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Posted: 17 years ago
PART-9

Aalekh got up to go to Raj...His phone rang.....It was Rosy...
A big smile on Aalekh's face.....

Naina--Elu??

Aalekh--Ahan Rosy..

Naina--Rosyy????

Aalekh-Hmmm your boyfriends secretary....hot babe man

Aalekh stopped his conv wid naina and picked up the phone...He put it on loudspeaker...

Aalekh--Yess rosyy...

Rosy-Were you sleeping??

Aalekh-Nopes..

Rosy-Good...Called to wake you only..after putting me in troublee you cant be sleeping peacefully....

Aalekh laughed...

Naina was confused...

Aalekh--Dont worry why would i give you that work if i had to sleep tonight..

Rosy--Who knoess you could be another weird creature like boss...

Aalekh looked at Naina..SHe dint like the comment...

Aalekh--You should think before you talk especially when the phone is on loudspeaker...

Rosy--shit....boss is with you???

Aalekh--You just cant call him weird ...(aalekh wanted to have some fun)

Rosy--Boss noo i was just joking...I dint really mean what i said..

Aalekh--Wteva...your boss isnt here but some one else...

Rosy--Ahh...cant be that flirt Navin...I am stuck with him here and its not boss so i dunt care whoever it is...

aalekh looked at Naina....Here face went like who the hell does she think she is Raj is weird my brother is a flirt....

Aalekh told her to relax...

Aalekh--Ummm rosy anything else??

Rosy--ehhh please tell me who is hearing us??

Aalekh--You wont like to knoe..

Rosy--Please...

Aalekh--Navin's sister and Raj is her bo...bestfriend...(he corrected)

Rosy--(noo words coming out) Navin's sisterrrr....

Aalekh--Yup.....Baby yoou r in sme trouble..

Rosy--Umm hey I am so sorry...I really dnt mean anything...Navin and Raj are two best creatures on this earth...I really love both of emm...(SHe tried to cover uppp but little did she knoe what she had said)

Aalekh--Well navin would doo please say u dunt love Raj..

Rosy-Ummm I dunt love Raj.....(she said in a hurry)

Naina smiled..

Naina--Its ok Rosy...I understand...

Rosy--Hey i am sorry.,,,,

Naina--ITs fine...

Aalekh-Now we are awake and busy anything else sweetheart..??

Rosy--noo ill get backk to work...

Aalekh--Seeya...

Disconnects d fone..

Naina--What exactly did you tell her to do...

Aalekh--Why do you think i flirt with her so muchh and keep myself in her goood books...

Naina--No clue...

Aalekh--I told her to keep Navin busy tonight...She gave him some stupid projectt and told him to help her.....And told him that if she dint finish then Raj would fire her...And navin is crazy about Rosy...he woulld do anything she says...

Naina--Wat?...Bhai crazy about this rosy???

Aalekh--Yup....Old newss!...

Naina--I dint knoe..

Aalekh--Raj told me long back...yesterday when i spoke to him like i dint knoe rosy...he dint object...he doesnt even remember that he told me about rosy....But she is one hot chich man...Navin's choice is good for once...

Naina--Aalekh....Lookss like you'll dump elu and take to rosy..

Aalekh--Dunt wry shell be your bhabhi only..

Naina--Haha!....We will see noww gooooo to raj...

Aalekh-Ohh yea...

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In raj's house..

Aalekh--Sorry!..

Raj--For what??

Aalekh-I was rude..I am sorry...

Raj--ITs fine Aalekh...dunt wry...

Aalekh--Raj do you knoe what you are doing...

Raj looked at him...

RAj--Honestly i dunoo what i am doing....i wish i knew....

Aalekh--I sware you dont....you are ruining your life do you realize??

Raj--I have ruined my life and i am and i will ruin it...Coz i am maha confused...

Aalekh--About what??...whehter you love her or you dont??

Raj--Well I was about it but now i know i still have sme feelings for her...

Aalekh--Then what??...Whats the confusion about...

Raj--I dunno if we can do what you want

Aalekh--What do i want??

Raj-You want us back together right??

Aalekh--Yes ofcourse...but why cant you

Raj--Itss not easyy aalekh...i lovee her but the thought of getting back with her is like i dunoo cant imagine...we were so in luv wid each other...nd now to imagine getting back to that...i cant imagine..

Aalekh--Raj....Imagine is not some movie ok...Its you who imagines...and its a false imagination..I can imagine you both together....what next??

Raj--Aalekh you are rushing....I am hurt I dunno about her....I am reallly really hurt...I need some time....

Aalekh-She's just come day before yesterday o smthin....its been jus 2 days....you want me to forget all that i felt for two years in 2 days...Its asking for too much Aalekh...

Aalekh realized that probably they were rushing up stuff...she had just come and Raj was right it takes time...

Aalekh was silent...

Raj--Its a request Aalekh..you knoe these two days of my life have been naina naina naina...I need some peace.....Please....LEt her be a normal person in my life...And if you are workiing on some plann please put it to rest....shes come just 2 days back and she aint going anywhere...and i aint marrying anyone...so please jut give me some time damn it....

Aalekh--Sorry Raj...you have all the time in the world......Take your time...And I am really sorry....

Raj dint say anything...frustration clear on his face...

Aalekh walked out to Naina's house...

Naina was ready...

Naina--What happened???

Aalekh--Naina we were speding up stuff...You have jus come 2 days backk ...Hes hurt he needs some time...He told me that on my face...

Naina sat down and told Aalekh to sit too...

Naina--What did he say?

Aalekh--He said that...He is hurt...It aint easy for him...Maybe it was for you...but he needs time...he needds time to get over watever happened....and 2 days to cover up for emotions of 2 years he cant manage...

Naina also realizedd that they were making a mistake....

Naina--Why dint we think of that??..I was being selfish...I was bein selfish again...

Aalekh--No naina its ok..We have realized now...Plan-3 aborted we will do at in the right time....

Naina--Hmmm right!...now do soemthing which will make him happy...

Aalekh--well that's like climbing the mount everest ...

Naina--Is his condition so bad???

Aalekh--Kind of...

Naina--Something which will give him hapiness...there ought to be soemthing...

Aalekh--Right there is something...

Naina--What????

Aalekh--Shona...

Naina-Ofcoursee shona..Call her up and tell her to come over...

Aalekh--Wow!...We ev got it...Now after shona comes...Raj will be happy for sometime...He might be better....

Naina smiles..

Naina--Its all coz of me...

Aalekh--Dunt strt again...

Naina--I have hurt him so much..

Aalekh-Its ok now forget the past we will handle him....

Naina--Soo get shona asap.....

Aalekh--Yup!...

Silence!..

Aalekh and naina have a small chat...

***

TIng dong..(after 10 mins there is a bell on raj's door...)

Raj--Aalekh dorr is open you knoe come in....

Naina comes in...

Raj immediately put something down that he was holding...


Raj--Ummmm sorry thought it was aalekh...

Naina--Its me can i come in??

Raj--Sure....

Naina--Raj I noe you dunt want to speak about the past...and i respect that...But i need to tell you something else...

Raj was already frustrated..

Raj-Go on..

Naina--I am sorry..

RAj looked up in surprise,,

Raj--Is today sorry day o smthin??..Aalekh said sorry now you are saying...For what anyway??

Naina--for all the pain i have causedd after returnin....I am really sorry...

Raj--Itss ok..

Naina--I dunno what to say,,,,But raj...

she was sielnt...

Raj--Naina...I am not angry with you for anything alright...

He turns around and goes to the window....

Naina goes behind him.....

Naina--Raj could we behave normally??

Raj turned around...

Raj--I dint get that

ANd he went to the bed...he was too restless....

Naina--if we behave like this...then definatelyy evryone would suspect something is wrong....I mean bhai...He would definately suspet...

Raj--hmm..

Naina--I knoe you still are angry with me....but believe me....i am ready to listen you shout screamm abusee I am here to hear,,,,Just get it outaa you...

Raj gives a fake smile...

Raj--you knoe thats one thing i wont do...

Naina sees the love in his eyes...

Naina--You can I wont mind...But i cant see you like this...It hurts me...Its coz of me...I am sorry again...

RAj--Its ok Naina I aint angry wiht you...But you know its not easy for me...I have livedd two years of my life as a different man...with so many questions...Its tough...Its just been 2 days...I pomise ill be fine soon...and then we could speak in detail...Even i am looking forward to it...But right of now if we speak i dunoo how i will react...you kow i need some time....

Naina--I perfectly understand...I aint here to speak bout something you dunt want to speak...I just want you to knoe that I am ready to take the shoutings....coz it was my fault and my silly mistake....A stupid decision...I
Naina couldnt say anytihng further...

Raj--Its ok...

Naina --Umm...anything else??

Raj--maybe you were right....we should behave normally ...how about being friends??

Naina gave him a smile...

Naina--Heyy I am naina..

Raj--Rajveer!..

And they shook hands!...

Naina smiled at Raj,.....

Raj--Umm well about the job...

Naina--Umm..RIght of now i dunt want that...

Raj--Why not???

Naina--I dunt want it...Just for now...firstly do i get it??

Raj--Ummm yes you do...

Naina--Could i join later this month....I mean its anyway midway...so ill join from next month??would that be ok..

Raj--As you wish...Any specific reason that i could knoe?

Naina--Ummm jus like that i ev just come catch up wid some friends and stuff...

Raj--Sure...

Naina and Raj were silent!...

Naina--Okk i ll leave now...Its pretty late...

Raj--Yea...

Naina turns to leave.......She sees something on the bed...HEr and Raj's pic...thats exactly what he had dropped .she smiled....SHe turned back...Smiled at him...

Naina--Good night and sweet dreamss

Raj--Yea to u too...
Edited by cool~~gal - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
rituka nd sweta...
i was wrkin on d updt wen u posted...njoy!...i ev postedd part-9
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Posted: 17 years ago



long part leave ur comments!

nd ny guesses who shona is??

ill be waiting...

Edited by cool~~gal - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome too good waiting for next asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awesome!!!!

You know it is true ....Time is the best medicine.Raj was right he is not marrying someone else that they need to rush!!!!

By the way is it Elu or Neelu???

And Navin fida on Rosy..... ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† !!!!

Aalekh always finds the right person to get his job done!!!

Waise the last part was almost like...."Hi I am Naina.Mujhse dosti karoge?"...... ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† !!!!

Waise who is Shona.....his sister???

Are you really going to make Rosy Naina's bhabhi??

Ab pata chala ke Navin kaise phasa office ein......par Rosy Aalekh ki baaton mein aayi kaise??

And he calling Raj weird and Navin flirt and Naina getting angry was ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† !!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey that ws again a cool and a very nice update!!
the whole rosy thing ws really funny, bechari rosy........and really like teh part that raj is wanting some time and that they shd nt rush into things......really a thoughtful one.........
on a whole wonderful update ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
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ahaaaaah.....it was a beautiful understanding update...happy that RN r starting again to understand each other...every dialogues and scenes of RN were beautifully written in a extraordinary way that force the readers to relate this part to real life relationship....that was marvelous.....Alekh-Rosy part was soo funny... ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† and Raj-Alekh convo was really touchy...Raj's emotions and state of his heart & mind were fabulously written....i was feeling like crying for him....damn suuuuuperb dear..... ๐Ÿ‘ thanku soo much for this great and fantabulous part
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Posted: 17 years ago
๐Ÿ‘ awesome

It's a complete update with pinch of comedy,emotions, love,friendship......

i just love alekh rosy jodi yaar...they are too good...i think rosy was right raj is quite weird and navin is the biggest flirt ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

I do agree raj needs some time....but i really need to know what went wrong b/w RN...so u see i am slight disappointed that plan 3 is aborted ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ..by the way what was it anyway...

Did naina leave raj for other person...?? ๐Ÿ˜ก ..i don't think so but anything is possible...na

please update very soon yaar
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Posted: 17 years ago
@lipi
thnxx

@rituka
thnxx

@daisy
thnxx a lot...

@rani
thnxx man....i lykd those scenes too.....

@yyy..
thankuu this updtt was mixture of lot of dffrnt emotions...wat went rong b/w r-n...u will noe...jus hang on...few more updts i promise i will workk on the flashback....bare for anthr few updts....sorry to keep u guys waiting...but flashbackk is near now...naina dint leave raj for anyone else ...i cld tell u tht much... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ


@ all..

guyss this time trust me we are nearing the flashback!...i hv sett the whole scene...tommorow i will be ryttn the flashback...so maybe say anthr 3 or 4 days....since the next 2 -3 parts are ready.....shona's entry nd den little fun wid shona ndd big tym flashback...so ur wait is near now...promise....juss wait for 3 or 4 days... ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ....hope u guys are njoyn!!....

Ryt now guess whose this shona??...Raj's mother, daughter ,sister ,girlfriend ex-secterary,ex-girlfriend,bhabhi,mother-in-law,sister-inlaw ,wife ,cozin,friend etc...
who is shona??

Lol!...couldnt think of any other relation ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

Shonaa my shona...!!... ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey i think shona might be some small gal somehow related to raj..i don't think she is raj's ex..then naina wouldn't have allowed her ..and she can't be raj's mother...nope not even his daughter....she can be raj's sister also ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜ณ

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