Shayiri...pg9 on H-N.

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm......lol...I wrote a few lines on ALKEH....guys...not on Arjun...kyunki Arjun pe likhne ke liye time lagega....

Rok lo mera janaza..

Mere mein jaan aa gayi hain

Peeche mudkar dekho bhaiyo

Sharab ki dukaan aa gayi hain😉

Acha I have edited coz I wrote 1 for hooda....lol..temme hows it...

Umeedo ki manzil toot gayi...

Aankhon se ashko ki dhara beh gayi

Arrey tumhari bhi kya izzat reh gayi

jab teri Phoolan.... bhaiya keh gayi....😆😉

lol..hows it...I know..stupid..par jus time pass...trying to get rid of exam fever...😡🤢

I know...second wala Hooda par suit nahin karta...par ye maine R-N fans ke liye likha hai..I m sure they will be happy....

(No offence to H-N fans and huda fans....even I m H-N fan..)

Here's da update...

pg1:Alekh n huda..

pg3:Alekh

pg4:Huda

pg6:Huda/Naina

pg7:Alekh n Sujal...

pg9:Huda-Naina

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really nice swappy.... the last line defines alekh so well 😆 .... & its not stupid... i think its quite funny actually 😃

yeah it was not stupid.. nice one. yaar!!..way to go !!

Originally posted by: shriyaroxxx

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really nice swappy.... the last line defines alekh so well 😆 .... & its not stupid... i think its quite funny actually 😃

kahan ho aaj kal tum Shriyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa...eggjams kya...mine too...par idhar bhi aa jaya karo..aise ID ka chand mat raha karo😳😳

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Originally posted by: angelsgirl

yeah it was not stupid.. nice one. yaar!!..way to go !!

Thankoooooooooooooooooo😳😳

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Alekh's 😳 part is kool 👏 bt can u plz write sumthing nice 4 HUDDA 😳

hey its quite gud 👏 👏 ......exam fevers to mera utar gaya hai...ab sirf 2 paper baaki hi wo bhi literature.......by he way wich class r u in,i'm in 9th 😳

thats really nice swappy.. bahut acchi kaviyatri ho tum yaar.. Keep up the great work.. 👏 👏

dat was rockin swappy! 👏

i luvdd both of them 😃 😳 😳 in da alekh wala... da sharab ki dukaan ka part was awesome 😆 n in da huda one... da last line was da most rockin line! 😆 😆 😆 da naina-huda bro-sis thing 👏

Lolz...d alekh one was quite cute

Huda's was quite funny coz it all rhymed perfectly 😆 😆 😆
Even though I'm a HN fan...I loved the rhyming-ness of it 😆 😆 😆