'A strange feeling '.THE END!(Note-Pg 84) - Page 27

sorry for late replies and update!...was a lil busy yaar!!...

@rituka
i am in some tym yaar!..

@aarsow..
no probs!..thnx a lot!!

@sweta
i kept ya waiting sorry bout dat..i m updtin in sme tym ]

@yasmin
noo probss yasmin!!.....ryt ho raj aur naina ko ullo bana possible nahi
well since u ev luvd the chemistry he shared with dr.shalini in lrl den y not keep aky as her...her real name is aparna tilak...ill post the casting in the next part!!..
well he wont be a possesive bro not to worry!!...

@litika..
i am posting it in sme tym!..

@mahak
thnx!...umm its ok na...poor boy!..patni se kuch zyada hi pyaar karta hain!..lol!...

PART-23

They sat there chatting...

Raj noticed a confused feeling on Naina's face..As if she was struglling...what was bothering her...the Aakash incident??He had to find out..

Raj-Naina I think we should leave..Let the lovers enjoy for a while...

Aakash-Yea right humara naam leke you both will enjoy ah?You like need some time with her dunt you.. 😉

Raj-Whatever as long as your getting some time with Di.. 😛

Raj and Naina left...

Naina went to the balcony while raj went to check on Shona...WHo was sleeping in another room..

Raj went to the balcony..

Raj-Kya baat hain?

Naina-Kya?

Raj-Wahi toh mein pucch raha hoon...pareshaan lyun hoon..aakash ka incident abhi tak

Naina-Nahi Raj...I dunoo why I am over-reacting..just a little stressed..maine kafi rude baat kiya na aakash se

Raj-Hmm..waisey hes a good guy....galti se hi ho gaya...

Naina--I knoe...I guess just a bit of a head ache..um actually i am feling weird...uss ka chehra dekh kar daar lag raha hain..nahi kuch ajeb lag raha hain...umm ..woh

Raj put his hand on her lips..

Raj-Relax....kya ho raha hain?...chill....tum theekh hoo..

Naina--I dunnoo ajeeb lag raha hain..

Raj--Kis cheez ko lekar..

Nainaa--I dunnoo...Its weird...

Raj-Naina relax jaan...kuch nahi hua hain...itna mat socho...

Naina-Sab sapney jaisey lag raha hain....i mean aaj hi toh humne paper mein woh article pada tha...aaj hi aalekh ne sab solve kiya...aur phir lovers point.phir yeh aakash ..i mean its going to fast...

Raj--Acha hain na?? hain na?? (he stressed on it)

Naina started sobbing...into his arms..

Raj-Jaan kya huaaa?? pleasee aise roo kyun rahi hoon??

Naina--Ab hum phirse alag nahi hongey na.

Raj-Nahi hongey naina...

Naina--Bhai kab aa rahey hain??

Raj--Uffoo bhai ko bahut miss kar rahi hoo 😆

Naina-Raj...batao

Raj-Kal ayega

Naina was confused..

Raj-AB kya?

Naina-I m feeling guilty...bhai se hum yeh sab chupa rahe hain...sab jantey hain sevaye bhai ke he will feel bad..

Raj-toh?

Naina-Toh?

Raj-Bata de kal hi

Naina-I dunnoo..

Raj-Naina....relax mein hoon na...hum navin se baat karengey...i m sure woh manjayga!!

Naina-Hope so..
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Naina's still in the balcony...Raj has gone to get some coffee...

Aakash comes there meanwhile..

Aakash clears his throat to make his presence felt..

Naina turned around and saw him...

Naina-Aap?...Kuch chaiye tha??

Aakash-Haan

Naina-Kya?

Aakash-Maffi..

Naina-Umm

Aakash-I knoe ki tum abhi bhi mujhse naraz hoo chidi huyi hoon..trust me I am really sorry from the bottom of my heart...I m sorry yaar!!..

Naina-Its ok...Actually mere mood thoda kharab tha...and i over-reacted...apney tabhi sorry keh diya tha baat khatam..sorry bout it...

Aakash--Kafi achi ladki miley hain raj ko...must say..

Naina was laughing.. 😆

Naina-Aur mujhe?

Aakash-Well itna bura bhi nahi hain mera dost...

Both were laughing.. 😆 😆

Naina-Well umm what am i supposed to call you..

Aakash-just what your comfortable with??

Naina-Well how does bhaiya sound?? 😆 😆

For a second Aakash was lost..

Naina-Kya hua?

Aakash-Umm kuch nahi...call me A.D short form Aakash Das..

He put his hand forward..

Those words shocked Naina to the core..........Did he say A.D.........A.D naina's heart missed a beat...

She immediately looked down on his hand...yes that mark was there...he is that guy..

Instead of giving her hand...she hugged him tight..

Aakash had no clue of what was happening..

Raj entered...

He could see a bewildered aakash..

Aakash made a questioning look..

Raj told him to calm down...

Naina broke..

Naina-Kahan the itney saal?

Aakash-tum kya keh rahi hoon mere kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha..

Naina-Ok toh ab bhul gaye na mujhe.

Aakash was searching her name...what did shona say...mia zia sia...no what did she say....tiaa...yea she said tia.. 😆 😆

Aakash-See Tia I am a little confused!!..

Naina looked around..

Naina-Tia?

Aakash-Well Umm I think thats what shona said...

Naina-Shona..ohh its Nia...shona calls me Nia...and the name is Naina --Naina singh ahluwaliya!!..

And now evrything made sense to Aakash....a shocked look on his face!!..

Aakash--N.G?? I cant believe this...

Naina-I hate you!..

Naina had tears in her eyes!..

Naina--Hate you to the core!!

Aakash placed his hand on her lips..

Aakash-Shh!...Ab ek shock sah nahi paya hoon...dusra maat dena....

Raj stood there nothing but confused!!..

Raj in his mind... "abb yeh kaunsa naya melodrama hain....N.G A.D...Aakash janta kaise hain naina ko?..Well boyfriend toh nahi tha.naina ke history aur geography mein janta hoon ..chalo no tension!..."

Raj dint mind...he was not the over-possesive types...but he surely nedded to knoe what was it...he dint jump to any kinda conclusion!!

Aakash so Raj fightin with his thoughts!..

Aakash-Raj..

Raj walked over..

Aakash-Confused?

Raj-Yep

Naina-Tum kya lagta hain kaun hain yeh?

Raj-No clue..

Naina-Mera pehla pehla pyar!!.. 😆 😆

Raj-Well woh toh yeh nahi hain...

Aakash-Dunt tell me woh tum hoon.Naina tumhe yahi bandaar pasand aya?

Raj-Well mera luck itna accha kaise...mein naina ka pehla pyar nahi magar akhri pyar zarror hoon...uska pehla pyar toh woh kya naam tha..

Naina intrupted....

Naina-Chodo...fillal meri baat suno..

Raj-Wahi to karta tha karta hoon aur karta rahonga jaan...zindagi bharr..

Naina-Oh mere Mr.FLirt....bahut ho gaya..

Aakash-Naina..

Naina-Shh..I am not speaking to you...I am very very angry with you!!!!!!! 😡 😡

Raj-Wow!!.. 😛

Aakash-chup bey!..Naina meri baat suno toh..

Naina-Sawal hi nahi uthta..

Aakash-Areyy abhi bhi tum wahi hoon...stuborn little tomboy!..

Silence..

Raj burst out laughing!..

Raj-Tomboy!!.....woh toh ab yeh nahi rahi!!...

Naina was blushing!!..

Aakash-Sorry N.G..

Naina-dunt you call me N.G...Bahut hee zyada gussa ho tumse...aneyy do kal bhai ko...ek minute bhai ne figure out nahi kiya kya ke tum A.D hoon..i mean woh idiot A.D

Aakash-Nahi yaar..Navin se 2-3 baar hi mulakat huyi....And I never got to noe his full name or you noe kuch aisa ki muhe pata chale ki woh navin merea navin hain...aur mujhe aakash ji bulata tha.. 😆

Naina-Wahi hain tumhari dosti...mujhe dekho.....aab pata chala itna aajeb kyun lag raha tha....i was feelin weirdo..not with what you did...but with seeing your face ajjeb lag raha tha....aisa lag raha tha...arey is bandar ko kahin to dekha hain 😆 😆

Raj stood there listening to this conversation but couldnt figure out anything..

Aakash--Acha meri ma...Ab sorry kitni baar bulne padega!..

Naina-Nahi chalega kaam sorry se...khud ko kya samjhte hoon tum...superman!...14saal ki umar mein chale the ghar bar sab chod kar!!...i mean were you drunk when you did that..

Aakash--Naina ...

Naina was waiting for him to say...

Aakash ki ankhen bhar ayii aur words nikal hi nahi rahe the..

Naina-I m sorry..I mean

Aakash-Umm...woh just well...navin ko aneyy do phir baat karte hain...

Naina looked into his eyes...she could see the pain...

Naina-I m sorry I dint want to hurt you..

Aakash--Oh gawd tu toh sach mein woh tomboy N.G nahi rahi!!..

Naina hugged Aakash......

Raj stood there shaking his head helplessly!!..

Raj--Areyy mujhe toh koi kahani sunao!!..

Aakash-Well naina koi jalney ki buu aa rahi hain kya?

Naina-Bahut hi strong sii!!.

Aakash and Naina exchanged Hi-Fi's

Raj stood there smiling!!...

Naina ko jaisey uska khoya hua koi apna mil gaya hoo....uske chehre par woh smile...bilkul hi alag thi...usko hastey hue dekh raj bhi has raha tha...aakhir uski khushi naina ki khushi mein chupi huye hain...

Raj-Well mujhe koi problem nahi hain...jarii rakho apna romance...mein chalta hoon soney...

Naina caught his hand..

Naina-Tumhe kya lag raha hain?(seriously)...hum yahan balcony mein romance karengey...kamre ki zarrorat to padegi na.. 😆 😆

Raj was laughin... 😆

Raj-Kab sudhrogi?

Naina came close..

Naina-Aise pasand nahi hon kya?

Raj--BAhut zyada pasand hoo..

Naina was blushing..

Aakash-Mere chalne ka wawt ho gaya hain shayad...but naina kamre use kar lena..yahan balcony mein aajjeb hain u see...njoy raj and naina...

Aakash turned to leave..

Naina-Kal Navin aa raha hain...puri kahan sunegi court...phir faisla lengey ki tumhe kitne sallon ki saza hogi...

Aakash-yes your highnes... 😉

Aakash turned..

Aakash-Its really good to see you naina...itni khush itney saalon baad...bahut bateein karni hain...but right now romance time...so you guys njoy...

Raj-Thankyou mere girlfriend ke _____ ummmmm friend!..

Aakash-Kal subah ko pata chal jayega friend ya kuch aur!..

Aakash smiled and left..

Raj-ek sawal

Naina-Puchho

Raj-Kise zamaney mein..I mean when you were a kid..kya tum isse pyar karti thi?

Naina started laughing.. 😆

Naina-Kal pata chal jayega..Insecure??

Raj-Nopes...aggar ex hota toh...aise behave kahan karte...plus mujhjhe toh tumhare pyar ki charchey maloom hain...from ur first crush to ur first kiss...to ur

Naina-Shh!...sharm karo!!

Naina and Raj started laughing!!..

Naina-I am sleepy!.

Raj-LEts go jaan!. 😆

Naina-Raj

Raj-Hmm

Naina-Irade kya hain?

Raj-Kuch khass nahi.. 😉

Naina-Shona ke saath so rahe hain

Raj--Janta hoon..

Naina was smiling!..

Naina-Sab kuch itna khush khush lag raha hain..Its all like a dream...dar lagta hain..uthongi to yeh sapna tuth jayega!..

Raj-Arey tum ladkiya hoti hoo kamal ke...jab tak kuch hota nahi hain roti rehte hoon jab hota hain to vishwas nahi hota...ab so jao...phir dekhna mere sapne...jo tuth jayengey..lekin yeh sab sachh hain...ab soye

They walk towards the room....they settle in the bed...raj switches off the lights..

after 10 mins..

Raj-Naina jag rahi hoon?

Naina-So rahi hoon bolo..

Raj-Uff...yeh dekho na..

Naina opens her eyes..

Naina-Kya?

Raj-Tum mein aur shona!..

Naina-Pagal ho kya??

Raj-Uff naina..

Naina-AReyy soney do...yeh kya koi picture hain kya..jaise u me aur hum ----u me and shona!..

Raj-Joke bahut hi ghatiya tha..

Naina-THanxx.

Raj-Naina mera matlab tha..socho kuch sallon bad...tum mein aur humara choti lil angel!..

Naina-Raj!..yeh tumhara sapna hain...

Naina started laughin... 😆

Raj-Naina socho tum mein aur humari beti..

Raj-- Raj Naina aur

Both said together

Raj and Naina-Raina...

Raj smiled..

Raj-Yaad hain tumhe..

Naina-Kaise bhul sakti hoon..

Raj-Tum mein aur Raina...

Naina--Raj aur Naina ka milap..Raina!..

Raj smiled..

Naina-Ab yeh sapna maine bhi dekha ab sojao...tumhare sapney jo dekhne hain

Raj-So jao jaan!..so jao!!

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awesome too good very nice waiting for next asap.

nice update... now waiting eagerly to know who AD is to NG and navin.. update soon... 😊

Too good!!!Awesome!!!

Toh yeh Akash aur Naina ka kuch connection hai!!!Probably Naina ke bachpan ka dost or maybe pyaar!!!!

Agar aisa hai toh Raj ko kabhi bataya kyun nahi......she has supposedly told him everything 😕 😕 !!!!!

Waise I hope yeh Akash ke aane se koi nayi problem nahi kadi ho jaye!!!!Honi toh nahi chahiye as he is married with a kid!!!!

Nice to know that Raj is so secured and not at all jealous 😛 !!!!!!

Raj aur mere khayalat kitne milte julte hai!!!!Even I had said the same thing seeing the three of them together!!!!

Raj, Naina aur Raina yani Raj aur Naina ka milap...............indeed it is really a beautiful dream jo sach hoga ............zaroor hoga 😛 !!!!!!!!

superbbbbb..........
plzzz update soon as i am eager to knoe about ad and ng..

excelent n simply super dear 👏


dialogues r relay super n a complete hatz off 2 u thz time also 😛


All the best 4 the next update 😳


Aarthi

awesome ud 👏 .plz cont soon.........

hey jus finished reading all the parts that i missed!! Fantastic!! The story is shaping very very well!! Navin and Rosy are definitely a very good pair..The naughtiness of Navin was superb!! Great that our RN couple joined and are now gonna make Navin's life miserable by their pranks and fun!! Entry of Aakash was different and nice!! Aur naina and aakash? wats up wit them..Waiting for Navin to comeback!!Only then the mystery'l be solved!! Update soooon please!!