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-bharti- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yep! posted my delayed comments at the reserved spot, hammie dearest.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago


My Name is Khan aka Hammies Jaan 😆
Will edit this spot shortly
and stop glaring at me hammie I know im Dead 😆
Edited:
gosh doing it after a long long time...
Whenevr i start reading a book...ive got a habbit that after reaching midway ...i run to the ending part just to ensure myself that all is well in end...haha...though I try to control my habbit a lot...but uptil now unsuccessful...
For somebody like me reading so many updates in a row was a revishing treat...when im too eager to know whats in the next part
even now whenever i start reading an ff i stick to precaps first...lol...okh enough now moving on
Firstly from the previous ups as well ...im loving this Dutta romancing chunni a lot...even more he does with naku ...What A Crazy lover *dreamy*

Secondly...Harshad ...Glad his nonsense was not dragged ...poor guy...aik chori ki...and caught so soon..😆
okh on a serious note...I guess his presence and his dialogues like I will show you naku how a young man can love
were a real pain to ears...Wish He had seen a demo what actually dutta was capabale of *devilish grin*

Thirdly ...apparently it should take the first place..My Baaji is back *dinchak dinchak*
Roops and baaji...hmmm...few things never change...lol...so are they...kids

Dutta back to work...Instructor...are the OUTS able to concentrate...I guess nO...Blame the man
Wish I had any Instructor like him...The attendence would be perfect...otherwise im alwayz complained regarding short attendance😆

LAstly..*Cough Cough* KHan *No comments* or hammie already has her hand on the trigger *FIRE* 😆


NAkusha...why are you so plain stupid..
Hitting him where it hurts the most..I know she was joking but ermm with that unpredictable MAn
ANd Dutta had taken a vow that he will not touch naku again...I fear he will fulfill his words
for somebody like him whos stern and stuborn and above all a man with strong commitment and self control *biting nails*
Excuse me...what a time to introduce this track. hammie ...when i came back *desperately searching for my gun* 😆

NAkus take on Harshad being redundant was so like naku..very well in character
the convo between nandi and naku ragarding harshad highlited how mature and sensible she is
God knows where did she left it when was talking to major early morning

Majors sessions with the outs even in the previous ups have been very interesting
once again a very detailed and well informed approach😊

So Dutta landing in the firing range with a foul mood...courtesy Naku
and here comes the ever phamous KHAN hiting all targets with a bulls eye 😆
I know you have asked me to leave her alone...par kia karon I just cant resist 😆

AS and her fainting spells...i tell you this one person who is by far the most in character 👏😆
I mean ...Realy...what consistency Lady...😆
and finally naku got a chance to visit dutta at his site...but what a wrong timing*kismat*

Now if there first argument was not enough..My baby naku grow up!!!
Naku comments regarding khan were really cheap ...I know girls are possessive...but Hold on lady...you have gone through such a big incident regarding that pic...which if was not taken in a sensible way as dutta did...would be enough to spoil her life forever...
here the contrast between dutta and naku was very evident ...

but as usual dutta's rude tone...which makes me appreciate nakus tolerance alwayz...and her unconditional love makes me so possessive about this couple that I just cant see a hint of anyone else b/w them...guess you got the point 😉
Loved nakus reply a lot ...that she didnt wanted to come at D's work place but she had to...*sherni*

And hopefully Dutta will go to patil niwas soon...and so will naku ...😳
Update soon ...Lots of Love 🤗
Loved all the ups...😳
Edited by Warda. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Warda.



My Name is Khan aka Hammies Jaan 😆
Will edit this spot shortly
and stop glaring at me hammie I know im Dead 😆

Good one Warda! yeah, hammie's jaan eating our jaan incessantly.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: brvr

Good one Warda! yeah, hammie's jaan eating our jaan incessantly.[/QUOTE]

@bold...true
Shake hand brvr...time to team up 😉
hammie you know we are very sensitive when it comes to Tasha😳
Bhavnao ko samjho 😆

Edited by Warda. - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
ummhhh.ladies..brvv and warda ..I have noted your sentiments towrds 2nd lieutanent Khan...as Far as Major Dutta is concerned ...
he Is looking coldly at you two civilians and he parts his compressed lips " since you two have expressed an opinion , Iam compelled to tender my reply, that any hostile remarks towards my Out will not be tolerated,and I protest severly .May I remind you that Officer Khan is a budding officer with many professional skills that show immense promise. With regards to any other skills she may pocesses ,I have absolutely no intention in pursuing them". ... with that Major Dutta narrows his eyes , lowers them as he slowly looks the other way... and walks off towards his apartment ...
Warda ,thank you for the lovely painting/etching o MK.. HAI made my day!
xxxhammie the elbow bent by two militant ladies! saaadd case writer
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi hammie, though i was silent reader as brvr mention we should appreciate u all ff writers we visit this forum just because of u or 2 get any news of mishal i not only love your writing but also addicted to it.u r an awsum writer.love u all but lazy 2reply waitng 4 the next what major dutta will do but have an idea AS is ill a week holiday of major best time 2 get them marry.
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi, Hammie,
I want to thank u for this wonderfull FF. The command u r having in describbing the minute details is incredible. i am silent member of this forum but from first part i am following ur FF . Every time i thought to reply u but i can't as I can't put it in the words to describe any emotions. This is for the first time i am trying to post this msg. I think ur born writter... words come from ur pen in a smooth flow I want to read ur FF again & again u can say it kept me hooked to u always waiting for ur UD.
I want you to give us ur UDs regullarly. dont know how? ...as per yesterdays news.
Once again thank u very much for this amazing FF. & want to know that if ur writting any other FF.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem update chunni major good jodi and n akku jeaLOUS OOPS POOR AAI sahab faint love this baaji and nakku saw dutta khan and major is right when he doesn't react in harshad matter nakku also has to trust major
hellooo tamanna
thanks for standing by me😉,and stiil reading about the adventures of Major Dutta...bas major badnaam hoa chunni tera liya .ooohhh chunni re ,ohhh chunni re!...naku ke tu mood upar neeche he hote hai har waqat ..I think he's best with chunni! about trust you are right!
xxxhammie...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hammie aagai ...mein aagai...haa chal let me get straight to it...
oye announcement to tu aise ker rehi hai papayaaa,jaise olla olla..boombast ker de gi.haaa ..spare me!
Omg that man and his chunni ...bagawan yeh dono ki jodi salamat rakhe ! substitute ...chunni badnaam hui ...darling major ke liye :P haaye entagled in each other...major is having fun haan ...hmmm...
its called vicarious pleasure,talk about being innovative.the man is it!
ROFL aagai aagai ...tears aagai ...haaa me too was thinking come on where are you...i know ur waiting to stroll down ...sniff sniff ...waterworks...hmmm we shud collect her tears make a little lake...name it after her and then Major and take his chunni and go for a swim in her tear...dwell some more in her
she is a smart kuri ,she knows where all else fails the water works! so tried and tested besides he likes a douche in the saline waters of her roona dhoona!
ahhh haaahaaahaaa haaa ...Major will not lay a finger on his lady love...may all please lend their ears and take note of this precious moment ...Dutta has vowed to not lay a finger on her...this is quite serious...heehee...I would also like to announcement about Dutta's substitute, chunni, becoming his only way to grope and choke her, Naku has serious competition :P
well me to worried he has said it ..now he'd better carry out the threat.
Both at work Naku and Nandi's bit was lovely and well our Major seems a little irritable... growling at all...foul mood...am sure we all know why ...hmmm Khan's test with a weapon...and his watchful eyes...
humhh ,its no surprise that hammie writing this section..guesses why any body ,now now didn't want your jhottis in response...
Oh jagdambe jagdambe ...the mother of all has fainted :O gosh she has quite a few medical issues...hmm...
loved tera mother of all bit daya ..haaaha, pun yes she is not well ...
Oh my poor baaji...feels horrible and Naku is going straight there haan...hmmm...this should be interesting...she is looking gorgeous in her red saree even the officers dropping her think so...haha ...if major knew what was going on in their minds...
well ,i think she goes with some nerve ,or rather is kind of unerved for thre is never a dull moment
Well well well our Major knows Khan is first class...thats always good :) now as for the pushing her to see target, aim and shoot and helping her himself...I thought this would set something on fire for sure.. omg i just tried picturing Naku wearing a helmet LOL...defo agree with Major...haha ...hmmm so madam is getting jealous with his closeness to others in his line of work huh...rofl he is sticking to his word no way is he touching her...no problem for him ...chunni hai na...
ohhh chunni re oooh chunni re!...yaar itne bhi kya insecurity hai Naku ko, mind you heart throb tu haina us ka saab...sweeto ,innocent little kabutar! no not naku ..dutta!
Oh argument...I like...good for testing their relationship...well Naku getting jealous at the scene was only natural...she possesses right over him and even if it was nothing...the fact that witnessing such a sight isn't really pretty or easy on the heart ...of course seeing was only natural to assume...but of course that remark wasn't exactly showing her trust in him ... I guess in the steam of a fight minds tend to illuminate the wrong ideas... OOOww ouch he brought up the picture...must've smacked her in the face lol...accha...their fight was good well written...now she tells him the news and he so wanted to grab her shoulder and say WHAT...but no man who sticks to his words...will go home and sort it with that chunni na :P haha ...
haaa nice line daya..😆...personally i think he's not in the mood! hope he doesn't shred it to bits!
Precap seems promising...waiting for the next part...enjoyed it hammie...really did...wonderfully written as always ...good progress...thank you for wonderful read...love it as always...now see you back in pms :P

oh daya papayaaa .koi baat nehi je ,you are welcome je..ache tum hum chalte hain je!
ooppps listen thanks for your lovely comments ,,always awaited upon.xhammie
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey hammie

how are you dear?😊

ah finally after a long time i get time to read update

fabulous updates dear👏👏

last tree - four updates ah very long time

so finally nakku told truth about pic to dutta and about harshad

harshad in jail what he deserves too but poor mum dad of his who did a lot for him and he did all that sad

nakku still cares for his family and never thought bad of his and his family

Major finally got a chance to lash him and he did very badly

baaji being a friend and bro always there for them

tasha's fight

AS fainted very bad

officers admiring nakku

baaji told nakku to go to meet dutta and break news about AS personally but what all this bring... dutta told nakku that he didn't say anything about her and harshad pic...big blast...knew khan gonna bring something in tasha's life and here we go lets see what's next

wonderful updates hammie

thanks for pm's dear

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