FF Deewani#2 Ch 43, pg149, DISABLED

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mIsHeZ.x

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1071

tinks chk my coment on shes like d wind ;-)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1072

Oh ma days u der already...😆😆

It better be gud lol😛😛😛...I'm gonna check it in a bit, gotta run, need to make the chappatti's lol, and I wanna read and comment on the comments all at once..😳😉

luv ya n I hav missed u like hell ma girl🤗

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Iridescence

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Posted: 14 years ago

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E D I T E D :
Tink ...mein aagai...finally

"Have I told you I ache" - i will answer NO you have not haha (thats for Dutta) heehee ...love the title again and as always perfect :)

Dutta feels that he is growing weaker with her love...she ain't gonna stop loving him and he needs to get that through his head! ...

OMG so this legal mess I have guessed will involve Madhu's help and Dutta is actually thinking that the punishment would not bother him basically makes no difference to him

This is probably because he feels his biggest problem with accepting that Naku has forgiven him is because he got no punishment (according to himself) for what he has done and of course I can understand that for he feels responsible for what happened and actually expected her to hate him yet it was not what he thought which actually makes him feel unworthy of such a lover ...so he is so desparate to keep away and she on the other hand is not willing to let go of him...

poor Baaji hearing D talk like that upon giving news of long term imprisonment...tough man to hear such dejected responses from your best friend...especially for the character of Baaji as he like lives for his bhao ...

Oh god KALA! She is smart though...it's true his weakness is Naku and to break him completely she needed to get rid of Naku ...and of course she decides to get rid of the car brakes as well ...argh...

you know I always felt that her hate for Dutta was really like extra...and for someone who thinks so logically ..i mean very smart evil witch, but she can't seem to see that Dutta was not at fault for her father's death it was his father even if it was over a fight for D ...but if she loved her father really wouldn't you want to accept the person that your father had clearly loved and lost his life for if thats the thought...I never seemed to grasp her hatred...and above it all he like gives gives and gives for them and they just want to make his life a living hell -_- ...anyway enough of my ramblings ...moving on :P

So Naku wants to go to temple (Gaon Devi Mandir) and she has still not recovered the full heart to meet her bappa again either...but its clear her faith is still in line and in a way she knows that.. Naku although she can't seem to reason with why such things would happen...she also knows deep down that it happened with reason ...whether she can accept it or not...

Madhu - Dutta scene...just amazing...loved their little connection to music and how as soon as he noticed her face upon her memories flooding back he actually went into his soft mode and was being that brother she wanted...and that her father longed to get back ...
the realization to Dutta that the man who claimed to be his father and who he hated and didn't want a relationship with had a quite different relationship with madhu...one that was more fatherly than dutta would've expected from the man he knew him as...it just goes to show that people make mistakes but its important that they learn from them and make the best of it...turning it all around...

ok the song ...lol great song choice I could tell u were right it was a bit off but it doesn't matter the impact was there na :) ...I loved the convo Dutta had with himself. It goes to show that he has indeed thought about all this before and it's like he wants to accept it and doesn't either and he's finally knowck some sense into himself...especially loved the part where he questions himeslf "bura laga ke maine naku ko 'apni Naku' kaha" the guy cant stand it...and here he was all like go ahead live with someone else and the mere thought of that genreates only anger...and TaDa after all his fighting within himself he has made the wise conclusion that indeed him without Naku is NOT possible ! So he vows to no longer keep her away wohoo finally but as I did have an inkiling...that this car and brake was going to come in the picture now :P

So Naku decides to walk instead to temple and Dutta takes the brakeless car and I guess if this following the story to some extent and accident or something is bound to happen and I did expect that this reunion of theirs will not be soon...so will wait to see what you have instore for their eternal love story and what will come of this situation ...

great update Tink...loved it as always ...love you lots...take care...phir milenge chalte chalte

Edited by daya0628 - 14 years ago

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mIsHeZ.x

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1074

Originally posted by: tinkerbe11

Oh ma days u der already...😆😆

It better be gud lol😛😛😛...I'm gonna check it in a bit, gotta run, need to make the chappatti's lol, and I wanna read and comment on the comments all at once..😳😉

luv ya n I hav missed u like hell ma girl🤗

lol d coment is not actualy about d ff...

aww ikno its so gud 2 be bak bbe

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Yuvika

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1075

Originally posted by: tinkerbe11
Chapter 37 - Lol slap him...who will dare to do such a thing?!! main hoon na😆

Chapter 39 -Oh damn...I so should've dedicated this one to you man! I knew it! But I thought you wanted something a bit more dhamakedhar dedicated to you lol, so that's why I saved suttin for you, dunno how ur gonna end up liking that now. yh u shud hav, wen i read dis i was like what it was meant 2 b my dedication... bt oh wel as long as u make up for it...lol...

Yeah the designer stuff enhances her character a little, and her gifts will play a small but sweet role towards the end of the ff lol. hmm is tht a hint tht this ff wil b ending soon?😕😭 But yeah I do reckon her character had a lot of potential in the show, but they really did waste her. ur damn right dey did...bt in da DN thread her character gt mre role n development...r u reading thm updates? u shud...naku is preggy in dem😳
As for the hygiene it's kind of weird that you commented on that actually because I was going to actually do something totally different regarding that point, so Tink thinks you not gonna be too happy wid me there. wt did u plan 2 do?

jus read a bit of ur new update...it seems madhu wil b 2 da rescue wen it cums 2 helping her bro with the legal issues as she is a barrister bt 1 ? madhu studied in london, so is a barrister der...law in england n india r dif, n so is da study, wnt tht impact her ability 2 fyt da case for dutta?😕

Edited by Yuvika_15 - 14 years ago

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P. K. Rathore

@tinkerbe11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1076

Originally posted by: mIsHeZ.x

lol d coment is not actualy about d ff...

aww ikno its so gud 2 be bak bbe

Check out ur reply there lol...😛😛

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P. K. Rathore

@tinkerbe11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1077

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

jus read a bit of ur new update...it seems madhu wil b 2 da rescue wen it cums 2 helping her bro with the legal issues as she is a barrister bt 1 ? madhu studied in london, so is a barrister der...law in england n india r dif, n so is da study, wnt tht impact her ability 2 fyt da case for dutta?😕

Yes mastermind Yuvi...😳...Madhu will cum handy. And yess i have defo thought of the fact that she's studied in London, but I thought I'd allow that one blooper knowingly as I'm not aware of the Indian laws much anyway, I won't be able to elaborate on it. So let's give that one a miss lol, but I do know that there are barristers that have a practice out there in India as well as London, so it has been done before. But speaking honestly I'm gonna adopt the brain of cv's here and make it all up..😆😳

Aur kuch...😛