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yeh dabba mera hai Ohh god one more time the same feeling when PR ended...now the thread to closure too...ummmhh...the good thing is you've given us a new place with your new ff...many congrats for that...will remember this whole journey forever ...specially ive always followed army based show and this was my first experience in a ff ...im so thankful to you for giving us an insight into life of a soldier...the highs and lows of their lives...thank you for paying a tribute to those brave soldiers who keep their lives at stake so that we are free to move in our country. .
Oh maa , I wish you were here...
I sat alone preparing for the battle ahead,
But my mind took me to the memories instead .
And then sinking in the deep seas of past
I realized sadly , I'd moved on so fast.
Those good old days , how well I remember,
That scorching sun of June, that freezing December .
Those moments which brought me laughter and tears ,
Seems like a few hours , but it's actually in years .
Those roadside games I used to play,
Those exciting and dull school day
Those pranks with neighbours with friends of mine ,
They were all my partners in the crime .
That joy ride on back , my Pa would give ,
With me all around his dreams would live
And that food , my mother would make,
Her care so pressing , my pains she would take.
That girl in the 'PINK' , who commanded my heart ,
The kiss she gave ,when our ways did part.
Now the memories pain ,they hurt like scar ,
But , I can't return , I have come too far.
I became a soldier , a warrior for my land,
Left all , picked up the gun in my hand.
Pledged to sacrifice my life and my death ,
To guard the frontiers , till the last breath .
I realize now I'd moved on so fast,
All the best for next ff im sure it will be as brilliant as 'Painful Rapture" ...and im looking forward to see all my old PR friends their too and ofcourse new ones too :)...Stay Blessed always...may we always enjoy the gems from your pen...May Allah keeps you in the best of your health and happiness always Ameen..
really glad to see suhana back on thread...welcome suhana im looking forward to see you on hammies new ff and laagi forum too ...your vms have always been a delight to watch ...hammie thanks for mentioning about ltl vm contest winner ...i remember i voted for the vm suhana made and was so delighted when i saw the one ive voted for has declared winner :) ...emily all the best for exams dear and jaldi jaldi new ff thread par milo :)
Good Bye" Painful Rapture" you've been a great friend ..now i found a new friend named "Fettered Affection" but i will always keep you in my best friends list :)
coming back soon 😳
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Lots of love hammie 🤗
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