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@ivy_11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: scorpio10
Hello Indu

Nice update ... crisp and sweet

Btw for some odd reason ..when I read
"The episode starts with Naku entering the lion's den with her green trunk"

I read the green Trunk as TREE TRUNK ...making me wonder what she doing with tree trunk in D's room

Abt Kisser and Kala's marriage is a disaster ...what is a bigger than their marriage , how the well was Anay conceived...

What's with D and SR ...Let it be , poor guy twice he tried to take plunge and failed ...when he finally did , it was a disaster and no reward too ( SR , I mean )

I agree MR and MV ...were really good out . MV was too good as Koel .

"Zinda Laash"! .. I read 17th century Vampire 😆

I am not gonna talk abt the rest of PN ...too much Rohna dhona

🤣🤣🤣🤣 I had to reply to your comment, Priya.

Now that I am reading the lion's den and the trunk again...LOL...it reminds me of an elephant's trunk entering the den...OMG what a Faux pas 😳😆

Yes, I was inspired by Ketka and Vampu while writing it 😆

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Nakusha

@Nakusha

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

splendid job loved writing it 😊

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Ani_La_Iam

@Ani_La_Iam

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Love your update Ivy and your input you came with between the scenes.👏😃

A wonderful and detail update said in few lines…love it.😃 After reading your update…you make me miss MR even more and admire his performance even more.

Thanks Ivy.😃

I remember the scene with Dutta on the sofa…I was so afraid for Naku…my mind was saying…No Naku do not touch him...just leave him alone and go.😆

I agree the jump was perfect…and yes perfect timing.😊

I always love Kishoor's dialogs...I really liked his character...me too...do not know how marriage with Kala or Anay happen. 😕

Also...I do not really get Dutta's dialog about the "SR"…the line was a little out of Dutta's character…but MR delivered it very well.👍🏼

The scene with Dutta and the gun on his heart asking…What about me bleeding profusely from inside? The wound inflicted by you will never heal!...was just heart breaking…you could just feel Dutta's pain and MR again delivered the dialog brilliantly.👏

I have seen this scene so many time…love it.😃

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tahera57

@tahera57

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

how sad these episodes were for both of them you wanted her sufferng to be over his pain of betrayal on a massive scale to end but alas there was no respite for either one of them for a long time. heart breaking . a very nicely written ud, one can see you love it as much now as you did then. since restart of vu i have only been reading most of the time. but today , i watched 31st may again 3rd part was't working but got to see rest and it was too good.

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TheRager

@TheRager

Achiever

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: ivy_11

Agree with you Shreya that it is perfectly timed. I watched it more than half a dozen times during the WU. It is sleek, swift and has an animal magnetism in it...makes me wonder too if they had to practice...or one of those perfect first takes.

The bold bit...exactly! That bit is truly riveting. You cant take your eyes off the screen.

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-Carrie-

@-Carrie-

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Thanks for the lovely update,Indu😃 Very well written👏

What a spineless git Kishore is!😡 He chose to remain a mute spectator to the humiliation of someone who feeds him & an innocent girl just to save his son from his wife😕 How can he think kala can hurt Anay once DSP comes to know of his "sister's" true colours?

Agree! DSP was a like a panther today!😍

Edited by ZubyDutta - 13 years ago

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.scorpio10

@.scorpio10

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: ZubyDutta
Thanks for the lovely update,Indu😃 Very well written👏

What a spineless git Kishore is!😡 He chose to remain a mute spectator to the humiliation of someone who feeds him & an innocent girl just to save his son from his wife😕 How can he think kala can hurt Anay once DSP comes to know of his "sister's" true colours?

Agree! DSP was a like a panther today!😍

Kishore was a spineless person in most cases ...But on Anay end , I did spare him .

Becoz when comes ur kid every parent ( except Kala) becomes selfish ...D and Naku are old enough to think and take care of situation .Anay is not .

Also he never thought , he just reacted and Kala used him ...

But yes he had several chances when he could opened his trap and let everyone know ...like when he told D , how rude Kala was to Naku ...I wonder why did not he tell him the rest ...

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-Carrie-

@-Carrie-

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: scorpio10

Kishore was a spineless person in most cases ...But on Anay end , I did spare him .

Becoz when comes ur kid every parent ( except Kala) becomes selfish ...D and Naku are old enough to think and take care of situation .Anay is not .

Also he never thought , he just reacted and Kala used him ...

But yes he had several chances when he could opened his trap and let everyone know ...like when he told D , how rude Kala was to Naku ...I wonder why did not he tell him the rest ...

I understand that parents go to great lengths for the sake of their kid but once the whole plot is revealed to DSP what will Kala gain by hurting Anay?

From what we have seen so far Kishore doesn't cause even a a smallest blip on Kala's radar.He is a nobody & he knew that.How could he not think he being the Gyaani maharaj of the family?

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tahera57

@tahera57

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

even i wondered many times in future why baji didnt say kala threw nakku out and they all kept quiet, it might have enlightened him how his family twisted things inclding AS and baji.

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@ivy_11

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: tamanna1391
episodes were faoulous i just love when he is angry he look so good but my heart broke to see nakku condition and these three witchesbut love the way kishore is making nakku strong he can't tell everyone truth but the way he always make nakku believe that dutta needs her i love it

Thanks for reading and commenting Tamanna. 😃
Lovely emoticons.

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