kaha...

Aalekh sighs...

Aalekh--Gussa tha?

Shyamlal--Ji sahab..

Aalekh--Gussa tha ya bahut gussa tha??

Shyamlal was confused..

SHyamlal--Pata nahi sahab lekin gussa the..

Aalekh--Acha abb ghar ja...kal milte hain..

Aalekh went home..

*********

Naina--Ohh gawdd kahin plan back-fire ho gaya toh aalekh???

Aalekh--PAta nahi .....

Naina--SOchoo...

Aalekh--Wait till dinner hell cme back..

************

Itss 9:30 Raj gets home by 7...

THe fone rings..

Naina--Hello..

Navin--Navin here..

Naina--Yup bhai...late today

Navin--I wont be coming home I ev got some very important work...I'll come in the morning..You eat nd sleep..

Naina--K bhai..
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Itss 10 15..

Naina--Thats enough Aalekh...Where is he??

Aalekh--I dunt noe yaar...I tried some places where he could be...Hes not there...

Naina--Did you try the beach??

Aalekh--Yup i did..He isnt there...his phone is switched off..

Naina was silent she was bout to cry...

Naina--Ohhh gawdd Aalekh...

Aalekh--Now what??

Naina--HOw could i forget??

Aalekh--huh??

Naina--how could i forget where he could have gone i knoe where he will be....come fast..

Aalekh--come ill tell you...

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Naina givess Aalekh the instructions where to go...

*********

Aalekh stops the car and looks up "PRIMA LADIES BEAUTY PARLOUR"...

Aalekh--You think he will be here??Naina have you lost it...

Naina gives him an irritated look...holds his head and turns the other side....

Aalekh reads another boardd in one small corner "LOVER'S POINT"

Aalekh--Does he knoe this place exist...

Naina--No he doesnt...Aalekhh this is the only god damn place he can be in and it dint strike me how could i forget...i am a pig.....We started from here man!...

Aalekh--Both of you are pigss now wat are you waiitng for?..Go get him..

Naina--No ways you are goin..

Aalekh--I am not going..I think he would hv broken down by now.....he needs you..

Naina--Hes angry with me..

Aalekh--Go naina..You guys started from this point..try and start again...if not that atleas only you should go there and get him...

Naina nodded and got out...

LOVER'S POINT
A beautiful placee where all couples in delhi used to go....now very few people used to go....it was a hugee placee to reach that pointt you have to climbb many steps.....its on a high raised structure...The view from there is beautiful....It has a white sheet stuck all over...on whch couples used to write their names for their lovee to be encryptedd on that wall and be everlasting in life....it was a very huge place..

Raj and Naina had been there many times...They had started as lovers from lovers point!....

*** This place is imaginaryy it doesnt relly exist in delhi ...Lol!....****

Naina stood at the first step...Looked up evrything felt the same...She remembered her days with Raj..As she climbed up the stairss evry word was coming back...Evry memory was refreshed....aftr some 15 mins she reached the last flight of steps...

She never felt tired when she climbed them with Raj...But today she was very tired.....Raj was not with her and these steps looked never ending....

She somehow managed to reach there...She saw the view and gasped...It was still the same heavens on earth!

She was lost in the beauty of it...
SHe then went to the Lovers wall..


It was not tough for her to spot the heart with Raj and Naina in it...A tear rolled out when she saw Their heart!.......SHe wiped it immediately!..

She looked around for a long time

Then she looked around for Raj..He wasnt to be found..

Suddenly a stupidd thought crossed Naina..

Man we looked all around we dint look next door...I hope he wasnt sleeping in his room...Still she kept lookingg for him...Suddenly her eys saw something and a smile came on her face..

It was this small tiny roomm...

It was the lovers roomm..

Now in this room the couples stood together it was very tiny..place for one person but 2 people shouls stand if you can stand in that room actually box...if you can stand in that box with your lover and close the door then your lovee is true and you would be with that person forevr..

But suddenly Naina's eyes were filled with tears....I and Raj stood in that boxx...WE closed the door...Was our love not true??...Why arent we together....

She said that pretty loud...

She went towards that box and wen she looked in she gott the shock of her life...Raj lay there inside that box sittin on the ground and his eyes were closed..

Naina immediately pulled him out in the open air...

Naina--Raj...Raj are you alright??

Raj slowly opemed his eyes...

He was sleepy..he had fallen asleep in that small box...

Raj got up...SAw Naina in front of him...

Raj--Uhh I am fine..What are you doing here?

Naina--Itss 1 in the night and you dint get home...I was scared bhai also said he has nnight shift work today..I was very scared for you searched evrywhere...But then i knew you would be here.....

Raj was sielnt..

Raj--To-be-employees shouldnt be so concerned for their to-be-boss...Its against the rules..

Naina was in no mood to listen to his shit now..She was worried about him..

Naina--Raj we can speak that later you r lying since gawd noes wen you look dull also weak and exhaustedd lets get homee and den well speak about what you and i should do..

Raj--Ummm did you call me Raj??...I thought it was sir...(raj was pretty dreamyyyyy)

Naina--please lets go...

Raj--Naina you remeber this place...

Naina had tears in her eyes...She knew
Raj was badly hurt...

Naina--I cant ever forget this placee in my life..means a lot to me..

RAj--It meant a lot to me..Not anymore...this box...Its story is all false....

Raj--I came here with my love..We stood we closed the door...but what happened she left me and went off...

Naina noticed something different about Raj..He wasnt in his senses...He was hurt..

Naina--Raj shall we go home now..

Raj--I dunt want to go home..I need too go see her face again..She doesnt understand me...she left me and went...

Naina found it very weirdd Raj dint knoe what he was talking..

Naina--I will speak to her now enough lets go...

Naina pullss Raj and takes him towards the steps...They just started going down When Raj threw himself on naina..
He was unconsicious...His last few words were..

Raj--Thankuu Naina...I love you!..

Naina was in a state of shock...He said it he lovess me....
He had passed out...

Naina--Gawdd this guy is a pig only...now what do i do??

Naina sat down at that step...hopeless she could'nt carry him down those steps...She now had to wait for aalekh to get worried and come there...she dint have a choice going down and calling him made no sense...besides leaving raj wasnt safe either.....

After about 40 mins Aalekh came..

Aalekh--Naina wat on earth is goin on?

Naina--He passed out..You have to carry him...

Aalekh--I cant believe this..Wats with this guy??

Naina--Shall we??

Aalekh picked up Raj and started climbing down...

Aalekh-Who showed you this weirdd tiring place...soo many stepss gawd...

Naina--I and Raj used to come here often...when we used to climb together it wasnt tough today i found it very tough..

Aalekh--But man so many steps...

Naina jus smiled...

Naina--These steps are witness to our love...how many times we came here..

Naina was gettin senti again...and Aalekh dint want that..

Aalekh--Yaa steps were the witness why not well make them stand in the witness boxx...would they fit??

Naina had no choicee but to laugh on his sad joke...

Aalek was satisfied..
They reached down put Raj in the car and drove home
********

They put Raj in Navins romm since he wasnt gonna come home..

Aalekh--Get some food and water..

They sprinkled water on his face..he got up..

Raj--What is this??..

Aalekh--Just shut upp...Eat this food...

He gives him food...He eats it quietly..

Raj--How on earth did i get here??

Aalekh-DO you knoe wehre you were?

Raj--Where was I??

Aalekh--In some weirdoo placee..

Just then Naina entered...

RAj--Hii naina..

ANd then raj realized where he was what was happening...naina wasnt the 2 years old naina...uff..it all came in a flash...

Naina was surprised...


Raj--Umm..okk i remeber evrything now..

Aalekh-WHat do you??

Raj--I was at Lovers point...

Aalekh--Some weirdoo pointt with a thousand stepss towards it..

Raj gave a smile...

Raj--Ummm So you came there??

Aalekh--Naina did...U passed outt and she cldnt carry you...After sometimee of waiting in the car i strtd climbing those steps and got you down...thnxx to you i had to climb thosee thousadns or lakhs of steps

Raj looked at naina...he dint remeber seeing her there what she said what he ssaid he was blank he wass too weak.....

Raj--Aalekh sorry for de trouble but your over-exagerating those steps arent tough to climb...

Aalekh--Yea ur superman man...mr.mahan...i couldnt even naina couldnt

Raj looked at Naina shocked...SHe couldnt...

Naina--Ummm..Yea today i found those steps tough...When someone is with you itss easy and whe someone isnt its tough...

RAj got her messagee...

Raj--Ummm Naina..

Naina--Yup..

Raj--I dunt remember saying anything or seeing you there....

Naina--You were very weak you left office in the morning...after that i guess you havent had nythin...so you were pretty weak...and then you passed out...

Raj--How did you get to knoe i was weak coz i dint eat anything....I could have passed out even if i was drunk

Naina-Made it out from the way you spoke...

Raj was noww scared...

Raj--I hope i dint say anything i shouldnt have..

He loked at Naina embarrasedd...

Naina--Nothing great....Be relaxed...

Raj knew even if he hadd naina wont tell him that .....He wanted to break his head...

Naina looked down those words ringing in her head perfectly....

THanku Naina...I love you...

Naina had a tear in her eye...It rolled out...But she felt a hand wiping it she expected it to be Aalekh..But it was Raj...He wiped her tear...

Raj--Umm..They are precious even today...For a lot of people if not me...

Flashbacck!...

Naina--Bhai never speak to me like that...He shouted and screamed....for a small mistake...

Naina was sobbing...

Raj came there..

RAj-Naina its ok his mood wasnt good....its alright...He dint mean to hurt you please stop crying....

Naina was crying...

Raj kissed her on her cheek right where that tear was and it dried away...he kissed away all her tears...

Raj--Naina this tears are very preciouss for me.......maybe not for anyone else...but for me they are veryy veryy veryy precious.....

Naina smiledd..

Naina--I love you..

Raj--Lovee you jaan....

****(end of flashback)

Naina heard his words...For lot of people if not me..His words were opposite of what they were 2 years back....

Naina couldnt controll and she sttrtd cryingg uncontrolabbly....

Aalekh stood there and dint noe what to do...whn naina started crying he sat by her side...

Aalekh--Shhh!....Stop crying Naina...stop it please...

Naina caught his shirt and was still crying...

Raj saw this and his heart ached to see her lke that...He couldnt do anything for her...Nothing...

He sat there and saw her finding peace in Aalekh's arms rather than his...He had tears in his eyes too...and he couldnt see Naina like this..He got up from the bed and walked out....

Aalekh--Nainaa pleasee stopp it ...

Naina was trying hard to controll..

Naina-He used to say if not for the world for me your tears are precious and today he is saying if not for me for this world for others your tears are precious...

Naina wiped her tears...

Naina--Aalekhh nothings gonna work...he just doesnt love me anymore...He doesnt care for me...

Aalekh--Thenn why are you so affected by what he told you there before he passed out...

Naina--What did he say??He dint say anything..

Naina tried to cover up

Aalekh--Naina I can see them in your eyes...

Naina--He dint say anything --she started weeping again....

Naina--What do you think he said?

Aalekh--Well he could have said I love you...Maybe something more...

Naina--What more??

Aalekh--I want you to be the mother of my children...

Naina was crying and then a smile appeared on her face..

Naina--Aalekhh even in this kinda situation I am crying and you are cracking some stupid 3rd grade joke....

Aalekh--Atleas you stopped crying...I cant see you this way man....atleas myy 3rd grade jokes help..

Naina--He said just I love you nothing beyond..And I am glad...

Aalekh--Hes a crazy pig...

Raj stood at the door and said nothing but heard the entire conversation...

He dint knoe how to react what to say what to do...It was getting tooo messyy...

He sat in the hall....

Tension clear on his face...

Aalekh came there..

Aalekh--Chill shes better now...shouldnt have toldd that greatt dialogue..

Aalekh had a serious look on his face..

Raj-Sorry!..

Aalekh--Raj its not a joke alright that you say sorry in the end and its over...

Raj was guilty...

Aalekh--You are hurting her time and again...

Raj--You think i want to hurt her...

Aalekh-Who knoes..

Raj--What I cant believe your sayin this...You really think I would hurt her??

Aalekh--I see no reason that you wont hurt her...You hate her you dunt care about her emotions then wat else..

Raj--You think I hate her...I hate her...

Aalekh--Well thats what you project to her...

Aalekh picks up a magazine and starts reading...

RAj was frustrated...

Raj--I hate her right!..Thats so right!..thats why I like a crazy I am tellin her sorry since yesterday...and shes showing me some attitude...actually lotss of attitude..

Aalekhh was smiling behind the maagazine...Naina at her room door was hearing the convo and happy too....

Raj--Hate her..you knoe what both off you are samples....take out yourr own meaning out off stuff...did i ever tell her i want to go out on a date......Nd there she went on like i dunt go out on a date wd my to-be-boss....nd you...did i tell you i hate her nd i want to hurt her..

perfect chancee...aalekh thought...

Aalekh--you havent told me you love her either...

Raj was frustratedd and lostt all track of what he was talking...

Raj-fine I am telling you now..I love her...You hear that...I love her....

Raised his voice....

I loveeeee her!...

You heard that did your stupid friend hear that...

RAj was angry again...and he stormed out into his house......

Aalekh put the magazine down....and a big smile on his face...

He lokked for naina she was standing there came towards him..

WIth tears in her eyes...

Aalekh--Naina if you start again I swaree i will run outaa this house....I aint some bucket haann..

Nainawas laughing..

Naina--okk okk!...He said it Aalekhh he said it...

Aalekh--I knoe..I heard it....It was loud enough for me you and probably some of the neighbourss too hear..

Naina giggled....

Naina--SO noww as per plan next part hann...goo get cracking....

Aalekh--You too!...

Naina--seeyaa beware...

Aalekh--yupp!...

And Aalekh goes to excute plan-3 they werent gonna let raj sleep so fast...this was the only night...where navin wasnt there....they had this night to drill some sense into Raj...And they were all set on doing that.....


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okkkk that was a hugee partt....leave d cool awesme encouraging comments!!
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it was a fabulous part...........
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awesome too good very nice waiting for next asap.
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awesome and superbbbbbb update........
all the parts of the update were equally enjoyable and toooooo good!!!

the whole convi at teh beginning wit alekh and rosy.......the whole r-n-a scene at end........everything ws wowwwww!!

do continue soon!!

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