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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ushankitvc

a superb updt... a understanding and responsibility in all relations dutta has... be it with baaji, nakku , sethji or her mamaji ... lover his interaction with his papa's photo... superb updt... luved it to core... superb writing... looking frwrd fr the sagai and after that... updt soon...

thank you for your lovely comment, yes largely see him a shrewd, and stoic man,who by his trining in the Army has a zaero tolerence attiude to all activities out side th boundaries of the Law or governance..I guess tht is understandable,howee he is also capable of moments of compassion and does seem to have the fer of God in him as well...thanks for your comments xxhammie
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: krishaa

hammie so update after along wait and a lovely update.loved dutta concerned towards baaji and the love he show for all.

loved sethji and dutta conversation.
ohh dutta eager to meet nakku amd her neglegence to his request loved te line about hone wale pati ka order and his talks with mammaji serious one well writtten about a father's pain.thanx hammmie now waiting for sagaai part please do it soon don't take too long.thanx for pm and a lovely update.update soon.😊
thanks for jimmy cricket and your great comments pal ..also pleased to know that you enjoyed the update ..I told you there were bit and bobs DUtta had to sort out ,like Baji's mess .so delay in saagai but iam going to start work on it tommorrow .xxxhammie

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey hamiee🤗i have edited my spot ...thanx🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: krishaa

hammie so update after along wait and a lovely update.loved dutta concerned towards baaji and the love he show for all.

loved sethji and dutta conversation.
ohh dutta eager to meet nakku amd her neglegence to his request loved te line about hone wale pati ka order and his talks with mammaji serious one well writtten about a father's pain.thanx hammmie now waiting for sagaai part please do it soon don't take too long.thanx for pm and a lovely update.update soon.😊

thanks for jimmy cricket and the positive comment,pleased you enjoyed it saagai ,next ,will start work on it tommorrow ...xxxhammie
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi hammie...

Sorry sorry..kaan pakad ke..that i have not been regular...but i have been keeping an eye out for the FF for sure...lovely updates and taht too weekly basis...haye my days of doing tht have so long gone...now a days i am struggling with wht is called a writer's block...if we still were using paper and pen...then i would have been a major contributor to global warming by wasting a Quinta of papers...

Sad but that me!

I just love the way u descibe the smallest things be it nakkusha's dress or dutta's expression...great work...

See u soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Nice update, 👏PN wasis understands the stand taken by Datta for Baji, law should be reaspected first, very well put. He understands Naku's mamaji's pain trys to ease it a bit by asking him to meet the Brigadier, that was very nice, liked this update. Waiting for the next part, thanks for PM😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
Just caught up with the previous DUJI episode. It is awesome, Hamlet, something that I have always wanted to see.
Baji crying his heart out for 'Bhau' .He did not require even a moment to chose his friend over his love.. .such is Duji Dostana and Dutta rushing to baaji's rescue. I am glad that he took Roops along and things are looking up for ROOBA.

Sorry for the late reply. Have been very busy at work lately.😊

Will catch up with the latest episode and write my comments later.



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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks for the lovely update, Hamlet.👏.
First Dutta and Baaji. DSP is a man of principle and commands respect from all. I am happy that he could get Baaji to attend the sagaai celebrations.

Baaji crying in Dutta's arms was really cute.😊 Liked the scene at the bar where Maj. Dutta is having a drink and missing his best friends company. Naku understands the reason for his despondency when she walks in.

Tasha moments were brief but good.

Dutta is sensitive to a father's loss.The heart to heart talk between Dutta and Mamaji has resulted in the much required bonding between the two.
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi hamlet ,i think i 'm short of adjective your writing had left me speechless ,loved every part of it ,interaction of dutta with shetji &,mamaji specially his deceased father , you just keep on suprising us ,inteha ho gai intezar ke dutta or naku ke sagai ke 😊i know chori ka sher hai i can't be as creative as u 😊you want to create high point maximum trp ,you always get maximum so waiting for the sagai 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana19

Reserved 🤗Will be back


Hey dear Hamiee
First of all Thanx alot for the wonderful Update yaar ...Loved it ...i truly did...It was about Baaji and Dutta ,,,Some small moments btwn tasha ...and Dutta and maamaji ... so it was great yaar👏👍🏼... thanks
Wow so dutta is going to prepare for his enagement and everyone gone help ...😉... in charge of his affairs
Loved the Bar moment btwn Tasha ,,,,was just superb ...missed baaji though ...
I really loved the small moments btwn tasha throughout the update yaar ...its not always about mushy ...but the understanding and the love they share ... yes love is understanding between two people
Awww Duji convo bought tears to my eyes ...Baaji is sad that he can"t be part of the cermoney ...and he dnt expect dutta to stand for him either ...coz dutta is man of principle but with a golden heart ...He took a permission from them ..and baaji will be there ..a important part of Tasha "s life ,,,great ..⭐️
Awww he was missing naku ,,and looking for her ...and can"t see her before they are hitched ,,,Restless major ...the way he goes and tells her open the door ...😳...loved that moment .,,, fauji turned Romeo!
Dutta and sethiji part was good too ...😉 hero worshipping!
Dutta remebering his father and the convo with maamaji was very well written 👏,,,,, loved writing this bit
Thanx chaz 🤗Its actually a very small word ...For the hard work and dedication u put through ...U deserve every praise ...👍🏼 suhana ,I am humbled by your comments
Will wait for the Nxt part Eagerly Yaar ,,,,,But u take ur time
thanks for being understanding ma'am
...will wait for it THANKS for the bling bling thankyou su
Lots of love and hugs
suhana🤗


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