OS- TERA PYAAR COMPLETED 4 sept on pg2

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Introduction

Well after trying my hand in ff and vm making .now I am trying my luck in os writing .its first attempt so plz bhul chuk maff karo. This came in mind when I was on work site. Started writing on paper. Hamesha girl used to sacrifice. It's like unwritten rule I try to introduce such lover who sacrifice his love for his love.

I somewhere read that

To love and win is best thing

But

To love and lose is next best''

Such boy loves a girl who hurtled by her lover. How she realized her true lover. Understand that

"Love"

One word that

Frees us

Of all the weight

And pain in life'''

It's their journey of love form two soul to one. I think title but don't get appropriate one. So my mom suggest me the perfect one. It's simple but equally deep hope u all agree.

My os title

Tum ho toh

Plz enjoy😊

Present day

Girl standing in middle of hall surrounded by her family members. She roared and said "nahi papa pati hai who mere kuch bhi nahi ho sakta unhe thik hai woh" she ran out from there got in her room. Sat on floor with his jacket in hand "aap ko kuch nahi ho sakta. Wapas ayiye mere liye hamare pyaar ke liye. "Starred at jacket hug it tightly.

1 year ago

Naku was dressed in bridal outfit. Looked at her mehendi smiled and said "kartik". Her friends came and take her to hall. Hall was decorated beautifully. pandit told to bride groom to take their place in mandap. Naku took her place waiting for him. But he refuse everyone was in shock .he removes his sehara and said "meh nahi kar sakta ye shadi ye dokha hai. Mere mom dad ko ye dolat chahiye thi iss liye mujhe ye natak karna pada par ab our nahi .meh kisi our shadi karta hu. Mujhe maf kar digiye khaas kar tum naku". Naku didn't believes that her wedding day turn her worst nightmare. She stood up started clapping and laughing. Came face to face with him and said "wah kya baat hai .tum ab maffi mang rahe itna sab ho jane ke baad. Ek ladki ko sapne dikha ke phir khud hi usse tod kar .ek mata pita se unki khushi chin kar ". She grabbed him by collar "tumhe kya lagta hai meh toot jaugi.tum se bhik mangungi "now he also got anger push her back .he was abt to slap her but someone grabbed his hand and came between her n him said in much anger "mere hote huye koi iss se hath laga sakta .iss se pehle ki mera hath uth jaye nikal jao yaha se ".

His head turn down by shamed and he and his parents walk out from there. He placed his hand shoulder of her dad n said "shant ho jayiye"

He replied "shant par kaise bhao meri bacchi ki toh puri jindgi kharab ho gayi ...ab aisi ladki ka hath koi thamega jis ki shadi toot chuki hai..Kaise kategi who apni jindgi .aap thamege uss ka hath boliye"

He think for sec and said" ha meh dunga uss ka sath. Hamesha jindgi bhar ke liye'aap ki ijajat ho toh '' par uski marzi se meh Kisi par ye rishata thopna nahi chahta."

He went toward her n said "meh ye toh nahi janta ki meh kaisa jivansathi banuga par ye wada karta hu ki meh har waqt hamere rishte ko woh jaga, maan our haq dunga.pure vishawas ke sath ye sab kasam nibhunga."

She was still angry with this incident abt to say no but when looked at her parents who looking at her with hopes. She decides to sacrifice with her dreams. He takes his hand forward asking for her answer she takes sharp breath give her and on his.

He gives faint simile to her but she was expression less. Both take blessing from her mom dad. Get in mandap pandit starts mantra both take pheras. He filled her mang with sindoor and tie mangalsutra around her nake. Make their way to his home. Deep silence was one thing between them. They reach at his place. It was huge palace with lots of servants.

He told servant to take bags to room. She looked at him with questioning eyes. He said "meh bachpan se Anath hu koi nahi mera iss duniya meh iss liye parivar ke bina rehna kya hota hai janta hu.tum fikar mat karna. Tumhe yaha kuch taklif nahi hogi"

She just nodded her head. Both goes upstairs she was uncomfortable though they are just married he can read her situation. He shows her room n said"ye tumhara room hai meh iss ke side ke room meh rahunga .dekho meh pehle bhi keh chu ka hu ab keh raha hu meh tu par koi jabardasti nahi kar raha.tum thak gayi hohi jao aram kar lo."

It night both were trying to sleep but they can't sleep peacefully for moment. But reasons were different. She was still in her past and he was trying to find abt her future. Days pass like sand in hand but she never looked him as partner besides he always uses to take care of her.

She gets out of control much time but he always understands her situation. He came inside the room when she was in deep sleep covers her with blanket .she notice her face so much pained she suffer in these days. he takes his hand forward about touch her face but take his hand back n said " ye thik nahi hai '" turn to walk stop by something forcing wrist . When he turns to her he realized her sari pallu trucked to his watch. He smoothly removes it without disturbing her sleep. Slowly went out form room. Next morning he came to her room with breakfast in hand becoz his servants told him that she was not taking food properly and stays in her all the time never came outside. He place food on table she was sitting in window. Staring outside notice his presence turns to her back. He said "woh ye nashta kha lo meh aaj patilwadi meh garibo ko kapde, paise,methai batne ja raha hu .un logo unki vahini se milne ki iccha thi toh tum." She drowned her gaze to floor. He understands that she was saying no. he clarified "agar tum nahi ana chahti toh mat aao meh chalta hu kuch kaam ho toh mira tai ko bol dena.woh meri maa ki tarha jab tum ayi thi na toh apne gav gayi thi ab ayi hai." she remained

Quite and without answer. He went to down stairs mira who watches him he was looking sad. She went to him said" dutta kya huwa..."

Dutta move his hand through his hairs and said "kuch nahi tai who bas thak gaya hu ..."

She was not convince by single words with his answer said" 10 saal ho gaye hai yaha kam kar rahi hu tera kam janti hu 'aaj tak meh ne tumhe kabhi aise nahi dekha .tu na bole na toh teri akhe bolti hai. Woh aaj keh rahi ki tu kisi ke dukh se dukhi hai na'. sab janti hu meh teri our naku ke bich kya chal raha hai tum sirf duniya ke liye pati patni ho par' sach kya hai our ye bhi janti hu ki tu pyaar karta hai uss se toh apne pyaar ko mauka de "

He ignores her eye contact said "ye kya keh rahi hai aap meh chalta hu der ho rahi hai "and walk out from there.

Mira Tai said to herself "tu nahi janta hai dutta pyaar mushkil se se hota hai our naku toh har sachai se anjan hai." She went up satires naku who was still in deep thought. Mira smiled at her n called her name. She stood up n said "aap kon hai'. Yaha kya kar rahi hai"

She replied" meh mira dutta ne bataya hoga na .bahut sundar ho tum pari ki tarha. Meh janti hu ye shadi kis halat meh huyi par tum aise andar hi kab tak dard bardasht karogi bolo. Jindgi toh apne rafter se chalti iss suffer ko apne pure vishwas chalogi toh har sawal ka jawab milega'''"

She smiled to her after so many days said "aap ki bate sunkar accha laga ki meh ne apni maa se baat ki shukariya"

Here dutta was distributing food n clothe one of farmer ask abt Nakusha well he had nothing to answer but still he cleared her side by saying "uss ki tabyat thik nahi who toh jid kar rahi thi par meh ne hi usse kaha ki ruk jao."

As he was passing cloth to him someone touch his palm when looked at that there was naku who came to help him. She smiled to farmer n said" kaka ab meh thik hu toh aa gayi.ye ligiye "

She looked at him with happy face becoz after so many days she was feeing such relief. They both help each other. He introduced her to many people of patilwadi. She was also humbled by their love. He was really happy to know that she was trying to start her new life. They was about to return to home walking towards the when they heard someone talking form behind "ye Nakusha hai na jo kartik se shaadi karne wali thi par huyi nahi"

Second person replied "iss meh hi kuch kami hogi warna koi aise bich mandap se shaadi chod kar jata hai, ab dekho toh kaise hass kar baat kar rahi hai sab se iss ki ja koi our hota toh ab tak sharam se mar gaya hota"

She crying and sobbing rally hard. He can't saw her like this grabbed her waist she looked at him with surprised. He took her to them n almost roared "ye kon hai jante ho meri patni Nakusha dutta patil. Patil wadi ki malkin. Iss ke bare meh aise baat karne ki himmat kaise huyi. Ye puri tarha pavitra hai our ye sabit karne ke liye iss koi pariksha dene ki jarurat nahi. Iss par ungli uthane se pehle soch lena ki jo bhi iss ki taraf jo bhi ungli uthebi woh cutt jayegi"

Everyone seems speechless he looked at her and said "chalo yaha se tumhare layak nahi hai ye jaga"

Both got seated in car drive up to patil nivas. Both remains quite they reach patilnivas. She ran to her room lock the door jumped on bed crying by hugging pillow tightly. Dutta knock the door many times but she didn't opens. Mira tai came after him ask him wat happen to her becoz she was in nice mood before?

Dutta told her whole incident she said "usse tho time do. Usse pyaar ki sath ki jarurat hai jao batao usse sach jo ab tak dil meh rakhi hai."

Dutta"Tai apne hi toh kaha na ki usse thoda time chhiye toh usse meh who dunga mere liye who khush rahe iss ke badh kar kuch nahi. Meh jaise jita aya hu waise hi ji raha hu par meh usse our mushkil meh meh nahi dal sakta"

Here naku was full of aggression full of feeling get up and stand in front of mirror. All movement she spends with with kartik flashes in front of her. Then day of marriage how kartik betrayed her. She saw naku before marriage in mirror she said "kya huwa naku bura lag raha unlogo ki bato se par unhone galat kya kaha sach meh teri shaadi toh tooti toh hai na.agar dutta tab teri hath nahi thamte toh toh tu umer bhar ke liye kuwari reh jati."

Original naku said "par iss meh meri koi galti nahi hai. Kya khoot hai mujhme"

Reflection cut her sentence "yaha hamesha ladki meh hi koi galti hai aisa samaz jata hai our ha tujhe ab ye tane, kadwahat sehni padegi toh tu iss ki adat dal de tujhe ab khush hone ka haq nahi raha tujhe aise hi jina hoga pal mar kar samzi" she laughed.

She could not control her feeling anymore pick up the vase on table break the mirror in pieces. Her waist got hurt and starts bleeding but she remains still in same posture gauzing at broken pieces of mirror. Her eyes were not blinking for ones. She was alive but still behaving like dead body. Dutta who was worried for her sitting in his room thinking abt her heard the noise. Immediately move to her room knock the door for few time but there was no response. He breaks the door enters in room saw naku gauzing at mirror with bleeding waist. Floor already turned red by her blood. Thou she was suffering from pain but her face were expression less. She was just murmuring "meri galti mujhe mar jana chahiye mar jaungi mar jaungi'"

Dutta ran to her pick up her in his arm. Put her on bed take first aid box form table clean her wound.

Tightly wrap bandage around her waist to avoid much blood lost. She was shivering dutta cover up her with blanket. She had high fever that whole night he was a wake sitting near her bed placing cold water strips on her forehead, checking temperature time to time. He was removing one of strips on forehead she put her head on his lap he tried to place it on pillow but he think it will disturb her sleep so he remain as he was. He too cried looking at her face her face turned pale dark circles around eyes by lack of sleep. He touches her face with his palm tear drops from his eyes fell on her chicks. He wipes them n said"kash meh tumhare har gam har dukh ko apne upar le pata our meri jitni bhi khushi hai woh tumhe deta." After some time he was in deep sleep. It was morning she stirred form sleep her head was heavy. She realized that she was sleeping on his lap. She immediately gets up realized whole incident of last night. He also stirred hearing some noise. She trying to get up form bed but she was not able as she was too weak. He grabbed her arms n said "tum aram karo ab bhi tumhari tabiyat thik nahi hai' meh tai se keh kar kadha (herbal tea) lata hu uss se accha lagega"

She said in low voice "Dekhiye kal raat jo kuch huwa woh meh"

Dutta smiled faintly "jo kuch huwa who bhul jao our apne tabiyat par dyaan do.. tum thik ho iss se jyaada our kuch nahi mayne lagta mere liye"

"Par mere liye mayne lagta hai" she increased her voice. "Mere liye lagta hai meh phir se Kisi our par vishwas nahi kar sakti ye shadi mere liye samjota hai our kuch nahi.meh nahi chahti ki meh apki umeed tod du meh kisi ke pyaar ke layak nahi aap ne mera sath diya par ye mujhe andar hi andar dukh deta hai .meh apko iss ke badle our kuch nahi de sakti kyu mere pass who pyaar raha hi nahi ki meh who aap ke sath bat kar jindgi gujar saku.plz meri waje se mere apne maa baap pehle hi dukhi hai. App ka dil nahi tod kar meh apne aap maff nahi kar paungi.kyu jab ye dil tootta hai na tab awaz nahi.par dard se tofan uthta hai toh puri kayanat hil jati hai.

Aap ne pyaar nahi kiya na iss liye. Aap khush naseeb hai pyaar hamesha Dard hi lata hai." She knows that's she already said too much. Now she was waiting for his reaction.

"Tum aram karo meh kuch kam se bahar ja raha hu Par meh jaldi hi laut aunga'." He said in normal voice. His behavior surprised her he supposed to angry over her. He walk out of door goes to his room. Fall on floor and clutches his waist into punch n said "kyu ho raha hai ye sab. naku meh ne kabhi pyaar nahi kiya. Toh mujhe dard kyu ho raha hai. Iss Bhagwan ka bhi ajeeb dastur hai ek khushi ayi meri jindgi meh uss se saha nahi gaya." He quickly get ready and went out house. Mira watches all this she could not control now. She knows its right time to reveal truth in front of naku. Naku who was sitting on bed when Mira tai enter in room. "tum ne toh pyaar kiya hai na naku bolo toh phir kyu tum kisi ke pyaar ko tyaag ko samaz nahi nahi saki naku'who tumhari har khushi meh apni khushi dhudhta raha our tum ne uss ko dukh diye" she ask intently

Naku who cannot understand her "Tai ye sab aap kya bol rahi meh kuch samazi nahi"

Mira tai "meh toh teri tarha padhi likhi nahi hu par phir bhi dutta ka teri liye pyaar dekh rahi hu par tu toh akhe hote huye bhi andhi ho kar bethi hai.ye chithi padh le dutta ne likhi hai par tujhe di nahi kyu ki woh tujhe taklif dena chahta tha.uss pagal ki pyaar ki dastan likhi hai iss kagaz par mohhbat ki syahi se."she handover the chit to her.

Naku started reading it

'Naku shayad tumhe meri kehne ka haq nahi hai mere pass par mujh pe toh sirf tumhara our hi haq hai. Mujhe maff karo meh ne kuch batein chupayi tum se kuch raz jo apne tak hi rakkhe hai.

Ek saal pehle meri jindgi badal gayi tumne usse hamesha ke liye badal diya. Meh dutta shriram patil ek gunda jisne kabhi pyaar paya nahi toh karega kya aise isaan ko jab pyaar huwa who bhi ek aisi ladki se jise chah ne ke layak nahi hu meh who tum thi naku.

Shayad tumhe yaad nahi hoga tum apne ghar laut rahi thi. Meh apne roz ke kaaam wahi par tha tabhi barish hone lagi.meh sar chupane ke liye ped ke niche khada tha.our tum barish meh khadi muskura dahi thi. Baccho ke sath bacchi ban kar khel rahi thi.meh ne bas ek hi pal meh apni jindgi simtali. tumhara woh massom chehra. Hawa se udati julfe. Thodi der baad tum toh chali gayi par meh waha khada raha. Ab ye meri jindgi ka hissa ho gaya tha tumhe chup chup kar dekh na. Tumhari hoto ki muskan mujhe sukun deti thi. Uss din meh tumhara intzaar kar raha tha tabhi kisi ne tumhe awaz di "Nakusha" tab mujhe tumhara naam pata chala. Iss naam ke sahare meh apni puri jindgi guzar sakta hu.

Uss bhid meh tum ne apna kangan gira diya. Jo mujhe mila ab tak who pass hai jab tumhari yaad ati hai toh usse dekh kar apne dil ko samaza deta hu.

Sach kahu na meh koi khaas hu na meh tumhare liye bna huwa hu. Na padha likha hu tumhari tarha tum mujh se accha jivan sathi mil sakta hai ye keh kar khud ko rokta raha. Par rok nahi paya. Tumhara picha karne laga par meh tumhe koi taklif nahi di. Tumhari choti choti bate jankar khush jota tha. Tumhe kulfi bahut pasand hai na. lal tumhara pasandida rang. Kitabe padhna accha lagta hai.

Jab tum confuse hoti ho toh apne duppte se khel ne lag jati ho. Our na jane kitni der bappa se bate karti rehte ho. Apni galti par Bilcul bacche ki tarha muh phula kar beth jati ho. Jitna meh ne tumhe jana utna tum se our pyaar karna laga. Shayad tum se jyaada janta hu meh tumhe par kabhi ye tum se keh nahi saka. Dar jata tha ki tum kaise react karogi. Kahi meh tumhe hamesha ke liye na kho du. Uss din himmat kar ke tum se baat karne ki koshish ki par jab tum samne ayi toh dhadkan hi tham gayi. Kya kehta meh meh tumhe. Bas yuhi khada raha tum meri bahu se chali gayi tumhara duptta mere hato ko chu gaya. Woh meri jindgi ka sabse khush kismat pal tha. Par shayad akhari kyu uss ke baad tum mujhe mili hi nahi. Har jagha dhundha meh ne tumhe par tum. Tum kho gayi who bhi hamesha ke liye ye soch kar meh apni jindgi jine laga. Wahi purani jindgi.

Tumhe yaad kar ke mujhe sukun milta tha par ye bhi bardasht nahi huwa phir se hum dono ko ko ek dusre ke samne lake khada kiya. Tumhe dulhan ke libaz meh dekh kar meh khush hu ki tum kis our ki hone ja rahi ho mera pehla pyaar adhura reh gaya iss gam meh dukhi kuch samaz nahi aya. Par tab bhi meh tunhara bura kabhi bhi nahi soch sakta tha. Tum jis ke sath bhi raho par khush raho. Jis insaan se tumne pyaar kiya uss ne tumhe dokha diya. Kyu kiya huwa aisa tumhare sath uss waqt mujhe dikh rah tha toh sirf tumhara dard jo meh sah nahi saka. Jab uss ne tum par hath uthane ki koshish ki tab kaise chodta usse. Tumhari galti nahi par phir bhi sab ke samne tumhe galat theraya gaya. Mere our shaadi ki baat huyi oh meh ek pal ke kuch samaz nahi saka ki ye sach hai ya sapna. Meh ne tum se tumhari ijajat ke bina shaadi karna nahi chahta tha. Tum ne apna hath mere hath par rakha tab meh ne khud se wada kiya ki meh vishwas kabhi tutne nahi dunga, meh tumhara pati toh ban gaya par tumhara jivan sathi nahi ban saka. Par meh koshish karta rahuga ki meh tumhe duniya har khushi du.

Tumhare liye shayad ajnabi

Dutta

She was shattered reading letter. Letter hugging near chest crying and absorbing his eternal love. The letter was symbol of his unconditional love.

Mira tai "beti tum jindgi bhar jis pyaar ko dhudh rahi thi who toh yahi tha par tu ... Duniya meh aisa koi bahut kam milta hai jo apne se jyaada kisi ko pyaar kare dutta toh pyaar ki pariksha ko paar kiya hai"

She ashamed of her behavior. "Tai ye sab unhone kyu nahi kaha mujh se kabhi kyu boli apni dil ki baat" she asked in pained voice. Mira Tai calmly said "pagal hai who pyaar toh kar gaya par izhaar kar saka. Jo kuch keh na tha who iss chitti meh likha par ye tumhe dene ki himmat nahi hai uss ki. Ek chote bacche ki tarha hai who jitna pyaar dogi na uss se jyaada wapas milega."

Naku "ab toh der ho gayi tai meh ne unhe kho diya" said with teary eyes.

Mira Tai "Nahi beta pyaar kabhi adhura nahi rehta jao hasil kar lo apne pyaar ko. Aaj who ghar ayega toh usse apni patni Nakusha dutta patil se milado."

Tai walked out of room but her each and every word was revolving around her mind. She wipes her tears and said "ab our nahi unhe unka haq unki patni milega.aap ne tab sath kasme li thi ab meh lungi"

She goes to changing room ware the sari which dutta got for her. Filled her mang with sindoor.

Put green chudies on both arms. Tie mangal sutra around her nake. Complete the look with simple bindi on forehead. Said "aap ke har khushi our gam aaj se mere our meh apna dhram jarur nibhaungi"

He enters in house when he saw rose petal on doorways.he heard voice "ye unke liye jinhone meri rahe phulo se saja di our khud kato pe chale."he stared walking toward this voice. Place was full with dim light of candles. "ye roshni jo aap mere jivan meh laye" now she came out dark standing face to face with him. He doesn't have any idea wat was going on "ye kya hai naku'."before him to complete sentence. She huged him like never before n said"mujhe maff kar digiye meh bahut buri hu aap ko taklif di meh ne kya kya nahi saha apne mere liye our meh bas apne dukh meh dub kar ye bhul gayi ki aap se shaadi meri khushnaseebi hai.aaj agar tai mujhe sach nahi batati toh meh '."

Dutta free himself from her grip turn to other side to avoid his eye contact "tumhe koi galat faimi huyi hai.meh pyaar"

Naku place her hand on his shoulder turned him to her side said "ye pyaar nahi toh kya hai aap ko khud de jyaada meri chinta hoti, aap jab tak meh soh nahi jati jage rehte hai kyu ki mujhe koi taklif na ho boliye chup hai.aap ne sab lika hai iss chitti meh toh phir kyu. Sach bataye warna aap mera mara muh dekhenge."

Dutta "naku'. Phir kabhi marne ki baat mat kehna ha meh karta hu tumse pyaar bahut pehle se. dil meh tum hi tum ho kisi our ke liye jagha hi nahi hai" Dutta and Nakku are totally dumbstruck. They stood there looking at each other shockingly not knowing what to say. Nakku has tears in her eyes and has a flashback of mira tai telling that maybe one day destiny will bring them true lover face to face.. This time both hugged each other. She melt in his arms while he was holding most auspicious thing in life.They break the hug and stands there looking at each other. Dutta cups her face n said" ab meh our bas rona band karo meh tumhe rote huye nahi dekh sakta.aaj meh ne sab paliya"

Naku "ek wada kariye mujh se meh kitni bhi galtila karu par aap mujhe chod ke nahi jayenge"

Dutta "meh wada karta hu naku kahi nahi jaunga meh .our ja bhi kaha sakta hu tera pyaar hai jo mujhe kabhi dur nahi hone dega"

Back to present

Naku wipes her tears n said" aap ne wada kiya tha kitne khush the hum lagta hai kal parso ki baat hai ki aap kaam pe jane ke liye ghar se nikle ye keh ki naku mera intzaar mat karna ate huye der hojayegi

Par ye kaisi deri ki aap laute hi nahi. Darwaze pe aap ka inzaar kar rahi thi aap nahi aye. Khabar ayi aap ke accident ki. Par aap ka koi pata nahi chala par meh kaise umeed chodu boliye.aap ne aaj tak mujh se liya har wada nibhaya hai ye bhi nibhalenge. Wapas

Ayenge aap hai na. log keh rahe the aap nahi rahe par meri sase shuru hai ye sabut hai ki aap thik hai " she closed her eyes absorbing pain. She opens her eyes as she was feeling his presence. "Naku..Naku niche aa" someone called form down stairs. She ran as fast as she can suddenly stop at doorway where she saw dutta coming across door. She stands still at her place as she doesn't to miss his single look just staring at him without blinking her eyes.

He came face to face with her hold her hands called her "naku." She was lost in him said "ye sapna toh nahi hai na aap sach meh yahi mere pass ho na. Thik ho na aap.. Woh sab... Aap accident.. Meh "

Naku "shant ho ja meh thik hu tere samne khada hu."

That night she brings milk for him he was resting on bed. Naku place milk glass on table and sit near bed Careing his hairs. He open his eyes found naku smiling at him. He got up form bed asked "naku tum yaha kab se bethi ho who bhi niche utho kya pagal pan hai ye" naku seat beside him on bed said "iss pagal pan ko bohut miss kiya hai meh ne aap ke sath har pal khoobsurat hota hai."

Place her head on his lap and closed her eyes. He smiled and said "ab ye kya hai"

"Meri jagha aap itne din nahi the na the ye aap ki saza our mere liye duniya sabse hasin sukun milta hai yaha" cuddled her neck

"waise jab tum aisi jid karti ho toh accha lagta hai.

Sate huwe ekdam bacche ki tarah lagti.meh ne toh issi naku chaha tha.meh bahut pyaar karta hu tumhe naku " kissed her on forehead

She smiled n said "meh bhi apse untna hi pyaar karti hu.par ek problem hai uss ka kuch karna padega"

"Problem who kya?" dutta asked. "Baki sab toh thik hai par kay hai aap thoda kam bolte hai agar mujhe sach nahi pata chalta Na toh shayad hamare bacche bhi ho jate our aap I love u nahi keh pate "and she winked at dutta.

"Who bhi sahi hai.. Ek minute kya boli tu ruk naku tujhe abhi dekhta hu meh kya kar sakta hu" but before he acted her she ran to corner of room. He follows her. She through pillows on him he douched. Finally he caught her hand pulled her to him. She crushed in his chest.. she looked up into his eyes. Both joined their forehead together. He said "ab pata chala dutta shriram patil se panga lena natija.. saza milega aap ko Nakusha dutta patil samzi aap.."

She smiled n said"agar ye saza mujhe har khushi se pyaari ho toh .waise aap mujhe jo saza denge na meh who haste haste sah lungi.kyu ki mujhe aap ne di hai toh mere liye acchi hi hogi"

"Itna bharosa hai mujh par"he asked. "Bhagwan se bhi jyaada our lakin hai meri chahat par" she replied. She tried to free herself dutta hugged her form back. Place his head in crook of her nake. Both were standing in front of mirror. She saw a husband who loves his wife dearly. He saw a wife completely Ravished by her husband.

Tum ho toh gata hai dil

Tum nahi toh git kaha

Tum ho toh hai sab sahil

Tum nahi toh kya hai

Tum ho toh hai sapno ke jaisa hassin ek sama

This pair was made in heaven. they face difficult phase in life but somewhere love make his way. Bring back those two lives together and forever. Now no one cannot separate these two bcoz they are now bounded in circle of love. This was my love story of yaha ki best Jodi naa'. Duniya ki best Jodi. Dutta and Nakusha.

the end

Hope u all like

Plz share ur views

I am waiting for it

I have some more idea abt os. They will come soon. Plz catch all of them here.

Love u all

May god fill ur life with love

sana 😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
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wonderful job sana love every bit of it keep it up baby😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great job Sana. Nicely thought out. šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘
Loved your OS. Keep them coming.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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😊fabulous job sana you rocks dear loved every bit really our dutta is a true lover and tasha are lovers for eternity.thanx for such a lovely os waiting for more thanx forupdate and pm.
Edited by krishaa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks for the pm sana
great from FFs ,to VMS..and now to OS interesting tale...certainly had a feel of Dutta and Nakku about it ..the story was interesting and started with a bang and had a good flow and a happy ending as we expected...
so well done.. and do keep them coming write some more OS..when you can ..gives us more interesting stories when you can..
many thanks xxxhammie
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I will be back ...i dunno when ...but will try to soon :P
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Posted: 14 years ago
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gr8 OS...liked the idea of naku being dutta's 1st love in ur OS unlike in the shw wer he had loved the evil seema/sups...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey dear SanašŸ¤—
Thanx alot for the wonderful Os and PmšŸ¤—Loved it yaar ...Very beautifully written .šŸ‘šŸ¼Tasha truly a match made in heaven ...Thanx alot for writting this wonderful piece and sharing šŸ˜‰Keep up the good work ...U take care and see ya around
Love and hugs
suhanašŸ¤—
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks lekha,rrs,hammie,krishaa,suhana for those lovly reply
hope i can continue with it
daya dear waiting for u
love u all take care
working on next os
sana😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it & waiting for another os 😊

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