'Bas Ek Ghuzarish'chapter 21/p60 Conclude

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Yuvika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#221

a very nice update...wow wt a scenario...cold freezing weather n naku 2 cold tht she cudnt sleep, n aww bless dutta he eventually gt naku 2 sleep by pullin her close 2 him... tht was so cute...

wow loved tasha's convo regarding thm women's comment was gr8 i reali like hw u keep their convos very tru 2 da characters nature, the way he questioned naku as 2 y she was upset n whether he made her think she ws sum bhoj?? it was so like dutta...a man with little words yt sum1 tht makes his stand very clear...i reali like tht abt dutta...m glad he made it clear 2 naku tht he dunt think of her in tht way...n tht he married her cos he knw she loves him...n wow 2 naku 4 sayin mayb he believes in love 2... nt sure if he is in love with her bt he does care abt her...his love 4 naku shud grow ova a period of time...bit like hw it did in the shw

hmmm madhu distracted with her mobile n baji irritated..i wonder who's call she is expecting?? pls reveal soon...m curious 2 no😳

Edited by Yuvika_15 - 13 years ago

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usha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#222

superb updt... loved it to core...

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Nakusha

@Nakusha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#223

hi jagritid

suberb update & loved D-N convo 😊waiting for the mandir trip ,plz be regular just miss ur writing ,thanks for pm tc😊

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Frosty_Moon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#224

mine

marvelous work jags👏

love it

thanks for pm

Edited by eternity_of_luv - 13 years ago

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suhana19

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Posted: 13 years ago

#225

Hey dear Jagruti 🤗

Thanx alot for the wonderful update and Pm ...Loved it as always ,,,will wait for the nxt part ,,,,U take care and see ya around

Love and hugs

suhana

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sona89

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Posted: 13 years ago

#226

Amazing update ...😊

Dutta -naku trip looking frwd to it ...😊

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jagrutid

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Posted: 13 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: pinks86
Loved it!!! : )

thank you for reading sorry for all the delays!
jagruti

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jagrutid

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Posted: 13 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15
a very nice update...wow wt a scenario...cold freezing weather n naku 2 cold tht she cudnt sleep, n aww bless dutta he eventually gt naku 2 sleep by pullin her close 2 him... tht was so cute...
wow loved tasha's convo regarding thm women's comment was gr8 i reali like hw u keep their convos very tru 2 da characters nature, the way he questioned naku as 2 y she was upset n whether he made her think she ws sum bhoj?? it was so like dutta...a man with little words yt sum1 tht makes his stand very clear...i reali like tht abt dutta...m glad he made it clear 2 naku tht he dunt think of her in tht way...n tht he married her cos he knw she loves him...n wow 2 naku 4 sayin mayb he believes in love 2... nt sure if he is in love with her bt he does care abt her...his love 4 naku shud grow ova a period of time...bit like hw it did in the shw

hmmm madhu distracted with her mobile n baji irritated..i wonder who's call she is expecting?? pls reveal soon...m curious 2 no😳

hey! thank you very much for reading..nice to know you liked the update. I think the first part of the chapter had to be my favorite too..just a really small moment but i think it portrayed both sides very well..glad you liked that.
hmm as for the conversation..that was a huge hurdle in this update i knew what i wanted to write just wasnt sure how to so if its turned out okay then thats good and your right about duttas feeling..i dont think he feels the love factor just yet..but nakusha is trying to make him think about it a little more.
As for what happens with madhu and baaji.all in the next chapter..
thank you very much again..
jagruti

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jagrutid

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Posted: 13 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: rrs1391
awsem update nicely written

hey there thank you ever so much for waiting for my update..and its nice to know you enjoyed it
please keep reading!.

Originally posted by: rrr6
fantastic

hello there! i think i owe every one an apology for taking so long..sorry for all the delays but thank you for hanging on and reading..much appreciated.

Originally posted by: Nakusha
hi jagritid

suberb update & loved D-N convo 😊waiting for the mandir trip ,plz be regular just miss ur writing ,thanks for pm tc😊

thank you very much! i didn't think you guys would think too much of that part of the update..but glad you liked it.. i was going to carry on..and write about there trip ahead in this chapter but was far too tired by that time.. (this chapter was finished off very late at night..😆)

Originally posted by: suhana19
Hey dear Jagruti 🤗
Thanx alot for the wonderful update and Pm ...Loved it as always ,,,will wait for the nxt part ,,,,U take care and see ya around
Love and hugs
suhana

hey! thank you so much for waiting you guys are too good. so it wasnt too bad then? good ..as long as you liked it im happy. thanks and keep reading!