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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: aishwish

Oye hoye baljit, an OS.* whistles*

Now I loved the central idea tasha having their baby. Something craved by most of the audience, loved the fact that you chose to keep the "curse factor" in the picture, it was like tying a loose end of the story!
What I loved the most was the mention that dutta could sense the unusualness floating in the surrounding, being a mother if naku senses it's kind of expected, but even dutta did, it showed how much connected these two are, and OMG 7 years, in dono ne sirf shaadi hi jaldi ki baaki sab in ultra slow pace..lol! loved to witness a fiercely protective and loving and caring dutta, loved the end.."finally", it was touching.
Another remarkable aspect, patils were sensible enough to leave the room, I bet had it been in the show, they would have spent the whole night in the couples bedroom..lol
Great job, do keep writing and you wrote a duji os😲 mujhe toh koi kuch batata hi nahin! šŸ˜”

P.S. Puhleez it was not at all "aaltoo faltoo" so stop trying to be modestšŸ˜›



Hugs Madhubala...
Thanks for your wonderful words re...
You don't know my DuJi OS... 😲 Oye I sent PMs to everyone in my list...
At that time you were bizi with your studies... It might be hovering somewhere in forum... hope that it is not closed by DT... šŸ˜†
Wait I will fetch the link...

EDIT: Well its here...
|| OS: Tera Mera Pyarr Amarr || My 1st attempt :)




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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
Very nyc os... I loved it, the way u portrayed their feelings of not able to conceive for 7 yrs n th excitement of being father n mother was fantastic... Plzz update more os's if u can thnxxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi baljit 😊
amazing OS writing baljit thanks for writing i loved your OS
plz UPDT more OS soon
and keep up great writing
wal done baljitšŸ‘

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Posted: 13 years ago
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A very heart touching and beautiful story ...7yrs is a pretty long time but finally tasha got rid of that curse ...a very imp aspect covered by u ..well done baljit
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Posted: 13 years ago
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HI AMAZING OS DEAR

LOVED IT N KEEP WRITING MORE
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks Priraghav, Tamanna, afzal7861, Rose and emilymine for giving your precious time to read it and liking it... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
Awesome os regards uvi😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi baljit
amazing os itna talent ko kaha chupa kar rakha tha 😊loved all ur post earlier one too ,but do write a ff .i 'm sure it will be a hit 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
Baljit Its a brilliantly written OS šŸ‘
Loved the title unusual day... and that too it was sensed by them that something was diffrent than their usual days for seven good long years...
ohh it must be a great feeling by both dutta and naku to have thier own child after waiting for seven years ...and even more when they could not get over that curse...that an optimist like naku too discussed it with her mother and the way she consoled...loved that section...
Its a long wait by tasha and the way he said those words 'finally' after hearing that news showed that how much he was waiting to hear that news...
Thank you for this beautiful piece of writing and waiting for more from your side
and haainn you called it altoo faltuu...its awesome yaar 😊...loved it a lot
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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautiful OS...never knw u wrote OSs...pls write mre...
aww u knw i guessed it wud b tht she's preggy wen u wrote she gt up and suddenly felt dizzy... it was kinda obv tht it wud happen considering its not unusual 4 them 2 b u knw ahem ahem...LOL
wow 7 yrs later...gosh mus hav been dif 4 them waiting 4 their first child...with the curse continously being on their minds...
pls write mre

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