'Bas Ek Ghuzarish'chapter 21/p60 Conclude

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Iridescence

@Iridescence1

Alumni

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#191

R E S E R V E D ! 😆 I am first after long time

E d i t e d . . .

Partner ...mein aagai ;) *hugs*

Alright lets get straight to it ...Chapter 9 ...

So we start from where we left off...the letter in hand... and Dutta startling her. Dutta not happy knowing she might have read letter and tells her not to disclose what in the letter to anyone. I loved that he was not mad that she might of read or for touching his work stuff but rather more concerned about the consequences of knowing the truth in that letter...but our Naku so innocently states she is illiterate and cannot understand even if she tried...of course Dutta is like completely softening for her every move...she has such innocent ways and those make such an impact on him...

So she serves the food, and notices Baaji is hurt and she will of course not just stand there and watch so grabs the first aid kit...i swear she is like wonder woman...can so much LOL ...I liked specifically the part where Baaji refuses but Dutta's way of saying 'BAAJI!"has gotten the point across that he wanted Baaji to let her carry on. Love that baaji doesn't even argue and listens...

Hmm of course Baaji is being only himself when he mentions about Naku...and knows something is missing...of course her sindoor that she is hoping her dear husband will fill for her... I so am loving her innocence ...it's so cute. The way he is mesmerized and interested in her points of views and thoughts...and of course Naku responds in her normal way and LOL baaji as well...saying Dutta forgot the most important job...filling her parting... heehee...so he sends Baaji for work...and of course baaji knowing about Dutta's wound very subtly tells Naku about it and of course silence speaking louder than words for these two, Naku approaches him for dressing his wound and he knows she knows and just sitting and letting her go ahead and help him ...loved that. So much they speak without actually uttering any sounds...

Of course AS or some KMH will come in the way...lol so she wants to leave but he calls her back ...i had chills down my spine reading the way you wrote his call to what he did ...i had guessed that he was going to fill the parting...and WOW the way he did that...she didn't even know and it also shows how much he cares for her too ...whether he understands meaning or not ..and then when Madhu tells her to look in mirror and she realizes, the highlight here was he was watching her and his heart softening for her ...loved it...

Hmm so silently Naku watching the love of her life sleep and of course noticed the pain he felt in sleep...and is about to reach for his shoulder but KMH ...Madhu is at door and wants to sit in room with Dutta...which she does and D wakes up to see her and is unsure of reason for her presence...again highlight here for me was when Dutta sees Naku walk in and tell him Madhu was waiting for him to talk...and he called her...without reason of course...but to me it was like trying to say he wanted her ...to be there...to be part of it...but at same time he was unsure what he was feeling or wanting with her lol ... all the little things jagz...they are making this couple exceptional ...just like in LTL1 :) I feel Madhu is really feeling jitters for the situation ...but I fail to see exactly why...?

Well done partner...enjoyed to max...loved it entirely...do update soon...take care ..love you lots

Phir milenge chalte chalte

Edited by daya0628 - 13 years ago

Quote

usha

@ushankitvc

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#192

a very superb updt... so dutta too is realising that their relation is sumthing special... so he knows suds is involved and he is waiting fr Leela to decide... so beautiful relation between madhu and dutta too... luving the stry to the core... updt sooon...

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Yuvika

@Yuvika_15

Moderator

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#193

awesome update jagz👏 as always...love the way u describe the emotions n reactions of each character...👏

awww naku's response 2 dutta telling her nt 2 disclose the contents of the letter 2 ne1 was so cute yt feeling sad 4 her too...esp the fact tht she is "anpar"😭 , wil she eva learn...i hpe madhu teaches her hw 2 read n write, its an impt necessity 4 survival in 2days day n age!

wow gr8 scene, loved hw dutta fills her parting without her realising😳😳 n her reaction 2 it, pressing the mangalsutra against her eyes n thn her heart😳😳 m speechless its these little gestures tht make tasha so adorable...i love the fact tht the characters r no dif from hw they wer portrayed in the shw evn tho the story is dif u've kept the characters the sme😳

i loved madhu scene with dutta...it was cute...y do i think theres mre 2 madhu's anxiety...does she play an impt role in wt happened in da past?

Edited by Yuvika_15 - 13 years ago

Quote

rahima a.k.a. pinks

@pinks86

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#194

an absolutely awesome update ... i looove dutta in all ur ff's ... he just has that charisma, charm and stern nature which u describe exceptionally ... i loved the maang filling bit ... update soon

** i always read the updates on ma fone and for sum reason i cant reply properly ... but i always read n love ur updates ❤️

Quote

suhana19

@suhana19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#195

Reserved 😉

Edited😃

Hey dear Jagruti🤗

Finally u have updated ,..Thanx alot for the wonderful update and Pm👏Loved it as always👍🏼

Awww naku came to give dutta a breakfast and found the piece of paper and here dutta comes thinks she must know what"s in the letter ,...But naku is Illterate,,,So dutta is relived to know that she hasn"t found out anything ...

Naku is dressing up baaji"s wounds ..so sweet it was ,,"sigh miss Batasha yaar ",,,,and then baaji also pulling dutta"s leg 😆 with sindoor wala comment ...

Loved the tasha scene she dresses up his wounds and he fills her maang without her knowing it ,,that was beautiful and that mirror scene and stealing glances ...he feels something more as each passing day 😉

Loved madhu and dutta scene ,,great bonding they share ,,,,,awesome

Thanx ,,,will wait for the nxt part ,...pls jaldi update karna ... u take care and see ya around

Love and hugs

suhana🤗

Edited by suhana19 - 13 years ago

Quote

Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#196

superb update jags👏

love it like always😛

dutta and baaji's convo lovely and bajji is always there to lighten the dutta's mood😃

nakku in dutta's office and when dutta saw letter in her hand little worried and angry that she touch her these things and tell her to be quiet and other hand nakku smile and dutta amazed and confused on her smile and baaji jumps in as he know dutta will be angry as nakku smiles on most serious matter but nakku's answer that she is illiterate,the way the politeness she speaks lovely😊

nakku dressing baaji's wound then food baaji jumps on the food and dutta just in deep thinking and once again baaji tries to ease dutta start a topic on nakku's look and finally end that on her sindoor and just after baaji's saying dutta look at nakku and nakku tell why that partition is still unfill and after nakku's saying baaji tease dutta lovely😊😆😉
😉
after baaji's leave dutta too get his wound dress by nakku and love the way dutta call her and fill her partition without her knowing when she is about to leave 😳

then baaji and madhu looking at nakku and nakku unaware of the fact and then madhu tell her to see mirror and when nakku realize the fact she is overwhelmed and even dutta is looking at her from window so romantic 😳

at noon dutta sleeping and nakku looking at her hubby and having flashes of morning 😳

madhu and dutta convo and then dutta saying that he can't hurt anyone whom he loves very much while looking at leela

amazing dear⭐️

thanks for pm

Quote

Nakusha

@Nakusha

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#197

as always you are very good with the up date ,plz show naku little relax & confident infront of dutta ,😊

Quote

Iridescence

@Iridescence1

Alumni

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#198

Updated my spot with comments on page 27 :D

Edited by daya0628 - 13 years ago

Quote

jagrutid

@jagrutid

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#199

Thank you very much guys!!😉

Ushanivic: Thank you very much for reading, good to know you enjoyed the update. Yep dutta is slowly taking to nakusha, I think from the next chapter you guys will enjoy it more as I'm going to get back on track with Dutta and Nakusha. That other side of dutta is very soft and sweet..the one where his an older brother to madhu and so that is also in there for a reason. Anyways..thank you very much..keep reading.

ramya90: Thank you very much for reading..!

Yuvika_15: hey thank you for reading..and yep glad you picked out that line. Had lots of meaning to that line that's for sure. I think deep down within its probably something that she feels she lacks but then as ever nakusha looks at the bright side of things and even her reply was very modest. ..sparkle in her eyes smile on her lips..As for madhu..yep she could actually teach nakusha I guess..thats future possibility for sure.

The thing is I want my characters to be as close to the originals as possible because those are the characters I feel in love with. No change what so ever..as for madhu..i think to be very honest..when I first started this ff I had very firm concept and still do..but in the last few updates I think ive lost track a little..so im going back to the intial sketch I made ..and from the next update..its very much going to be all about tasha because that's how I planned it to be…beech mein yey sab pata nahin what was going through my mind so..im going to steer away from the family..and its issues and get back on track.

Aamirkhanfan: thank you very much! Please keep reading.

sona89: hey thank you for reading..glad you enjoyed it.

pinks86: hello, thank you very much for reading. Ive always known that your one of my readers..and I totally understand..dont worry about commenting..you guys read that's enough for me. Aw thank you hopefully im doing justice to the characters.

suhana19: hello yep got to say sorry for the long delays..but just really busy these days. You know what im really missing the dutta and baaji scenes to hence there was a huge chunk of the last two chapters based on them but I do feel myself getting stray from my initial storyline to im going to bring it back in the next chapter..lots and lots of tasha to come.. and don't worry baaji will be there too!

eternity_of_luv: aw thank you very much! I thought this one would b a bit of a bore but you guys are too good. Its always the little things with tasha and the first interaction was just about that. he is irritiated..annoyed but not because she is touching his things and invading privacy but because she would be hurt to read that letter..too…..and nakusha being nakusha just smiles. The politeness just comes with nature..nakusha is very aware of her words..and when she talks to dutta there is always lots of respect.
I love baaji hence ive used him here yet again..
Baaji dutta and nakusha are just amazing together..glad you liked the update. More of them in the next chapters.

Nakusha: thank you for reading..its nice to know you liked the update ..yep nakusha will grow in terms of confidence and character slowly but she has only been married for a day and that to DSP so you can understand why she is hesitant.

Daya! partner..sorry im going to have to come back to your feedback later..but thank you very much as ever your comments put a smile on my face.!

Quote

jagrutid

@jagrutid

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#200

Originally posted by: daya0628
R E S E R V E D ! 😆 I am first after long time

E d i t e d . . .

Partner ...mein aagai ;) *hugs*
omg daya you actually got bk to you top spot..good on you partner!!😉

Alright lets get straight to it ...Chapter 9 ...
i'm ready..lets go... (no champal throwing though pls!!😳)
So we start from where we left off...the letter in hand... and Dutta startling her. Dutta not happy knowing she might have read letter and tells her not to disclose what in the letter to anyone. I loved that he was not mad that she might of read or for touching his work stuff but rather more concerned about the consequences of knowing the truth in that letter...but our Naku so innocently states she is illiterate and cannot understand even if she tried...of course Dutta is like completely softening for her every move...she has such innocent ways and those make such an impact on him...
yep thats just it.. he wasn't angry about the fact that she walked into his office and started touching his things but more concerned that she would be upset after reading that letter. Now thats DSP for you! - legend. How can he not soften..after she uses that line on him..and its always been about the innocence..the way her words are so soft..so much modesty..respect..every time she speaks to him she reminds him that he is "saab" which works magic...because dutta instantly reminds himself that nakusha in some ways is rather innocent..naive. - She knows how to play to game thats for sure..but this time it was genuine.
So she serves the food, and notices Baaji is hurt and she will of course not just stand there and watch so grabs the first aid kit...i swear she is like wonder woman...can so much LOL ...I liked specifically the part where Baaji refuses but Dutta's way of saying 'BAAJI!"has gotten the point across that he wanted Baaji to let her carry on. Love that baaji doesn't even argue and listens... A little bit of a domestic there between dutta and his ruthi biwi.!😆
Hmm of course Baaji is being only himself when he mentions about Naku...and knows something is missing...of course her sindoor that she is hoping her dear husband will fill for her... I so am loving her innocence ...it's so cute. The way he is mesmerized and interested in her points of views and thoughts...and of course Naku responds in her normal way and LOL baaji as well...saying Dutta forgot the most important job...filling her parting... heehee...so he sends Baaji for work...and of course baaji knowing about Dutta's wound very subtly tells Naku about it and of course silence speaking louder than words for these two, Naku approaches him for dressing his wound and he knows she knows and just sitting and letting her go ahead and help him ...loved that. So much they speak without actually uttering any sounds...
silence always speaks a little more than words for tasha and as for baaji..he was doing his bit being baaji and nakusha well i guess she was in a bit of an awkward situation. She had to put it appropriately..because of course patidev is also present so she puts it in third person instead of saying mein saab ka intaar kar rahin thi because then that would imply that dutta was the reason and of course nakusha will never say anything that would put her saab in a bad light. She has to protect his rep!😉
Of course AS or some KMH will come in the way...lol so she wants to leave but he calls her back ...i had chills down my spine reading the way you wrote his call to what he did ...i had guessed that he was going to fill the parting...and WOW the way he did that...she didn't even know and it also shows how much he cares for her too ...whether he understands meaning or not ..and then when Madhu tells her to look in mirror and she realizes, the highlight here was he was watching her and his heart softening for her ...loved it...
chills!!? it gave you chills..really? he doesn't make a fuss. Thats because ultimately..he knows that one day she will question him on why he can care for her so much yet not love her..why he has given her everything..but feeling of love.. I think patil sahab is trying to avoid that awkward confrontation with her and so does fufill his share of concern ..and plays his part of her husband but just very subtly.
Hmm so silently Naku watching the love of her life sleep and of course noticed the pain he felt in sleep...and is about to reach for his shoulder but KMH ...Madhu is at door and wants to sit in room with Dutta...which she does and D wakes up to see her and is unsure of reason for her presence...again highlight here for me was when Dutta sees Naku walk in and tell him Madhu was waiting for him to talk...and he called her...without reason of course...but to me it was like trying to say he wanted her ...to be there...to be part of it...but at same time he was unsure what he was feeling or wanting with her lol ... all the little things jagz...they are making this couple exceptional ...just like in LTL1 :) I feel Madhu is really feeling jitters for the situation ...but I fail to see exactly why...?
yep there is defo that feeling of connection between them both as for madhu dont read into that too much..i intended only to portray how much dutta loves cares for his sister..the fear bit is irrelevant..i think i kind of got sidetracked and they storyline so far has been very family related but that i not how i had planned it so from the next chapter im going to get bk on track.
Well done partner...enjoyed to max...loved it entirely...do update soon...take care ..love you lots
thank you very much..you take care too..😉

Phir milenge chalte chalte

Edited by jagrutid - 13 years ago

Quote

1 ... 18 19 20 21 22 ... 46

'Bas Ek Ghuzarish'chapter 21/p60 Conclude - Page 20

Related Topics

Explore Topics