'A strange feeling '.THE END!(Note-Pg 84) - Page 25

awesum... welll i dint cme to the forum aft rajeev left but im glad tht i came...

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!

Raj and Naina finally together and dating!!! 😳

Aur Navin met his bro-in-law!!! 😆 😆 He was so scared 😆 😆 😆 !!!Waise I hope Rosy does not leave her job!!!!Woh koi bura kaam thode hi karti hai!!!!Its so mean of Navin!! 😡 😡 If he wants her in a better job ...fine but to sit at home...how bad!!!!

Navin and Rosy on a date!!!How romantic!!! 😳 😛

Aur Raj aur Naina jaa rahe hai date par!!He was looking so handsome and she so beautiful in that red saree.....uski di hui pehli gift!!!How sweet!!!! 😳

Aur Aky ne pakad liya ....woh bhi raange haathon 😆 😆 😆 !!!!!

Aur Aalekh se Raj tried to lie but was caught again!!! 😆 😆 😆

Their date at Lover's Point was sooo romantic 😳 !!!!!Raj aur Naina hamesha aise hi saath rahe bas 😳 !!!!!

But who was it spying on them........it was not Navin...so who....villain ki entry???

update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz asap now only with long part asap.

waiting eagerlyyyyyyyyyyy for da update

thnx sweta

@rani
thnx.....both r dating...lol!...so u like shona a lot..gud!...glad that somewhere i help u make a good day!!..

@deeya
thnxx a lott!..

@shaina
thnx...rosy-navin-raj wala job prob we will solve later......
villian...dekh lena nxt updt mein...koi villian hain ya kuch aur

@mahak
arey areey media waley nahi the not to worry!!..



Well kise ne kaha villian toh kisi ne kaha media waleyy...hahah!...dekh lo is update mein!! kaun the woh

PART-22

Lost in each other unaware of the pair of eyes looking at them....

2 people enter..

A man and a woman with him...

Man-Ahem ahem.....

Raj and Naina break....

Both embaraased..

Man looks at the woman disgusted..Start walking!

Man--Yeh aaj ki pidi bhi na...apne aap ko kya samjhati hain...aisee pavitra jagah mein yahi sab karte hain....hum thodi der baad aatee toh hey aalah...

Raj looks at Naina both badly embarrased...

The man had white hair and a white moustache...and the lady was wearin a burkha!.

Woman--Chodiye hum apne kaam se kaam rakhte hain aur jitni jaldi ho sakeey yahan se nikal te hain...

Raj and Naina dint noe wat to do..

Raj--Jee woh sorry...actually..

Man-Bas bas...kuch kehne ki zaroorat nahi...chaloo (he tells the lady)

Raj and Naina are feeling weirdo!..

Raj and Naina sitting in one corner...while the other two have gone..

Raj--Mann this is so weird..

Naina--Tell me one thing they looked aged...I mean itni sarri sedi...

Raj-I noe like aalekh says a thousand stepss!.well jo bhi hain.....just ignore...koi badmash bhi ho sakte hain...

They were silent!..

Man and Woman come back to where they are..

Man-Naam kya hain?

Naina-Complaint likhwaogey....jao Mr. and Mrs Rajveer singh shekhawat...

Man--Areey Shadi Aab tak nahi huyi hain na.........

He got a stamp on his foot..

Man--Ahhh wo ahh shadi kab huyi aap loggon ki?

Raj--Ek minute jis tarah apney pehle kaha aapko kaise maloom ki humari shadi nahi huyi..

Man-Umm

Naina calls Raj in the corner..

Naina--Apna koi admi hain Raj..

Raj--Haan kaun?

Naina-Hain hi kaun humare ghar mein...bhai to Rosy ke saath hain...toh bacha..

Raj and Naina--Aalekh!..

The man trieed to act confused!..

Man--Aap kya keh rahen hain....aap to mujhe hi maarengey....chalo chalteyy hain..(to the lady)

Woman-Chalo..

They turn!..

Raj-Aalekhh bahut hi ghatiya tha jo bhi tumne kiya...

Naina--You guys cant be like us come what may!.... 😆 😆

Raj--Now stop the natak and remove your burkha neelu....or even worse could be di.. 😉

Man and Woman look at each other no other choice...the woman removes her burkha..and the man his false moustache and wig..

Turn around..

Raj and Naina laughing!!!..

They exchange hi-fi's...

Raj--You guys cant be raj and naina... 😆

Aalekh-Whatever....we did succede in making you feel embarrased.. 😕

Naina--But we caught you red handed!!.. 😆

Neelu--Okk fine now forget that.. 😡

Raj--your caught na forget it.. 😆

Neelu--Raj stop it.. 😳

Raj--Mission Fail.. 😊 😊

Naina and Raj start laughing.. 😆

Naina--What made you think to do all this..

Aalekh-Badla...how much you guys have irritated us....dunt we have to take revenge....now that you guys are you knoe love birds again...the war is on again.. 😆 😆

Raj--Naina we should consider breaking up.. 😆

Raj and Naina started laughing..

Raj--Aalekh...you learnt from your guru and your tryin to fool your guru...not happening!!...

Aalekh-Be on your guard...you'll get caught some day!!..

Raj-We will be waiting!!... 😆

They have their dinner and get home!...

Naina goes to her room picks up her night gown and goes to change....

She is still thinking about the time she spent with Raj.....her heart was so happpy!!

SHe changed and came out Aky sitting on the bed,,

Aky--THinking about Raj..

Naina--No.. 😳 actually woh

Aky--Yes,,

Naina--No di...

Aky-Well your dress says dat..

Naina looked at her dress..

Naina--Huh?

AKy-When did you purchase a black night piece??

Naina--Ohh I am so sorry this one is yours...I dint notice..

Aky--Hmm..Right!..

Naina--I ll change nd come..

Aky-Its ok give me yours i will wear that...not a problem!..I aint very fat am I?(she put her hand on her tummy)

Naina gives aky her red gown!..

Aky goes to change!..

Naina standing by the window....

Suddenly from behind someone comes and holds her by her waist and starts playing with her hair..and strts kissin her hair ....and kissing her neck..(from behind)

Person--I missed you so much baby!!...

Still kissing her neck...

Naina assumed it ought to be Raj,,

Naina was standing facing her back..

Naina--Raj stop it someone will see..

Person-Since when have you started romancing with Raj... 😆 😆 😆

Naina--Stop it wel get caught again..

Naina turns around to stand face to face with the person

Naina sees the person its not Raj..

Naina-Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh help....raj ....help help...chor chorr chor!..

Seeing her scream the other person also started screaming!!!!!!

Man--AHhhhhhhhhh shh! shhh!!..I am not chor!

He put his hand over her lips..

Naina--Dont touch me..

Naina--Rajjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj

Raj heard her screaming and came running into her room...

She ran and huggedd him tighttt!..she was kinda sobbing...

Raj--Naina relax kya hua

Naina--R..RAj wo koi mere saath woh dekho......(pointing to another man standing in the room)

Raj saw his eyes with horror...he was shocked!!..

THe person standing with his back towards raj and naina..

Raj--Kaun ho tum?..Yahan kaise pahunchey...Tumhari yeh harkat karni ki itni himmat.....sala akeli ladki ko dekh liyaa toh shuru ho gaya...mard hain is ghar mein..mein hoon ....ab mard ke tarah apna chehra toh dekha.

Man--Abbey ladki lagti kaun hain teri?

Raj-Sallaaa meri biwi hain kya karega

Raj moves forward to catch that guy and beat him

The person heard all these dialogues and turned around...And Raj got the shock of his life!!!!!!!

Man--Tu apney aap ko mard kehta hain... 😆 😆
😆

Raj--Tu idhar??..Kar kya raha hain..aisee chorron ki tarah ..
😉
Man--I knoe chorron se tu itni battein karta hain...bashan deta hain..

Raj-SHut up..

Both forgot about a confused naina standing behind..

Naina--Exucseeeee meee!!!.. 😡

Raj and the guy turned towards her!...

Naina--Raj yeh aadmi yahan mere kamre mein achanak aa gaya aur tum isse gussa karne ke bajee battein wats dat gappe lada rahe hoon...

Both are laughing..

Naina--Isse idiot ko jantey hoon??

Raj--Badkismatii se!..

Man--Hey lekin ruk ruk....tune kaha biwi...kabse boss mujhe to bulaya hi nahi..

Raj-Biwi nahi hain...aise he bol diya..

Man-Girlfriend?

Raj-Hey Navin ki behen hain..

Man--Aiii la!!...Navin ke behen he mili tereko!.. 😆

Raj was blushing!.. 😳

Raj-AIsa kuch nahi hain!.. 😳

Man--Tabhi isse laga ki tum ho

Raj-Huh?

Man--Yaar mein isse apni biwi samjhe ke thoda sa touch kiya....usne kaha raj chodo!...matlab chakkar toh hain boss.. 😉

Raj--Today aint my good day!...Aaj subhe hi teri biwi ne pakda!..aur ab tu..

Man-Hahah!..Waise kab se?

Raj-Lambi kahani kabhi aur batonga!..

Naina stood there still feeling disgusted..

Naina in her mind "bladi hell kisi aur ko yuhin kiss karta hain phir sorry bhi nahi bolta!!.." kaise pati hain yeh

Raj-Waise Naina meet Aakash AKy di ka pati!...

Aakash went to her..

Aakash-Hi I am so sorry...I mean mujhe laga Aky hain..

Naina--Its ok...(still not convinced)

AKy came out rushing....

Aky-Kya hua kaun chila raha tha?

AKy saw Aakash..

Aky-TUm yahan??

Aakash-Tumse milney jaan..

Aakash went and hugged her..

Aakash-Missed you

Akansha-Me too..

Aakash cupped her face...

Raj-Ahem ahem...hum abhi bhi yahin hain!..

Aakash-Janta hoon!..Chotey bachhe hoon...ankhen bandh karo!..ya phir hume copy karo....better option..

Akansha was blushing..

Aky-Shh!!

Aakash-Areey biwi hoon...

Aakash placed a soft peck on her lips!..

Aakash was looking at her..

Raj-Ho gaya?

Aakash-Sala romance mein bhi nahi chodega..

Raj--Aakash shadi ke 5 saal ho gaye!..ab kaisa romance!..

Aakash-Kyun koi rule hain kya business ka...5 saal ke bad no romance!...wel mein toh romance karonga even wen I am 80!!.. 😆

Raj started laughing!.. 😆 😆

Raj-Haan phir di yeh ayega...

Raj mimicking how an old man walks....back shaking and stammering..

Raj-Mein..Mein tumsee bahut pyar karta hoon....ek doon na...chummmmaaaa

Raj was laughing.. 😆 😆

Raj-Chumma toh nahi milega thapad se kaam chala lena!! 😆 😆


Aakash--Areey bhagwan woh kahan hain?

Raj-Kaun teri girlfriend? 😆

Aakash-Bahut khush lag raha hain...bajata hoon teri band pehle bata teri girlfriend kahan hain?

Raj--Yeh rahi...(poinitng to naina)

Aakash-Purani waali..

Naina looked at Raj..

Raj-Abeyyy rishta todega kya..kiski baat kar raha hain? 😆

Aakash--Areey meri betii teri choti girlfriend..

😆 😆

Raj-Oh haan mere saath thi navin ke kamre mein leke aata hoon..

Aakash--Is girlfriend ke saath maza kar mein milta hoon..

Naina somehow dint even smile...she dint like this guy!!..


Shona was playing with Raj's phone waiting for him to come..

Aakash-Shonaa baby!!

Shona turned!!...

Shona-Dadddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd

He knelled making way for her to come and hug him...she came runninggggggggg..

Shona-Daddddddd shona so happy happy you are here....veeruda promised you will come!..

Aakash-Eyy le idhar bhi veeru da veeru da...baby how are you?

Shona-Finey finey!..

Aakash-come lets go!..

Shona caught her dad's hand and walked with him a big smile on her face!!..

Shona-Mamaamm see dad!..

Aky-I saw jaan...come now change your clothes..

Aky picked some clothes and took shona to change!..

Naina-Mein pani aur kuch khane ko lati hoon..

Naina left..

Raj-Aur sab kaise hain..

Aakash-Sab theek hain yaar...baki I amm really sorry...mujhe laga ki aky hain..i think shes still feeling weird...meri taraf se sorry bol dena..

Raj-Its ok chil...Meri girlfriend hain..not to worry!.Waisey yahan pahuncha kaise?

Aakash-Tum to mahan log...main door khula tha...sab log kamre mein..aa gaya yeh chor andar!..

Raj-Ohh..

Aakash-Bakii your too funny....chor se batein kar raha hain...kaun ho..batoon..mard hoon mein..(he mimicked him)

Raj-chup bey!..

Aakash-Waise naam kya hain uska?

Before Raj could say

Shona-Kiska dad?

Aakash--Us ladki ka

Shona-Niaaaa..

Naina entered with water and stufff..

Aakash took water from the tray..

Aakash-Thnx

Aky-Waise tum Aakash ko dekhkar chilayi?

Raj was like phir se topic kyun khola..

Aakash--oh chodo woh sab...tumhari tabyat ko kya hua??lag to rahi hoon thekh-thak....

Aky-thekh hoon yaar yeh tumhara dost he mujhe bemar bana raha hain..

Aakash--Baat to aise kar rah hoon jaise tumhara kuch nahi hain...bhai he yaar!!...badkismatti se hi sahi lekin bhai hain na!

All were laughing!!..except yea naina who else!!

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Aakash Das...Husband of Akansha...He and Raj were a part of the same basketball team when in school(aakash was senior)..Later on they got into different colleges...But The college in which Aakash studied Aky joined the same college!..Thus began a new tale of love!..Later on Aakash came to knoe that Raj is the cousin of aky.. So Raj is very freindly and calls him Aakash rather than jiju!...He made him meet Navin..His family his friend..His evrything!.And aakash and navin got along well too!!

Aakash Das!. played by Ankurr Nayar (apna guny yar)


Very nice down-to-earth guy!..Loves his wife loads..and plans to flirt with her even at 80..just like Navin does... 😆He is basically a very nice chap..he is having his own business.
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Well I had no other choice...this guy has driven me crazy in the past few days!!...My New FAvourite Hero!!....I had to Bring him in!...Lovee ya!!...

awesome too good very nice waiting gfor next

mindblowing part & too funny ya frnd ankur is making me also crazy thnks for bringing him in story and update soon 😉

hahahahahahaha...o god it was a hilarious one update...i was imagining the whole situation again and again specially that Aakash Naina meet...and laughing like hell...lovers point scene was marvelous...Alekh is just too much...brilliant dear...thanku soo much for this supercool update... 👏 👏 👏and Ankur is best suited for Aakash role but who is playing the role of Aky...