New FF*Till Death Do Us Part*THE LION RETURNS Pg15 - Page 9

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi divya :) soo glad u caught up with this ff too....and could feel it just the way i wantd u too! Next part kal soo be ready for dutta darshan ;)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sophia awww love ur profile pic soo much duji look adorable! I was waiting for ur rply lol u r fine with baji roops pairing? Arre yar plz na kaha karo! Hak se kaho aap sab ka hukm sar aakhon par :) dutta darshan in nxt part and his rentry in part 5 so smile plz....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi divya :) soo glad u caught up with this ff too....and could feel it just the way i wantd u too! Next part kal soo be ready for dutta darshan ;)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey nice update dear..............
so baji n roops gonna marry soooooooooooon..................nice n
feel bad for tasha...............but i salute👏 naku for her love towards dutta.....................it was pure............looking fwd................

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: blueopal

hey nice update dear..............
so baji n roops gonna marry soooooooooooon..................nice n
feel bad for tasha...............but i salute👏 naku for her love towards dutta.....................it was pure............looking fwd................

Glad u enjoyed this one too...............Yaa baji roops pairing cool naa?😊😛.............Hmm me too feeling bad that my story is making u all sad😭..............But then like u said.............it portrays how strong a woman naku is............unlike what's been shown in the show..........................😡
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Posted: 14 years ago
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NS stays in the car while naku gets down and goes up the stairs reaching the main hall of the temple………………😕

The cool breeze blows across her face…………….AND SHE COULD HEAR DUTTA WHISPER TO HER-----MAIN WAAPS AAONGA………………

The wind made the bells in the temple collide with each other and make noise……………….AND NAKU COULD FEEL DUTTA WATCHING HER!..............Moving towards her…………as she could hear his footsteps too!..................

The sky above was brightly lit canvas by the stars and as naku stared at the dark night …………….SHE COULD SEE DUTTA SMILE AT HER!.......................😊

And as the clouds moved and the moonlight fell into the whole place lighting it up……………….NAKU COULD FEEL DUTTA OPEN UP HIS ARMS TO EMBRACE HER!......................

Yes…………….this place where nau last saw dutta………………the place where she lost him………………REMINDED HER OF HIM EVERYTIME SHE WALKED IN!..................

ALL THE FORCES OF NATURE SEEMED TO ASSURE HER……………….that her love………….her dutta sahib was fine…………..and AND SOMEWHERE waiting to unite with her……………….

ALL THE FORCES OF NATURE SEEMED to know……………..THAT ONE DAY THE TWO LOVERS WOULD MEET………………and NAKU WOULD FIND ER DUTTA…………………and dutta would get his naku…………….IN LIFE OR IN DEATH……………….ONE DAY THE TWO WOULD BE TOGETHER AND THAT TOO FOREVER!..............😳


The cool breeze blows across her face…………….AND SHE COULD HEAR DUTTA WHISPER TO HER-----MAIN WAAPS AAONGA………………

The wind made the bells in the temple collide with each other and make noise……………….AND NAKU COULD FEEL DUTTA WATCHING HER!..............Moving towards her…………as she could hear his footsteps too!..................😳

The sky above was brightly lit canvas by the stars and as naku stared at the dark night …………….SHE COULD SEE DUTTA SMILE AT HER!.......................

And as the clouds moved and the moonlight fell into the whole place lighting it up……………….NAKU COULD FEEL DUTTA OPEN UP HIS ARMS TO EMBRACE HER!......................

Yes…………….this place where nau last saw dutta………………the place where she lost him………………REMINDED HER OF HIM EVERYTIME SHE WALKED IN!..................

ALL THE FORCES OF NATURE SEEMED TO ASSURE HER……………….that her love………….her dutta sahib was fine…………..and AND SOMEWHERE waiting to unite with her……………….

Taking a deep breath and letting the air refresh her………….Naku walks around the temple………..and as u see flashback of the scene where dutta had gone around the temple for the parikrama……………u see tears well up in naku's eyes as she recalls it all!...................

She wishes…………..If only SHE HAD NOT LET HIM GO THAT DAY!...........If only she had not insisted him to go around the temple that day!...............IF ONLY HE WAS THERE BY HER SIDE TODAY!.....................IF ONLY………….LIFE RETURNED HIM TO HER ONE LAST TIMe!...........She won't let go off him ever again………………….😳

IF ONLY………….(naku slows down as she is about to complete the round)………….IF ONLY IT WAS HIM AND NOT THESE IFS as her companion tonight!..........................

She stops as she reaches the temple corridor again………………she enters the main hall and feels the cool breeze blow across her face……………….and it was then that she heard him…………..

KAISI HAI naku…………..😛

A smile crosses naku's face as she turns around…………..her eyes CRAVING TO GET A GLIMPSE OF HIM and there he stood………………smiling at her…………….dressed in the same black pathaanai naku had last seen him in…………….😛

Naku remains silent and JUST LIKE A THIRSTY MAN IN A DESERT GULPS DOWN WHATEVER WATER HE FINDS………………she keeps on gazing at him…………………wanting her eyes to keep on watching him like this forever!.....................

Dutta steps closer to naku and slowly puts a hand on her shoulder and makes her sit on the temple stairs and seats himself too next to her………………

Not once did naku take her eyes off him…………Not once does she blink……….fearing that he might leave…………………..☺️

Whenever naku felt…………….lonely……alone…….broken…………..hurt……..sad………………or whenever she longed to see him……………..He always used to come………………

Today she felt nothing still he was right there!...................with his presence he seemed to COMFORT HER THAT HE WAS ALWAYS AROUND HER…………..

Dutta speas at last in his soft husky voice breaking the silence-----Aye naku…………..Kya hua?...........Aaj baat nahiin karegii mere se…………………

Naku smiles and says softly--ayi sahib se baat kar li mainey...agley haftey madhu bhi aa rahi hai achchaa sa mahurat dekhkar roop aur baji ki sagayi karva deinge....(nakus voice trails off).... Dutta could see tears welling up in nakus eyes and even before naku could realise that she was crying dutta wipes them away and says--inn akhon mein ansu gavara nahi hai mere ko naku....teri inn nazro mein main sabki khushi dekhna chahta hoon...tu royegi toh unhein himmat kaun dega?

Naku looks into duttas eyes and sobs--iss sab mein main aapki kami kaisi poori karegi? Dutta takes nakus hand in his and says pressing on them gently--jaise aaj tak karti aayi hai...apne pyar...apney vishwas apni himmat se....

Naku says slowly--meri zindagi ki kami aapke pyar ka intezar karti rahegi....laut aao na saab...meri khatir laut aao... 😭

Dutta mover his face closer to naku and she closes her eyes as dutta kisses her on her forehead and rays--aaonga...ek din main zaroor wapas aaonga... 😳Naku opens her eyes and finds herself staring at the empty temple and dark sky!

She finds it hard to curtail her anguish and cries her heart out sitting on the stairs and u hear nakus voice say in the background—


~~HAKEEKAT NAHIN ABb SIRF EK EHSAAS HAI TU.... ZINDAGI JEENEY KI AAKHIRI AAS HAI TU.... JEE PAAON TERI bahon KI PANAAH Mein YEH HO NA SAKAA.... Phir Bhi HAR SAANS TERA INTEZAR KARTI HAI.... Aisa pyaar hai tu.....~~ 😍


naku reaches the car and silent she sits in the car....as nana saheb drives back to patil niwas..... Naku gets down and turns to say to NS--SHUKRIYA.... NS nods his head and says--thak gayi hogi....jaa thoda aaram kar ley.... Naku smiles and walks in and closes the door after getting inside....as nana sahib stares at the empty doorway....

Kaisa laga?.... 😊

Jaldi batao.....😊

Edited by MishalLeoSheeba - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Reserved :D

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^^ me first :D lol

WOW sheeba.....every feeling was written well......I could totally feel her sorrow :(

😒 very sad to see her like this

the mandir scene just amazing yaar ....great update....

and I think now PLEASE bring Dutta ......already missing him and at the way u write

imma cry thinking he'z really gone :P So bring him fast


Edited by dg0628 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
sheeba very well written😊 oh my heart went for nakuu ,temple scene was very emotional 😭 do not make us wait more update dutta entry na😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Beautiful Sheeba. Had tears in the eyes. Poor Naku is missing Dutta. So when does he return
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
very nice update .... please bring dutta can't bear nakku's pain anymore 😭😭😭😭😭

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