FF : Tere Mere Darmiyaan LAST PART pg-87 dt.10.10.14

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

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Posted: 11 years ago

#461

TMD~ chapter 13

Hi Rosie,

It's true in any relationship .. a certain openness, a sharing of one's present especially past does make an impact on the depth and quality of relationship between people.. Naku, rightfully feels excluded from knowing everything, especially about his possibly ,troubled past.. the results of which she sees often, in his present life..

So the dirty thieving , lying toad roopa, lands Naku in trouble!

Hey... the real culprit is laxmi.. but the winning streak of the episode is that Dutta not once believes that Naku has a hand in the money that Roopa ends up having..

Wow such fab dialogues of Dutta to laxmi.. I would see mishal /Dutta in clear a bombastic mood.. superb .. reading them sure gave me a KICK!

So this loyal, menial , part of the family.. has Kala type streaks.. but was great the scene as we and Naku gets to see and hear what Saab really feels our their rhistaa..

So I wonder if Naku still wants to be taken into confidence about his past.. or worry may be that he doesn't trust her enough... for, the roopa/laxmi incident.. happily has clarified one thing to Naku.. never mind about him ,trusting her with his past.. in their present moment he trusts her completely.. he has given a testimony of that by standing up for her, his wife! chastising and punishing the real transgressors..

Thanks for a lovely chapter rosie.. loved the insight into people's emotions. Do continue, much love hammie.

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afi7861

@afi7861

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Posted: 11 years ago

#462

Hey rose waiting for anno and promo 😊

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tahera57

@tahera57

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#463

thanks for a fab ud Rose, we were lead to believe that Nakku had more trouble in store for her by your promo, but in this ff we know this gadha isn't as gullible as LTL ka bhau...

Roopa just put her last nail in her own coffin ab jayay sadaay jail main... good riddance to bad rubbish!... hope her part ends here since Dutta is done and dusted with her and this time I don't think Nakku feels too bad either! .

missed annay in this ud.. the child brings so much brightness to the story.

Dutta keeps his past buried inside him believing he would only hurt her further...abhi kab tak aur patil saab? nakku can take it what she can't take is not being able to share her saab's pain... great ud Rose looking forward to next...

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afi7861

@afi7861

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Posted: 11 years ago

#464

waiting for ud rose pls update soon

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zeest_14

@zeest_14

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#465

Hi rose

Its nice to read that you and tahera missed me,yeah exams went well.i have read latest update but at this moment i'll comment on chapter 7,i know i am quite late but so much busy now a days.

chap 7

Hmm so naku is having a cupboard now though its separate one but still it is in dutta's room,minor but good progress.Annay is having home classes 🤔 mama g what are you doing with little boy .So he is aggressive about people and things related to him.Poor boy wanted to enjoy picnic but quite compromising .Madhu as usual a positive character .I was amazed when madhu approached nakku with hope that annay's mami will convince his mamu😳.Though nakku wanted to see annay happy like other children but his mamu ka pyar

AIK SAGAR SA HAY PYAR US KA MAGAR US MAI KABI

KOI SHIDDAT HAY CHATANO SI SO US KA KYA KIJIYE

And then dinner scene .How nicely nakku presented it and how dutta appreciated her presentation😒.

I like the scene when dutta went to annay's bed room, whole scene was very well written,it has a warmth of love.The dinner scene was amazing,you wrote it very well👏nakku's nervousness, dutta's confusion everything was apt, their dialogues were natural.⭐️And then bed room scene soft side of dutta,s character.Nakku,s condition was miserable,may be some dreadful memories. Anyways its nice to see that dutta cares about her.

BOHAT SE RANG O RAAZ KHUD MAI SMETY BAITHA HAI

WO AIK SHAKHS HAI YA BHAID BHARI KITAAB KOI

And now dutta have started thinking about her and her behaviour ,gud sign for a new relation.

Very well written update ,really amazing.👏

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zeest_14

@zeest_14

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#466

Now its chapter 8

What a start of dutta's day ,conversation about morey ,so dutta is treating morey in his way.I think he deserve that ..The whole arti scene was well written .Dutta is noticing nakku's behaviour ,gud progress .So now naku's moods are affecting his thoughts.

SAKOON AISA K WAJA E TASKEEN BANEY

BECHAINI AISI K SOCH K RUKH BADAL DALY

Nakku and annay's relation is improving by the time.Nakku really loves him and feels sympathy for his life style .😲Is she mad, she is taking lunch for dutta.Till now i was confused about laxmi's character ,is she against nakku or not but now its clear.

Dutta treated morey very well,he turned the whole game👏,Rose u wrote the whole scene nicely with dutta's specific style.And after that nakku's arrival,i was expecting a warm welcome from dutta through glares and some scolding but thanks to annay .Poor naku .she didn't know that annay was not allowed to go out .

Nakku advocated annay nicely but it was useless.She was right that dutta's over possessive nature was hampering the child's growth but dutta was adamant.

SAADA SI ZINDAGI KO MUSHKIL BNA RAHA HAI

HISAR E MUHABBAT KO SHIKANJA BNA RAHA HAI

Rose whole scene was so nice and the speciality of it was tasha's essence👍🏼.

You are going very well.

Take care.

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Rose

@stranger2rose

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#467

" ek minute bhau." Purohit ji called him from behind. Turning around dutta eyed him curiously and found him looking at him warily. Purohit ji struggled with his words but somehow gathered the courage to speak up," bhau..aapke..pitaa ji ..ka bhi janam din aane wala hai..toh unke liye kuch.." dutta took a moment to comprehend what he was attempting to say and then his eyes turned as cold as ice. The smile on his face vanished instead anger and contempt took its place.

" aaj se pehle maine kabhi kuch kiya hai?" he asked through gritted teeth. The old man slowly shook his head.

" toh phir aapse jitna kaha jaaye utna hi kariye." With that he walked not bothering to throw a glance at nakusha who was gaping at him because of his sudden change in mood and attitude. His words left her stumped. As far as she knew, he was close to both his parents, in fact he looked up to his late father then why did he react like that? Why didn't he ever celebrate his birth anniversary? Weird and confusing.

Full update - Saturday

Annotations - Tomorrow😊

Edited by stranger2rose - 11 years ago

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afi7861

@afi7861

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#468

Thank you so much for promo rose

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tahera57

@tahera57

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#469

thank you rose for the promo, can't wait to read the reason why he was smiling ... baki sab jayay bhaad main... Dutta hai gussa, garmi , moodiness and tantrums wo toh chalt y hi rehtay hain...waiting for sat...