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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oye ok I read all but last part...imma read that soon and come right back to comment :)



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Am back...lol great updates...loving the story...the characters minus tina lol some reason not liking her 😆

i love D-N relationship...but u have yet to reveal exactly how they got together...u started that story but did not finish it!

continue soon 😳
Edited by daya0628 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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fab update dear
love it
so nakku leave karan's house and now gonna live with dutta amazing
thanks for pm

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oye ok I read all but last part...imma read that soon and come right back to comment :)



* Edited :

Am back...lol great updates...loving the story...the characters minus tina lol some reason not liking her 😆

i love D-N relationship...but u have yet to reveal exactly how they got together...u started that story but did not finish it!

continue soon 😳
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Not worry daya I will reveal exactly hw da got 2gether
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter 5

Dutta's Pov-

I woke up with Nakusha in my arms with her head was on my chest and her arm wrapped against me as best as she would manage. I hated seeing Nakku so upset last night I felt like killing Karan he had no right to slap her I couldn't help but think why didn't she punch him one punch and wouldn't have woken up for 10 days. Dutta flashback. It had been 3 month since I knew Nakusha and everyday I got to knew something new about her today was the day I go to check my accounts at my boxing club with Baaji I saw Nakusha car park in front of the club. "Baho that Nakusha car look like see has come to ask dev about giving her self defence class" "self defence class" I answer it bit surprise nakku want to have self defence class " baho Nakusha's used to take lesson in London but she wants to carry on taking them and what wrong in her taking him" asked Baaji I got out the car and walked into dev office and saw Nakusha having a argument " what do u mean u cant give me self defence class what the big deal I used to take them in London so why cant I take there u teach boys boxing so why don teach girls self defence" "well because da girls might hurt them self's after all I guy will be training u I think dev is right" I said answering her question "Baho I love u" Baaji said in panic voice "Whaaat?" "baho u just made the biggest mistake of ur life" he said in his panic voice Baaji was always over dramatic but for one he was right Nakusha didn't like the way I spoke " what did u just say dutta god I never expected this off u I mean of dev and Baaji" " hey" said Baaji " sorry Baaji no offence but Dutta Shriram Patil I didn't think u would have understand me about girl defending them self. She said in a disappointed voice " Nakusha it a fact " whatever dutta I bet I can beat u in a fight" she said wid a smile on her face " yeah right u wish I said " no dutta I don't wish but I knew I can beat u why u got scared of a girl look Baaji ur baho is scared of a girl like me" nakku said while laughing " fine if u want to look like a fool in front of everyone I will fight with u but if u lose" " I will never come her and bug dev about the defence class happy" Nakusha said like she had won the lottery " I will get ready and met u in the boxing ring Mr Patil". I looked at Baaji how was also smiling " what why are u smiling for" I asked Baaji "O this is going to be fun" I couldn't help but smile hell did what was the girl doing to me I didn't know weather to be happy or pissed off. After 25 mins Nakusha came to the gym wear a Adidas pants wid a Adidas tank top she looked so sexy damn it dutta what are u thinking force on the fight. I smiled at her thinking she cant bet me Im bigger and more stronger she gave me a smile back and stop in front of me and putted her hands on her waist " I bet I knew what u thinking Dutta that your bigger and more stronger than me" I laughed "that's a smart bet" she smiled back "that makes it difficult but not impossible I can use ur extra height and weight against you". I smiled this is going to be over before it starts really go head I said with a smile try to hit me if u ca before I could finish off the sentence I felt a blow on my face and thanks too the way I was leaning against a post I fall on the mat I hear Baaji screaming Nakusha name and tell her to kick my ass man Baaji is so going to die. I got up and tried to land a few light punch but she blocked me a few time she was good man she looked so hot while fighting after 15 mins I got into the fight but keeping in mind that I was training a girl Nakusha tried to land another blow but she wasn't lucky this time I continued to block her and then knocked her down on the mat. Man I felt so horrible but she refused to give in and jumped again hoping to catch me off guard she didn't. after several more failed attempts she stood up and held out her hands in a gesture of truce. "okay what Im I doing wrong man I cant even punch you damn it" she said in a heavy voice " your doing nothing wrong" I replied back she wasn't convinced "if Im not doing anything wrong id have rendered you unconscious by now" I smiled at her "unlikely. Your moves are all correct, but this is your first time your fighting a professional like me". Nakku shook her head and rolled her eyes and said " whatever show-off can we try again" I looked at the dusty clock on the wall "sorry no time have to go but we can try again on your next lesson see u tomorrow Nakusha" she had a big smile on her face. I started to leave the gym when a hear a battle cry I spun around grabbing her weight was nothing and threw her on the ground pinning her there. Nakusha groaned " I didn't do anything wrong!" my eyes looked levelly into her I couldn't give her a serious look instead I laughed " the battle cry sort of gave u away Nakusha. Try not to yell next time" Nakusha laughed and said "would it have made a difference if I'd been quick?" " no probably not" I said answering her question we started to laugh then all of a sudden she looked into my eyes it had just occurred to her that I was still holding her down. My fingers were warm as I had clutched her waist. My face hovered inches from her, and my legs and torso were actually pressing against hers. God she was so beautiful after a few mins Nakusha said "so umm' you got any other moves to show me dutta?" I smiled at her question and shifted off her, leaned back on my heels and got up. "not today maybe next time" I helped her up and she gave me a hug and said " thank you dutta so much" I hugged her back " your welcome Nakusha" from that moment I knew I had fall in love with a girl that will never love me I mean how can love a killer like me.

Present Dutta Pov.

I looked down at Nakusha how was sleeping I was wrong Nakusha did love me more than her own life and hell she got better at our self defence class she even beat me up it didn't help that she did it infront of my employers man I wanted to kill Baaji after I found out that he had CCTV cameras fitted in to see our class and more because he had all ways putted a bet that Nakusha will win. After Nakusha won she forced me to open a self defence class for girl and because of her many girl in patilwaila knew how to defend themselves. I kissed Nakusha forehead and she started to wake up.

Nakusha's Pov-

I often dreamed about waking up with dutta but after we got married well not all dreams can come true but mine will one day. "how long have u been awake? I asked him. My head was on his chest and I was wrapped against him as the best as I could. I looked around the bedroom to get a good view their was sunlight spilled through the window filling my I mean our bedroom gold. Dutta was watching me with hes dark eyes there were so easy to get lost "about 30 mins" I yawn " you should of gotten up and had some thing to eat" dutta smiled at me and said " I didn't want to disturb you nakku anyway there nothing to eat ive called Baaji he will bring us some food"... "man I feel so sorry for poor Baaji" I said looking at dutta "acha why that" dutta asked " well because dutta u have turn Baaji into a delivery boy last night u call him to get dinner and now to get breakfast" we looked at each other and started to laugh. I laid my head Dutta's chest and ran my fingers over he's chest then suddenly he caught my hand and with hes free hand he putted it on my cheeks and then moved down, tippy my chin up he brought his mouth on mine we kissed lightly at first and then the sweetness of the moment overpowered and then the intensity of over kiss had barely picked up when we hear the door bell ring . We pulled away from each other dutta cupped my face in in hes hand and placed he forehead on mine and said "That our delivery boy Baaji with our breakfast I don't knew about u but Im hungry so baby pleases get ready and come down I'll be waiting" I smile "I wont take long dutta" dutta kissed me again and got out the bed and took out a police t-shirt from the wardrobe and walked toward the door and open it and said looking back at me "don't keep me waiting nakku". and walked out.

Baaji's Pov-

I got a phone call from dutta baho asking me to bring breakfast to the beach house he build for Nakusha man I was the reason there got to know each other and now there always spending time together without me baho even spend he's birthday with Nakku and didn't even invite me will at lest I will get to see the beach house he got build for nakku. I got to the beach house had to say from outside it looked awesome cant wait to see it from inside I rang the door bell a few time after 3 mins yes I was count the mins baho open the door wearing a police t-shirt that dutta gift him. " acha howa Baaji that u came man Im so hungry" dutta took the bag of me and walked back toward the kitchen he didn't given invite me in man I was so pissed now I closed the door and followed him to the kitchen baho putted the bag on the dinning table and went toward the stair and shouted "nakku hurry up the food is going to get cold" nakku stayed the night man this was shocking new how did Karan bhaiya allow this I thought he hated the fact she was going out with dutta. Dutta had took a step to go upstairs but Nakusha came running down straight into he arms and hugged him she was wearing apple bottom jeans with a G-Star Resort T-Shirt and was about to kiss him on hes lip will I think she was about to when dutta said "look nakku Baaji has brought us breakfast" nakku pulled out of hes arms and came towards me and gave me a hug "Hey Baaji how are how and way didn't u come last night" Nakusha asked "nakku I would have but baho said he want to spend he's birthday alone with u so were going out tonight to sheliaaa". O crap I didn't relies what I had said now it was to late Nakusha gave looked at me like she was going to kill me and the she looked at dutta with the same look "What did u say u and ur baho are going to Shelia's dance bar" she said in a angry voice and walked toward bahu " so dutta Shriram patil is planning Shelia's to get a lap dance Shelia" I couldn't help but laugh both dutta and nakku looked at me man I was going to die today off Nakusha or bahu "no nakku she doesn't give lap dance she more of the strip dance" dutta said "HOW THE HELL DO U KNEW SHE A STRIP DANCER O MY GOD DUTTA DNT TELL ME THAT U before Nakusha could say anything dutta said in a panic voice "NO NO Nakku what u thinking is wrong Baaji talked me because he went out with her a few time" "BAHU U PROMISED ME U WOULDN'T TELL ANYBODY ABOUT THAT MAN NOW WHAT NAKSUHA GOING TO THINK ABOUT ME" I yelled great just great why did I just keep my mouth shut Nakusha looked at me with shocked looked and started to laugh with dutta and dutta pulled Nakusha into a hug. What the hell was going on "chill Baaji dutta told me every thing anyway were just pulling your leg do u really think dutta would dare to go to dance bar without me" Nakusha with a smile "so this mean were not going to Shelia's" I asked a bit disappointed "no were going" Nakusha said " WHAT nakku are u sure u want to come with us" dutta asked Nakusha pulled out of the hug and walked towards the dinning table and hold a knife in her hands and turn to look at me and baho while talking "will mr Patil and mr Patel if u both even think about going without me I swear I will not think twice to kill u both so are we clear" " crystal clear" baho and I said at the same time man I didn't want to die I wasn't even married yet. Nakusha smiled at us and started to get the unpack the food I was about to ask baho if Nakusha stayed the night or just came now when I hard Nakusha laughing " nakku have u gone mad" I felt a smack on my head "hey don't call my girl mad" dutta said dutta walked toward the table and started to laugh with her ok both baho and nakku have gone mad "Baaji I took u to get breakfast and what have u brought" bahu asked me "baho u said get breakfast so I brought flour oil and other stuff to make breakfast" I said "Baaji u "forget it dutta I will cook us breakfast anyway I love cooking" Nakusha said "fine I will help u" dutta said.

PRE-CAP: I never expected to get shot in my wildest dream but to die in the person arm you love was worth it if there didn't knew u love them.

Edited by alveera_rckz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
Reserved :)


OK me back ...

Great update...aww i thought that flashback was sooo cute...both of them boxing 😆😆

and haayee he likes her and she doesnt even noe it 😳

Present : lloved the flip in POV ...great part...loved Baaji's POV the best lmao strip bar 😆😆 and she gonna go with them ...haha

continue soon ...and speed up the flashback revelation lol


Edited by daya0628 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice update and precap is really interesting
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Posted: 14 years ago
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good work precap is really interresting .please update soon. 😊 thanks for pm and lovely update.
Edited by krishaa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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daya im not happy wid your reverved stop ples edit
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: alveera_rckz

daya im not happy wid your reverved stop ples edit


lmao dw hun i will de-res asap ...me going to read it right now 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: daya0628


lmao dw hun i will de-res asap ...me going to read it right now 😛

so u just want 2 be da first one to comment 😆
Edited by alveera_rckz - 14 years ago

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