FF : Tere Mere Darmiyaan LAST PART pg-87 dt.10.10.14 - Page 14

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi Rose, great ud, ae lo.. kahan la ke patakh diya Dutta ne poor Nakusha ko! out of the frying pan into the fire! .. we know nothing to worry about ghar maen jagha mil gaee hai, toh dil maen bhi mil hi jayay gi!😃 .. phir bhi ajeeb aadmi hai itna bhi khayal nahi kiya keh toh diya ke their relation is only outside the door, but ye nahin socha how is she going to ask the maid for bedding etc without explaining saab and her have no relation inside the room. eagerly waiting for next ud.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aishwish

Hello Rosie🤗..hello aish ( its a cold hello , mind it)

I'll just straight away come to point. You know na...yunki zayada bolne ki toh hume aadat nahin hai😛😆..bus nautanki karne ki aadat hai

Chapter 1

OMG I have to confess I'm in love with the grasshopper who got to whirl around my sweetu's feet!!❤️ ..your sweetu is not a God 😡Now coming to the update...I just loved how it unfolded, must say your love for nature is touching new highs...thank you , btw this glowing green is just to irritate your eyes 😉..ab tak it was only gardens, cut to seedha fields..field romance is more exciting .😛 No it was a very fresh and warm start. And seriously I can't believe how every time you manage to guess my fantasies and fulfill them..well i can only guess your fantasies but still there are a lot many that i can't fulfill myself 😉. I always wanted his character with a shade somewhat similar to anil kapoor in virasat!!..wow , we manage to think alike as always Imagine he working in the fields, I mean not exactly working but supervising...and then I taking him his lunch!..you taking him lunch not a good idea , poor guy will remain hungry as you will finish off the whole lunch before reaching him!☺️

So very happily I was reading the chapter and I was reminded of guess what who...sukhilala of mother India🤣..you know my relationship with classics , sadly i haven't seen mother india and have no clue as to who is sukhilala

I assumed that it was nakusha who hadn't paid the dues, but its roopa,..i wish to give a disclaimer ..this roopa is not roops any resemblance is purely coincidental ..seriously how can you imagine roops as this roopa 😡..tell me the name of nakusha's sister who ran away from home in the show , wasn't she named roopa ? i might be wrong tell me its your pure hatred towards roops in the show na that roopa gets to play cinderella's step sister😉😆. And then sukhilala takes a 360 degree turn and transforms into the most desirable hunk☺️...oh no dutta as some sukhilalal ..such a turn off..the whole sequence with dutta nakusha and roopa, oops how can I miss kaale😆 so as I was saying that was a perfect 10 on 10 scene each⭐️👏 and every reaction of dutta was so apt...thanks again..it reminded me of Ganpat and dutta conversations when he hadn't fell for naku oh!! God roopa might sue me for comparing her to ganpat😆...who is afraid of roopa , your sweetu will happily bail you out Dutta is disgusted with the way nakusha is being treated not because it has anything to do with nakusha in particular it's just pure disgustion against evil. And there a very thin line that has to be kept in consideration...a little extra display of emotion, and it might look like that dutta has a soft corner for nakusha ...a very well balanced sequence...yup, there is no love

Does she have a ugly mark or something? Let's see ..if you suspect without reading the next chapter then you are intelligent , as the prologue also suggests something like this..talking about her...though she barely got dialogues her every reaction/thought is penned down beautifully..sometimes you become sweet , i like it. And this chaalu chudail😡...oh no , you are back to being yourself .every body calls him bhau, even her sister calls him bhau ...i am closing my ears , you can take out your frustration ..why doesn't she calls him bhau??😡This cheap girl..I'm sure she chori chori leaches on my sweetu behind the excuse of working in the field.🤢

I have read the third part and know that they are married💔, but I'm damn sure when he says he'll take care of her marriage, he doesn't means himself, this girl is thinking too much!😛..wow , you are so clever 👏

Oh!! Rosie..this was amazing maza aa gaya, even in my wildest thoughts I didn't expected you to take a backdrop like this one, but you were great at detailing precise and accurate!!...it feels great to surprise you , thank u so much 🤗

Will be back with my rest of the comments!!😳..and i know why 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tahera57

heyy aish you are back with your long funny dhamakay daar comments. loved reading them all, they are as much a treat as the FF updates.😃.

Hey Tahera
Thank you🤗

well I knew that my updates are as long as the updates😆 but I'm glad you find them funny and dhamakedar as well
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tahera57

hi zeestlike your shaer they are always so apt for every situation in this ff.😊

Hi tahera
Thanks for appreciation.To be very honest rose' writing skill urged me to do this consistently.
Edited by zeest_14 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aishwish

Hey Tahera
Thank you🤗

well I knew that my updates are as long as the updates😆 but I'm glad you find them funny and dhamakedar as well

ki maen jhoot bolaya?
chatkhara bhi patkhara bhi ( Rose ko har waqt patkhara marti rehti ho ) .koi shaq?t hanks for such entertaining comments dil khush kar ditta!😃 waisay toh bharti bhi kuch kam nahi hai lekin, uski tareef karnay ka abhi mun nahi hai😆. ( wo toh ghoose milnay ke baad dekhongi.!)😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi rose im waiting for ud or promo 😊 pls jaldi see post kardo
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: afi7861

hi rose im waiting for ud or promo 😊 pls jaldi see post kardo

me too😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Rose
Waiting for Update Waisy promo bhi chaley ga.
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Posted: 11 years ago
@ Mimi - well i am pleasantly shocked that you made the effort to read two chapters in one go and thereafter comment. you deserve applause 👏. you are right, dutta was very rude , he had no right to speak to nakku like that. I shall not defend him this time , you can slap him if you wish. and thank you so much for appreciating the ff , i know you will not be a regular reader but still hearing from you will feel nice.

@ tamanna - glad you found the update awesome, thanks.

@ afzal - yes dutta spoke rudely and broke her heart. he shouldn't have done that. Lets see how the story progresses.

@ jedy - agree with you , a relationship based on compromise is tough to live with but nakku is a strong girl , she will surely find a solution. thanks for the comment.

@ nakusha - thank you so much for the glittering rose and i am glad you could feel nakku's emotions . she had suffered a lot and even now she is suffering but hopefully this time she will have someone to share her sorrows with and there are quite a few stories that will unfold slowly so just be patient and enjoy the whole journey.

@ uwith - the scar on nakku's face has left a dent on her self confidence , lets see how dutta helps her deal with it , for now he is not ready to accept her but will time feeling will change. thanks for appreciating the way nakku's emotions have been penned.

@ sona - it is not easy for dutta to accept this marriage at once , he will take time and we all know that nakku sooner or later will succeed in making a place for herself in his heart. thanks for sharing your views.

@ dilse - thanks for finding the update wonderful . both nakku and dutta have suffered a lot and it is story where they come together to heal each other.

@ fassben - agree with you dutta was hurtful and if you wish to hate him i shall not stop you however as the story progresses i hope your opinion changes . thanks for the comment and the beautiful red roses , they are lovely.

@ mirage - happy to know that you like the way nakku's feeling turned out. thanks for taking out time to read and comment.

@ emily - yes this marriage will not be a cake walk for nakku but i hope her present and future turns out to be better than her past. thanks for finding the update superb.

@ hammie - firstly i love your dp's and good you change them often. coming to the update , you have summed it up perfectly. there is a mystery around dutta's character and rightly said he is afraid to commit. In his head he doesn't wish to take this relationship forward so nakku being scarred or not doesn't make a difference to him. thanks so much for your lovely comments they always make me feel wonderful.

@ bharti - rightly said , at the moment the only thing that is going in favor of nakku is that roopa is not there to suck her blood and don't be cynical dutta is rude and arrogant but he is still better than her sister 😊 as far as dutta's family is concerned he only has a nephew and now a wife , so it will be a close knit family. thanks for appreciating the scene where nakku stands before bappa in a confused state of mind . life has changed so dramatically for her that she doesn't know how to react. yes this lion is purely vegetarian for now ..yeh gaddhe ki tarah ghaans khaata hai 😆so nakku is absolutely safe with him. and agree with you , he didn't even bother to give her mattress to sleep , how rude was that 😡

@ twinkle twinkle rocking star - i am really happy to know that you enjoyed the update a lot and could feel the emotions and pain of tasha. well you always do a commendable job with your comments and post pics that suit dutta perfectly however this time you have succeeded in bringing out nakusha's emotions beautifully . there are so many pics that i really like for example , helpless nakku , sad nakku standing before bappa with folded hands but the best one is where she makes a disgusting face on hearing dutta's bitter words , she is angry and hurt at the same time 👍🏼and the thorn piercing the heart ..WOW ..too good . thanks again for sharing your views so wonderfully . you truly rock baby.

@ ranajana - thanks for finding the update beautiful . with suresh's untimely death nakku's dreams shatter but dutta steps in and saves her however he is not ready to accept her as his wife so things are still not that good for her.

@ zeest - you have to tell me from where do you find such amazing poetry that goes so well with the scenes ? do you have a secret book ? i mean i write one whole paragraph to describe the situation but you with just two simple lines sum up the whole scene so beautifully that i am left speechless .
BEBASI K PHOOL HAIN OR KHAMOSHI KI DHUN LOGO
HUM PIYA GHAR AYE MAGAR HAIRAT SE HAIN SUN LOGO
now what do i say for this ...just perfect lines for the scene when tasha come to PN after marriage.

HUM KO KHUSHI MILI BHI TO JAISE UDHAAR LI
HUM SE JUDRI KHATA THI JO US NE SUDHAAR LI

seriously , tell me how can you describe what nakku felt and what dutta said in the room so aptly ? this is brilliant.

DARIYA K KINARON SA TAALUQ US NE JORA HAI
SATH SATH CHALNA HAI RAABTA NAHI RAKHNA

you know till now i didn't know the meaning of raabta , i loved the song kuch toh hai tujhse raabta but now i can say raabta means rishta and this is all thanks to you . i am so glad that not only me but tahera also pointed how wonderful your poetry or shares are ..too good 👍🏼and i am fortunate that you share them with me , thanks so much.

@ tahera - rightly said , what has dutta done with her , poor girl feel sorry for her but then that is our donkey , he doesn't do anything right the first time. he makes mistakes and nakku corrects , thats how love blossoms between them. thanks for the comment and what is this madam you enjoy aish's blabbering and how she loves to run behind me with a belan lol ..she is a complete drama queen



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Posted: 11 years ago

Dutta snarled like a wounded beast. His hands fisted and his legs kicked restlessly.He clenched his teeth and his back bowed as though the bed was on fire beneath him. He was writhing in pain and thrashing violently. He jerked awake and bolted upright.

A dream only a dream.

Covering her mouth with her hand nakusha breathed hard as her heart thudded violently in shock. Her eyes refused to believe that they had actually witnessed his dark and battered side.

Full update very soon

Edited by stranger2rose - 11 years ago

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