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Posted: 13 years ago
#61


Originally posted by: afzal7861

HEY DAYA 😛

awesome OS i loved i love dutta and naku romance plz add more romance dutta naku
plzzz updt OS soon thanks for great OS
love from afzal🤗




Hi Rani and Afzal.
Thanks for reading and commenting..
glad you liked it...

@Afzal...if i think of something then surely i will write an OS
but i think i might be focusing on finishing my FF for now
before thinking about anything else...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: stranger2rose

Hey daya ..this os reminded me of ltl a lot ..dutta dialogue lagaoon ulte haath ka ..then his black pants white vest and red towel ..lol..some things I really miss now ..if tasha have awesome chemistry then duji are no less ..very sweet n cute write up ..it was nice seeing dutta getting scared of nakku,s anger ..do write more


Hi rose...lol glad it did...kinda did it in memory of their great bond...all of them...shared good chemistry and relationships...do miss them also...thank you for reading and commenting...good to hear you liked it :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: Warda.

Fantastic OS daya👍🏼
enjoyed reading it so much...dutta naku and baaji together ...what else could one want...
Hi warda 🤗 i am loving the attendance I've been getting from you lately 😆 here and in FF wow...😛 yes our lovely threesome
Loved the whole situation...aww dutta losing engagement ring ...for a change its good to see a bit scared dutta from naku 😆
haha yeah Dutta scared of Naku ...that just sounds too funny to read...
but more so he was feeling that she will feel bad...
yeah he was worried more so than scared of how would she take it
baaji as usual finding solutions for the trouble...
haan haan ..that's his job ...being KMH and solution finder
but ohhh here ring was actually found by naku first...trouble for dutta...
YEAH...and how dare he lie to her so boldly 😆
loved the making up scene...the whole decoration for dinner it looked so romantic ... but hainn yahan bhi KMH and that too none other than the biggest kabab main haadi baaji rao 😆
now warda although i had the idea i did not write it initially...but who did ask me to humm? you know exactly where he was about to come in on but i changed it to the end 😆 i should've made him interrupt the kiss ..it would've been a so close but no cigar situation
but the ending awww both feeding morsel to baaji that was so cute...perfect ending...
Thankyou for giving us such an entertaining OS...waiting for more😊
Thanks for the pm dear😊
thank you for reading and commenting...
already know why I wrote this so thank you :)

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Posted: 13 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: emilymine32

HI DAYA

LOVED THE OS
D SCARED OF N
BOTH ROMANCING BUT AS ALWAYS THE MOMENT IS INTERRUPTED BY BAJI
THANKS FOR THE OS



Hi emily...thanks for reading and commenting...glad you liked it


Originally posted by: FASSBEN


HI daya

Loved your os sweet and romantic, I I knew naku would find the ring and he by lying to her was more upsetting to her then him losing the ring but he made her come around with whole decoration and a romantic dinner.

Thanks again I you come up with more OS I love read all your writing Just like your FF. Take care


Hi Fassben. Thanks for reading and commenting...glad you like my writing...thank you ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: meriyaar

OMG I was the first to comment and didn't even know!!😲
And almost 4 months later I see this 😡 damn...
now I'm no near to be the first to comment 😭
Lol this was so long ago even I forgot...koi baat nehi ..i read them all 😆
well this OS was amazing!! The best thing was that it fit really well with NTL 😊
and OMG i did not even realize that it does go with NTL until reading this comment 😆 you are so right if i wanted can totally make this a scene there...
but its ok i will have more romance in NTL 😛😳

Really really loved this OS, it was just so simple and great!
thank you ! yes it was meant to be simple...nothing fancy ..no deep thoughts...just for fun...
glad you all liked it..thanks! see ya around buddy ! 🤗
thanks Daya!
tc
xoxo




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Posted: 13 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: sona89

Hi daya

really sweet OS pls continue writing 😊



Originally posted by: uwith

loved the os regards uvi😊



Originally posted by: Nakusha

hi daya

make it right ,has everything right😊loved every bit .as u already know u write great & dil mange more .blame it on ur good writing 😊 tc




Sona, Uvi, and Nakusha...
Thank you for reading and commenting...glad you liked the OS...
i will defo write if something comes to mind..but for the time being..would like to work on finishing up with NTL...wrap it up...soon...which is what am working out a plot for 😆 its such an exhaustin process to be honest ..but anyway ..thanks again..shall catch ya all laterzz

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Posted: 13 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: ivy_11

Great job, Daya 👏

Enjoyed reading the lovely OS with Naku giving Dutta attitude for once. BATASHA is fun and showed perfect understanding between the trio and with D-N stuffing Baji's mouth with food in the last scene 😆


Hi Ivy...thanks for reading and commenting...lol Naku's attitude seems to be the highlight ..and me a fan of batasha so just had to 😆 glad u liked thanks!

Originally posted by: alex1

@Daya - I hv nv bn a reader of FF, OS, SS or any others but I read this OS and since TaSha never really had much romance in their love story, yours was engaging to read, captivating and worth reading any future updates. Alex


Hi alex...am glad u gave my os a read despite the fact ur not one who reads this stuff lol...
glad to hear u've liked it ...thanks a bunch

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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
love it daya

awesome

amazing

beautiful

romantic

and so on

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Posted: 13 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: eternity_of_luv

love it daya

awesome

amazing

beautiful

romantic

and so on



Thanks Ranju !
Glad you liked it 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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daya nice OS i liked dutta being afraid of nakku being upset he lost the ring dutta always looked scared of upsetting nakku even when they were just friends hefr being pleased with him mattererd a lot to him. in this he does what anyone in love would do to make the person they love happy . i like how u included baji in this os always there to get bhau out of trouble. please write some more os they always make an interesting read . and add romance to tasha story.

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