FF: Ishq Wala Love(LAST PART) 10.10.13 pg-136

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Iridescence

@Iridescence1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

What a interesting story direction Rose. I had a feeling halfway wen I noticed he didn't take hi wife's name even once that its probably not Naku and that was confirmed at the end. LOL her uhmm entry was a bit awkward to picture 😆 but still prettywoman huh 😉...but anyway when I was reading the medical aspect of their problem conceiving...fallopian tubes being blocked...in my mind i was thinking that it opens the window for other options and doesn't necessarily require sleeping with someone else...they could simply implant into a surrogate...and keep it still as both their child...lol...but only you know what you're doing ..anyway interesting story...carry on...looking forward to see how this unravels

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Nakusha

@Nakusha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

hi rose

its great to have u back 😊its very different story never imagined sups as his wife & for a change even if dutta & sups are they are happily married for long time its a shocker😆

,i think like daya even i felt they could go for surrogacy ,its quite accepted even in india & law permits it

description of naku somewhere felt isn't like simple or coy naku

story is different & eager to know how it unfolds ,you must have well thought like in meri adhuri kahani you didn't gave away ur story .looking frwd to ud 😊

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usha

@ushankitvc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

supriya as duttas wife...zor ka jhatka laga...nakku fr the baby...sumthing different i guess...continue sooon...

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aishwish

@aishwish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

RES :))) bas ye assignment ho jaye!!!

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tahera57

@tahera57

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

ROSE! ROSE! ROSE!!!!!!! ye kiya kar diya.he loves his wife woh bhi supria😲 ab kiya hoga😒. uppar se woh line ...duta saying i hope she doesn't regret it later. loved chaper 1 ab bohat besabri se intizaar hai chap2 ka.👏 beautiful story line what i liked about the need for a child hasn't come from any in-laws it's his wife's wish only.usually when the inlaws start pressurising a couple for gc,and put strain on a couple's marriage. but AS is no longer with them.god help supria. is all i can say!

thanku for new FF. TC

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FASSBEN

@FASSBEN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

HI Rose

Loved the first part but I what is this Dutta is married to supria I did not expect that but I must say It's different. Supria are not able to have a child of her own. Nakku comes to his room so I guess she will live with them and ask for a baby from her.

Thank you for a new FF looks like it's going to interesting and different as it goes on can't wait for next ud

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Rosie
many congrats for your new FF. Loved the poetic input on love in the beginning. Had to come to read the first chapter.The unusual story line has hooked me ,and it looks to me that I am looking forward very much to the further unfolding of this rather different tale of Dutta and Naku.
well done for coming up with an innovative plot,one creative lady you are.
So mate , hammie waiting for the next one.
with much love xx hammie

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mirage123

@mirage123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

hi rose thanxs for starting a new ff😊sups is dutta's wifenaku from her look doubtful abt her .ud soon

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sona89

@sona89

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Hi rose

Its a shocker😆never in my wildest dream sups as wife ...naku as other woman ...has to be some twist hidden in your sleeve...plsss ud soon

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Rose

@stranger2rose

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

@ tamanna - yes , sups is dutta's wife ..i know hard to digest but its true ..hope you enjoy the next part

@ emily - mini heart attack ..sorry dear..well i warned you all that this time the story and its language will be disturbing ..so be strong to read the future updates and thanks for your comments

@ dilse - thanks for liking this new concept

@ afzal - thanks so much for having faith in me ..i hope like always will not let you all down this time too

@ daya - must say you are one smart girl👏 since you judged that nakku isnt his wife and then a very very valid point of surrogacy raised 👍🏼..to which i can say that they had 2 options ..one was surrogacy and the other one which i have written ( which is also valid , real and prevalent) .. had i opted for surrogacy then i feel the impact which i wanted in the story would not have come..hope i am able to justify my point in the coming updates 😊

@ nakusha - i know dear its difficult to imagine sups as his wife but thats the case this time and why i didn't opt for surrogacy is because the aspect that i have raised is crucial for the story line and don't worry this ff will not have unexpected twists like meri adhuri kahaani but hopefully you will still enjoy it

@ usha - yes nakku is here only for the baby but lets see what happens next

@ tahera - TAHERA TAHERA TAHERA ..relax dear ..agreed this is a shocker but then don't lose faith in me ..i will do something about it in the coming updates ..thanks so much for appreciating the story line and its a pleasure writing for u all

@ fassben - thanks a lot for liking this new concept where sups is his wife and yes nakku is here to give them a baby ..hope the ff manages to hold on to your interest till the end

@ hammie - oh wow its a pleasant surprise to see you here ..yes the story is different and it will be great to know your views on it ..thanks for liking the introduction and the update ..me creative ? no no ..not as much as you are

@ mirage - yup nakku is not like her usual stuff ..hope you like this different nakku ..thanks for your comments

@ sona - no twists and turns this time ..lol..its a simple story with deep emotions