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Originally posted by: kiran255

what what what

wol updated

Omg how

omg when

omg who did this !

Omg it got updated

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Omg you didnt

oh u do

well a little too much overacting from my side

will be back soon !

muahhh <3 <3

to all my lovely dostaniansss :D

Originally posted by: krishaa

daya so you updated finally after so long and shocker madhu dutta sister and nakku's parent arrived so they can finally start talks of marriage it reminded me how's your sis wedding preperation going on enjoy it at fullest dear these days comes once in life.

thanx for pm and update waiting for next,hope it will be soon.😊 this for you enjoy .

Originally posted by: suhana19

Reserved😉will be back later🤗

Edited😉

Hey dear Daya🤗

Iam Here finally as always late 😆...

Thanx alot for the wonderful Update and Pm🤗Loved it as always❤️

Wow so Madhu is Dutta"s sister ...But we saw that coming 😆...Can"t wait to see who finds out the truth first Baaji or Dutta😉...So naku"s Parents coming finally ...Can"t wait for the nxt update ,,will wait for the update as u are busy 😉U take care and see ya around

Love and hugs

suhana🤗

Originally posted by: meriyaar

hey daya!

amazing ff, just caught up with it :D each chapter was just gettin more and more interesting. loved it especially the BAAD scenes they were just too good! nakus and duttas love story was soo cute. interesting how everything fits in with dutta DP uncle and madhu hope dutta finds out soon as well as DP. lol, naku and her principles surprised she would even wait for kissing wow don't get girls like her in this day and age lol.

will there be a love story btwn roops and aadhi that will be nice to see :)

wen i read the bit of wen naku and baaji rushed to the icu i thought it wad dutta and was like omg wat happened but i was wrong and i love how u twisted it with madhu being hospitalised instead.

basically daya this ff is amazing and i only came across it after i got a couple pm's from u for the last couple of chapters, took me a while to read it all tho. now im all done and can't wait for the next part so update soon :)

tc

xxx

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

hi daya😛...finally read it! as per usual an interesting read with,plot unfolding...
Hammie 🤗 aja...

part24,WOL:

~interesting recap of Adahi,Madhu,friendship as Ahdhi calls it... also Madhu's accident and her recuperation...also Ahdh's natural curiosity and threfore questionng of Madhu's relationship with both Dutta and his mate Baji...that's the kind of closeness friends require some times to nurture further bonding... well written in a casul style ,without making it to cumbersome👏...interesting cross questioning,about finer details of a relationship e.g...Madu's exact depth of relationship with Dutta and Baji,her true identity...particularly in terms of linkage with Dutta..looming question..was he her brother? was she distancing her self from Baji ,on account of Dutta??...these are the fine bits that put meat on the plot skeleton..so good going Daya!
yeah now madhu has someone to talk to about everything she feels regarding the situation and not have to bottle it all up...and Aadhi and Madhu's friendship will be highlighted often...thank you for the last line...I'm glad you thought soo 😳

~ Daya ,some endearing things between Dutta and his Nakku never change,or cease to amuse.Her fussing over him to eat his breakfast sandwiches,and him scoring a one up by offering her a bite to eat first.😛
omg that is exactly why i put that in the middle...remembered LTL1 and her talks about eating toh snuck in a similar scene 😆

~ interesting how people's unwitting behaviour [Madhu not answering her phone]can play on people's emotion's Baji's discomfort!
so much too...sometimes you don't realize that someone is worried about you and here you are not caring to let them know ...decrease that worry...but in this case she is on the line with the whole Baaji thing...

~good old Nakku jumping to the rescue,problem solving!

~enjoyed in a calm ,quiet soothing way the romantic part ,between Dutta and Nakku..the tactile and the emotional bonding ..with the hoops of nakku telling her family about him,and him being approved by them,dangling in mid air!...immediate family involvment..that which is of great significance between two people who are thinking about marriage!
actually i loved writing this bit...really did..and am glad you liked it too.. 😳

~well trust you to stop where you did Daya! ..
LOL yup so this has been the biggest comment so far...that I stopped here 😆
ok methinks it's her dad who has turned up at her door step ...
and you will know whether ur right or not with next update ..whenever that is

thanks for the update ,and pm enjoyed reading it...noo there are no errors in the script ..done no proof reading...you show offf😆oh hammie...lol u noe as soon as I wrote the proof reading bit I knew u would make a comment 😛 yes it's not a habit to re-read...but I know i make mistakes ...I find them often when I look over scenes after i posted it 😆😆...xxxlove sharmilee from hammie thank you for your wonderful comments...much appreciated..love you lots...phir milenge chalte chalte 😃

Originally posted by: chithoo

res

okie me here to finally edit my 15th aug res😆😆 but i am pardoned as i went on vacation na😛
LOL wow even I am just noticing I have not updated almost a month 😲😆
I was only waiting for ur return 😉 how can I write a story about you with out u here to read it na 😉😛😆

what have we here😊 okie madhu is back on her two feet (literally😃) and our "Sherlock Holmes "Adhi😉 has found out her true identity😃. So she has been giving confused signals to poor baaji and driving him up the wall not fair😆. Aadhi is the one who does/says all the right things at the right time...is he for real😆😆😆. but there are characters like him😃.
you me totally forgot what has happened in this FF 😕😆 so will take ur word for it LOL.. oh yes Aadhi is smart one...who has solved the case 😆 and i know poor Baaji ...ur right she is drving him up the wall...but u are probably happy they keep stealing ur screen space hahaa 😆

Ria and Sam after a long time😳..."hi handsome" ha ha love her. I know I had to bring them back na...or else I would pull what CVs did in LTL where the kala's son and leela's daughter go missing 😆 or rather were non existent and it was only a pigment of our imaginations 😆😆So nakku comes to feed Dutta 😳😳😳 and they are shamelessly romancing in front of 3 friends😆😆😆 hell so what😳.I know you wouldnt care 😛😛 feeding and eyeing 😍 They leave and she promises to return in the evening. Poor baaji again desperately trying to reach madhu and relieved after nakku comes and talks to aadhi and informs her whereabouts. seriously she could have taken his calls atleast😡. baaji too tired of these games i guess and heads home, leaving N and D alone☺️. see what Madhu's absence does for you, you have gotten a moment for romance 😉

okie now i am blushing more than nakku did in the scene☺️😳 u know why b cos D loves when nakku blushes😆.ROFL 🤣 Sundar Jiju kaha ho tum ... OMG 😲 she says she would dump him if her dad didn't approve😛...champ THAT IS EXACTLY ME😳😃 how did u know?you know na that i have seemed to nail ur life down in this FF without even having to stalk u ...haha i have international spies hired 😉😛 i would also use the same language "throw u away like yesterday's trash" 🤣 loved it👏 ha ha LOL u know what I use that line often for jks and stuff 😆 heehee i guess we a very much alike 😳 and the typical male reaction from D chasing her around and cornering her and then 😳☺️ kissy😳.haaye i forgot about this scene 😆 the Knight in shining armour then drives her back home and there is someone at home already...daddy dearest is it?😛 hmmm i need to get on with the next update 😕 lol its been a month ...dang ...well viji i am so very happy u are back from vaca...love the comment and love you more :) take care ...
Phir milenge chalte chalte

loved it daya🤗 waiting for the next update.

Originally posted by: Alamelu

waiting eagerly for the update...i am guessing it is naku's parents upstairs...

Originally posted by: mIsHeZ.x

^^time plss...