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-Carrie-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

😆😆😆😆 Congrats!Who says this is your first attempt? Super dooper!👍🏼

For me the "Mango" dress gave it away.😆 That's when I started laughing & couldn't stop for a long time.Waiting for more!😳

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anirka

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: scorpio10

Baljit ... Oh ! Baljit ...this is too good ... first it was only spoken in whispers , now it is written down and stamped ...Dutta and Baji LS .

Truly made for each other ...A match made in LTL

Oh! Here I go again

Haila... its me who only... who debuted with DuJi... None other wrote on it... 😲

And Priya thanks for the inspiration... 🤣

Chal dono saath milke ROFL karte hain... 🤣 🤣

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anirka

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: stranger2rose
omg baljit all along i was finding this os so intense n serious , but to tell u honestly in the beginning the thought baaji being his love did cross my mind ..lol..then i was like no rose get serious it must be sups but when i read that actually it was baaji i had a broad grin on my face ...lovely dear ..

Hey Rose... Whats need to get serious... Thanks dear... 😳

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anirka

@anirka

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: kshreya2002
🤣Duji and their dostana rule!

Yes Kshreya... DuJi rock and rule... 😆
And Thanks for your debut at any OS/FF/SS... as per Yuvi's comment... 😳

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anirka

@anirka

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: ZubyDutta
😆 Congrats!Who says this is your first attempt? Super dooper!👍🏼

For me the "Mango" dress gave it away.😆 That's when I started laughing & couldn't stop for a long time.Waiting for more!😳

Thanks Zuby... I say its ma first... 😆

Mango yellow came to mind from your Vintage Update... 😉

EDIT: So you have too joined the Teal club... Congrats on being Dazzler... As I say... keep dazzling... 😳

Edited by anirka - 13 years ago

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anirka

@anirka

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: .nimmi.
🤣
too good baljit.
👏..

first i was reading with full concentration thinking awww my poor dutta is in pain.

then i read she saved his life and i was like "hain!" what is happening..

and then came the ending and i went 🤣

and i am still..

🤣...

please do update soon pal. if there is one jodi that could give takkar to tasha that was duji😳😆!

⭐️loved it buddy!

Thanks for liking it Nimmi...
I read your Day n Night wala FF too...
You are superb dear... 😃

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

hi anirka many congrats on your first ever ,as you say FF "Tera Mera Pyar Amarr",a very postitive title indeed...fantastic vibes , postivity ..we will see lots of love that does not die but is eternal! the plot seems very interesting from the word go , you have witheld vital bits of information..great ploy to egg on readers.. Dutta apart from his residence PN appears not fully exposed character wise, one sentiment is exposed though, his love , grounded from a young age ,for a person ..I assumed was Naku but was taken back as it turned out to be the well... erhh the next best thing for Dutta..Baji hain! ok anirka ..some great piecies of imagery , in the mango garden, my mouth was dripping! absolutely loved the playing in the rain .was very vivid...pity where I live people tend to screw their noses at the rain ..but apne watan ke barissh .aur woh bhi garme mein ...was pure joy to read..love your style ,to the point, sincere with plenty to engage the reader, and the promise of more good things to follow !

so lady ..please carry on ..looking forward to sharing joy with you ..with much love xxhammie.

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.scorpio10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: anirka

Haila... its me who only... who debuted with DuJi... None other wrote on it... 😲

And Priya thanks for the inspiration... 🤣

Chal dono saath milke ROFL karte hain... 🤣 🤣

Chalo ...

But wear an amour ,,, As we will have slippers come ur way ..

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-Carrie-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: anirka

Thanks Zuby... I say its ma first... 😆

Mango yellow came to mind from your Vintage Update... 😉
And I remembered it from our original updater😆

EDIT: So you have too joined the Teal club... Congrats on being Dazzler... As I say... keep dazzling... 😳

Oye thanks yaara!😃😃😃