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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Hammie, kala bandar,
Anniversary update aur thoda masti nahi toh kya baat ? So u takg us into unchartered waters...refreshg change😉
Major, finally announces his trip to AS .. She bein a brave mother used to the uncertain life of an army officer all her life is in tune wit the need of the hour, blesses him,aaww! But she also makes sure that naku too in the loop which major slightly ignores everytime, even though it is a wel known fact that naku is a very supportive partner. major needs to be more sensitive towards her as wel.😛 or is he more uncomfortable in breakg such news to her for the fear of hurtg her...
The visitors get an insight into the family bonding which to this day holds good in majority of the household. But rapid changes in the society has also strained this tradition to great extent. The joint families are breaking giving way to nuclear families.
Wow! Hammie, kishore,s guided tour of the religious sanctum stunned me! Must admit uve almost done a crash course in the subject, take a bow lady, im mighty impressed,👏 But, its mind boggling the number of gods n godesses indians revere.
The guests get a change of clothg for d eveng, typical of the hospitality. we indians tend to invade every aspect af a person,s pvt life n if he is a guest, he wil be bombarded wit constant offers of wants n needs to make him comfortable.,this can be stifling,ironical😃. But the two guests graciously accept the offer n wel piggot even though comfortsble finds his pot belly obvious n kishore,s explanation al the more hilarious😆. Bradley too flaunting his new avatar ready for d eveng..excellent!
Now what follows between naku n major is between mia n honewali biwi n we r not supposed to comment i feel, actually ive no words, mein toh sharam ke maare pani pani hogayi☺️..Major,s Ranbir kapoors saawariya act was d best!🤣 This is d anniversary special which we were lookg for, n then menfolk havg a grt time out n bradley insistg to venture into d local nightlife..? gosh! Baji n suds can hardly keep their irritation under wraps
Its a wonder of wonders that major agreed for a date wit miss rangoli at chandni bar n watched gyrating brother in laws to munni badnam, chikni chameli, sheela ki jawani, jalebi bai, aur bhi ...wah wah!!!!😆 How come piggot missed this adventure? Phew! All return in one piece back home. Now i want some fun for the ladies too..
Hammie, im in a little mood for more fun n for major's towel act i would like to dedicate this one, Wow!! im imagining Mishal here😆
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5MORA7Bq82c[/YOUTUBE]
Hey girl, i know this is quiet a delay, but hope it is worth the wait, so chil! baby !!!
Edited by -bharti- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hammie in 2 days u will have 1st anniversary of posting 1st chapter, as u know i started reading this ff quite late... but that's not only the first mistake i did , another unforgiveable crime was not commenting on the brilliant writing😒 should have done but like a cowered i stayed away from saying anything in case my bak bak was not good enough. then when i did maybe i just said thanks. then nakusha who i never had the pleasure of speaking b4 posted a message saying please comment on all ff's as the writers take so much effort to ud ff's. u might remember the post. so nakku's comment gave me the incentive to start thanking writers sort of properly as i still think i'm lacking in proper taareef. anyway congrats and thanks for giving us such a lovely love story of major and his nakku😊.
and thanks to our nakku on the forum i managed to say all so far... so nakku i confess u made a point which went straight to heart and here i am... i hope ur back soon to add ur words in this thread. hammie ab kal ya parson koi accha sa ud toh banta haina jab bhi hosake...😃
[/QUOTE). Mere khyal mein, galti ke liye sazaa yeh hai ki tu nonstop bak bak karti rahegi iss thread pe, bas! 😆 Waise, since uve started d confessions id also add ki, me also guilty of d same for almost for 8 chapters remained mum n then couldnt stop penng my appreciation for hammie,s writing, eversince til now it is amazing she has continued to maintain d calibre n hold our interest for so long n wit such discipline which is unrivalled, like Major himself dedication to d job is paramount, hats off to you lady! 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi Hammie, first of all my hearty congrats on completing 1 year of running this FF...you have quite brilliantly brought out your love for two people in an amazing story which is why you have reeled me into to your thread from the very first day & first UD for this story...so a happy anniversary !

Now getting straight to the UD with no further bak bak from me...

Chapter 49" be my guest~ still!

Dutta tells everyone his decision of going to UK for work related purposes as it would be a great and beneficial opportunity for not just himself but for others as he would be able to take from and bring back things learned/shared/experienced etc.

Naku's answer to AS's inquiry regarding the matter and Naku's thoughts more specifically was quite to character. Although she would surely miss her action man, she also knows the importance of this for him and is accepting of that fact. Healthy relationship requires patience and the ability to make compromises. Clearly two qualities Naku happens to posses.

Not just the vistors, but me to mighty impress with the way you have delivered the crash course on religious aspects...Gods to be more specific especially the inclusion and connections made with names and what each is known for...of course me am also familiar with them all am actually picturing the visuals from my prayer room...

Well I guess Officer Bradley the charming guest happens to be making waves through the PN family with his looks LOL...and Dutta is clearly discontent with the attention he is getting from his sister esp ...knowing of course that Bradley is quite the flirtatious type...quite an entertaining bit here...liked how Dutta true to his character stuck to least words/compliments for the first class ladies man haha ...

😆😆 Do I have to comment on the Dutta-Naku scene...

🤣mujhe sharam aa rahi hai😳😳 😆😆

I think you have already heard what I had to say about this...

came out exactly as planned 😆😆😛

Uffo ...my tummy hurts from laughing reading this whole thing...oh gosh! ...


Oh la la oh la la ...what filthy, shady, place are they heading too...and me too (like Baaji) wondering ...why does Major Dutta know this place has such a rep...surely not just by word of mouth?...Ohh ho hoo...what number...munni badnam ..chikni chameli ...oh boys will be boys...

OMG 🤣 You put it in oh ho my tummy hammie my poor tummy is hurting from all the laughing...goodness gracious ...even the opening of the restaurant...oh Baaji! And omg even Suds...petrol pumps...my my what a goal he has... And Dutta quite rightly stepped in when needed to assure that the 2 jokers will not be going anywhere...they're place is right where they are...who is this Miss Rangoli haaahaa oh poor Dutta...cringing at the thought of another woman over him...and the three idiots surely going gaga over the lady swaying about...uff...boys will be boys! And glad Major Dutta had some sense to call it a night...

Thanks for the UD hammie...looking forward to reading the next...as usual loved the UD...well written ! Again congrats on reaching the year mark..

So...looks like forum will be closing now...but worry not there is still the Fan Fiction Forum..simply request for it to be moved like I have told you...and all will be well as you can carry on over there...and maybe even get more readers😉

Edited by daya0628 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi, hammie, today should have been your day as whenever i checked your first chapter of this ff' was posted on 13th may 2011. but i know before that could happen we were thrown in such tumoil. now everyone has forgotten all except to save this forum , so we can continue reading beautiful ff's like urs daya's rose's and all others even sana is back with a new and interesting one. well don't know the fate of this forum, but i feel bad for all creative people like ur selves to have all ur good work all the time people have put into research and putting words into sentences than long chapters and chapters to make us readers hooked, and hungry for more. all th same i would like to say i am optimistic DT will see sense and won't deny us this small happiness that we were clinging onto without dailt dose of ltl for such a long time. this week's chapter have not managed to read it even tried 4-5 times but can't read due to being upset over the matter. i shall read soon as my mind gets clear and give my comment. until then take care .hopefully we will be cheering u on next week as normal. please don't be too disheartened, i'm sure things willbe fine soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tahera57

hi, hammie, today should have been your day as whenever i checked your first chapter of this ff' was posted on 13th may 2011. but i know before that could happen we were thrown in such tumoil. now everyone has forgotten all except to save this forum , so we can continue reading beautiful ff's like urs daya's rose's and all others even sana is back with a new and interesting one. well don't know the fate of this forum, but i feel bad for all creative people like ur selves to have all ur good work all the time people have put into research and putting words into sentences than long chapters and chapters to make us readers hooked, and hungry for more. all th same i would like to say i am optimistic DT will see sense and won't deny us this small happiness that we were clinging onto without dailt dose of ltl for such a long time. this week's chapter have not managed to read it even tried 4-5 times but can't read due to being upset over the matter. i shall read soon as my mind gets clear and give my comment. until then take care .hopefully we will be cheering u on next week as normal. please don't be too disheartened, i'm sure things willbe fine soon.


ooohhh tahera...😭😭 my friend! goshhh I needed this message tonite...dil toot gaya hai mera! never in my wildest dreams did I invisaged that WE would ALL be hit by such an emotional tsunami...ooohhh ahhh my heart is bleeding... it's strange how we are all clinging to each other for solace and comfort... still we stand united in our fight .. if only Mishal was with us as also.. thank you for your words of hope dost... we need people like you brvv, and others to maintain the balance and keep spirits high in the camp... next UD ke matalaq i can't even think... but thanks for your loving words .. love you loads... xxx hammie
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi hammie,⭐️
Wishing you on the successful completion of one full year of our favourite fan fiction "Painful Rapture",❤️ Thank You!! 🤗 for giving us this joy and im very proud of you and your achievement, also wishin you to continue to achieve many more milestones not just here but in all that you do
[ps: the present gloom in the forum should not deter you to forge ahead n im positve everythings gonna be fine]
"All The Best!"👍🏼
Edited by -bharti- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi hammie,⭐️
Wishing you on the successful completion of one full year of our favourite fan fiction "Painful Rapture",❤️ Thank You!! 🤗 for giving us this joy and im very proud of you and your achievement, also wishin you to continue to achieve many more milestones not just here but in all that you do
[ps: the present gloom in the forum should not deter you to forge ahead n im positve everythings gonna be fine]
"All The Best!"👍🏼
oyeee brvv.tu edher hai .i was wondering ke pms mein se kadher challi gaye hai tu... ok well ab to will 'ave to continue .. madam jee ka hukaam ju mil gayea hai... waise ma'am you know I don't take take orders from any one... but you guysss .well...you shower me with soo much love... which I will never ever tire of... so carry on loving me and my work and make me blessed forever ... thanks for the postive input.. yaar its like living in fear brvv... of being made homeless... DTs hope you are peeping .. we love the laagi forum... brvv me having sleepless nights baaby... hummmh but grabbing your hand and will attempt to write UD... oye mera pm ka reply de now! love yeah.. xxx hammie.. now this message warm enough for you .yah make you a fresh cuppa tea! nic pic! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tahera57

hi, hammie, today should have been your day as whenever i checked your first chapter of this ff' was posted on 13th may 2011. but i know before that could happen we were thrown in such tumoil. now everyone has forgotten all except to save this forum , so we can continue reading beautiful ff's like urs daya's rose's and all others even sana is back with a new and interesting one. well don't know the fate of this forum, but i feel bad for all creative people like ur selves to have all ur good work all the time people have put into research and putting words into sentences than long chapters and chapters to make us readers hooked, and hungry for more. all th same i would like to say i am optimistic DT will see sense and won't deny us this small happiness that we were clinging onto without dailt dose of ltl for such a long time. this week's chapter have not managed to read it even tried 4-5 times but can't read due to being upset over the matter. i shall read soon as my mind gets clear and give my comment. until then take care .hopefully we will be cheering u on next week as normal. please don't be too disheartened, i'm sure things willbe fine soon.

Hey tahera, itni udhas mat ho aur sun since this is an occasion to rejoice-one year of PR, one whole year of reading n enjoyin the same, along with the masti n fun we had, lets make it worthwhile aur tum meri pm padlena, abhi plzz!. We are hoping that DT wil change their decision n wil have some extended fun time. So cheer up!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
bharti ,i replied sorry me nikhatto. and i'm fine and i do feel for the creative people. altough they do have the option to show their work on IF i just prefer being on forum. meri bak bak ka kiya hoga. and i hate FB.
hammie ki leg pulling nahin ker sakongi na...
sorry waise hope my friend gets her wish granted.
i meant to say on pm maybe daya knows she might be able to help.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tahera57

bharti ,i replied sorry me nikhatto. and i'm fine and i do feel for the creative people. altough they do have the option to show their work on IF i just prefer being on forum. meri bak bak ka kiya hoga. and i hate FB.
hammie ki leg pulling nahin ker sakongi na...
sorry waise hope my friend gets her wish granted.
i meant to say on pm maybe daya knows she might be able to help.

Tahera hoping for a positive response frm DT today n ii dont want to see too far ahead, aur yeh kya bol rahi hai tu? Lets hope for d best, thats it for now!🤔

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