FF:Imperfect Perfections Ch32-Pg142(14.4)Last UD - Page 78

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Posted: 14 years ago
shil whooo..now my turn to say very well written in English ,however the dialouges between dutta/Nakku in their own language ,nothing to beat that ,so real,so true to the real characters,the complete content of the localised language makes full sense..its their essence yaar ,their spirit... now Iam trying to write my FF dialouges of D/N in English ,they sound complete gobbledygook! i'll leave them for your perusal in my next update ,but shilly utter tat they seem to me . sorry to digress
Well the opening was nothing short of sheer ecstasy! honestly gave me gosse bumps or shall I say the description of their intimacy was very well described, and clearly portrayed the depth of their status i.e hubby and wife.. but it had elements of romantic familiarity that married couples normally share ,or newly weds share! wow and wow! absolutly loved the conov ! also loved the apellatives given to Nakku meeto,bundharyaa,bacheei,and dutta as sadhu ha haaa!
This Lellu sounds so like a typical patronisiing dowager! Ok so Nakku might be jetting off to the land of the Danes,and Danube thujhe pata hai shil hamlet ki home territory hai ! xx luv you aur jaldi tell is she going abroad or not?
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Posted: 14 years ago
i love the way u write. Wish we could have seen half of this on screen😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
jst back after a two week vacation... hav to catch up with FF frm chap 19... will comment as soon as i read it...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Shiplita ,awesome update ,the story and the characters are coming out so gud ,, i could picturise the entire scence today .. the intial , intimate moments ☺️☺️☺️☺️ and the party arrangements ,
leela tai ,, is so perceptive , she new nakku is a good person , but she had her apprehensions and now she is gettign her confidence in Nakku
And WOW nakku is Wooing all people around her with her simplicity and innocence
I truly love this dutta you have created is soo understanding and 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 cant say ,,no words to express he is amazing and huggable and 😍😍😍
Thsnk for the update
Truly enjoyed ( me breaking rules am at wrk **lunch time ,but could nto help myself 😳)
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Posted: 14 years ago

ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!!!!

that is all am gona say...



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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesomee updatee...awww how romantic.. on the roof in the rainn *Sophie starts dancing* lool..
Im so glad leelatai is lyk openin up more to her.. she's lyk a mother figure n aww im proud of Nakku.. she handled everyting very nicely.. Lol..Dutta is such a badmash n how cute,, even infront of Leela they fight lyk kids..bless..
Hungary.. nice country.. yaay sooo honeymooon ehhh :P
i hope she agrees.. well im sure u will mke sure she agrees.. hai na shilpi? lool
Update soon :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
I just love your story...👏 ...waiting for next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
Very natural progression Shilpita...Naku and Budapest...abhi aayega maza !
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! tasha married life was moving really interesting...
i loved it...looking fwd...

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Posted: 14 years ago
Shilpi

U seem to know a lot abt terraces , my friend ...It reminded me of the scene from murder .though Like this one better ...as the characters are better and it's a scene with class

"Accha? Bholibhali? Toh mujhe zor zor se kaun pukar raha tha? "

When I first read this line , I was like did he actually say that and mean what I think he means or is it my imagination ...Glad it was not

Loved their first meeting ...every love story has funny moments and their to be cherished... She sure does know how to challenge him ...


Dinner ...she is learning not that she did not know what to do ... but its diff from her way of living ...

Now for the 2week trip ... Looking forward

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