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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -bharti-

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ATLAAST! 😛

Hi Hammoo ! 😊

Finally after the long long dry spells we have been rewarded with two Rocking UDs from urself n Rosie.. its time to party
Dutta doesnt show even one tenth decency he bestows on that stranger kali gori with his mom, grrr! it baffles me. The moment he comes closer to his house his mannerisms seem to change n he stiffens.. And what is the hullabaloo with this VDay i dont understand.. aisa lag raga hai it has been converted to Rakhi day here lol.. Anyway roops gets her rose n teddy, uff ! again i find teddy,s such a childish thing, dutta is right, Grow Up Roops ! But she surprises with her own gift, aawww she got him a shirt umm.. but hey wait! what about baji? why is he treated as a 2nd class citizen, not fair 😔And AS has a small reason to smile, a mother,s heart swells up with pride looking at his handsome figure, so cute na hammie? it was heartwarming to see the two handing out their first wages, uff! dutta leaves no stone unturned to remind AS of his discontentment.

Oooh dutta.. he takes one step forward n two steps backward with his irritable behaviour. The discontent is simmering inside n it finds its way out, but baji is happy his friend is dreaming like all, is he? why do i fear that there is more to it n doesnt bode well He,s thinking in terms of quick fortune which everyone knows what it costs.

GOD!! bechare ka prison mein atyachar hua hai kya ? ... lady jailor ki hawas ka shikaar humara jawan duttaa ROFL... why does it amuse me when men are taken advantage of or a woman makes a pass at a man. When i think hard it does seem real too real, a man can indeed be abused or rather taken advantage of against his will when women are in commanding positions.. But his nightmares are real n it must have been very demeaning, But woh jailor toh i think only touched his shoulders aur yeh itna hungama kar raha hai 😃 aur yeh kala tai beech mein, hmm its all very confusing.
This house must have been witnes to some atrocities for dutta thats my gues, but not sure. Anyway wil wait for some clarity.

Hammie its amazing how much hindi you have been writing in and it goes well with the characters n understanding them better.. Baji with the young customer was funny n our dutta all busines with her, so tahera will now learn more abt the motor mechanics.. about the exhaust pipes for this UD, lol Hohohhoo, his chai joke was good, luv u dutta, naku already too comfy with him giggling n all.. but he can never say NO to her isnt it? how quickly he smells her why did his words sound hollow to me, "that stupid woman has faith in me", instead of accepting his weaknes for her.. kaash dutta you had shown the same consideration to your mom ?? men are men, ladki dekhi nahi pair phisal jata hain woh bhi gori hai toh, saara usool gaya baad mein, maa bhi
Seemaaa seemaa, doosre mard ke liye dore dalna band kar meri maan woh taken hai, lol... umm, she gets the point but so soon?? whatever, you spice up the UD lady. Oohh the poor kid wetting his knickers..😒
As if there werent enuf people drooling over dutta now we have shamlal bhiii checking lol.. ok ok, i get it, poor fella well intended making sure his fav inmate picking up the pieces in life. He has some words of praise for naku, 'sab log agar tumhare jaise kam kare toh', mein kehti hu tab sabka jaldi hi ghar basjayega, haina nakkuuu? LOL
So we are in supriya,s clinic and he soon concludes 'paglon ka doc', the most common misconception... atleast i believe you to be one dutta... not that i blame you, Wowow..." mein koi saab nahi hoon", someone tel me is he the same guy who hollered the kali gori to address him as saab???
But sups comes across as a thorough professional keeping upto the job at hand unlike others.. having to face the wrath of an obstinate, utterly biased ex con. So the meeting doesnt seem to go anywhere at.east for dutta. She will need all her knowledge to come around with his pagal

Hmm the precap only indicates how fast this story has picked pace. gadha already holding her hand ??? i gues at this rate soon shehnaiya bajenge, baraat ki tayariya bhi lol

Hammie, the best part of this Ff is the pace n im sure you are under considerable pressure to bring the lead pair together at the earliest. Thank you dear for a wonderful reading.. you have a great weekend too. Hopefully you keep your friday date with us, with the next one..

hi bharti
nice comment😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi hamlet after a gap met you again😊.nice ud...dutta had terrible time in jail...hope sups & naku can be of help...did miss dutta & naku meeting ...duttas past was terrible...his father been reason for his misery .feel sad..next part soon ..regards uvi congrats rockerz👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi afzal ,bharti & friends
tahera mom isn't well .do pray for her .tahera will be back once thing improve .
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi every one im sorry main theek se read nahi kya tha tahera ki ammi isnt well main soch ke nakusha tahera ki baat kar rahe hai hai aur main sorry im very sorry hammie bharti tahera 😭 😭 plzz maf kar do i will pray for ammi jan im a very bad boy 😭 ohh god plzz maf kardo aur amm sab dua main hai and nakusha sorry to you is well
Edited by afzal7861 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Tahera your ammi jaan is in our prayers.. humm sab dau mein hai.. we all are here for you.. keep faith..





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Posted: 12 years ago



Congrats to
Our Shakespearean Rocket Star, Hammie, 👍🏼
Edited by ivy_11 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Tahera,

Our thoughts and Prayers are with you and your Ammi.

Wishing her a speedy recovery
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi tahera im praying for ammi jaan wishing her a speedy brecovery
os dont worry

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Posted: 12 years ago
hi ham thanks for the friday dose dutta had hard time in jail hope naku is able to help him precap seems interesting sorry for short comment net is too slow
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi tahera
will pray for your mom speedy recovery

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