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Iridescence

@Iridescence1

Alumni

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Baljit! vahhh vahhh kya prem kahani hai! bless them ! haaa sounds good hun...when he was having flashbacks of his love I was like hmmm how cute...wonder who it is and oh my god to my surprise Baaji! haaa well long live Duji!! do continue soon...

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anirka

@anirka

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Ani_98
Congratulation Baljeet and well done'👏...you catch my intention from the beginning and I was reading the story very seriously...till we found out that the childhood's lover was Baji'🤣very funny'😆

I just have to read where you are going with the story...😃

Thanks Ani... The idea came to my mind last night when I read Priya and Ivy's comments for DuJi at Gangster of the Week... So thought to pen it down... 😆

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anirka

@anirka

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: daya0628
Baljit! vahhh vahhh kya prem kahani hai! bless them ! haaa sounds good hun...when he was having flashbacks of his love I was like hmmm how cute...wonder who it is and oh my god to my surprise Baaji! haaa well long live Duji!! do continue soon...

Haan the cute DuJi moments... 😉
Will continue it soon... Apna wala... 😆

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sona89

@sona89

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Hi anirka

you write well ...plz give it a serious thought ...start a ff ...😊waiting for positive response

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anirka

@anirka

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: sona89
Hi anirka

you write well ...plz give it a serious thought ...start a ff ...😊waiting for positive response

Thanks dear for appreciating... 😊
Do you want me to start ff on DuJi???
I have tried it with OS... Lets see how far can I stretch it... 😆

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.scorpio10

@.scorpio10

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Baljit ... Oh ! Baljit ...this is too good ... first it was only spoken in whispers , now it is written down and stamped ...Dutta and Baji LS .

Truly made for each other ...A match made in LTL

Oh! Here I go again

Edited by scorpio10 - 13 years ago

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Rose

@stranger2rose

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

omg baljit all along i was finding this os so intense n serious , but to tell u honestly in the beginning the thought baaji being his love did cross my mind ..lol..then i was like no rose get serious it must be sups but when i read that actually it was baaji i had a broad grin on my face ...lovely dear ..