FF:Benaam Ek Rishta||discontinued|| - Page 41

Originally posted by: Sophia21

omgg omgg omggg cliffhangerr... dats meann!!!! muhahahaha soph learnt da cliffhanger trick 4rm u😛😆😆

awesome update.. hailaaa its still on chapter 3???? ha luk who talkin ey?!?! missis das all ur influence...ur so lazy wen it cumz 2 updates..u stil hvnt updates RKN n da oda 1 wich i cnt rmmba d nme 4...tink u updated lyk las yr o suma😲 ...

Awww Nakku finks hes handsome.. well he will think shes pretty if he actually looks at her.. can u make his stare at her? loool nywyz u fikar not tasha LS todi si chalu toh hai...but u wil defo get lots of tasha 2 luk 4wrd 2 l8r...promise😉😆

aww Dutta bleeding? Hailaaa.. i hope she takes care of him n feeds him.. his arm is hurt na? hehehe ..!!wel wel wat els can u expect 4rm naku eh😉...ahem ahem...

Update sooon :) wil try..but its dayas turn 2 update n il b waiting 4 her 2 send it me so i cn edit..so u can jus harass her now lol😆😆

Originally posted by: kiran255

benaammm bach gaya badnami say ! LMAO!!!! so true!! even if i hav 2 say it myself!! HA HA HA

But main kaise bacho ge ! NO chance bby!!! tumne mujhe itna taang kiya now its my turn!! Muhahaha...

amzing updateee ! Er Realy bbe😳

i sooo love it Gee thnx chik😳

and Mishelz what an amaizng work im impresses ...tbh i actually thought it wasnt that gud..cudv made it beter but den it wud hav been a realy realy long update...

if that writers block works so weLL . i wish u get more like these :P: hehe *missy blushing*

hehehehehehhehe

OK will comment when get time :D okay bbz wil be waiting...but u got a long update so me wil be waiting 4 a rely long wala coment..acha😛😆

Love ya ... love u2.x

and @Tink

oyeee mujh ko mat tar pao :P ...awhh bless dekho abho to usne bhi upd8 kardiya..so bby enjoy

Hey mishe,

Finally update . Waited for so long . But u given at last beautiful update .

The concept is total different here i like it . Just loving this ff . Both naku dutta don't like this marriage and they r acting so nice concept . 👍🏼
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But i have one request for u . Any way u have shown that naku also don't like this marriage unlike typical naku who always runs after dutta , falls hard for him and craving for his love its routine and boring . 😉

Anyway Dutta is so handsome any girl will stare at him only nothing special .

To make the story interesting in this ff please make dutta first attracted to her , fall hard for naku and love also first dutta should love her first deeply dutta should run after naku since the begining just like in the show how we have seen naku after dutta .😍

Hey In simple naku should be stiff somewhat like typical dutta and dutta should crave for her , run after her .

Hey mishe If iam asking too much sorry this is my request only . If possible only I love to see tasha roles in reverse 😊.


And one more request is don't bring the bloody hell sups again in to the ff please . 😡

Coming to the update as i said concept is quite different and interesting .

ha ha naku's way of thinking is just like me . 😃

I like these lines , literally laughing . love naku's thinking.

"I am not Nakusha Ganpat any more, I am Nakusha Dutta ShriRam Patil now. God even my name feels strange and alien to me now, like it doesn't even belong to me" 😃

I really wasn't in the mood of bumping into him in the morning, in fact i actually didn't even want to go downstairs and act like the perfect bahu!! Argg bahu my foot..! so much like me love u naku . 😃

oh my god naku already falling for dutta no naku please yaar don't fall over him so soon be stiff yaar, make him fall after u .

and at the breakfast baazi noticed naku looking lovingly at dutta and blushing , oh very good baazi helping in tasha's love and relationship .

Love u baazi and sofa scene is hilarious crushing literally between both .

Dutta confirmed that naku also don't likes him and he is relaxed but baazi 's words arises a doubt in him .

Last scene dutta with bleeding hand ok now ? . Now naku will attend him , he will be attracted to her .😉

because of baazi or accidentally bring some scenes between them so that dutta will fall for her , attracts to her .

Superb ff . Enjoying much . Waiting eagerly for the next update .😊

Swapna.

Originally posted by: eternity_of_luv

great update dear...glad u enjoyd it honey

love it cheerz bbe

so it means naku have slight feelings for dutta ....wel abit bt evn she dsnt kno it yt..o mayb she dsnt want 2...but its stil 2 early yet...der alot more 2 cum...x
baaji love him doing and talking all this...aww u like it...hehe ikno wanted 2 keep d chirpy baji but wit a lil twist


lovely update dear and thanks for pm...ur welcum and thnx 4 d lovely coment😳

Originally posted by: tinkerbe11

Well 1st of all u updated ! god if I didn't know ne better, I wudda thought u were building the eight wonder of the world loool...

ohh tinky thnku u jus gav me an idea...mayb now i can actualy do somethng useful 4 1ce

omg she pulled d duvet ova her face to block d sun out, dat is soo me..., although I wudn't b blockin d view of Dutta subha subha lol...hehe me2...nothng can wake me up haha😆😆

n d way she memebered her maiden name bein changed, dat must feel kinda wierd 2eveyone lol...except Punjabi's !! , but god duz Dutta's name sound goood man.. omg das so tru!! wel most of d time ... punjabis hav singh mst of d time so dsnt rely mke ny diff...inih soundz sexcii dsnt it bbe

oh man y cudn't she walk in on him in d bathroom..., dat wudda bin a wicked touch lol. damn!! tink i shud hav shwd it u b4 posting!!! but ukno wa bbe i wudv had d best bit...sinc id be writing it so all imagination n...*CENSOR*

"His lean body was really stiff, as i looked up i couldn't help noticing how handsome he really was...those perfectly carved features and those...What the hell!! What am i thinking! Oh well...there is no harm in accepting the obvious..."

no Naku der isn't ne harm in acceptin d obvious hun, in fact he's actually soo gud at being a buff ting dat I'm bloody surprised dat he ain't bin carved in wax by Madame Tussauds loool...

hahaha iknooo!!! if we can accept *ahem* it all *blush* den she has a right!!

"so called suhaag raat!!"

Well lets face it hun, der Suhaag raat wz prob a lot better den d one we got on screen lmao...omg!! dat rely was d worst 1 ive eva seen...spesh since they wer bichre hue lovers...as if they wud act like dat..erm more lyk active-less...*CENSORED MY THOUGHT* LOL

u know afta readin so many ff's sumtyms I wonder if d 'infamous drenched pallu' shud hav bin patented 2 Ayi Sahib, or Babi, but den I fink 2maslf can ne one even shed more pointless tears den Babi lool, even bechari AS don't cum close lool...mayb they shud hav a category in d awards 4 bahaaing d most ansoons lool...hehe...ahahaha they can tke part in GWR!!! im damn sur babi wud win!! but AS wont b far off!!

hey I wonder if u guys can elaborate on a flashbak scene or suttin, 4 wen Dutta's rishta was taken round Naku's manor...dat wud b nice 2c... hmm gud idea...actualy dis wasnt in our plan sinc it a 'short ff'..but wil defo try 2 fit it in OMG I JUS HAV A WICKED IDEA!!!!

n Baji n Naku's friendship u know I'm a fan... awww me2!! they r soo cute 2gether...in a frndly way...jus clarifyin in case any1 wonderin els wer LOL

n hahaa Baji wants 2 play cupid between tasha lol, I wud luv 2c cupid's arrow bein shot in Baji's ass lol, js so he can experience exactly wot it feels like to be a 'pain in d ass'...hmmm mayb be wil...*missy in deep thoughts*

ok readin on n seein Baji's attempts 2 bring dem 2gva, rly duz seem annoyin lol, I can so imagine Dutta ready 2 box him one..., n poor Naku, she's gonna b sun burnt if she blushes dat much lol...if her face exceeds a certain temp den she's in 4 BP high..., n den even Babi's soaked pallu wont even cum handy, tell Dutta 2 cool her down wid his super cool touches lool... ewww tinker i jus imagined babi putin her sloppy wet pallu on nakus face feelin her temp...yucky! i bet u can actualy hav a shower wit it!

oh AS finks her son is irresponsible, aawww no, the geezer's jus heartbroken AS, dats y he needs spcl attn not...silent treatmen Baji...

i was gona add bajiss convo der aswel ..lyk propa baji ishtyl wil lots of nautanki but d updates alredy long so chnged my mnd lol😳😆

n oh my days Mish...u had 2 bring in wot u luv best innit...d medical attn...nice touch...so 'u'...but one ting dat surprised me is dat 4 once Dutta weren't actually involved in bloodshed, dis tym d pour soul was helpin one his workers...n got injured...aaww guess Bappa knew dat Naku wz sittin at yard, ready 2 bandage him up lol...dats y he membered AS n came bak 2 his manor instead innit... INIH!! its sooo not fair dat daya gets 2 do the actauly bandage part!! i jus love loveee dat part n tel every1 2 write der version of it lol wich am sur u must hav noticd by nw haha😆😆 ... but my c my luck...she gets 2 do it...oh wel il hv SR l8r...woops beter shurrup otherwise nva kno wa els my slip out of my big gob 😆😆

n wow Dutta is 'not hungry' agen lol, how typical, dis guy reminds me of d Budha lol...he's d perfect example of survivng on one grain of rice per day loool...literally...

geez even i am very curious about his 1 bite diiner scnez...btw i also wonder...the big boy has a shower everyday right...but hw can he wen he's hurt...on screan i mean..ukno wen hes hurt wit a bullet n everythng...

n omg I wonder wot Dutta's gonna say to her...???!!!??!! u no dat dat poem/song u wrote at d bottom I thougt dat was dat song 4rm dil kya kare wen I read it first...bby so do i ... cuz evn i dont hav a clue dayas got my thinkin cap lol😆😆

n bout d poem...no lol i got off net..u wont beliv me but it frikkin tuk me ages lukin 4 1...n i stil wasnt 2 impressd wit this 1...it wasnt exactly d thng i was lukin 4...k il tel u now dat it alredy posted..i was lukin 4 anoda poem so i can put it at start...suma wit lyrics similar 2 'a ray of hope' or 'suraj ki pehli kiran' suma like dat jus 2 begin everythng afresh...😉😳😳 n at the end i wantd a poen dat mean suma lyk 'do diloon ki bechaini'...suma lyk dat..btw all des lines r mine...but cudn find a poem wit similar meaning...😡

n btw babez it shud be us thankin u 4d long update lol...at least we got suttin dat wz long enuff 2 cover d month's soona pan......n hun its k 2 hav errors lol...we're not computers...yet......aawww das soo sweet of u bbe...ikno i cudn jus giv u all 1 pge long update...u guyz rely deservd a long 1 afta bein so patient [wel kinda in u exc ppls threats etc *cough* kiran *cough* priya*...]

well dats 4now, seeing as it's Superwoman doing d nex update I can bet it'll be sooner den a month lol...well update soon girls. oh n Mish btw I luv ur personal commentatin in between the story lol...holds ur character nicely in ur ff... wel wel superwomans not as super atm LOL sinc she wont b abl 2 updat until she gets her laptop bak..but sinc i cnt wait dat long...il mke sur u all inc me wont be tarap-ing ...aww thnx hun ..gald u liked it...wasnt sure whether 2 put add it on not..tried 2 resist but [me being me] at the end cudnt help it lol😆😆😆

bye gals...

p.s. I hope u enjoy readin my crap lol...

aaahhh bby ukno ii luv it now itz ur turn...enjoy mine.x

Nakusha Basu or Ganpat..? :S

Originally posted by: Suvi7884

Nakusha Basu or Ganpat..? :S

eeek!!! thnx 4 noticing d blooper lol

Originally posted by: mIsHeZ.x

eeek!!! thnx 4 noticing d blooper lol

but wer my coment...

ooopz i 4gt..jus rmmbered..am not ment 2 b tlkin 2 u ryt...

u do english assignment and i give comment haan? june isnt here yet