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Posted: 14 years ago
#91
a real treat for weekend please do update soon and let tasha get married soon.
thanks for pm😊😊
Edited by krishaa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#92
ahhahahahhahahahhahah
Roflll

omg alveera

im laughing my ass off

bechara baajijitna bezat hua all at one side but this omg Boobby darling :P

hahahahhahhah

i ant stop laughing :P

this is awesome and Omg Dutta is too cruelll :P

and baaji kissed a girl

and Lmaooo dutta call karan kiran :p

omg i am happy he says my name but in sarcastic way :P

love it alveera :P
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Posted: 14 years ago
#93
wow what an update...love it

tasha always get caught and this time AS 😆
karan kiran great

poor baaji 🤣
dutta told bobby darling baaji is gay 🤣 always does all these things with him

thanks alveera for update and pm

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Posted: 14 years ago
#94
omg alveera jus read all the parts now...and damn ur an awesome writer
tasha r jus amazing
loved every single scne of theirs...bless em..their persona is jus amazing... nd naku is so bold .. very wel done
duttas singin was 2 die 4...1 of my fav songs uv pickd!! <3
lmao!! the latest update...baji nd boby darling jodi!!! haha poor baji phas gaya
omg he kissd ny random girl!!! LOL!! was it madhu...
aww tasha nt gna b 2gether 3 days!!! hope AR dsnt cause any probs...and all his plans go in vain nd hits him right bak!! XD
pls pls update soon..
cnt wait 2 read on
thnx 4 all the pms
sory i comented so late...jus been b it busy so cudnt cum on IF 4 long...but nw i wil defo make sure im up2 date :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
#95

Chapter 16

Dutta Pov- the plane had landed I looked at Nakusha how was sleeping holding my arm tight and her head resting on my shoulder I smiled and kissed her forehead whispered in her ear " wake up sweetheart we have to get out the airplane and I have to get caught another flight". "Hmmm k lets go" Nakusha said and we got up and walked out the airplane hand in hand. As we came out the arrivals side and I saw arnav standing there great just great first I through I would have a nice fight to Jalpur but after seeing this Moran arnav I doubt that. "This has to be the worst day of my life" I whispered to myself " Hmmm? Did u say anything" Nakusha asked "na look Hitler has sent a bodyguard for you and a hopeless one I mean come on man I bet he punch's like a girl" I said while laughing. "Acha why don't you ask him for a match and see if he punch's like I girl" Nakusha said while laughing. "Acha Nakusha ji so how are you going to be supporting if there is a match me or arnav" I asked her " Karan Bhaiya" "WHAT how are u going to support karan if arnav and I are in a fight". I asked her confused she smiled at me and came and stand in front of me and putted her arms around my neck " because if you ask arnav for a match bhaiya might ask you to fight him so I have to support my brother and anyway I know no one can beat my dutta btw you knew I would be supporting you no matter how you are fighting in a match". and then rubbed her nose against mine. We final got out the check point and walked toward were he was standing " hey nakku thank god you make this fight" arnav said with a smile on he face and gave Nakusha a hug and smiled at me while hugging her. " what a freak he getting happy over a hug when I get all the kisses I through. " yeh I would have but I had dutta with me" Nakusha said pulling out of the hug " yeh so did u have a nice fight" arnav asked " yeh it was more than nice" Nakusha replied back and just then we hard an announcement for Jalpur fight "Nakusha that my flight I have to go" I was about to walk towards the Jalpur Departures gate when I Nakusha grabbed my hand and said " don't I get a hug good bye" I smiled at her and pulled her into a hug lifting her up off her feet and whispered in her ear " I will miss you so much but you take care of you self and don't go wondering off to the forest you always talk about wait until I get back then we will go together" " I will try not to go there dutta but I cant promise anything and I will miss you so much" Nakusha said I putted her now on her feet but she didn't let go of my neck and placed a feather kiss on lips and said " I love you Dutta Shiriram Patil" I kissed her back and said " I love you too Nakusha Mishra Mehra" and pulled her into a hug and looked at arnav and winked at him "so see you in 3 day and arnav stay away from my girl" I couldn't believe that I just said that Nakusha looked at me confused I started to laugh "it was a joke yaar just chill" Nakusha lightly punched my arm and arnav gave a an angry stare. I gaved Nakusha another hug and kissed her on the forehead and walked into the departure gate.

Arnav Pov-

Nakusha wanted to see dutta airplane talk off after 45 mins the airplane took off and final we made our way to mount hill. " so what is today function is it today" Nakusha asked while looked out the window " will today is the engagement and the sangeet other stuff I don't know about then the wedding so I bet you have brought a full suitcase filled with clothes am I right Nakku" see didn't answer back I looked at her and saw that she had when to sleep. I smiled at and carry on driving after an hour I got bored and putted on the radio and my favourite song was playing ole ole ( http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3Zs7srwaA24&feature=related ) I putted the music up total forgetting that Nakusha was sleeping in the car and started to sing when a voice cut me off and start to sing the next lyric in the song " Koi Maane Ya Na Maane, Main Hoon Aashiq Aawara, Main Deewana, Mujhko Chaahat Ne Maara, Ye Chikne-chikne Chehre, Ye Gori-gori Baahein, Bechain Mujhe Karti Hain, Ye Chanchal Shok Adaaye,, Mujhko Mili Hain Ye Bechain Yahaa, Likho Khayalon Mein Kahani Yahaan". She started to laugh maybe a had a stupid look at said I didn't expect Nakusha to sing the lyrics to this song. "man the look on your face is priceless I mean come on this is your favourite song arnav I still remember in 94 you all dress up as Saif Ail Khan on your 18 birthday and dancing just like him with you girlfriend it was total awesome". "Nakusha how many times there won't my girlfriends just my mates" I said remember that day man it was the best day of my life getting kissed by 10 girls and that in one night. "Yeh right whatever you say I mean friends don't kiss on the lips and that with 10 girls" Nakusha said with a smirk on her face " will I have to say you got really lucky after sing that song I mean making out with each of your girl-friends in one night I bet you didn't have any fantasy after that" I smiled and said "no I still have one and I hope that come true anyway how can you be sure what you saw that night was true how old were you 9" " yeh Mr Arnav I was 11 ok and I know what I saw" Nakusha said. " ook , ook im sorry didn't mean to get you all worked up. Nakusha can I asked you a question if - sure- I never expect you to know the lyric to this song as far a can remember you always had a go at me for listening to so how o so its all thank to me you know the lyric" I said with a smile. "you wish arnav if I knew the lyric to this song it because of dutta he was listening to it on his shower radio and I told him I didn't like the song first he through I was joking. Then to get me to change my mind about disliking this song he took me to one of nightclub and got me dancing on the song with him and since I just cant stop myself singing the lyric when I hear it". man why did this dutta have to come in our conversation man I hated him I didn't say anything after that Nakusha started to laugh. "Why are you laughing like a crazy person" I asked her a bit confused she smiled at me and said "it just funny I just realised you and dutta have da same taste" "Yeh you right that one other thing" I said in a whisper "did you say anything" Nakusha asked. "no, but look were finally here welcome to Mishra mansion Nakusha Mishra Mehra" I said she smiled and got out the car before I could warn her. " Nakusha Stop" I screamed out she stop and looked at me and just then a bucket or wet red gulaal fall on her from the roof soaking her wet ahhh she screamed she looked up " THAT WHAT YOU GET FOR COMING LATER NAKSUHA JI" meera shout from the roof . " ACHA MEERA KI BACHE YOU WAIT TILL I GET MY HAND ON YOU. AND YOU she turn around and looked at me with fire in her eye I WILL GET YOU BACK LATER AR. YOU JUST WAIT AND WATCH YOUR BACK" meera started to laugh when Nakusha said that to me maybe I was scared to hell "MERRRA IM GOING TO KILL U Nakusha shouted and ran in I saw meera also run away out of sight on the roof maybe trying to hid from Nakusha good luck I said.

Nakusha Pov

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I ran inside soaking wet in the red gulaal I saw meera run toward her fianc Veer and hide behind who started to laugh and said "yeh Nakku is this a new style of patilwalia that us poor Simla people don't know about" everyone started to laugh with him and meera was laughing so hard that she had to holding her stomach. "Hahahahaha very funny veer Im sorry but the wedding is off because im going to kill you future wife" I ran toward were hard was standing but meera got away I we ran around the dining table and the living rooms sofa's and then meera ran toward the stairs to her bedroom I followed her breathing heavily as I was running behind meera I bumped into something hard and lost my balance and was about to fall when I was pulled into someone arm for a moment I felt I was in dutta arm's but then I remember he when to Jalpur I pulled away and saw a sardar standing in front of me he had a beard and was wearing a black turban and black Panjabi suit man he looked damn hoot what the hell Nakku what's wrong with you, you cant think about like that except dutta. "O be careful kudiye we don't want a sexy girl like yourself to get hurt now do we" he said and then he winked at me. "WHAT did u just say to me and how dare you wink at me you Moran it all the same with you guy you see a girl or chance marna suro" I said in a angry voice. " That not kool ji I mean I saved you life I have the right to flit with you" he said with a smirk on he face "you have no bloody right whatsoever and btw you just save me from falling I don't think I would lose life for falling a few steps" I said back to him. "so I take that as a yes on the flitting bit he moved close to me and say you didn't have to say a big speech all you had to do was nod I would of understand" I couldn't believe this guy " listen you Moran - Hey, hey Nakusha chill yaar his only joking with you" Veer said and came and stand next to the sardar guy. "anyway Nakusha meet Armaan Singh my best man for the wedding" Veer said with a big smile. Armaan smiled back at him damn he had a sexy smile wait the hell is wrong with me. "now the wedding is going to be really amazing" Armaan said looked at me taking my I swear he was checking me out I felt a hot feeling go through my body I hate my self for how I was feeling. "what the hell are you looking at" I asked him in angry voice "o nothing ji just a hot girl all wet in red gulaal" Armaan said in a smirk. I didn't say anything back and walked off toward meera how was standing on the top of the stair and holding her eyes " Sorry Nakusha ji" I smiled at her and pulled her into a hug.

Veer Pov-
After Nakusha went with meera to her room I looked at Armaan how had a big smile on hes face just then arnav walked in and said " is it save to enter" " hey man it all save she's made up with meera but I doubt that will happen with you like she said watch you back" I said to him. " hey I know man but im dead afraid what she will do I mean she been hanging out with the worst kind of animal that passes it self for a man the last 16 months - 18 months and 3 weeks Armaan said. " WHAT" arnav asked confused " nothing he just joking you must be tried after that 4 hours drive go and rest and I will see you late this evening" I said he walked pass me and Armaan giving him a dirty look which Armaan return back. " come on I will show you your room before you start another fight with someone" I sawed him the guest bedroom and walked in he walked behind me " so this is your room do u like it DUTTA SHIRIRAM PATIL". I looked at him and saw him take the beard we started to laugh and said "dutta you have had crazy idea but this has to be the craziest". " na this has to be the best idea I was about to enter the plane when kala tai called me saying the land deal was dealt with so I a paid for a private helicopter and came start here so surprise Nakusha but how can I miss a chance like this filting with Nakusha- yeah dutta but she doesn't know that it you - yeh that the fun bit that Moran arnav also flits with her but she doesn't notice but I saw the look she gaved me after moving away from me she trough I was sexy and hot and she was really didn't like it that someone was filting with her except her dutta" dutta said with a smile on he's face. "yeh dutta lets say while you filting with her what if she fall for this Armaan then what" I asked " will I knew my Nakusha she will never fall for anyone but me anyway if she does fall for Armaan is dutta after all" dutta said with a smirk on hes face. "anyway dutta im off I have to get my clothes from kaya I'll see you later this after and please be nice with Nakusha no more pissing her off". I said " hey Veer you stay out of this don't get in my and Nakusha way" dutta said with a smirk on his face.
Pre-cap i couldnt belive it i got kissed on the lips but not from dutta. and i enjoyed it wat was wrong with me how could i let someone else kiss me
Edited by alveera_rckz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#96

awesome one alveera and great precap so she kissed armaan(dutta)and felt guilty nevermind dutta trust her.good one thanks for pm and a lovely update please update soon can't wait to see dutta flirting with nakku.😉😉

Edited by krishaa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#97
lovely precap nakku is only fall for our dutta in any condition
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Posted: 14 years ago
#98
amazing
awesome update dear
love it dutta in role of sardar love that plan of his
veer and dutta's talk cool
poor arnav now arman is there
thanks dear for pm

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Posted: 14 years ago
#99
its awesome dear i managed to finish reading all the parts and was really amazed by duttas character i wonder what he is up to now. just cant wait for next part
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Posted: 14 years ago

hey alveera u oki :)

am so sory 4 the late comment [agen]..
i read the update on the same day but had 2 go off as soon as i read it so cudnt coment nd l8r on its hard 2 coment get wel lazy lol
nywy ur update was superb!!
i loved it all man
spesh the last scene
i so knw it had 2 be dutta [sardar ji i mean] spesh wen naku felt she was in duttas embrace...
cnt beliv naku stil hadnt realisd it was him tho...evn tho he was in disguise...
but i loved how she dant-ing him...calling him all sorts lol
jus shows how much she is committed 2 dutta nd if any1 luks at her like dutta does she wud nt tolerate such behaviour..
bet dutta ws more den glad 2 kno dat ... after all he knowsbout AR...
cant wait 2 see wot hapens nxt nd how naku finds out its dutta...
sooo excited
thnku 4 pm
pls pls plsss do cont soon...wil be waiting vri impatiently...xoxo

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