first love small epilogue on page 5

Originally posted by: Nakusha

hi tammana

neke aur pooch pooch 😆would luv to read it & its a brilliant idea .its sad some writers just left the ff incomplete .they started of well .pls if u can complete it & it 'll be a great favour from u r end 😊

i 'm great fan of ur comments & i 'm sure ur writing will be as good .plz ud soon can't wait & there are ff which i would be glad if u complete it 😊

u deserve a applause for brilliant idea👏

Originally posted by: tamanna1391

friends as you know me am your tamanna and reader of many ffs i read many ffs on this forum some compleated discontinued and some writers gone invisible so i decided to compleate a ff i read months before and wanted to compleate so please tell me should i continue or not and don't worry i will compleate it in 2 to 3 parts and please answer honestly and if this try will be successfull i will try those ffs that you want me to continue

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/laagi-tujhse-lagan/1401537/ff-first-love-updt-pg18-21st-june
THIS IS THE LINK WHO DIDN'T READ THIS FF

friends i am not a writer and not planning to be a writer but yes when i read some unfinished ffs i pmed those writers for update but some never respond and some resonded but they said they will not continue so decided to do something about unfinished ffs you can say why don't you start something new if you want to write but again i will say when our ltl forum already have many unfinished ffs so why should i open new ff and about this ff i send pm to its writer but she didn't respond and she didn't come on forum from 30 may 2010 so i decided to ask your opinion as you want me to continue here i am and as i am new in writers line if you find any mistake please forgive me and am a very emotioal person so am going to take this ff in a simple route and will finish this in 2 updates and epilogue

and dutta's dialogues will be in blue color and nakku's dialogues will be in red color

Chapter 14

You are not taking a lover, not while I am alive..he warned her in the kind of deadly voice that put Goosebumps on her flesh..he continued moving forward and imprisoned her between him and the wall and said..you were and will be 'always mine and I will never allow anyone to come between us

Nakku shouted why you can go to anyone why not me dutta tried to explain but nakku in no mood to listen anything and finally dutta shuted her mouth by his palm forcefully to make her listen to him and said now listen to me very carefully nakku I and mallika had nothing like that she was my girlfriend but I never felt anything like that for her and we broke up today she came for kala's marriage and to say me goodbye because she is going to us to settle there with her would be husband nakku shoked and dutta understand her confusion and confirmed yes she is engaged nakku felt sorry to doubt his words when he himself said that there relationship started and tried to say sorry but dutta turned his back to her

Nakku hugged him from behind and started crying dutta couldn't able to bear her tears and hugged her and told her to take rest as she is tired and left for home after making her sleep

Next day as asked dutta to go nakku house for pagphere rasm dutta reached there and kishore greeted him and called kala who is in kitchen with nakku and kala asked nakku to come along with her to come out with her but nakku is so shy after yesterday incidents that she denied kala noticed her changed behaviour from morning whenever she took mentioned dutta name nakku became totally red and decided to ask her after coming back from pn and left to meet dutta here dutta is talking to kishor but trying to locate nakku but disappointed not to see her