FF Deewani, Chapter 45, pg 14, NOTE pg 29! - Page 3

Originally posted by: mariescott14

hey tinks,

congrats on ur new thread..loved the part..especially dutta naku convo..wondering whether we are going to see madhu in action..hope she is only plotting n not gone bad

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

congrats on ur new thread tink...u need 2 cut down on the spamming/chatting n keep it linked onli 2 da ff...LOL...

read the update at work...it ws gr8...omg tasha's convo on da phone was cute n so funi...damn man dutta is so desperate 2 consummate his marriage...i 4gt he had this side 2 him...lol...reading tht scene reminded me of hw he was with sups in the beginning scene, n sups was jus a random girl..wonder hw he wil b with naku? bechari naku... she's gna find it dif 2 handle this big baby...lol...aww bless dutta hinting tht he wnts kid asap...wel dutta 4 tht u gta b bk soon

baji n the whole fam yt agen proved hw stupid dey r 2 fall for the trick n actually believe madhu is evil..i mean come on madhu aint evil...she is jus playin a game with kala...its obv...n it seems thnx 2 her dutta wil b able 2 conquer ova kala as DP n bappa sed madhu is dutta's chauthi wali... im surprised naku didnt recall bappa's words wen madhu tld evry1 tht her dad used 2 say tht she was chauthi wali...😕

Originally posted by: tinkerbe11

Originally posted by: preety_219

Pari🤗

Superb update & quite fast paced,unlike the show😆

Finally Kala's evil face is revealed & like i sensed Leela unmasked her & very smartly she showed AS & entire family that kala was behind Dutta's accident.

As expected Kala had no regrets ,infact i felt she was relived that finally she doesn't have to pretend good sister ,good daughter any more.

Thanks hun, and yeah this was how I had it planned for Kala, as her track has been running from the beginning in very short intervals. 😳 Kala didn't regret her true face being revealed I guess, because she's so close to what she wants, that these things don't matter to her.

Poor AS ,having betrayed by ur own child is worst hell for any mother & that too when that same child is killer of her sibling & his father,the pain is unbearable.

Dutta's BGs are useless in story as well😆 except for kaale.That's a good move which u brought in the story,some one trustworthy & loyal to Dutta was needed to know Kala's next step.

Dutta's bodyguards had to be usueless and some of the orginal story had to stay in the FF lol, You'll find out why. AS was always in for a shock lol. 😆

Dutta & Nakku's phone convo. was heart warming yet again.😳They were going thru so much & yet were trying to hide from each other .Dutta was leaving no chance to tease Nakku.I wonder when all their problems will be sorted out & Dutta will be in front of her ,bechari Nakku ka kya haal hoga☺️

Er their problems will be sorted in the next two to three chapters, after that it's plain sailing. 😉 And you will get to witness Naku's haal lol. 😳

Their longing for each other was evident thruout the phone convo.Dutta even teased her about Bappa & as usual Nakku was ready with her unique answer.Her simple way of looking at life is her asset & that's what amazes Dutta everytime.Its like she has all the answers for his even randomest questions.

Yep, it gives Dutta that fresh air when he talks to her.

Seema continues with her selfish behaviour,not that it surprised me,But,still i thought when Dutta rejected her,she would have felt some remorse for her actions.But,nope people like her only think money is solution to everything & emotions are useless.But,i think Kala will not give her money.

Personally I didn't like the fact that cv's attempted to make Seema the 'good samaritan' I hated it in fact, so I cant' bring myself to make her character decent even at the slightest. If she was good then that goodness could fill Dutta's soft spot with and emotion of pity, and leave him wondering whether she really did love him or not, and I can't allow Dutta to have any room for doubt regarding his first love, I want his heart to beat only for Naku without looking back. 😳😳😳

I was wondering where is Gaurav amidst all these,then remembered he had gone to Baabi's place & with these new develpoments his staying out of PN is very crucial,i am sure he will surely be of some help.

Dutta's blind state is revealed finally,poor Nakku,twice she talked with him & sensed that he is in pain ,but loss of eye-sight is a big blow for her.But,the family & Nakku have no idea that this blind ness is temporary,& he will be normal soon.

Yeah I know I did want Gaurav to be here too, but it's best if he stays out of Patil Niwas right now, it works better this way. So I had to think of a pretty lame excuse lol...😳😳.

Dutta's blind state will indeed recover, and that very soon too.

Madhu is the only person right now who is thinking logically & smartly.She did exactly what i expected of her.Though entire family thinking of her as betrayer is little too naive,but soon they will know what she did was for the well-being of the family.

I really feel sorry for Kala,becaz she has no idea when & how she will be attacked & that too from Dutta,Baaji & Madhu.😎

As usual you are right, and where it should be obvious to the family, their minds are occupied with so many other tragic happenings, that they are unable to make a decision regarding Madhu's loyalty. 😉

The wheels are in motion,everyone who is part of this game are ready with their moves.Nakku will somehow escape to meet Dutta & i hope she manage to tell him about Kala,otherwise direct revealation might come as a shock for him.I am sure Baaji will also be back in action after safe-guarding family.

From here the story will progress in the manner you have mentioned above, and like you said it will all come as a very strong blow for Kala, as she has no idea of the plans ahead.

Now i am waiting for next update which will be full action-packed😎

Yesss! Why are you always right lol😆😉

Lots of love🤗🤗🤗

Pooja😊

Luv Tink😉

Originally posted by: tinkerbe11

Thank hun. LOL I know, but I really ain't spamming, I just reply to the comments pretty much😳, which is linked to the ff lol.

Glad u liked it. Well he dnt wanna waste time innit. 😆 He'll be back soon so don't worry too much.

Wow u really love Madhu don't you! Btw I gotta a surprise for u, dunno if u'll still be interested but still it's there if you like it. 😉

As for Naku, well let's jsut say that everything needs to happen at the right moment, ok, so don't be cursing just yet. 😳

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

@red...haha yh obv he dunt..seems he is in a hurry 2 hav a kid bt i hpe u dnt make her preggy quickly... aww thnk god he'll b bk soon... whether he returns after his eye sight is recovered or b4 is summut i suppose we'll jus hav 2 w8 n c cos i knw u aint gna giv ne hints

@purple...i like her character a lot..i felt in the shw she wasnt given a chance 2 develop in2 the role n her role didnt do much while it had a lot of potential esp considering she was DP's daughter who evn tho had a small cameo one cnt deny tht he was a strong character evn tho we saw him wen he was suffering... thus i wud hav liked 2 c a combination of both DP n dutta in madhu bt they neva showed tht in da shw anyway as regards 2 the surprise as long as madhu aint evil n remains a positive character i hav no problem...

Originally posted by: tinkerbe11

No dnt worry she won't be preggers yet, it is too soon, considering the stuff they been through I mean. 😳 Well You'll find dat out in the next chapter itself.

You spoke the words from my mind I swear. From everything u mentioned about her background an all, n dat is why I saved one of the comeback epi's for u but dat ain't the surprise lol. 😆 W

hen I like a character do you fink I'll ruin it...😳, but yeh I've got suttin lined up for Madhu and Baji lol, in sutting else. 😉...dat's wot I meant...if you're still interested.

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

@red...good good very good..lol..yh n dey hav 2 luk after rupali 2...pls bring her bk soon 2... obv after tasha hav spent sum tym 2geva😳

@purple... hmmm summut lined up 4 madhu n baji? in this ff? interesting... anythin bt a bro-sis relationship wud do hun...par u stil gna gt chappals from me 4 nt havin dem 2geva😆... n i knw wt ur gna say now "stop moaning abt tht nw..." lol😆

Erm I dunno about Rupali lol, I weren't planning on bringing her back, wid tasha I mean, after dis it's the last track and den it will end lol.

Originally posted by: tinkerbe11

Erm I dunno about Rupali lol, I weren't planning on bringing her back, wid tasha I mean, after dis it's the last track and den it will end lol. 😳

Oops I forgot to mention the small detail that it's not in dis FF lol, I'm writing another SS wid Baji and Madhu as the couple in dat. So yeah now I can say stop moaning lol, and dat's wot I meant wen I said if ur still interested. So yeah take back your chappals at least. 😛