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Posted: 18 years ago
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It is dark…a dark night …a faint moonlight…we stood at the same place facing each other…seeing her, a peaceful smile spread across my face unknowingly…there was a long soothing silence . So silent that I could hear my heart beating…a smooth wind was blowing &. I could feel her presence in it. I wanted to speak but I felt my words were spoken by my eyes…

"I never thought I would feel this way

And as far as I am concerned

I m glad I got the chance to say

That I do believe I love u"

I know I have lost you but truly loving you is the best thing that happened to me

Because you r the one with whom I always want to be….

Sweat trickled from her forehead….eyes remained focused on me …and her hands held the gun firmly without the slightest tremble…

"Now two people who always stood together

Still apart

Now stand separate

Being together……"

I promised her of something and that moment has arrived…".loving u will take my life but when I look into your eyes…I realize ur worth that sacrifice….."

Finally I spoke…perhaps for the last time..."Cadet Singh …. Shoot me"

I felt tears fill my eyes…not because that I will die but because I could feel the pain she is enduring…I closed my eyes and……

The long silence of the night was broken by the sound of a gunshot…a piercing terrifying sound …. Then... Silence prevails…..

Hello friends…I know it is boring but still plzz comment…

I hope I don't need to say this piece of writing is meant 4 whom???😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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yaar aap to kamal ki ho 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#3
its amazing not at all boring awesome dear 👏 so at last naina shot raj how sad 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 gr8 work.................. 👏 👏 👏 waise bathaaya kyo nahi ye he kiske liye he???? 😆 me jaanthi hoon........... 😃 😃 😃 it was gr 8.........
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Posted: 18 years ago
#5
well it is kept suspense....
at last who was shot....may be naina shot herself 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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its great keep it up 👏
Edited by brid - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 piece of work
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hope naina shoots herself

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