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jedy25

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

hi sunset thanxs for ud 😊its superb ..dutta had fallen for naku...i wish a FR soon ..pls ud soon

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Nakusha

@Nakusha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

hi shewta

loved the ud,you are excited abt the story & i must say it is visible in the ud...action scene reminded of LTL, good old days ,naku is scared & hope dutta ease are pain , rain drops is there a FA in offering ..enjoyed reading as much as u enjoyed writing 😊..zaara jaldi ud karna is baar

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

Shewta
thanks for the pm.absolutely a treat to read..all the scenes you covered were very well written . I particularly enjoyed Baji/Damodar and Kala /kishore section.. please continue. much love hammie.

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Shweta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Hey guys my name is Shweta not Shewta 😳

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FASSBEN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

HI Sunset

Thanks for the PM and the ud was a great read Poor Naku having nightmares about her painful past and run off alone rain drops fall will dutta see her true face. waiting for the next past

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usha

@ushankitvc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

awesum story reminded me of JMM1...beautifully written...loved it in tons...thanx fr the PM...will be waiting eagerly fr the nxt updt...continue sooon...

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mirage123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

hi sunset thanxs for ud😊its fab ..i just hope nakus color is washed off in rain..pls next ud post soon

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dilse14

@dilse14

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

hi sunset awesome ud naku having nightmare of her past

dutta might help her to come out of it

it reminds of JMM 😊

naku FA would be nice pls ud soon

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emilymine32

@emilymine32

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Posted: 12 years ago

#129

hi shweta

love the ud

ganpat good for nothing

hope dutta helps naku

love baji damodar convo

evil kala n her evil plan

waiting for next

thanks for ud n pm

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-bharti-

@-bharti-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#130

Hi sunset

Apologies for the late reply, but must admit you have a unique style, gripping n entertaining... Lucky us you didnt give up on writing.. 😊

The entire jungle scene was penned very well, the fight, the shooting n naku,s shocked reaction. Dutta in the dark of naku,s shock but more importantly he,s in distress, worried for her n his actions aimed only to ensure her safety

Baji n damodar kaka,s chat was noteworthy as me too felt damodar deserved a chance to redeem himself. "A mature version of dutta", brillant line indeed. A very sensible old man better than hus son suggesting to keep track of kala,s phone calls.

Again Kishore,s dialogue, "didnt want to dirty the room with your blood was" fantastic. 👍🏼

Thank you sunset, all the best for your studies. Continue the good work as n when you can.