Painful Rapture thread3 last part/ p.133~ 28.12.12 - Page 43

Originally posted by: afzal7861

oyeee kaka balli! kehaal hai...beta ji..bahut mazza shazza on ccc too..😉
hi hammie great to see you and your ud on time 😊 great to see you as well,dost

naku and dutta ready fot their journey ..yeah in dono ke zindagi ek safar hai..

uff yeh baji juma juma chaar din nahi hoay shadi ko yeh already planning for munno aur munni..oyeee use ka bhi tu chachoo/mamoo bune ka haq hai..

hehe 😉😆

dutta give naku muhdikhai his own gold ganpati pendant wow nice its special for naku😛

ilked dutta naku romantic part 😳 haan me noted thuje romantic parts,kuch zayeeda he pasand hai... 😉 kya pyar ho gaye hai? haaa haa..ummh dutta/naku se

hammie thanks for the amazing ud tere liye..kaka balli.. bs you stay happy and keep reading..

loved your writing ..thanks buddy...means a lot to me

waiting for next ...yaar, still working on it.. busy hoon zarra..

much love from afzal😊

much love to you as well kaka balli... yours xx hammie

Originally posted by: Warda.

ROARRR..you jumped the queue ...teri tu main..wardini.. kam karte hoi bhi mera kamre mein ah ja te hai tu ,woh bhi zor zaberdasti se ... uni bunker ...
ummhh me here😳...sorry every week i used to wait for server to work and delay feedback to last day so that i can do it more easily insetead of phone ...tu aur tera server! bas! purne line hai.. koi neya dialogue bol.. for ideas.. go to bart ke dialogue wala thread bahut lines hain wahan..😆

so well penned update...was so glad to read about the whole army session...it was throughtout giving the feel of the first chapter of the ff...and wish we get more and more bits like that for you describe each detail so well :)haan mujhe bhi pasand ayea for one UD kerna..

cant believe the chunni is still there more close than naku...tauba ...had to blame naku for this ...chunnike saath tu dutta ka phela phela milan hai so it will occupy a special place in his heart..always..

lovely journy throughout...dutta naku and baaji together what can be better than this:) ...baaji too eager for tashas baby ...abhi se asking names ...lolyes here it's typical to start talking about baby names as soon as couple expecting baaby, but yes.D/N tu ek haat age nikale gaye hain.. thanks to Baji and useless chatter.

good to see naku a part of team too and here too she started her rasooe skills...lol ..chalo they will enjoy ghar ka khna courtesy chef naku ...the whole bit is so beautifully penned ...loved it so much each detaile is so well described... yess with Naku, somethings don't change

and tasha heaven in that tent ...ummhh border par honeymoon ...bless them..ummh..he has to do everything huth ke 😆

looking forward to the next part...like dutta said .."so where did we stop in the tent baaaby?...😉 ummh tu mujhe forum se out karie ge warrie.. bas kar ankhien marna.. aise kuch nehi hoga..apni imagintion use kar .. iam positive you can manage that quite easily...

hain..itne tazzi mein koi bye bhi nehi bola ediut !!.. chaal ja hawa kha!...ummh thanks wardini... abhi aye abhi gaye... much love x hammie

Originally posted by: dilse14

hi hamlet awesome UD😊
hi dilse, great to see you...
thanks for liking the UD and commenting on it.. much love xx yours hammie

Originally posted by: Nakusha

hi naku... me happy tu jab bhi meti life mein ati hai..naku..part of me life you are..

hi hamlet

mein phir aa gai😊my com had a problem run to get it upgrade not to miss ur UD .i ts a fact 😊the ud is refeashing & loved it..yaar don't take to me about computers.. ghulam bana diye hai humiem apna unhoo ne.. but still looks to me you made it.. good good..

dutta & naku ready for their journey after bading good bye to ram & rani , baji & his funny conversation already planning for munno aur munni ya both .hammie kya irada hai abhi toh dutta khud munno hai😆 haaa true say.. overgrown beastly baby that's what he is ,needs to have his bottom smacked by Naku... weeell the idea of twins is ruled out..in PR..

like baji i too want naku to utter dutta instead of saab for a change .😊

tera damak theek hai? he be looking around kisi ne bulya use

the flight naku had her major & she overcame her fright .naku gets the taste of army life

yes she sure did.. extraordinary.. in the life of fiction any thing can happen.. if she can drive a jeep in LTL1,tu why not on the border...?

dutta gave her muhdikhai & it was very romantic only our major can think it in all the chaos .as a major its normal for him ,lets see how naku cope with it .

yess ,hd to incorporated that pendant scene.. so thought of this idea...

hammiee ur amazinggg as always .😊

baat sun naku.. tu bhi bhaut rapchak hai.. saach mein re.😉

much love ,as ever yours xx hammie...

Originally posted by: emilymine32

hi hammie...hi emily..love your dp.. tu hai kiya?😉
dutta n chunni ki amar prem kahani dutta ka phela phela pyarr hai
shaadi ke baad bhi chalu hai . bechara dutta tell u tasha ko permanently jungle me shift kar do the trouble is baji will never be to far from dutta.. ummh and I guess naku to
baji cant even sleep peacefully love batasha convo yes decided to include it ,it was lacking ..
shaadi ko one week bhi pura nahi hua munno n munni ki planning abhi se shuru . Twins not a bad idea but i want them to have tripplets..HAIN marwai ge tu naku ko band kar apne khwaishien

just once naku should call dutta by his name dream on.. how can she..? next to impossible

dutta gifted naku the ganpati pendant chain reminded of ltl1

last part was so romantic yess me too was thinking of LTL1..so decided trench mein de ga use..

waiting for next..ummh still working on it .. will post if finished

thanks for pm n ud was super thanks emily.. for your loving comment.. baat sun sorry about goldfish.. great to see you on ccc.. as ever yours hammie xx with much love..

Originally posted by: uwith

hi hamlet

ud was action packed & thrilling 😊waiting for the next ud .you too have a great weekend regards uvi

hi uvi.. thanks ever so much for loving the UD.. carry on reading and commenting , much encouraged I am .. so. with much love yours.xx hammie

Originally posted by: mirage123

Hi hamlet

fab UD😊

hi mirage, thanks for reading and commenting. with much love yours xx hammie

Originally posted by: sona89

Hi hamlet

hi sonaaa... great to see you..so you liked the UD..me chaffed..yes needed to add a duji scene,in fact batasha scene..naku..ummh. thura nakhra ,thure sharam😉... shalwar kameez .ummh nehi..sari zayeeda .. feasible.. ummh😉 yesss we are all praying for your good results.. sona your hard work will be blessed.. much love ,as ever yours xx hammie..

thanks for wonderful UD...dutta & baji were at their element 😊...naku whts wrong with her wedding had changed her ...hubby already confused is she happy😆...naku can wear shalwar kameez if not uniform...loved the pendent part ...plsss pray for my good results 😊

Originally posted by: Hamlet53