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Posted: 14 years ago
first of all thanks for a long update :-)
loved reading it...another brilliant update :-)
haww...my guess was right...ganpat had come for this rishta news...
i loved duttas chidhood memories with ganpat ... :-) and awww this chotay saab name...love this name for dutta as a child though...now hes only nakus saab :-)
and this Harshad again in picture...oh i could never guess that he was related to naku from Dera...and it was totally unexpected that he would be the guy nakus baba had choosen...
Loved it how throughout that whole process dutta remaind so calm...truly an army officer...whos fully in control of his emotions...and didnt let them over shadow him...this side is brilliantly written...flawless hammie !!!
Oh the way he showed that it doesnt matter...loved it how he stayed normal and didnt reacted at all...first think and then react !!!
and ohh naku thinking that he isnt happy to see my dad ..silly girl :P
Baji ...awww...he is my sweetheart...after dutta ...lol...loved his happy go lucky nature...its always atreat to read such light hearted scenes:-)
the way baji wanted to disclose duttas relation wid naku was too cute...and duttas reaction was even more cuter :-)
but ram sensed it that the girl was naku...smart man ...impressed!!!
and OMG dutta blushing thinking about pregnancy...i felt like pulling his cheeks...hes so cute :-)
thank God naku cleared everything regarding her marrige to her dad...and glad that she stood up for her descion...thats my true sherni...Shabash Ladki* in duttas style* lol

i really liked this gesture of naku...that she agreed to work for Dera though its a small town...but loved it how she bowed down to Gods will and kept her dads words...though im feeling a bit sad that she will shift from PN ...i hope she doesnt moves before dutta is recovered...

and dutta boy missed the second opportunity with AS ...though his side of story for denying any such relation makes me sad...awww...i mean in real life as well ...it makes me wonder how do these officers mothers and wives live with this fear...truly it needs a brave heart to accept this fact that this person owes himself to this country first and then his family...
and i loved how in the end he cleverly turned the tables towards AS "aap kia chahti ho" ...how innocent *devil* ...lol
and coming to my favourite scene...*faints faints*...lol
aww...the way naku came to him just to share her pain with him...very well written... :-)
and the way he pacified her...in Srushti's style " can i have him pls "😳
loved the soliders advice...and the way he iinterrogated...my God not for a second he gave the hint that he already knows everything...
and the way naku talked so authoritatively to harshad...just like dutta...it was too good...and even harshad has sensed something b/w dutta n naku...good for him...he better stays away now...rest he is already familiar with duttas hot headedness...lol...akalmand k liye ishara hi kafi hota hai...:😆
dutta missing hand massage...pani parh gia aaj armano pe 😆
the way dutta was damn sure naku is lying about saying yes to harshads proposal ...loved his trust on naku...blessed couple 😊
the last part is heavenly...dutta in white kurta...i can imagine how divine he looked...and that song...ahhh hammie you always pick out my fav numbers 😊
and tasha really need no confession at all...they are just meant for each other 😊
waiting for the next update eagerly...pls update soon...dutta back to work at GHQ...looking forward to it 😊
Sorry hammie my comment is way too longer than usual...might sound boring *maafi for that*
actually i normaly read full updates and write comments with memory...but this time i read it all...and then again read it in parts and simultaneously commenting...
gosh its 3.00 A.M here...now me off to sleep ...Lots of love 🤗
Edited by Warda. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Edited my spot , hammie dear 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsem waiting for next as always
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Posted: 14 years ago

Very nice update, 👏👏Duty comes first, then everything else, very well written, thanks😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
loveeeddd it like always great update ,you are very creative & waiting for the next update ,plz isbar jaldi update karna 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey hammie

awesome update like always

love it

so dutta concluded two main points and both are right but he doesn't show his feeling to others army mein hai naknows how to hide truth
nakku so she reject marriage proposal and harshad poor guy have to bear nakku's angry better than to bear major's
ah so major very cunning person he knows each and everything but behaves like that he knows nothing sardu waiting for her and when she comes weeping asks her what happened wah re kya style hai sab kuch pta hone ke baad bhi anjaan...pehle dusre ki baat ko acche tarh se suna ki us ke dil mein kya hai then apne haal batao if thinks right time
ram kya advice de kar gaya hai lagta hai thoda amal toh kar liya hai thoda baaki hai as he confess his love to her and major is shying after hearing ram's wife condition
major is teaching her would be wife and present lover to say only few things not all and then teasing her about harasad proposal and nakku lies but major knows more than her itnne jaldi nakku ke baare mein sab kuch jaan gaya hai and his sentence goli se udda duga haila possesive lover kya pta iss ka sachi mein na kuch karde...terrace scene fabulous


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Posted: 14 years ago

@ Hammie ……Priya has Landed to meet Major Shaab .

Salam Namaste….. How r u …I see Major is doing fine ..infact very good , in while he confined to Rascal …..This is the amazing thing of his personality ….Never say never .

But Now ..Now With entry of Ganpat …I see red .

U know ..its SIL and FIL usually have uniquely funny relationship ……Its becoz both love the same Girl ………..For the FIL she will always be Daddy's lil girl and the Guy a intruder …….no matter how good the guy , he always looked at with raised eyebrows …….

But here ……….the situation is diff …..acc to be FIL ….. The guy is too good to be true ……..so FIL settling for a non accepted option .

OMG! Love is working its wonders …..Dutta is so scared of losing her …… he so much in love with her …..that he thinking incase he dies in combat ….what will happen to her , if they r married .

U fool , Major …when u loves someone u l.ove everything that comes with person …or nothing at all …….that's what naku has done …….she loves for u r n d what u r ….. Duh ! This boy .

Naku cries in his amrs ( awe )…….U know however independent a person ……..There will always will someone they turn to when times comes ………its then one understand what the other means to u .

Wow At last the confess ….. I Thought ….Its would be like " Did not u understand , woman"

Dutta ……why do not u tell AS ….tell her . ( slams my head ) ………Listen to ur friend, Smart boy …. "shai bol raha hai .su le tu"..

Nd Harsh , boy ….u r no match for Major Shaab ….so run till u have time …….

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Btw ..Hammie ...R u a Derawali ...

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: scorpio10

@ Hammie ''Priya has Landed to meet Major Shaab .

good gawd !!!!!! heaven help majja Dutts.. ohhh priyaaa ,he'll be singing!
Salam Namaste'.. How r u 'I see Major is doing fine ..infact very good , in while he confined to Rascal '..This is the amazing thing of his personality '.Never say never . oh yes mard ka baacha hai with Sher ki qualities..grrr.

But Now ..Now With entry of Ganpat 'I see red . oye ganapat ne goli khaney hai kya?

U know ..its SIL and FIL usually have uniquely funny relationship ''Its becoz both love the same Girl '''..For the FIL she will always be Daddy's lil girl and the Guy a intruder ''.
no matter how good the guy , he always looked at with raised eyebrows ''.
No match for Dutta ki theerchi nazar jo kar de panjer!

But here '''.the situation is diff '..acc to be FIL '.. The guy is too good to be true ''..so FIL settling for a non accepted option .

OMG! Love is working its wonders '..Dutta is so scared of losing her '' he so much in love with her '..that he thinking incase he dies in combat '.what will happen to her , if they r married .

U fool , Major 'when u loves someone u l.ove everything that comes with person 'or nothing at all ''.that's what naku has done ''.she loves for u r n d what u r '.. Duh ! This boy .

Naku cries in his amrs ( awe )''.U know however independent a person ''..There will always will someone they turn to when times comes '''its then one understand what the other means to u .

Wow At last the confess '.. I Thought '.Its would be like " Did not u understand , woman"

aaah lekin mau se phir bhi nehi bola gadha! action...action!

Dutta ''why do not u tell AS '.tell her . ( slams my head ) '''Listen to ur friend, Smart boy '. "shai bol raha hai .su le tu"..

Nd Harsh , boy '.u r no match for Major Shaab '.so run till u have time ''. pata nehi shall i bring a twist!

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Btw ..Hammie ...R u a Derawali ... yesss Punjab!

thanks for making me rock with laughter .🤣 with the feed back priyaaa

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hammie i de-res p.28 😆 sorry sorry i took forever ...but am here :D
Edited by daya0628 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
@ daya 😛thanks for your lovely feedback... well glad you enjoyed the update..
yess Harshad is back? ihave not started the next chapter though... mental glitch... waise you are a busy ladyyy! outing? but thanks for updating WOL ,iwas in the middle of the kichen scene enjoying when Igot a call from Pakistan which lasted for 1 hour and a bit... its 11.15 GMT,here but Iam hell bent on reading the part you have updated cant wait for tommorrow... xxx hammie🤗
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