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Posted: 12 years ago
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update will be tomorrow or sunday



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tamanna1391

update will be tomorrow or sunday




hi tammy
waiting jaldi ud😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nakusha

hi tammy

waiting jaldi ud😊


busy tomorrow so update will be on sunday but if i got ;ittle time i will update tomorrow only
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 8

Vickram – rassi jal gayi magar bal nahin gaya tera bhai mere paas hai agar use bachana chaahti hai to kal subah 5 baje mere ko dariya ke kinare mil and he cut the call

Nakku stood still listening dutta who saw it try to console her nakku snapped at him and turn to face him with anger in her eyes dutta is taken bach seeing so much anger in nakku first time

Dutta – nakku mein sab thik kar dega

Nakku – chup bahut bol liye aap aur bahut kar liya aapne bas ab aur nahin ab jo karna hai mein karoongi apne bhai ko mein khud bachayegi aur us vickram ko sazaa doongi

Dutta – nakku tu pagal ho gayi hai kya tu kahin nahin jayegi mein abhi zinda hoon mein laayega sethji ko woh bhi sahi salamat mein vaada karta hai tere se mereko ek mauka de and turned to baaji and asked him to join him and asked sudarshashan to check safety of all and turned to go but with nakku voice he stopped

Nakku (without turning back ) – kala sethji kahan hai

Kala (who was smirking till now shoked with sudden question of nakku everyone turned to her ) – ye kaisa sawal hai sethji ko to vickram ne kidnap kiya hai to mereko kaise pata ki wo kaha hai (turned to dutta ) dekh bhau yeh ladki kya keh rahi hai tu ise mujhse aise baat karne dega (faking innocence)

Dutta (turned to nakku )- nakku tu ye kaise sawal pooch rahi hai taayi se too aisa soch bhi kaise sakti hai

Nakku (ignoring dutta walked to kala )- to tujhe nahin pata ki sethji kahan hai haina

Kala – baar baar ye sawal poochne se kuch nahin hoga apne bhai ko bacha uski jaan

But before she could continue nakku slapped herdutta tried to interfere but nakku shout made him shut

Nakku – aap aaj aage nahin badhenge but dutta didn't stop and try to walk but with nakku's signal baaji put the gun on dutta forhead

Baaji – bhau aage mat badhna

Dutta (shoked) – baaji tu yeh

Guards try to interfere seeing gun on dutta but baaji threat made them still nakku told them to leave patil niwas and without any choice they left glancing at dutta

Baaji –bhau aaj jo nakku kar rahi hai use karne de and in the pretence of putting gun whispered bhau agar aaj tak tune ek second ke liya tune nakku aur mere par bharo sa kiya hai to aaj jo ho raha hone de and saw kala turning toward them and shout agar bhau ki jaan pyari hai toh koi nahin hilega

After seeing everyone condition nakku turn to kala

Nakku – kala mei aakhri baari pooch rahi hai seth ji kahan hai

Kala (in anger ) – mein bhi aakhri baar kah rahi hai mujhe nahi pata

And finally irritated nakku pounced on kala slaping punching kicking catching her hair in fist and finally thrown her on floor scaring the hell out of kala who trying to move backward but nakku stopped her and finally kala spilitted out

Kala - haan mene hi vickram ke saath milkar sethji ko uthane ka plan banaya tha everyone shocked with this information dutta who was just on the verge of stopping nakku but now felt angry on himself can't belive what he heared

Dutta – taayi tu ye kya keh rahi hai tune ye sab kaise kyun kya hai yeh sab

Kala (trying to fake innocence as she knew dutta will believe her) – bhau mein to tujhe isse bachana chahti thi bas mein nahin chahti thi ki tera dil dobara toote

Nakku – chup kalavati kitne jhoot aur bolegi tu dutta shriram patil sach kya hai mein batati hoon aapko shuru se hi ye kala aapko khush nahin dekhna chaahti thi isiliye isne supriya ravi ke baare mein jaante hue bhi aapko nahin bataya and she is the one who forced supriya to write a fake letter and then used it against me she never want you to marry because if you married your wife will have the the power she always want then she is the one who stopped me from telling you the truth before marriage you can even ask AS dutta turned to AS

Dutta – kya yeh sach hai aai

AS – yes nakku is right kala convinced us that if you come to know about nakku you will not marry her and that time i was worried about your security so i just got agreed with kala to reveal this secret after marriage so that you can be safe

Nakku – and she is the one who told you wrong things about baaji and my relation is this not true dutta and she was the one who stopped baaji when he came to ask for help to save my family but he could never reached you because kala didn't let him she is the only one who is responsible for my parents death but i will not let her destroy my brothers life i will save him at any condition

Kala started to laugh evily – nakku you are mad as you are wasting your time here and vickram will kill your brother there and then you will be all alone

madhu who was silent till now as she couldn't digest the fact that kala killed her father now come to nakku

madhu – bhabhi aap jao aur sethji ko bachalo till then kala will be in our custody

nakku – i will save my brother he has to come to me

at that time ali mamu kaka babu entered the hall with shivam

kaka babu – madhu is right nakku your priority should be sethji now

shivum – don't worry nakku as my father has arranged a guard who was always outside patil niwas gave us information about sethji kidnapping and we know where he had kept him come we have to go there to save him

dutta ,baaji – we will join you

dutta - just a minute where is sudarshan we should left him here so that he can check security of all

kaka babu – dutta you didn't knew but your all sisters and sudarshan is involved in planning against you leela roops did knew about all kala's plan and sudarshan is now with vickram so when nakku come to meet them he will finish sethji at the signal of vickram so now we should leave before they do something we have to finish this vickram

and turned to guards who followed them - just don't let kala and out of your sight is it clear

guard- ji kaka babu

kaka babu – chalo nakku

finally nakku dutta baaji with ali mamu and kaka babu left with some guards to save sethji

precap – vickram tum aa to gayi ho lekin ja nahin paogi

nakku – i will surely go vickram but after punishing you for my parents death for making this condition of my brother

hello friends here is the 8th part i know you all will be thinking why i let nakku beat kala its because dutta will not raise his hand on kala so biwi ne kami poori kar di and yes friend i really like the girls who can see their safety punishe someone if he did injustice to her and yes as this ff mainly based on nakku changing how she changed from a quit girl to a powerful lady so now the punishing vickram time come kala ki pitayi baaki hai so wait and watch byeee




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Posted: 12 years ago
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Tamanna dear🤗🤗
Wow👏👏👏...Kya action update hai dear...Really amazing👏👏😃...Oh Naku is soo brave & brilliant ...👏👏👏...Baaji put the gun on Dutta's forehead😲😲😲..Can't believe this😲😲...But Its a must needed action👏👏...If he didn't do like this ,then Dutta didn't understand about Kala👏👏👏...Wow What a punch,slap & kick😆👏👏...



Yahoo Kala got injured

Kala perfectly deserved for these punishments
Now dutta knew about Kala's truth😃😃...Aayi saahib told the truth👏...Wow now onwards I like AS so much 😃😃...Now Dutta ,Naku ,Baaji going to save Sethji👏👏...Thanks sooo much for your Action treat dear😃😃😃..Really enjoyed a lot😃 😊Waiting for another action update dear😉😉😉...Please update soon😃...




Edited by twinkle-star - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
hi tammana
fab ud ! i lov this powerful naku..pls ud fast
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi tammy
loved the ud..you did wht nakus character should have done in serial too, naku gave a fitting reply to kala & this naku takes her own decision & can take care of herself is well thought & well written 😊plz ud soon & tammy u r good at writing ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi tammanah nice ud..naku is in sherni mode..kala at gun point ..good support by baji ...pls ud soon ..regards uvi thanxs
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: uwith

hi tammanah nice ud..naku is in sherni mode..kala at gun point ..good support by baji ...pls ud soon ..regards uvi thanxs

dutta on gun point😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ROARRR tammy will be back..
Tammy this is nothing SHORT OF brilliance! kya dialogues! kya plot.. and I love your style of writing. The action is so real and well written that the scenes can be visualized clearly..
Its a welcome change to see Naku fight Kala..
plzse continue .. also could you pm me, as I was not aware you had UD.
much love hammie.
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