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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
lovely ff dear
so you finally end it
love the end and the pics are fab

hope to see another ff of your's in future
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Epilogue

a little baby aarav running here and there and nakkusha is running behind him for milk but he is not listening and her foot stuck at table and she is going to fall but dutta caught her on time and after straightning her dutta is glaring her and shouting on her for not taking care of her in this condition aarav started his cry hearing his baba shouting on aayi dutta stooped his shouting hearing his cry and nakku took aarav in her lap and try to console him but he is not listening dutta cursing himself seeing his baby cry because of his anger and took aarav in his arms and ask forgivness and finally after sometimes he stopped after that day dutta decide to work from home till nakku delivery and help with aarav matter as nakku not in condition to run around and after 5 month nakku delivered a baby girl they named her as tasha there little cute doll after someday dutta decide to expand his businesss and kishor also wanted to start a new business so they decided to start it together and now it is expending but in his hectic schedule he never forget to give his time to family dutta aarav so possessive toward little tasha and pamper her lot and kishor kala also have 2 kids anay pari and they live happily ever after






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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
hi tamanna
thanks for the epilogue
i love that they named their daughter tasha
no bye plz start ur own ff or continue wid an unfinished ff ur choice but continue writing
love ur writing . tc
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: emilymine32

hi tamanna

thanks for the epilogue
i love that they named their daughter tasha
no bye plz start ur own ff or continue wid an unfinished ff ur choice but continue writing
love ur writing . tc


you can suggest dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hv to go through other pages will let u know soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
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ok since u asked me to suggest i thought the sooner the better
i hv gone through previous pages hv names of three unfinished ff u choose whichever u like will give u the name including the page no
TERI KASAM BY KRISHA PG 58
THAM LE MERA HAATH BY PYARI ZAHRA PAGE 68
A SECOND CHANCE AT HAPPINESS BY MPLEO PG 73
SORRY NOW U HAVE TO GO THROUGH THE PAGES COULD NOT GIVE THE LINKS REALLY AM SORRY


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: emilymine32

ok since u asked me to suggest i thought the sooner the better

i hv gone through previous pages hv names of three unfinished ff u choose whichever u like will give u the name including the page no
TERI KASAM BY KRISHA PG 58
THAM LE MERA HAATH BY PYARI ZAHRA PAGE 68
A SECOND CHANCE AT HAPPINESS BY MPLEO PG 73
SORRY NOW U HAVE TO GO THROUGH THE PAGES COULD NOT GIVE THE LINKS REALLY AM SORRY



i have already read all of them and will send writer pms if they want to continue or not will continue 2nd soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
hi tammana
awesome epilogue .i just love happily ever after & 2 cute kids😆 .naam bhi junke rakha hai😆
keep on writing u r quite good .hoping to read something new from u soon .😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
hi tamanna
cute epilogue ..pls a new ff soon .regards uvi😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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tamanna, i was following prncz,s Dutta,s Love, it was good, dunno why she discontinued...see if u could manage the continuation or also as emily suggested u could choose frm some of her choices..😊

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