Painful Rapture~thread2~ chp.59 ~ pg 144~3.8.12 - Page 55

Originally posted by: daya0628

Chapter 48" be my guest" --- yes because its always come one come all here ...

oyeee you Pring for my thread! thanks for the effort billy choo!..incidentally I don't know why the hell am I responding to this coined endearment that you have pinned on me .lately..Faltoos! umhhh waise bata kiya hota hai faltoos!? 😆 i can see you gulp!you ediut! I bet you don't have a clue! jah pata ker and let me know on the double!

hiya faltoos, what's up? Lol no I am not stalling to start with the comments...i am starting as per tradition ...bak bak bak...yak yak yak...only after all that can I cut to the point right? I mean if I don't do all this chattering then how else am I to attempt to annoy you...now now stop glaring...and rolling ur eyes...and now what are you looking for? No you'll not find my bat anywhere...I'm not stupid to carry that on me when I came with the intention of bothering you...hmm chal *ahem ahem* i think i need a glass of water before i start...or maybe will go chill with warda for some time and then come back to resume my comments ...what do you say? Ok ok ...before you turn in a huff and leave thinking there is no comment on ur UD and its just my bakwas...i will get to it ... ohhh jus zip the gob!gosh kitne bolte hai tu...and haan woh teri dost warda ..she too talks ,or rather mumbles ..as far as Iam concerned duno give me an ear ache.. and nooo Iam not rolling my eyes Iam trying my hardest to keep my mouth clean ...

Hmm...am glad to see Naku confidently and cleverly handling and answering the two new visitors and more importantly the professionalism with her behavior despite having her action man around... actually the overgrown baaby is the one she has to watch out for, kishi bhi time he can shower .noo! not that shower i mean barse parthe ga Naku par!

So time for a tea break...and Dutta is trying hard to keep from following his lady love...absolutely liked the added bit of goading the young trainee PT to aid Naku lol...although am sure Sangakkarra...being the gentleman that he is, would've of done so on his own...Bradley is so determined to figure out what it is between the two...but D is not going to just come out with it now is he? No, no ...thats not his character...so Naku and Sangakkarra back with tea..and of course D is waiting to receive it from only her hands...and baam of course any interaction between the two would be noticeable for their silence often speaks volumes...now Bradley asks without beating around the bush ...I guess i should learn a few things from him don't you think hammie? Ie. getting straight to the point :P anyway getting back on track ...Dutta tells them who Naku is to him and thats that...our sher walks off to pay ...loved the bit when Bradley & Piggott..talk about D and N's professionalism and when Naku say she was doing her duty...funny i thought the same thing Bradley ended up asking ...which duty haha...Sangakkarra ,the real one actually came across as a fine bred gent when I saw him on BBC , wow he sure was focussed on his discussion...Dutta will be Dutta apne aurat ke discussion public mein nehi kare ga , nahe apne private business ka..so had to go by that incline!

So heading to PN ...D and N, thankfully in one car, separated from the other two ...so our Sher's batman drives joker and robin 😆 lol...so of he takes her bags opens the door for her ...and off they go...of course not before he complimented the fair lady's looks...lol@ dutta asking naku to more forthcoming when alone ...oh my ...the day that will come will be quite interesting...gosh man ...he asked for a kiss she gives it an d effects send him turning her off...well I would say he would be wanting to reach home alive and her little acts may get his focus shifting elsewhere :Pyesss the little missy can be quite a little wench in her dabe dabe moves... all the bloody come hither looks and iterna... its a pity he's left her alone!

Aww Naku wanting to hear her Saabs reviews on her work today...something from him yet he has not said a word which is upsetting her...of course she is stubborn never will ask just expects him to know exactly what's the reason for her sulk but him being a gadha and all does take a while to finally remember oh damn he forgot to give his reviews...lol like warda didn't get to comments for last UD and put a little quickie after [*me turning my face to avoid seeing warda's glares] ...anyway he did make up for it by saying what he had to once he realized...and wow how nicely he said it all ..and the conversation about the fact of sharing personal with patient...i expected this to come ...and glad it did ...it was reasoned well too...great work hammie...hummmh that warrie , hammie has given her up as a lost cause... jaye jadher merazi aur hawa kaheya... but you my baji!always faithful in reading and commenting.. SO GIMME a high five!

omg my eyes want to close! .. hmm anyway...at PN loved Baaji's comfort with Naku as always and more importantly the added little action of Dutta not at all caring for Baaji taking N's bags...for it was any other person...he would've charged at them lol...Baaji meets the two faujis and then carries on as if nothing had changed with his usual natunki self...hugging D around neck ..haha ...drama baaz ...and of course both Bradley and Baji two of a kind, totally tactless haha double the fun for us right hammie? gosh its hard to shake off their embraces...those were the days my friend ,we thought theyd' never end...

Now this Bradley sure has an eye for the ladies...even determining age and all...anyway the blessings bit was cute..esp Bradley asking Dutta permission to hug AS... yes Daya I wanted to check out the women of PN myself, pity though I couldn't for some reason continue with the description that was due to them..

Hmm so now this whole UK wala trip...will be interesting to see everyone's take one it...looking forward to it hammie... well its is coming up with the next UD which is still in the press,

Thank you for the pleasant read...loved it ! ...ab me am starting to fall asleep and before i doze off on the laptop I better head to bed...later faltoos...lots of love ...see you when I do... what are you trying to say ,ke itne tedious UD thaT IT KNCKED YOU IN LA LA LAND...NO you fool not ooo lal la! tera dahmak tu her waqat asie kamon ke tarif jata hai😆 haaa hooo. .thanku sharrrmileee, see you latersss aand make my requested dp.paliz! oye yes me like Surya... tooo . fit hai!

Originally posted by: -bharti-

🤗 Res...
Haan hammieji aapne toh mera forum pe jaise kriya karam hi kardiya , impatience thy name is hamlet53 😛 😆 Ab toh ghost banke ghoomenge😆 hi brvv..welcome back to the forum and more so on my thread.. your last comment seemed so definite to me , that I felt totally helpless , so I might have said things which are very much within my character.. but forgive me if I have ever caused you grief... and yess am delighted like every one else to see you back in action!

Thanx for the pm n the Ud hammie...you never cease to surprise me.

Firstly would like to apologize for puttg u in some stres wit my misadventure n Thanx for the rousing welcome😉 Once in a lifetime gift pack as tahera put it😆 don't mention it baaby , there's plenty more, where that came from..jus say the word!aur welcome pack tera pas hoga before you know it!

Comg to the Ud as u r aware i wont be able to say much as im caught up in some issues for which il be away ( travellg ). Enjoyed readg n ironically yaha bhi judaai ka mausam hai😭 but surely the journey is a holiday, that invoves travelling, now to me that is a reason to be excited about, not cry!

So you carryon wit the fantastic writing, n i wil catch up sometime.

Here it is n ab toh like button press karde.😉 apology for my rudeness

Nandini,s outburst wil leave naku in some tight spot wit major n she wil certainly have to be ready for some answerg ... Why Pig gots 😛not gettg naku,s explanations throu, it takes duttas curt answer to nail in some sense into him of d practices around d hospital...Well Bradleys forgets he is on an official trip n continues his off the cuff remarks. But d comparison of him wit baji was even thou on the surface apt , i doubt baji once hooked wil have a rovg eye like bradley 😃 umhhh that's kinda of true.. but boys will be boys..except for some overgrown, awkward schoolboys..

Gosh! Bradley nearly touchg naku but luckily missed wit some timely distractions frm major himself, or else its anybodys gues what awaited bradley. N he has a penchant for playg wit fire, askg major a few unwarranted Qs ...now wit bradleys inquisitive eyes aided wit majors childishness at the tea break, the secret,s revealed n good since it would have been silly when they they reach PN n spring a nasty surprise on d guests. Gosh! Nandini again badgering major wit her titbits, marvayegi nakku ko haan but Naku bhi has to talk about her lover boy,methinks she actually gets cheap thrills by talking about him, have a feeling she's as bad as he is... but have to ignore, phela phela pyar hai dono ka!

Man mein laddu phoot raha hai aur uparse akad dikha rahe hai majorji, "kapde lele", aage kya hoga ram jaane. Thanx bradley, u won my heart wit dis gesture alone, allowg d couple some time together enroute PN. Major,s such a tease, wants some intimacy but cant he understand it is he who is to take d initiative?😕 Waise he couldnt stop oggling her at dera n when he has a chance? Gadhe ki bhi bezti hojayegi isko gadha bolenge toh.😡, but b4 things went out of hand , he comes around n saves d day. N what follows is their sweet banter til PN, aaw music to ears err to read...🤗 thanks brvv for enjoying this part, means a lot to me as a writer , especially when looking at the winter of discontent on the forum..hummhhh

God! Its been so long to see our own bradley n here he is the right hand of major wit all d requisite arrangements in place for. Aaaww! Huggin shuggin his friend.😃..Hahaha, now he has met his twin in brad n voila! First thg that hits him is videshi daaru, ( tahera should be relieved )😉 sorry missed the joke here...tell me later booze wala joke!

Hmm! The intro wit AS for d gentlemen was revelation of sorts ..n d dinner table convo beautiful as always, perfect! Oh! Vegetarianism gaing in popularity in Uk , grt! What,s major,s problem? Cant he see naku busy ..karo toh problem na karo toh bhi, uff men! naku wants to black n blue his cheeks for his bhashan ...Naughty naughty naku.😳.finally,d awaited news to be disclosed n major all worried...oh! Cmon major, itne kamzor nahi hai aurat log..haaahaa .here goes our aurat ke haq ke awaaz...

So,hammie, it was a pleasure readg..n hope ive made amends for d delayed response..plzz do continue n thanx for ur efforts n time, much valued n appreciated...waitg for d revelation in d next n ofcourse d trip itself. So long👍🏼 thank you brvv, you revamped the comment ,becos me was not happy with few lines from you..that's because you have spoilt me .. aur ye aaj ke baat nehi jab se tune comment diya hai its was always the most awaited one.. but... hummh I guess as you mentioned I would have to make do with one liners from you for some time ..like satisfactory, unsatisfactory, good ,outstanding... you have a great break baaby.. keep in touch hummh , would want to know ke tu kaise hai... many thanks for the comment. hammie

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

Originally posted by: Warda.

oyeedaya you choose the first spot 😛

where is rolly 😊 oye!who are you talking to here?daya or me...me as in hammie! aand thujhe itne fikar kyon hai roly ke , she's sitting beside me on my settee , watching me type , abhi i'll take her upstairs for a nap , ankheen flutter ho rahen hain uske , as i turn my head to look at her.. and ab she's trying to touch my key board and me glaring at her!

hammie this time will edit paka wala promise on time 😳 sooo this is a bt of a shock sicky pooh! germ queen, tu edhur !Uni bunk ke hai kya? bol!me waiting

hammie thank you for this wonderful update... all tasha moments specially their journey to PN was amazing to read... loved all thier convos specially naku waiting for the word of appreciation from dutta...for his appreciation means a lot to her...haan of course , lover boy ju hai uska.. so his opinion does matter to her

good to see naku as a confident and profsessional lady though im more fond of that shy naku who keeps crying over small things :) that Naku, needs a chammat across her hand, nah not on her face.. hammie loves her face..but woh ise liya ke Khani outtta the picture , yaar miss her... wanna bring her back! huumh chalega?

ohh brdaley and piggot gelled up well in this culture and within no time...baaji as usual was full of masti :thujhe Baji pasand hai na? mind you me too likes him...

with dutta announcing seems he had made his mind...seems the story will move to another world now...still keeping fingers crossed what will happen ... now that is smart of you to conclude that warrie.. velly klever! you may be right kurriye..

looking forward to the next part eagerly specially the story will be comleting a year on may 11th...so many congrats to you and all the readers...stay blessed always:) thank you warrie for remembering, mujhe yaad nehi tha , but have to say my first thank you would be to Nakusha , who asked me to think of her as being the first one to note the passing of the year .so naku where ever you are thank you for reading my work.. and like you said so rightly Warrie .hammie should say thank you to all the readers of my FF ,without whom this FF would just be words, words, words, but your reading and comments give it life...

my expressions are exactly the same😛 and now me bending to pick this rouge munno up! haar waqat he's looking bhooka ! feed him please dont want him chewing my fingers and my collar!
thanks warrie for your lovely comments ab ja and study ker!

Originally posted by: tahera57

helooo tahera, good to see you here yet again...loved your comment you gave a certain member on forum ,regarding LTL2...👏

nice ud hammie . u seem dissappointed with it... why ab kya sadak pe shower dilana tha?😆(becaari readers toh muft main badnaam hain😉) nope pal the readers are never at fault, me as a writer am totally at your mercy, tum chaho tu is FF ke dhokan band kar wa do! so sarkar sab aap ka karam hai ke is FF ke ghare slowly chal rehi hai...😆 . i was impressed with nandi not being intimidated by dutta. major saab being sulky kid in front of visitors is not like him...specially when he was refraining from telling them who nakku was,but since they were going to PN they would have found out anyway. dutta taking his time driving to PN. with nakku by his side.liked baji's welcome for all an khas for his bhau a big hug! ah and also thinking if they have enough imported drinks! AS blessing Bradley was nice.nakku superwoman even managed to make gajjar ka halva. chal is week khana ho gaya ab next week dutta and nakku will sure get some time together i dunno about t,sab dutta ke mood par depend karta hai... challo first let me finish the UD ..have been busy, and will be occupied elsewhere tommorrow as well...but will try ..

...let's see how AS reacts to dutta's news, i think she will want him to go to uk . don't know about nakku though she will cry her eyes out judai ka soch ker. but as an army officer's wife she has to get used to it. because the training of out is over u think the ud is lacking in something! i don't agree i think visit to dera and now PN homecoming for a soldier is good. keep up the good work .tc 😊 bold thank you that is a sane comment... i guess that's the life of families invovled with he armed forces... thanks tahera for continuing to read and above all readily giving interesting comments... with much love hammie

Originally posted by: tahera57

@ Bharti dekh tere comment ka annotation toh ho gaya lekin ghor se dekh bohat rukhaa hai 😡 aur yeh baji aur videshi drinks se main kyon relieved hongi samajh main nahin ayaa😕 na main piyon na pilaon na bechon na kharidoon so y? any way tere liyay first time hammie ne kisses nahin bheji. chal abhi ke abhi tabad todh iski killaaasss le.😃 zaroorat hui toh mujhey bhi bulaa lena iski himmat kaisay hui kiss ko diss karnay ki... chal maine shalwar ooper ker li...

@ aaj hammie ji toh bohat time ke paband nazar aa rahay hain. tu ne apney defence jo kehna hai keh de kiss ke bhghair yahan nazar nahin aa sakti tum.