Originally posted by: -daya-
Reserved! hellooo pappy..
Long time since I read a story of yours😛 well all i can say mate is you aint missed much.. but now you asking for it.. so you'll get it😆
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Bhao...Baaji reporting for errr...uhhmm...duty
from you labor of love always my gulp! baji.
so I'm trying to remember what gibberish I used to spout in your threads...hmmm
*clears throat* alright here goes...
bah bah black sheep have you any wool?
I'm thinking the lad in your story needs a new pair of shorts! 😆haaan .. he does poor blighter.. send him some then..
What'd-ya think? 😛
First off...Thank You Warda for your suggestion...better late than never right? well warda mentioned years ago... this is not recent..please bear that in mind.. warda has a mind of her own.. she has not even seen it.. to take note of it is no way warda.. 😆
At least we can both finally confirm one thing from this...
HAMMIE DOES LISTEN!😲 What a shocker! I only listen to a few people pappy.. one tops the list... hamlet53...😆..
And here I thought we were hitting brick walls where she was concerned SO TRUE MATE!
Second...Congratulations Hammie! Good of you to continue writing for your fans. I'm surely excited to see where this excellent beginning is heading. It's been too long since I've indulged myself with your writing...Thanks daya.. and most for your prompt response.. shows your love..😊
Getting to the story itself. It's a very interesting start...and introduction to the kid version of Dutta and his life...sets the base. Am looking forward to the 'ordinary man' angle though we all know, no matter what character...Dutta is not ordinary...
yes dutta is special in our hearts and minds.. always will be.. agreedSo sad that he thinks his mother is asleep, believing that she'll awake again. He's just a kid and loss can be perceived as many things to them. A state of confusion unable to understand the disappearance of a love one. The loss of his mother is certain to affect him and disrupt life as he knew it. These things I'm sure will add layers to whatever story and character build you have in mind.
oyeee don't get carried away, will have to see what scrawl I produce.. but in the repeats, I was so impressed by the damoder /dutta track..Thanks for writing something new. Always love your work! now this is the line i love the bestest!
Fantastic beginning, do update soon!! humm will do
Alright, will catch you in pms...see you later alligator! ..mera mau maat lagna.. Eng lost to Uruguay.
cheers and many thanks loads of love hammie😃