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kiran255

@kiran255

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#691

Yahooo me first 😃

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.scorpio10

@.scorpio10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#692

Originally posted by: preety_219
Since i filled my reserved spot,here i am again to ask for next update😆
When will u do it😉

Gor atyachar ... emotional torture mat kar , have pity on us poor souls

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Nidhi Chandrakar

@MeetPremeer

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#693

loved it shilpa dear
plz continue soon

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naina

@krishaa

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#694

its ok that update will be on weekend but i have a request that please keep next update on tasha romance and SR 2 IN DETAIL please😍.do provide us a long update as romantic treat on weekend and please continue their romance with their new phase of life,in strugggle and happiness.😊

try to update before wekend if possible.love your writing .keep it up👍🏼

A REQUEST: if possible in your next update please describe nakku look,her beauty ,her color etc.i know it doesn't matter but just wanted to make sure about her looks.please do consider it.😎😊

Edited by krishaa - 14 years ago

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554064

Hibernated

Posted: 14 years ago

#695

Hey Shilpi🤗

Aweome update gal👏..lovely..aww rasgulla sequence ahen ahen too gud😳...n wow dat ws really typicaln natural behaviour of womens...😆 kehana mat mere liye hai...aapko bhook lag hai...accha nahi lagata naa...😆i heard dis so many tymes...in whole update all emotions u coverd yaar👏👏 👏...lol n train sequnce..wow awesome...best line by D ..mera sansar kya upar baseyegi n she sed chilla kyun rahe hai...😆man i had dis experinced dis ROFL...soo natural...too gud👏...n alas last he didnt care abt others n she blushing..wow..n finally who dint care abt world...he gt irritate by a kid n his giggles😆... expained a small kid "meri biwi hai"😍

Great update yaar loved it..Thnks alot for dis too😳

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#696

finally shil read the update,enjoyed it...yes loved the whole nuptial night sequence as we say in Punjabi 'meethaaa' bhu meetha! ki gal hai,wah bhi wah! It was very seductively written and most certainly brought out the sweetness and sugary part of the scene,very tastefully! Also loved the phrase you used when he saw her in the negligee 'safai' ,sums his thoughts quite ingenious. Her thoughts about herself ater the morning after were exclusive and very interesting and well put,so good one. The thought provoking conversation about his existing disbelief in religion ,shows a fore knowledge of what his wife will grapple with in their future. O ,I also loved the reference to NRIs,[cricket] and their take on viisting home and viceversa. The train bit was light hearted and amusing,especially as it reminded me our Dutta's bouts of impatient rage! Thankyou my mate for this packed with engaging ideas,once again very well written update... xxxyours hammie

thanks for the PMx

Edited by Hamlet53 - 14 years ago