Painful Rapture thread 1 chap-1 ~p 1~ 37 - Page 95

oh my gawwwd sounds ominous

'Aa bhail mujhe maar', phir bappa ko bulao naku has all the wisdom in the world when dealing with everyone except the man with a short fuse. Boy o Boy! major is too touchy, naku was not far from truth by any stretch when she complained, major lacks a sense of humour n is silly at times. oh come on brvv every one is cranky when they get up in the morning ..upar se she lapses into song...
Looks this time he is not just barking😆. The cold war begins, only divine intervention can save naku. well i mean SHE DID go a bit far ,zayeeda freedom of speech ker diya ! hummmh ..ab tera kiya hoga nakusssha!
Naku nandi ko chalaye bina nahi chodegi😃, ziddi PT ke saat phas gayi nandi. Luv the friendship of the two n their convo, typical for two females who share n care. Naku evidently not elated at Harshad's dismissal but hoping that he will find the right path n reform for good, she is made for this profession, born healer of suffering mind n bodies except it doesnt work with her man

haaa bold...yess nandi ko chaleya gi tu naku lagan lagaye gi apne sher ke saath...oops given a clue ...yeah you're right Naku ke mental massage sab ke saath except the lovable gadhera!! see mulkes ,are none to be stubborn ..now which one of us will give him a sugar lump ,carrot or BPL!?

Major with a foul mood in the firing range. After wounding naku's feelings he is all set to spit fire at the OUTs. But as always our dearest of all Khan the oriental swan steals the show n major's attention too. Its as if major is here to see through khan achieve her goals n the rest, go to hell!!
Taaliya taaliya! khan madam will not miss a single challenge, bull's eye! but sorry dear no surprise for me😈. 😆😆😆😆HAAA hai hai mirchee uff mirchee😉hammie loving this feeling gives me a devilish kick...oopps not the word! kahi kick butt na ho jaye hammie ka ...me already sprawled on the floor on a sore hind! marcy brv!

Gosh! AS ill n PN in a tizzy. Baji at his wits end calls naku for help instead of major, it speaks volumes. Baji n naku playing passing the parcel except here it is passing the buck of informing Major. Finally naku with the dreaded task is all set, setting foot in the lion's den.

😆😆...haaa,true ..well said! jaane de militant

Naku is hit where it hurts the most, she has the worst day goin for her where now she has the misfortune of seeing what she sees. Ab naku pagal, bhootni dikne lagi hain, what a fall from grace, indeed! no you imagine camou tin helmet on head ,giving him the wide , large doe yed look! gremlin I would say haaa...
Naku did well to give him back some of the crap that she was taking, the basanti- veeru dialogue just added fuel to fire, grt going girl! 👍🏼luv to see someone stand up to his autocratic ways.

Major should know the difference between a cheap mms on the sly, courtesy Harshad n a live display of physically compromising position of him n khan irrespective of his intentions n the degree😒. How i wish he gets to witness such a thing of naku n then let him try to remain calm n composed. Its not that naku is suspecting him but it is just not digestable. I hope naku has in her some strength to take this cold war to its logical end. my word brv whose side are you on? me majja of course! ohhh he knows naKU is not likely to get into such a middle ..erhh she can at he dera ,but fat chance of him seeing it...so some win some lose!

Thank u Hammie ji! for the lovely update, its time for Mission Impossible n looking forward to it, for now, this is me, this is the back of me.🥱...oyeee what's that face suppose to mean? ..i bore you now? thujhe neend ah rehi hai ,tu ja mare kamre se...😡...aur jab tak dil milne ke liya betaab na hoi tu mera kamre mein wapis maat ana naku!!!

hi my dearest naku... waise is daffa tu tune ne kamal ker diya ..itna pyar ..listen hammie cannot contain it ...bas itne he kehana hai..tera note ki wajah se ..or persuasion se there have been new friends pressing like and commenting on my FF ..I pmed you also in this connection...your remark came at a time when it was most needed as there was a concurrent news of LTL finishing ..so very prophetic message ..now all FF,OS,VMmakers will be motivated to keep our thread active ..so tu star hai naku⭐️

aai unwell worried but i think it gave our love brids a chance to meet , naku caught dutta red handed with khan , man thankfully she is jealous ,her comment made dutta more angry coz actually he never doubted her ..they may meet dekhko kya hota hai?

next part sound interesting dutta & naku attending aai sahab time to be together

hammie ur ff is like reading a novel i just go by the flow ,u r truly gifted

as always you are amazing 😊😊plz friday koh UD karna already excited abt it ,enjoy the snow & send it here dear ,enjoy weekend tc 😊😊 khatam ho gaye the snow use din...ab mild hai for december..but outside have to wear a parka jacket and cord jeans and ankle boots!

message for the silent readers ...some of them have spoken on my FF because of you!

i know lot of ppl who visit the forum regularly but never log in ,guys its a request to all of you'll our ff writers & other vm creatives put lot of hard work ,you all enjoy it but never acknowledge their good work ,why is it the clicks exceed comments ? plz press like all the creatives deserve it ,my group in particular who have been watching ltl1 visting the forum regularly & read ur ff regularly but never comment ,plz gals i 'm not going to message u any futher plz press like & hammie will send u a pm ,

HI hamlet

yeah chaal adher ah aur gale lag ja ...

and nakku not to happy withe her sautan 😆😆 naku tu bas haat laga de, tu us pe bhi narazz dunno what he woman wants? mujhe pagal ker deya hai tu dutta tu waise he short witted hai

ah poor AS ,,she fainted due to diabaties 😭 and baji a;ll frantic he is so adorable ,,,and wanted nakku to tell the news in person,,, ek teer do nishann goood going bajji way to go

baji never lets go of any moment to push them together..pata nehi he'll make a break through on this one!

and nakku had to reach whn saab was ahem ahem guiding khann omg the green eyeed monster reared its head and boy we have sparks but major replied well ,,he didnot react this way with harshad's pic ,,hmmgud one major saab...nakku needs to think faster than reacting hehehheeh loved this update hammie thnsk for takingus thru this journey of major saab

luv u ,hume tumse pyaar kitna me too still humming 😳

Good update👏 Firing range's session was good. Waiting for the next part. Thanks for the PM😊

Edited: so welcome back ...my jal pari! missed you saach mein.. wondered ke mujhe se kya khata ho gaye ke tum gaye? 😆 cheesy phesssy! no jokes apart tera comments i missed. the lambhe wale...by he way you evil conevil aurat you should tell our Forum friends ke tune kitne chapters miss keya tha and then you had to catch up ..I bit tune theekh se read bhi nehi kiya hoonge now that makes me maddd😡

here the contrast between dutta and naku was very evident ...

but as usual dutta's rude tone...which makes me appreciate nakus tolerance alwayz...and her unconditional love makes me so possessive about this couple that I just cant see a hint of anyone else b/w them...guess you got the point 😉

Loved nakus reply a lot ...that she didnt wanted to come at D's work place but she had to...*sherni*

And hopefully Dutta will go to patil niwas soon...and so will naku ...😳 we'll see ...AS does'nt need more hassle!

Update soon ...Lots of Love 🤗

Loved all the ups...😳

I want to thank u for this wonderfull FF. The command u r having in describbing the minute details is incredible. i am silent member of this forum but from first part i am following ur FF . Every time i thought to reply u but i can't as I can't put it in the words to describe any emotions. This is for the first time i am trying to post this msg. I think ur born writter... words come from ur pen in a smooth flow I want to read ur FF again & again u can say it kept me hooked to u always waiting for ur UD.

I want you to give us ur UDs regullarly. dont know how? ...as per yesterdays news.

Once again thank u very much for this amazing FF. & want to know that if ur writting any other FF.

rolling around on the floor ..super haar kutte ke ek din/haaa

oye tu mujhe kutta bole ..ja now rinse your mouth dirty gal..yes ma'am i know every dog has his day!

waise was talking to some one yesterday ..about what oscar wilde who said ..."women are to be loved... not listened to"...so dutta should... in one ear and out the other to her gyan's and do what he's gotta do! chumma! haaa