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Posted: 14 years ago
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means she is creating problem for nakku or separating tasha
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: eternity_of_luv


means she is creating problem for nakku or separating tasha

hahah u will find out in the nxt chapter
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Chapter 9

Mehra mansion Tina's room Tina's Pov-

I was sitting on my bed thing about last night it was the best and worst night of my life. Worst because I saw dutta kiss Nakusha and best because of the argument that happen with karan bhaiya and the perfect Nakusha the icing on the cake was when karan slapped Nakusha. But to be honest see them kiss wasn't that bad as hearing dutta confess that he loved Nakusha back at veeraj's weeding when she got kidnap I remembered it like it was yesterday flashback I was walking back to my room when I saw dutta arguing with Baaji I didn't understand what there where arguing about the I heard Baaji asking dutta why we was willing to risk meher life of Nakusha I walked in the room and Dutta's screamed out " BECAUSE I LOVE NAKSUAH BAAJI AND I AM WILLING TO RICK ANYBODY LIFE EVEN MEHER'S" and gripped meher hand and walked out the room I ran after them and meher hand freeing her from dutta and said " have you lost it you cant do this take meher it her wedding to day". I said "I haven't lost it yet but I will if u stand in my way". dutta said angry at me "whatever this happening because of the b**** Nakusha if she before I could say anything else he gripped me by the neck and pushed my against the wall and said "don't u dare call my Nakusha that ever again your lucky that your Nakusha sister " dutta stop it I will come with you now leave her" said meher in a scared voice dutta let go of me and I coughed "no you won't here my room key go start to my room and stay there until I get back" dutta said handed her he's room key and walked off. I was so hurt and felt my heart had been broken in to a million pieces he just saw Nakusha dancing 24hours ago and fall in love with her because she close danced with him. "Are you all right" asked meher I didn't need her sympathy I walked off to my room and started to pack my bag and took karan bhaiya credit card that he have Nakusha for emergency. This was an emergency I decide to go to London to see nani maa she only understand me.(end of flashback.) it was on Nakusha's 20th birthday I found out that he meet Nakusha the same when I saw him. After Nakusha left last night karan didn't expected bhaiya to be so upset but when he got a txt from Baaji he went mad and threw his cup against the way. I stopped bhaiya and said "bhaiya if u want Nakusha to break-up dutta this is not the way. Find the weakness in their relationship and use it against them" karan agreed and said " your right Tina but I don't think I will have to do anything after Arnav she will get excited and send more time with him instead of dutta" "yeh we can hope for that" Tina said man I really hope she gives Arnav more time I thought.

On the way to Sheila's dance club

Dutta's pov -
I was driving and Nakusha was sitting in the front seat with me and Baaji and karan where at the back. Nakusha told me that we where going to Shelia's and asked me not to tell Baaji and karan. Nakusha looked so beautiful in her shirt dress damn sexy it was really had to pretend being angry with her while is looked like that. Karan broke the silence "So Nakusha were are we going" " bhaiya just chill where nearly there and sorry I cant give the punch line away" Nakusha said with a smile. " karan all I can say is today u will never forget this night ever. Tonight is going to be the highlight of your life" I said "Baaji u will also enjoy yourself" Nakusha said "yeh right" Baaji said. No one spoke after that Nakusha got bored and putted on the radio the RJ was reading messenger people sent to there friend and family etc, etc. and played music there asked her to play after a song finished she read the next message. "hey everyone welcome back now im going to read the next message and it from Shona and she is asking her boyfriend to forgive her and is willing to do anything he say's. well, well ur really lucky man yaar. Man if I had a girlfriend how said that to me I would forgive her in a second and her is the song she asked to be played so Shona this is for you ( aap ke pyaar main played on the radio) I looked at Nakusha in shock she didn't just do that and she's do anything I wanted her. I looked at her she saw the question in my eyes and nodded yes I tooked her hand and kissed it forgetting that Baaji and karan where in the back. "hey, hey dutta behave" Karan said " all I can say is thank god that he just kiss her hand or " BAAJI SHUT UP" Nakusha and I said at the same time after a while I stopped the car in front of Sheila's club and got out walked around and open Nakusha door she smiled at me and putted her hand in mine and got out.

Nakusha's pov-

I got the car took holding Dutta's hand. Baaji and Karan got out the car shock to see where we came Baaji screamed and gave me a hug and said " Nakusha I love you man ur just the best friend ever" "Nakusha have you no, no u have lost it do u even knew what kind of place you have come I mean for god sake - Karan chill man you shouldn't always believe what you hear it's just a night club that all and a pretty awesome club if you don't like it we will leave I promise" dutta said " like the way you promised that you would stay away from my sister" karan said " bhaiya " " will I had to break that promise it was the first time dutta when back on hes word and it was worth it but I bet you when you go in you wont want to leave so lets go inside why are we wasting time standing here" dutta said with a big smile. "your in a hurry to go in dutta you really want to see shelia or more get a lap " Nakusha its not that " whatever I said and pulled my hands out of hes " Nakusha if u want to really want to fight with dutta lets go in and I will get people to places bets ok chal" Baaji said pulling my arm and walked towards the night club. I walked in with Baaji and dutta and karan walked behind us as we enter the club I saw shelia at the bar talking to them and serving drinks to them I recognized shelia because I saw her picture with Baaji on hes phone there date each other before she open this night clubs. She saw us and jumped over the bar and walked toward us and said "Well, well it been a long time you came back I missed my favourite customer I turn and looked at dutta with angry look and he seem confused " so final you tumhe mere yaad aaga and couldn't stay away better late than never I missed you so much she said and walked pass me towards dutta I was going to kill her and dutta if she hugged him but she went pass dutta and hugged karan instead what the hell she was talking about bhaiya. I didn't know who was more shocked me or dutta . Dutta came and stand behind me and putted he hands on my waist and pulled me close I putted my hand on hes. Dutta whispered in my ear in a laughing voice "looks like you Karan bhaiya is Sheila's favourite customer" I was still in shock " seems that way" I said back. " kamni she left me for karan I better looking than him and now hes her favouritee customer" Baaji said pissed off and walked off.

Karan pov-

this was not good I looked and saw dutta standing behind Nakusha holding her waist and Nakusha hands where on hes and he had whispered something in ear and Baaji had said something and then walked off. I pulled away from Sheila back she smiled at me and said "Mr Mehra last time I saw you u promised u would come back soon and you came after a month that not fair anyway what did u come for a private strip a lap dance or - dutta started to laugh and said "honey first let first let us go from here then u can take about what treatment you going to give your favourite customer alone. Come nakku lets leave the love bird along and get a drink" " hell yeah I think I need one after what I have heard". Nakku said and walked away with dutta holding hes hand. Damn it I said after there left. "So what do u want Mr Mehra" asked shelia. I want you to cause argument between them two" I said pointing where Nakusha and Dutta were sitting.

Shelia's Pov

- that was strange "so are u in love with that girl" I asked karan "no , no she's my sister but I don't want her life ruin her life with a person like dutta I want him out of her life for good and today I saw that Nakusha get jealous when dutta talks about other girls and that what u have to do is flirt with him until he flirt back with you and then Nakusha will do the rest. I'll pay you as much you want do this for me please shelia she my sister" karan said. I agreed but I didn't knew why I had I walked towards the table where Nakusha and dutta were sitting laughing at Baaji who was dancing like he had ants in hes pants I couldn't help but smile myself I pulled a chair and sat next to dutta and said "hi im sani I mean shelia and you are" I asked dutta. Hi im dutta and that Nakusha my " o my god are you saying you're THI DUTTA SHRIRAM PATIL of Patilwalia" he nodded yes I touched hes arm and looked at Nakusha she didn't seem jealous like her karan had said. She smiled at me and said "you know it take really guts to start up a business and being a girl and opening a dance club its really cool it show that girls are no less than boys. So is shelia your really name or just the name of the club and everyone just through your name was shelia". I dropped my hands of Dutta's arm no one every asked me my real name but Nakusha. "my name is Saniya and I named the club after my sister name she died 4yrs ago and she always wanted to open a club". I said.

Nakusha Pov-

I liked Saniya she was an amazing girl " so do u like my night club nakku it kwl na". she asked me " yeh it nice and different to what I expected" I said "really whys that" asked Saniya " well I hared it was also a strip club but - "No Nakusha it is also a strip club but that in the back where there do private striping u knew one on one then he went quite realising what he said or because he show how angry I was after here that statement. " HOW THE HELL DO YOU HOW THEY DO PRIVATE STRIP'S AND DON'T YOU DARE SAY BAAJI TOLD YOU I point a finger at him dutta was about to say something when Saniya said "well, well seems like Mr Patil has come here for a private strip I wonder how was the lucky girl was to entertain you". Saniya said joking then stop realises what she said had hurt me "O MY GOD you come here before haven't you, I said not realising how loud I was and left before dutta could say anything "Nakku mere baat tooo" I heard dutta shout out as I walked out the club. Then I felt someone grip my hand I expected it to be dutta but it was Saniya.

Karan Pov-

I saw Nakusha having an argument with dutta and walked out the club damn this shelia was good. I couldn't help but smile and walked up dutta and said " I leaving now some has to look after Nakusha she seemed really upset what happen" I asked. Dutta looked at me and said "don't pretend in front of me karan I now you happy so do ur self a favour and get lost" dutta said angrily. I smiled at him and said "o well see you tomorrow if that if Nakusha would want to see you after tonight. Not a good idea to bring your girlfriend to a night/strip club many secrets can come out" " like yours did Mr Mehra Favourite customer and by the way good luck explaining that to Nakusha. And one more thing Nakusha might be mad at me for now but she wont stay mad" dutta said "we will see dutta" I said and walked out the club and caught a taxi home.

Dutta's pov-

I called Nakusha but her phone went to answering machine so I decide to place and make up with her as was about to leave Saniya came running in toward me and said in a panic voice " thank god dutta I found you" "why whats wrong" I asked her "Dutta Nakusha got hit a car by a car I was about to run out when Saniya caught my arm and said "she alright she just a bum on her the head she fine" she said "where is she" I asked Saniya "She in the backroom" " what have you lost it you took Nakusha what is someone see her and gets the wrong idea I mean how stupid can you be what room is she in" I asked her "she's in the wild dream room" she said and I walked toward the back and when to the wild dream room and open the door and walked in there was empty I looked around the room but Nakusha wasn't there I decide to leave and kill Saniya for playing such a joke on me. I was about to open the door when the lights when off I tried to open the door but it was locked. I took out my phone to call Baaji when I hard music started to play. And then saw a bookcase move and a light spot came on a girl was standing there with her back towards me and wearing my suit. The girl turn around it was my nakku. Nakku came towards me and took my hand walked me towards the sofa and made me sit down (Zara Touch Me , Zara Kiss Me playing in the back) and started to closer dancing and then moved took off the tie then turns off trouser she was left wearing cut off denim shorts I Gulped was I dreaming about doing a strip dance or was I imagining Nakusha and it was some other girl. I pinched my myself really hard it was my Nakku and God she was entertaining me and turning me on with moves. Nakusha came towards me and pulled me up to stand and pulled my t- shirt off threw it on the sofa pushed me back I fall on the sofa Nakusha started to open the shirt buttons and came toward the sofa pushed me so that I was laying on the sofa. She putted her hands my torso and slowly moved her hand up my chest she placed a kiss on my chest and then kissed my neck and putted her hands around my neck and brought her lips close to mine and said "did u like you private strip dutta" I didn't say anything I kissed and picked her up with out breaking the kiss and laid her down on the sofa and ripped the shirts button off and threw the shirt on the floor I had to say Nakusha looked really sexy in just a bra and denim shorts I kissed her lip again and then slowly moved my lips away and kissed her neck making my way down kissing her the between her breast and then I gripped her waist lifted her up a little and kissed her belly button swirls my tongue around the navel I hared Nakusha moan I repeated what I did a second ago and heard her moan louder. I placed her down on the sofa and my way back towards her lips while leaving open mouth kisses before I kissed her on there lips I kissed her on the mark that the bullet had left that she took for me and then I kissed her lips again the kiss started slow then it because lustful and hungry. I felt Nakusha hand on my torso and the I felt her unbutton my jean. I pulled back to look at Nakusha she smile and nodded at me. I smiled back and started to kiss her again and my hands slowly moving from her waist to her hip I just unbutton her shorts "Nakusha- Baho" we broke the kiss and I looked up and saw Saniya and Baaji standing by the door looking horrified "bloody hell" Baaji said and moved away quickly when he saw me and Nakusha like that I tried to move but Nakusha pulled me and mouth to me "don't move" I was confused but she just smiled and mouthed "just don't move pleases "... "umm you knew Nakusha you should of putted a do not disturb board outside I didn't know thing were so hot and heavy" said Saniya laughing. Nakusha looked at me and pulled me close by pulling my chain and putted her arms around my neck and said " there's no avoiding it things are always hot with him around" and kiss my chin . Saniya laughed and then I hear Baaji say "well thanks for sharing that information with us nakku but if u both don't mind can we go home and I think Sheila needs this room it been booked for a another customer" "hey Baaji keep me out of this ook but I really need this room guys". " sure but do u guys mind leaving us for a 5 mins seconds" I said to Saniya "sure dutta" Saniya said "but baho only a 5 mins" Baaji said but I couldn't see him. "yeah yeah" I said and Saniya closed the door I looked at Nakusha and she started to laugh. I started to laugh with her.

Nakusha pov-

after Saniya had left dutta looked at me I couldn't help but laugh he started to laugh with me "why do we always get caught Nakku first by karan, Baaji and now Saniya" dutta said while laughing . "will Baaji and Bhaiya caught kissing by mistake and I think we brought this on our self by I didn't finish the sentence off because I was to shy I knew I was turning red. Dutta kissed my forehead and said " Nakku if we stay like this he point at us being half naked "I think there a good chance that some else might see" I smiled and said "get off me then so I can get dressed" dutta gave me a Naughty look and said "do u really want me to move" damn him I was feeling really shy " dutta please" I said shyly he smiled and he move off me it was strange I was missing his weight dutta as he moved away from me and picked up he's t-shirt and putted back on. He looked at me and smile and button my cut off denim shorts "I unbutton it so it's fair" I smiled at him and got up and putted my dress on neck shirt dress and picked up dutta suit and putted in a bag dutta smiled while watching me then he came toward me and putted he hands on my waist pulling me close to hes chest and kissed my forehead and said "how the hell did u get my suit without me knowing about it. And don't ever lie about ". I didn't bring the suit Roops brought it for me don't worry she hasn't come in the club she gone home. Dutta I only said that because I wanted you to come here and I promise I will never lie again" I said and wrapped my arms around his neck and kissed him on the lips he lifted me up my waist and I wrapped my legs around his waist "Baho whats taking so longg Baaji said again seeing us making out. Dutta putted me down and kissed my head there was no point being embarrassed it seem like Baaji was always going to caught us . "Baaji when are u going to lean to knock" dutta asked him "and baho how many time im I going to say this is not ur bedroom" Baaji said " yeh but it is a room Baaji and it rude to come into a room a without asking permission" dutta said. "GUY we are getting late for dinner and im hungry so please can we go". I said dutta smiled at me and said "sure lets go" and we walked out of the room hand in hand . Baaji looked shocked and said "vah baho when I was saying lets go im hungry u didn't move but Nakusha say's it one and your all ready to go that not fair baho. " Baaji your not as hot as Nakusha so I dnt have to listen to you" dutta said "I could be as hot as Nakusha if I was a girl I think I would have been more sexy". Baaji said I didn't believe that we were having this conversation dutta smiled and said "yeah Baaji if you where a girl you would be way hotter than Nakusha, hell I think I would have fallen in love with you" the way dutta said that I couldn't help but laugh and came in front of dutta and putted my arms around he's neck and said " and u knew dutta I wouldn't stand in the way of your and Baaji's love" and kissed he cheeks dutta also laughed at what I said and we left the night club saying good to Saniya and Baaji wanted to go to Baba Ka dhabba. Owen by Dutta and Baaji childhood Krishna.
Pavitra PuniaSaniya also knw as sheila
PRE-CAP
Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun
Tujhko Main Kar Loon Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun
Zindgi Ki Shakh Se Loon Kuchh Hasin Pal Le Chun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun .
Edited by alveera_rckz - 14 years ago
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awesome part so mixed pratigya 's krishna BABA KA DHABA in ltl anyway update soon and thanks for pm and update keep up with the good work.
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good very good waiting for next do it as soon as possible
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get tasha married soon ,its the only way to get rid of karan & tina ,looking frwd to update & happily married tasha
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ok this update of urs make me

quite lind :P
it was simply hottt !
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Chapter 10

Karan Pov- I got home with a big smile on my face I paid the taxi driver and just then another taxi stopped in behind my taxi I expected Nakusha but it was Arnav Raizada owner of Raizada industry.And Nakusha childhood friend he got out the taxi and paid the driver and came toward me and hugged me " it really good to see you Arnav yaar, I thought that uncle vivek and auntie mona where going with you " I asked him "yeh there were but there was a bit of business problem so dad going to next week. By the way where is my sweetheart she hasn't come to welcome me" Arnav said. We started to walking toward the house "Will se might be inside cry after the fight she had with boyfriend" I said as I said boyfriend Arnav face dropped so he like her that good I through. I rang the bell hoping it would be Nakusha how opens the door but it was Tina how open the door and saw arnav and scream and hugged him " OMG AR WHAT YOU DOING HERE AND WAY DIDN'T YOU TELL ME TOU WHERE COMING - Tina can we come in first then u can started this question it was a all fight" Arnav said. "Sure u can come in" she said and all he arm to the sofa and sat down with him. I smiled I didn't expect this reaction from Tina I hoped it wouldn't be Nakusha I came and sat in the sofa chair and said "Tina what did you call arnav just a second ago" "AR why bhaiya" asked Tina " what the hell is AR" I asked confused " OMG bhaiya AR stands for ARNAV RAIZADA and by the way omg stand for O my god" Tina said Arnav started to laugh. "Tina it late I think you should go to bed now" I said "if you want me to leave just say that and stop treating me like a child for god sake bhaiya im 19" Tina said and walked away. I saw arnav smiley and said "so where Nakusha" " she might be in here room" I said " kwl I'll go and meet her" arnav said and was about to getup "are you in love with Nakusha" I asked looked shocked and said " karan didn't you say Nakusha had a boyfriend and you asking me if I love Nakusha" " will yeah because I don't want Nakusha to ruin her life with dutta" I said "wait Dutta as Dutta Shiriram Patil" arnav asked "yeh you knew him" I asked "yeh I meet him in London a mouth back for a business meeting. He seemed like a nice person what the problem if Nakusha is dating him" Arnav asked "the problem is he is a gangster and I don't want my sister to ruin her life with him. He isn't worth her you are and he's 9 years older than her arnav" I said "and im 8 year older than her karan" arnav said " Arnav you don't understand she got kidnap and shot because of him and nearly died" I screamed out I told him what happen ten mouth back he was shocked to hear about and said "karan I do love Nakusha I loved her I have for along time and I am willing to anything for her" " that's what I wanted to here Arnav now some lets go and meet you friend I will show you here room" I said and gave him a hug. And we walked towards Nakusha bedroom I knocked on the door and said " Nakusha can I come in" there was no answer I knocked again no answer again I open the door and saw the room was empty . "Nakusha are you in the bathroom I shouted but no answer so I called Tina I saw Arnav looking confused "what the problem now" Tina asked as she walked out her room. "where is you sister" I asked " how the hell do I knew im not her keeper" Tina answered me back "why the hell didn't you tell me that she wasn't at home" I asked her " you didn't ask" she said and closed her bedroom door. "damn it where is she" I said "why don't you just call her and find out Karan" Arnav said I smiled and took out my phone and dialled her number "put it on speakerphone I want to hear I voice" arnav said her phone when to answer machine and the message played " HI THIS IS NAKKU- Dutta's nakku - dutta stop it im trying to record a message here -im only helping you Nakushhaaa- Baho just let Nakusha record the message- ok fine we will record it all together what say Nakusha- Fine ready Baaji- yeh sure nakku (all three) HI THIS IS NAKUSHA'S LEAVE A MESSAGE. I left my message "Nakusha where the hell her you call me when you get this message". I putted the phone down and looked at Arnav the look on his face showed that he was jealous and angry that dutta called Nakusha just the reaction I was hoping to get.

Nakusha's pov-

we got to Krishna dhabba it was a beautiful dhabba set by the beach with a out door do playing all type of music. I really liked coming her I was glad that Baaji decide to come that we come here and have dinner. We sat in our normal by the beachside table and sat down Baaji could for chandu he came and said hi to us before he could say anything Baaji asked " get started what on the menu today chandu" chandu pulled a face " Dhal, chawal, aloo ke parathe, ghosh curry, chicken curry, sabzi, palak paneer, kheer, puri, dahi, chicken tandoori, biryani, Dal makhani, Naan, Poha, Samosa, Bhindi Masala, Khichadi, Aloo Matar, Gobhi Aloo, Aloo methi, Kadai paneer, Dosa, Bajji, Pongal, Vada pav, Modak, Dhokla, Chaat.. "Bas kar chandu you knew baaji knew the meanu by heart then why do u always - Baho because Krishna bhaiya told me to keep the customer happy even I fell like beating the crap out of them" chandu said I couldn't help but laugh. "Well chandu u can beat Baaji up anyway hasn't paid me for the food he eat last time" looked behind and say Krishna coming towards us. Krishna came and gaved dutta and Baaji a hug and smiled at me asking how I was. Krishna was also came from a gangster background Krishna and Dutta knew each other since the where 5 years old. But he wasn't education like dutta he dad dint believe that he had to go to school so he didn't but he ran a business all thanks to he better half I couldn't remember her name. " so have you guys ordered yet" asked Krishna " no but will now chal chandu u better get your note book out, I want Gobhi aloo, dhal, puri, bhindi masala aur chaat that all" Baaji said " are you sure Baaji that going to be enough for you" Krishna asked with a smile and "what about you Nakusha you seem quite today so I see you haven't got rid of dutta yet" "I will have chicken biryani spicy wala and Krishna if you want to get rid you can " I gripped dutta left arm before I could finish off my sentence" lets get rid of him together" Krishna said joking but I didn't like the joke and said "Krishna don't joke about that I cant even - ook im sorry babe I didn't mean to upset you sorry" Krishna said holding he eye dutta and Baaji started to laugh "chandu I will have chicken tandoori and hurry up" dutta said. Chandu left after 30 mins he came back with our food Baaji attacked he food like he hasn't eat for years I couldn't help but smile at him. After we finished eating dutta paid chandu. Baaji want to go home because he was wanted to sleep, Baaji would be a baby at times we were about to leave when we hear a teenager boy started to sing of tune to he girlfriend Tujhe dekha to yeh jaana sanam Pyaar hota hai deewana sanam,Ab yahan se kahan jaaye hum, Teri baahon mein mar jaaye hum..
and got on hes knees and said simran I love you so much will you marry me? The girl nodded yes and he putted a ring on her finger and hugged her. " how boring and sad, the dude couldn't even sing" dutta said " yeh baho I thought that was a pair of cats were making noise " Baaji said laughing " shut up you to that was so romantic anyway dutta if you think you're a better singer why don't you sing" I said it bit angry that they were making fun of the sweet boy. "Nakusha baby I sang to you on the phone and you know im a better singer and have a better voice than that boy" dutta said with a smile "will proof it " I said with my hand on my hips. "you got to be kidding me Nakusha im not going to sing in front all there's people just forget it if u want I will ever you a can give you a private- o bloody hell baho don't start again" Baaji said "I knew it you don't really love me you said that u would do anything for me but u cant sing in front of everyone of me chal Baaji lets go" I pull Baaji hand I didn't even take a step when dutta grabbed my hand I hear music being played and started to sing...Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun
Tujhko Main Kar Loon Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun
Zindgi Ki Shakh Se Loon Kuchh Hasin Pal Le Chun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun .
dutta pulled me towards him I let go of baaji hand. Dutta took me to the dance floor I couldn't take my eyes off him. He carry on singing...Jo Bhi Jitne Pal Jeeyu
Unhe Tere Sang Jeeyu
Jo Bhi Kal Ho Ab Tera Use Tere Sang Jeeyu
Jo Bhi Saanse Main Bharoo Unhe Tere Sang Bharoo
Chahe Jo Hona Rasta Use Tere Sang Chalu.
Dutta he one hand on my waist and the other in my hand and started to move me around the music I didn't know he could ball room dance...Mujhko De Tu Mit Jaane
Ab Khudse Dil Mil Jaane
Kyu Hai Yeh Itna Fasla...
Lamhe Yeh Phir Naa Aane
Inko Tu Naa Le Jaane
Tu Mujh Pe Khudko De Loota...
Dutta twisted me around and putted his head on my shoulder and putted he's hand on my stomach I putted my hand. He slowly moved around with me.
Tujhe Tujhse Tod Loo Kahi Khudse Jod Loo
Mere Jism O Jaan Main Aa Teri Khusboo Odh Loo.

Jo Bhi Saanse Main Bharoo Unhe Tere Sang Bharoo
Chahe Jo Hona Rasta Use Tere Sang Chalu, Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun, Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun.
Dancing with seem like being in caught in a dream I was afraid if I blinked this dream would end...Bahoon Main De Bas Jaane, Sine Main De Chhup Jaane
Tujh Bin Main Jaaunga Kaha????, Tujhse He Mujhe Ko Paane Yaado K Woh Nazrane, Ek Jinpe Haq Ho Bas Mera.
Dutta twisted me around again I was about to fall by he caught me in he arms and pulled me back up and twisted me again and I ended back with my back to he front the locked he's fingers with mine. Teri Yaado Main Rahoo, Tere Khwabo Main Jagoo
Mujhe Doondhe Jab Koi, Teri Aankho Main Milu
Jo Bhi Saanse Main Bharoo, Unhe Tere Sang Bharoo
Chahe Joho Rasta Use Tere Sang Chalu..
Dutta turn me to face him and pulled me close to he's chest.. Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai,, Dhadkane Meri Sun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun.
Dutta putted he forehead on mine and sang the last lyrics and kissed my nose.

Everyone in the dhabba started to clap I didn't care for the first time people where looking at me being this close to dutta in front of so many people I just bring myself to look away from him. The pass few hour have been magical for me and him from the club to this moment. Dutta putted his hands in my hair and pulled me close so close that he's lips where right next to me but there weren't touching but yet still so close and said "Next time never say that I don't love you I can do anything for you even it means singing in front of so my people" I could still her everyone clapping "I love you" was all I would say dutta smiled and kissed me I kissed him back forgetting about everything this kiss was different to the one I had with dutta it was as lustful, hungry and passionate as there other but it was more deeper that other I didn't know how long we kissed the I felt a hand on my should dutta and I pulled at the same time. It was Baaji as ways "before you have a go baho this is the dhabba and your not in a room that I could knock and this time many people around looking." Baaji said looked around and saw everyone look at me and dutta. Krishna was smiley at me and dutta. Chandu was looking at the floor not making eye contact and the lady that came with her husbands had there hands on there eye's. I looked at dutta he didn't seem to be bothered about anything it wasn't like we did anything wrong. An old lady came toward dutta and slapped him across he's face and said " don't you have any shame dutta Shiriram Patil taking advantage of a girl you are a murder and now are u planning on become ra- eyyy don't you dare say a word against my dutta how the hell are you anyway your lucky that u are old or I would of sorted you out or btw what did you say take he took advantage of me how" I asked the old lady " what he did to you" the old lady said I don't - she means about the kiss Nakusha" Baaji told me I looked at dutta and pulled him close and kissed him again after a few mins pulled away and kissed him on his forehead and I grabbed his hand and looked at the old lady and say"he didn't take advantage of me I love kissing him" "your such a shameless girl doing that in public" said the old lady " what the shame in kissing the person you love I bet you did this when you where young the difference is that you did in privately and im kissing him in public" I said the old lady walked away and many customer I looked at Krishna feel bad that he lost he customer because of us. "Krishna sorry man because of us you lost your customer" dutta said. " don't worry about it dutta there will forget about it all I can say next time sing to Nakusha privately god knew what would have happen if Baaji didn't stop you" said Krishna and started to laugh with Baaji " btw baho I cant want to show aayi sahib this video don't worry I just record you singing not the kiss or slap" Baaji said I looked at dutta and smile " Baaji I want a copy of the and we should get going it late" I said. Dutta nodded and we said good by to Krishna and left for Mehra mansion. As we got in the Baaji went to sleep dutta took my hand in she kissed it I putted my head on dutta left shoulder.

SORRY NO PRE-CAP
Arnav Raizada
KRISHNA
Edited by alveera_rckz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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good one alveera,hope this AR won't create any problem btw tasha and make dutta teach him and karan a lesson for trying to spoil his relation with nakusha,and nakku should give less importance to AR and more to dutta and spoil karan plan.thanks for PM.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i hope nakku give any importance to ar and teach lesson to karan waiting for next as always

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