FF~Fettered Affection.chp20.p144 23.8.13 - Page 27

Originally posted by: afzal7861

hi every one😊

yaad hai main kaha tha mujhe aap sab ko ek good news dine hai main toh tahera ki mom ke theek hone ka intezar kar raha tha ke woh theek ho jaye par ye baat sab se share karon ga leking nahi tahera ke pat main yeh good news wali baat hazam nahi ho rahi thi bol rahi thi ke abhi bato jaldi bato tu es liye main aap sab ko yeh batana chahta hoon main main

papa banne wala hoon😃

ab tahera bahut khush hai woh popee jo ban ge hai mere honwala bachi ki😃

Originally posted by: afzal7861

ih everyone kisi ne bharti ko dekha hai do teen din se nazar nahi aaye agar mil jaye toh batana plzz

Originally posted by: -bharti-

res..

ATLAAST! 😛 hummh love the welcome , I get from you, bart.. look forward to it for all my work..

Hi Hammoo ! 😊 hi bart.😃 good to see you mate.

Finally after the long long dry spells we have been rewarded with two Rocking UDs from urself n Rosie.. its time to party yes for sure ,absolutely loved Rose's UD, i did, .. great writer she is great flow in her writing..

Dutta doesnt show even one tenth decency he bestows on that stranger kali gori with his mom, grrr! it baffles me. The moment he comes closer to his house his mannerisms seem to change n he stiffens.. great obs. bart, true I never thought of it that way, see that's why its useful to have you as a reader, critical appreciation..😊 And what is the hullabaloo with this VDay i dont understand.. aisa lag raga hai it has been converted to Rakhi day here lol.. haaa haa true again👏 mind you I see SBAB, SBAS,and the coverage given in all the serials is unbelievable. and lots of given Anyway roops gets her rose n teddy, uff ! again i find teddy,s such a childish thing, dutta is right, Grow Up Roops ! But she surprises with her own gift, aawww she got him a shirt umm.. but hey wait! what about baji? why is he treated as a 2nd class citizen, not fair 😔And AS has a small reason to smile, a mother,s heart swells up with pride looking at his handsome figure, so cute na hammie? 😆😆👏..touche !loved it.. it was heartwarming to see the two handing out their first wages, uff! dutta leaves no stone unturned to remind AS of his discontentment.

Oooh dutta.. he takes one step forward n two steps backward with his irritable behaviour. The discontent is simmering inside n it finds its way out, but baji is happy his friend is dreaming like all, is he? why do i fear that there is more to it n doesnt bode well He,s thinking in terms of quick fortune which everyone knows what it costs.hummh he sure is.. waise bhi you only live once tu why not live live king size!😆

GOD!! bechare ka prison mein atyachar hua hai kya ? ... lady jailor ki hawas ka shikaar humara jawan duttaa ROFL... why does it amuse me when men are taken advantage of or a woman makes a pass at a man. When i think hard it does seem real too real, a man can indeed be abused or rather taken advantage of against his will when women are in commanding positions..happens i can assure you , good thing it is now exposed too when it happen.. she was a lady inspector in his case But his nightmares are real n it must have been very demeaning, But woh jailor toh i think only touched his shoulders aur yeh itna hungama kar raha hai 😃 aur yeh kala tai beech mein, hmm its all very confusing.

This house must have been witnes to some atrocities for dutta thats my gues, but not sure. Anyway wil wait for some clarity.yesss plzse make sure you catch the updates.. whenever they happen..

Hammie its amazing how much hindi you have been writing..thanks so much bart, means a lot to me, to me their local dialect is the essence.. but have to say my spellings are atrocious in and it goes well with the characters n understanding them better.. Baji with the young customer was funny n our dutta all busines with her, so tahera will now learn more abt the motor mechanics.. about the exhaust pipes for this UD, lol Hohohhoo, his chai joke was good, luv u dutta, naku already too comfy with him
haaa hooo yeah ,love tha's remark , motor mechanic.. tyre badalna ata hai mujhe aur jack dena bhi! doon!😆
giggling n all.. but he can never say NO to her isnt it? how quickly he smells her why did his words sound hollow to me, "that stupid woman has faith in me", instead of accepting his weaknes for her.. kaash dutta you had shown the same consideration to your mom ?? men are men, ladki dekhi nahi pair phisal jata hain woh bhi gori hai toh, saara usool gaya baad mein, maa bhi 😆 haaa hooo

Seemaaa seemaa, doosre mard ke liye dore dalna band kar meri maan woh taken hai, lol... umm, she gets the point but so soon?? whatever, you spice up the UD lady. Oohh the poor kid wetting his knickers..😒 ...baat sun dil pe zaroor nehi chata aur old flame welll I don't know about that! 😆

As if there werent enuf people drooling over dutta now we have shamlal bhiii checking lol.. ok ok, i get it, poor fella well intended making sure his fav inmate picking up the pieces in life. He has some words of praise for naku, 'sab log agar tumhare jaise kam kare toh', mein kehti hu tab sabka jaldi hi ghar basjayega, haina nakkuuu? LOL

So we are in supriya,s clinic and he soon concludes 'paglon ka doc', the most common misconception... atleast i believe you to be one dutta... not that i blame you, Wowow..." mein koi saab nahi hoon", someone tel me is he the same guy who hollered the kali gori to address him as saab???..😆😆..gadhe hai.. if you ask me bart.. this man has personality disorder... like the writer... ghajni..😕😕 main kaun hoonnn??

But sups comes across as a thorough professional keeping upto the job at hand unlike others.. having to face the wrath of an obstinate, utterly biased ex con. So the meeting doesnt seem to go anywhere at.east for dutta. She will need all her knowledge to come around with his pagal

Hmm the precap only indicates how fast this story has picked pace. gadha already holding her hand ??? i gues at this rate soon shehnaiya bajenge, baraat ki tayariya bhi lol

nooo they will never be one.. even in LTL1.. It ended as a tragedy for me.. so me ticking o that, If I can help it..

Hammie, the best part of this Ff is the pace n im sure you are under considerable pressure to bring the lead pair together at the earliest. Thank you dear for a wonderful reading.. you have a great weekend too. Hopefully you keep your friday date with us, with the next one.. ohhh i will try barteee.. you make sure you read it .. dil maat torne mera.. and do comment.. they are loved by all readers i can assure you..check the likes you get for your comments.. lady....😃

bart , my dearest mate. tere comments that you have given me on my work since the time i joined laagi.. i humbly with bowed head , thank you for it.. pata hai you don't take to kindly to the word thanks.. but this once can i acknowledge it.. my request.. please keep commenting on my work, keep spreading joy on the forum.. you are a much loved member of Laagi.. so keep doing your bit and I'll do mine.. much love,😊 as ever yours hammie.

Originally posted by: afzal7861

hi, kaka balli, great to see you mate..
hi hammieoo ooh shukar khuda ka ke tum na ud post karde

ok loved the ud roops gat dutta a gift that so sweet

dutta doctor sups see milne ke liye taiyar toh ho ga par koi khaas faida nahi hua chalo koi gal nahi naku hai ne sab theek kar dein ge😆

love the ud hammie thanks

waiting for next plz ud soon

love fazal

thanks for liking the UD..and once again balli and bhabi congrats for the news.. much love , as ever yours hammie.