'A strange feeling '.THE END!(Note-Pg 84) - Page 13

hey once again an awesome part..........the flashback is really interesting.........and alekh is definitely a sweetheart, neelu is so lucky!!

i m awaiting for this new twist named shona's arrival!

and its really sweet to see RN crazy in love with eacj other.

👏

Too good!!!

I just loved the flashback!!!At least waha toh we can see how much Raj and Naina were in love!!!But one question .....this was interupted but did they ever you know?? 😳

I loved Aalekh!!!It just shows his love for Neelu!!!His love really made her get well!!!Nice to know she has recovered now and they are in a live-in relationship!!!But he is really strong and patient 😊 !!!!!

And no you had never said Neelu before this.I just guessed it!!!

And yes hope to see RN together soon!!!!

awesum,excelent, dear



dialogues r the best dear,itz realy gud, 👏


All the best 4 the next part, 😊


Aarthi

when will u update
update soon...........

PART-11

Next morning was a rather bright one...the sun rays fell on Raj's face....waking himm up from his sweet sleep...

Raj got uppp and was very sleepy today unusually...however he pushed himself into the bathroom freshened up and got ready...he looked smashing as ever in a simple red t-shirt nd denim jacket with a pair of jeans...he got ready and went to Navin's house...

Raj went in..

He saw Navin reading the paper rather looking a little tired...

Raj--Morning Navin..lookin tired..

Navin--Haan yaar wohh kall ghar 3 bajje aya...

Raj--Ohh yaa I heard....But why??

Navin in his mind was cursing Raj..He was the one who gave rosy sme stupid workk (according to him)....But he couldnt tell raj that he helped rosy...it wld mean a whole new session of teasing pluss he would shout on rosy too..

Navin--Sme workk yaar...

Raj--Hm...I see the flirt is now working very hard!..

Naina who was making coffee came with 2 cups...

Naina--Ohh hey raj..

Raj-Hi naina..morning..

Naina gave one cupp to navin nd thght for a moment and gave the other to Raj..

Naina--Here...coffee...

Raj--No its fine you can have it....

Naina-No i'll get another one...

Raj--Naina its fine..

Naina--Ok....I'll make it just the way you like....

SHe put that mug down and went to get another jus the way Raj liked it...

She came back...

Naina-Here you go...

RAj--Thanx...but yours is cold now..

Naina--Like I care....

And they both were smiling...

THey both sat there siping their coffee's ...


Navin found it too weird....he was staring at Raj...Raj saw that and was too nervous..

Raj--Ummm kya hua??

Navin--Rajj...(he said seriously)

Raj--Yupp...wh..what happened...

NAvin--You were being so formal with Naina...I mean no you have the coffee no i will have it...what was all that??

Raj looked at Naina..

Raj--Umm...Navin

Navin--Whats wrong with both of you...when did you guys get so formal...you guys were best friends 2 years remember...helloo tring tring something ringing in ur head Raj..(navin said teasingly)

But Naina realizedd navin was again reminding Raj off the past..

Naina--Bhai...cmon please...forget the past nd the future live for today....enjoy today...and moreover i and raj were immature 2 years back...now we are more matured and more responsible...unlike you....Raj has become so responsiblee and such a perfect gentleman in these two years....I mean i was impressed when i saw Raj...Hes jus the perfect guy now...i am worried bout u..

NAvin--Probably coz you were not there..to entertain him...and give him company to play pranks on people...and since you were his soo good friend...and yea it was me before I introduced you to him and after that its been Naina Naina all the way...He missed flirting around with you for two years..and dint find anthr jbless girl lyk u soo go to work...so basically Raj missed you loads...and since you were not there what to do he tried his hand on working....(navin laughed)

Naina looked up in horror actually anger..a mixture of emotions.......Raj too looked at Navin..

For aminute Raj thought Navin knew about them...

And then Raj looked at Naina...Back to Navin..

Navin--Why are both of you looking at me like that??

Naina--Ummm nothing nothing...

Raj--Umm I think we should have breakfast soon...and then leave...we r running late...

Navin--YEs sir...I will freshen up and come..

RAj--Hmm...

Naina went to prepare the breakfast....

RAj sat on the sofa...thinking about last night

He spoke rudely to aalekh....then when he spoke to Naina...he was ready to start again...why did he say that...he was a little confused....lost in his thoughts when naina called him..

Raj--Ahh.. haan,...sorry said something...

Naina--I was calling you...Breakfast is ready....

Raj--Yeah lets have it..

Naina puts the plates and stufff...shes prepared aalloo paratha Raj's favourite....and wen she prepared it Raj loved it..

Raj--Wow allo paratha..

Naina smiled...

Raj--thnxx naina..

Naina--Thanx??..(naina said seriously)

Raj--Umm..

Naina--In frindshipp no sorry no thankyou...

Raj looked at her...He was proud of her....She was very brave atleas she pretended to be brave... {sweetie go ask Aalekh how strong she is ;).....}

Raj thought to himself...

Naina i am proud of you...you are taking things as they come....jus give me some time jaan...i need to sort out some stuff...then we will clear out all d misunderstandings...god willing we might be back together...coz the truth is i love you and only you....and i will for the rest of my lifee jaan

Naina--Said something??

Raj smiled..

THought to himself..

today also we are connected Naina...you could even noe hear it but just a lil faint...not to worry it will be fine

Naina was bemusedd seeing him smile for no reason at all..no he was blushing....yea raj was blushing...naina stood there and saw..

Naina--Raj???

No response still blushing..

Naina--Raj are you alright???

Just then NAvin entered...

Navin--Haaiii Naina what did you tell Raj..He is blushing so badly...

Naina--I ev no clue I am callin him he aint responding just blushing...

Navin--Rajjj!...(he shaked him)

Raj--Ahh haan...sorry said something...

Naina was laughin exactly the same words he said on the sofa..

Navin--Wats goin on bro??..you are blushing so badly...

raj touched his cheeks..

Raj--Ahh noo...

Navin--What did you tel him naina??

Naina-I dint tell him anything...

Navin-So my friend is mad ah??

Raj--Navin stop it...

Navin suddenly like put his hand up...

Navin--Wait on wait on...

Rja nd naina were looking at him...as always late in remmebring something..

Raj--Yes mr.tubelight...what did you realizee after so long..

RAj took a bite of Aloo paratha...and it wasd delicious...

Navin--You have a crush on Naina???

RAj choked on that paratha....almost spatting it out...

Naina patted his back and gave him water...

Navin--Naina plese tell me or is it that you both are seeing each other??...

Naina--Bhaii whats with you??...are you alright..

RAj finally able to say something...

Raj--Navin what made you think that..

Navin with a blank look..

Navin--Naina looks smashing today i mean she lukd hot..i mean she lukd gudd...... nd you were seeing her and blushing..plus at the sofa too you behaved weird....lost in my sister's beauty....so thats what i could mke out...i havent seen you smile in an era leave alone blush.....there gotta be smething fishy somewhere....rajveer the business man smilin i mean blushing...gawd....that could jus be the headlines for tommorow morning's paper...look raj keep your eyes off my sister.... 😉 ...you havent smiled for these two years man....

Raj looked at Naina ...

If not for yesterdays friendship request and approvall these two would have been shit embarrased...

Naina realized that raj hadnt lived a life for 2 years...raj not smiling was something naina couldnt imagine...and she was determined to bring that smile back

Naina smiled at Raj...RAj found that weird...

Navin--Naina tera jadoo chal gaya... 😆 😆

Raj opened his mouth to say something

Naina--Raj we shouldnt hide anymore...bhai has made it out...

NAvin chooked on the aloo paratha...this time...

Raj got the ultimate shock of his life....woe jus last night we were friends and now shes says we are seeing each other...raj was confused...

Navin--Naina are you mad??...I mean seriously??..

Naina indicated to Raj..and raj understoodd

Raj--Sorry Navin thought we will tell you....but see you the great figured it out..

Navin--what the hec man??since when is this all goin on....raj i mean u should be ashamed...ur smiling instead. [....u shameless creature thats my sister.....ahhh no shame.....stop blushingg u small little huge pig......

NAvin went on naina and raj lost in their own laughter....

Naina--Bhai wats small little huge pig??

Just then navin again realized something..

Navin--Hang on Hang on....

Raj and Naina burst out laughing..

Navin--So started again....both of you team up and make me mad....

Raj--Navinn its the Naina disease...

Naina--so bro are you ready??..Naina is back...to ruin your life.....

Navin--YEa yea with your partner in crime...Mr.Rajveer....The big businessman..who has learnt to blush since this morning...

Naina thought....Not only in crime...but in life too....he might just be my life partner...

What was raj thinking..no points for guessin...

Navin sorry she might be my life partner too.....

Navin--I hate u guys so much...Raj you I mean you are .(raj interuptted)

Raj--my friend and your taking naina's side ...i hate you.... right??

Naina--Bhaii get some better dialogue....pleasee...

Navin got up..

Navin--I will see you later......(navin said with a angry look)

Naina--Sory I am already seeing Raj...(naina burst out laughing)

NAvin--Ahh!,,,these two will drive me mad...

Naina and Raj left...

RAj--Ok i will go thenn..seeya...

Naina--Raj..

Raj turned around..

Raj-Hmm..

Naina--It was just a joke...I couldnt controll...i thought i ll pull bhai's leg..it was almostt instinctive..I knoe probably it was not the right time...but i was outta control....I m sorry if you dint like it....I really dint mean to hurt you...

Raj smiled...and shaked his head...all he said was...

RAj--Its ok I dint mind....Actually it felt better there was nothing of this sort in 2 years...we missed it..and feeling much better

Naina--After blushing for gawd noes wat

Naina smiled...

Raj started walking towards the door...

Raj--Naina..

Naina came out from the kitchen

Naina--Yea...

Raj-Jusst wanted to say evrything will be fine soon...I promise...Just hang in there I would come to you soon...

Naina smiled....

Naina--I trust you....

Raj just walked out....

Naina stood there smiling....at her own self..

Naina--I knew it Raj...we couldnt goo too long like that...

Raj walking towards his car...

Raj--You fool....what was the need for that dialogue....you just cant stay away from her can you??...He smiled and hit his head.... 😆

ypu were so angry with her and her two sweet wordss drive you crazy....RAj your really crazy...

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AT C&G....

Raj entered his cabin...He made two calls gave some instructions....

ANd he kept the fone..and rosy called him...

Raj with fulll enthu....

Raj-Yea rosy...

Rosy was taken abackk.....so much life so much hapiness she hadnt seen him like that ever...

Rosy--Sirrrrrr (rosy said shocked as though she had seen a ghost)

Raj--What happened does it lookk I ev come from the jungle... 😡

Rosy--Soemthings different..... 😕

Raj-What rosy??

Rosy-Hey its back.. 😆

Raj--What??

Rosy--YOur smile...did you see that...its back...(rosy was very excited)i mean it was kool...its sweet use it more oftenn you see it doesnt charge you and you dont need a secretary for that too...

(raj and rosy knew each other for long...and they shared a warm relationshipp)(so at times they were informal)

Raj--Rosyyyyy...

Rosy--What happened last night?? your sooo changed...

Raj--Nothing happened last night...now get back to workk..

Jus then Aalekh entered...

Aalekh saw rosy...

Aalekh--Hi rosy!..

Rosy--Hi aalekh...

Raj was taken aback....

Raj--Excuse me cabin is mine secretary is mine...so keep your eyes off...

Aalekh--sad one Raj...I could say the same thing...friend is mine...friends brother is mine...keep your eyes off...

Raj(ignored the sad sad joke)--How do you knoe this idiot rosy??(he looked at rosy)

Rosy--He came here yesterday sir...jus knoe his name....

Raj-Ohh....

Raj--Aalekhh if you can take your eyes off my secretary even i am here and you havent spoken to me yet??

Aalekh noticed that Raj was pulling his leg...Raj looked a hundred times better....more at peace...

Aalekh--Sorry hi...and i aint seein you secretary for god sake.....you knoe i dont like knee-length skirt people...

Raj--Shut up...
Rosy gave Aalekhh the killing look..

Raj--Who told you that story by the way??

Aalekhh gave a big grin... -- your sweett hot and sexy secretary...

Raj looked at Rosy...

RAj--I cant fire you...anyway pleasee be a little more careful with what kinda people you speak too... (raj said with a smile)

AAlekh burst out laughin..

Aalekh--Why cant you fire rosy??

Rosy was smiling..

Raj--Could we speak something else...

Aalekh--forget it...I ll speak to you later...I aint having any work with you came to see Navin..You knoe navin Naina's brother Navin..

Raj--Ofcourse i knoe Navin go then I mean are you waiting for Rosy to escort you...which she is not gonna do by the way...

Aalekh--Going dude..bye,,,... bye rosyyy ..

Rosy--umm bye...

Raj was smiling....""hes learning from navin""..

Rosy was smiling...

*****
LAter that evening..

RAJ was in a fix..

Should i call ...no no wont look gud....ahh...he was playing with the phone..

finally he dialed a number...

Raj--Umm is it Ms.Naina singh??

Naina-Yea...Umm Rajveer??

Raj--I am Rajveer singh Callin from C&G we are glad to inform you that you have got the job....

Naina was surprised he was speaking that way...

Naina--Umm thankuu so much sir....i am glad too..

Raj--You could come over we could speak the rest of the formalities..

Naina--Sure sir i'll be right there...

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Rajjj you are so gone....controll god damn it....

He was smiling...what maade you change overnihgt man...what did she say...she dint say anything...why the hell have you been smiling and blushing since morning...everyone is noticing it...

After 20 mins there was knock..

raj--Hmm come in..

Naina--Ms.Naina singh sir...

Raj--Ahh Naina...Come..

Naina sat down...

Naina--So what are the formalities...??

Raj--Nothing...

Naina--Sorry..

Raj-Umm heres your appintment letter...Thats all nothing else..

Naina was taken for a surprise,,, He had called her..and there was nothing but this letter...did he want to go out??Naina dared to open her mouthh

Naina--Umm then anything else??

Raj--Umm noo...

Naina looked down..
Both feelin weird...

Raj--sorry about yesterday....once again...I dint mean to ask you on a date you knoe...Just for a cup of coffee...

Naina--I knoe i over-reacted i m sorry too...Is the offer still open?

Raj--OFcourseee ..(raj said without thinking) umm...I meann sure....

Naina smiled..

RAj-Shall we go??

Naina--Hmm....

And they left C&G together...

THe change in Raj was noticed by quite a few poeple....ANd seein them together they left behind quite a few questions in the minds of people....now the journey ahead would it be smooth or rough ...whatever it was if raj and naina were together they could face itt....but they had to unite before any problem comes their way...

ohh relli sorry for not posting before...i dint sleeep whole of last night...den came ol to post the next part nd current went off...and den i slept off....anyway sry for d ddelay i ev already posted d next partt waitin for ur comments!...

@yyy
raj nd naina were so much in luv nd dunt wry in d end they would much more in luv...lol!...aalekhh is definately a sweetheart.....it was accidental that i missed out navin in the last few updtss....dunt wryy hes back..in the next udtss he is there equally...

@daisy
thnxx.....shonaa wld be cmin soon...but i feelll like an idiot i over-hyped it..lol!...you guys wld cme to noe soon who this shona is...

@shaina...
thnx....well the answer to ur question lies in the next few updts....ull noe...wen we go for the big flashback....
udd guess for neelu nd elu...coz i was cnfusedd i acually missed one part in the last updt so was cnfusd...nyway wteva...elu nd neelu is same
r-n together for sure...maybe not too soon....coz we have the big flashback nd den dey cme 2gthr...so a lil away....nyway!....sabar ka phaal metha hota haina...

@aarthi
thnxx a lot aarthi...


ANddddd sorrryyy ritukaa kept u waiting!....

wowwwwwwww
just wowwwwww
this is the most sweetest, cutest, loveliest of teh updates....
while reading it, i just cd nt help but smile and keep smiling........
ohhhhhh i loved it for sure and yippppeeeeeeee raj is back to his old self
and again love dthe update
👏

itz simply super,


NAina, RAj- NAvinz dialogues r simply super n very catchy 2 , 👏 ,
u hav dun it excelently,


All the best 4 the next update, 😊


Aarthi