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Posted: 14 years ago

@ Shilpi

Reading ur update ..I remembered this track

She was afraid to come out of the locker
she was as nervous as she could be
she was afraid to come out of the locker
she was afraid that somebody would see

Two three four
tell the people what she wore

It was an Itsy Bitsy Teenie Weenie Yellow Polka Dot Bikini
that she wore for the first time today
an Itsy Bitsy Teenie Weenie Yellow Polka Dot Bikini
so in the locker she wanted to stay

Two three four
stick around well tell you more

She was afraid to come out in the open
so a blanket around her she wore
she was afraid to come out in the open
and so she sat bundled up on the shore

Two three four
tell the people what she wore

it was an Itsy Bitsy Teenie Weenie Yellow Polka Dot Bikini
that she wore for the first time today
an Itsy Bitsy Teenie Weenie Yellow Polka Dot Bikini

so in the blanket she wanted to stay

Two three four
stick around well tell you more

Now she's afraid to come out of the water
and i wonder what she's gunna do
now she's afraid to come out of the water
and the poor little girls turning blue

Two three four
tell the people what she wore

It was an Itsy Bitsy Teenie Weenie Yellow Polka Dot Bikini
that she wore for the first time today
an Itsy Bitsy Teenie Weenie Yellow Polka Dot Bikini
so in the water she wanted to stay

From the locker to the blanket
from the blanket to the shore
from the shore to the water


She is so afraid of living her life ..but Dutta will not give up …..But That's what we call love..Being there for one other ….So cute

17 DRESSES …Wow ...But I guess Dutta did not mind chking her out in each and every one of them .

I felt really bad but yet proud of Raksh …..

Bad becoz she is helpless as a mother , Proud becoz she refuses to give up and continues to fight …

Near the place I grew up there is a family wo have two such kids …..But the way, the parents have brought them up , is joy to see .

Not everyone can do so ... can give so much love and bear pain with a smile …it takes a lot courage to do so .

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Posted: 14 years ago

Wonderful update, very well written. A special stranger helping Rakshanda accept her child was very good. You are really a good writer,👏👏 thanks😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
beautifully written...sometimes they do say that people who are not that close can see things which people who are too close don't see...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Alamelu

beautifully written...sometimes they do say that people who are not that close can see things which people who are too close don't see...



Hi,

I have never seen ur comment before..hence a heartfelt thank you for reading my FF...it feels good to see many new readers pressing the like button or writing a line or two...😳..thanks and please do read all the updates tht are yet to come.😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
So i am back again😛.
What😲u forgot ,arre,maine abhi pura chapter nahi complete kiya hai.😆
Nakku is so damn good at reading someone's face & behaviour.I guess it kind of comes when u urself have to become adult a little too ahead of ur age.Her loss of mother made her instantly a mother of Sonu & Debu ,so like any mom,she too experienced all the sorrows & happiness of her siblings.
Dutta on the other hand was looking this whole thing from Dr's perception or more to the point of ex.BF.For him,Rakshanda's present unfortune & her child's problem really didn't matter much,Becaz as per him,it was her choice & it is her life.But,still what surprised me is,even after all these years due to same circle of Dr. friends,he kept track of Rakshanda & her kid.
Like Nakku said,until u urself got thru such situation ,u cann't feel the pain the other person is bearing.
it is very easy to blame the woman naa,even after so much education,Dutta still ended up blaming Rakshanda,it was only after Nakku made him realise that in this mis-hap her hubby was also equally responsible,he said yaa ok.
The respect for Nakku grew much higher in my eyes,when she tried to explain him as to why she kept that child away.She too must have felt scared.I also liked how she gave Kalatai's example,someone who is almost in the same boat as Raksha.
But,still in the entire convo. I felt Dutta was slightly aloof,as if that part of his chapter is closed & now he really is not interested in turning those pages.
Finally the reality behind Raksha's lonliness came out,but even Ned was suffering so much.
I really liked how u started their convo. with each of them trying to blame the other one,& slowly coming to the focal point,her delivery which kind of was catalyst in separatling them & then again that same issue made them connect to each other's pain & then coming to their child & how they failed in taking care of him & now how they want to try being parents & be together for their child's sake.
I really liked how Raksha admired Nakku as a special person to make her realise that everything is still not lost.
Nakku indeed turned out angel for their family.
Regarding autism ,still in India people have wrong conception.They easily misunderstand it for abnormality & sometimes behave very harsh with such kids.
I really respect & admire those parents who bring up such blessed child👏.
Some how i was reminded of Zee Tv's show -Aap Ki Antara.
That show was so close to reality,i was really touched by the show.
I absolutely admire u for the way u wrote the entire convo. between Nakku & Dutta ,as well as Ned & Raksha.👏
I hope everything sorts out nicely for Rakshanda & her family.
Now,i realise Nakku's coming to budapest was unasked blessing from God for Rakshanda.
Nakku is such a person,wherever she goes,thru her good deeds she wins people's heart.
Now,will wait patiently till weekend for next update.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update!
Have you considered publishing a book Shilpita? You should, you are such a talented writer!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Shilpita, Shilpita, in the hiding!

When is the next update going to be ready for my reading?😍😍

Edited by mozart66 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
@manju: Arey pahele Vandu ka comment to aaney do...i can't write without reading her comment...My imagination stops flowing without her comments
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Posted: 14 years ago
Tabhi main sochu ki ye update itna suna kyn lag raha hai.
Btw where is vandu?
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: preety_219

Tabhi main sochu ki ye update itna suna kyn lag raha hai.

Btw where is vandu?



busy solving everyone's problem and tired to her bones..poor thing!

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