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anirka

@anirka

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Lovely OS... Really short n sweet... Loved reading it... 😛

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Yuvika

@Yuvika_15

Moderator

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: chithoo
yuvika😃 thanks for the link u pmed for "left alone"...bushy😡 learn to send links from yuvi before u write again😆😆😆 and bhat is this😲 u two girls are all over shyam babu🤢 hello hi bye bye u both are out of the minds😕😕😲😆😆😆

no worries

and nahi yaar ewww i h8 shyam...bushy is jus jealous of me cos i gt 5 hottie hunks as my hubbys n she's always after thm...bt obv they r mine so she is now tryin 2 pair me with sum evil man 2 gt bk at me...bt she knws deep down tht Yuvika onli belong to them 5 hubbys...haha nw u wil wanna knw hu dey r...haha...mishal raheja, salman khan, eijaz khan, iqbal khan and imran khan😳

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

beautiful dear

they hate each other then marry lovely

ah he died but she still love him and live with his memories

thanks dear for pm

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priya

@priyaraghav

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

plzzz yaar dutta ko matmaaro!!!!
By the way os ws very sweetn emotional...

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Nakusha

@Nakusha

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

aree where were u bushy missed u so much .ek dum gayaab from forum .forum is still active coz of creative ppl like .i mentioned ur name on a thread thanking all the creatives .u just disappeared .punishment de ne dil ho raha hai .write a new ff soon .😊

short & emotional writers block its a joke short time u can write such a brilliant piece .plz come up with something new .jagruti ,hamlet .daya ,raj ,vs shilpita & tink is back too .they are doing wondrful job just missing u

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tahera57

@tahera57

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

bushy, very nice os . dutta ko bhulana mushkil hi nahin na mumkin hai mere dost. pyar ho toh aisa. woh mohabbatein jaisa. jo kabhi khatam na ho.uski kami mehsos bhi ho lekin doori bhi na ho.

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Khushi

@--khushi--

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

chal 2 minute hai comment bhi abhi hi kar deti hoon...

asusual gud one from u...

maar dala tune Dutta ko...zalim ladki 😭 ...

how can u call her sane, when she keep talking to her imagination for hours 😲

Edited by --khushi-- - 13 years ago

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

First and foremost...Bushraaa...welcome back...do you know what! recently in my pms list a name appeared Insanely Sane...My first reaction was who the hell is this joker! ,I don't know any such git on the Laagi forum..almost was going to PM the Dev.team koi maasti ke mood mein hai aur woh bhi mera saath! use ke tu!
But hey viola tu nikle ... asa kyon? kaun hai re tu asil mein?..me in no mood for games!
However ,I decided to brush the identity issue under the carpet for the moment,and just smiled for it seems you are back... good to have you back,missed you ,tera FF mujhe yaad hai jis mein Naku ends up having the big C ,and I was devasted...and mera lakh positive rehne se bhi, she lost her battle against Cancer...aur Dutta was left alone, but I remember that the story ended on a happy note, despite what I saw as a tragedy!
I wish~ is short ,sweet and realistic story.. alas! all life is transient. As humans we never associate death with people we love ,that which we call immediate family; our parents ;our siblings ;our husband/wife ;and our children..their death is a challenge to deal with! it tends to linger, never goes away! but we get better dealing with it by the passage of time..
Naku's story is tragic especially in the short time they had together,and then Dutta's untimelydeath itself, young,I suspect healthy,so the factor that he lived to a ripe old age,and died of old age related illness does not come in the picture.The other factor that he couldn't give her children through whom he could live, is another reason for saddness. But Bushra the story still ends on a postive note,they are one! even though he is not there in person before her,however he still remains in her and with her,which is suffcient for her to fullfil the promise to love one another eternally. Dutta's presence continues in her writing...thanks Bushra..hammie warmed to the story,true to life! with much love xx oye ab phir se ghayab maat ho jana! waiting for some more about our Dutta and Naku!

Edited by Hamlet53 - 13 years ago

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Bushra Iqbal

@Sanely_Insane

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: daya0628
Bushy!!!! great OS...their little meeting and falling in love story was funny...they hated each other and thats what they loved & missed ...hating? haa ...but it was cute ...indeed filmy and then came the emotional ending ..oww he died...and she is living in memories of him...loved it...and nice to see you back here after ages...lots of love..take care...see you!

Da...🤗 Thanks...😃 Well, these two are out of this world so obviously they are bound to do silly things like missing their hatred for each other...😆 Aww...thank you Da...missed u and all my IF mates yaar...Love ya...😳

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Bushra Iqbal

@Sanely_Insane

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: anirka
Lovely OS... Really short n sweet... Loved reading it... 😛

Aww, thank you...😳

Originally posted by: eternity_of_luv
beautiful dear

they hate each other then marry lovely

ah he died but she still love him and live with his memories

thanks dear for pm