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Wanderbug

@Wanderbug

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: suhana19
Hey shilpi🤗
Wow once again beautifully written yaar ....U always take our breath away😉......Loved it yaar .....👍🏼👏I really hope and pray something like this happens in the show as well.....Iam so glad that she told him about her past ..that was really sweet ......Omg he called sethji bandar🤣.....

Ab who are these junglie"s😆..........

Thanx a million for the wonderful treat ....Keep it up ...U rocked it like always....

Love and hugs

suhana🤗

Suhana,🤗

i am so sorry for not pressing like..before..actually i did it..but maybe pressed it twice..hence it didn't show..

@all....

i love reading all ur comments and criticism...it helps me improve..i may not be able to respond to all as my life right now sucks..but i show my gratitude by pressing the like...plz don't mind guyz.. love u all😳

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Pooja_219

@Pooja_219

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Hey Shilpi,

How do u do it every single time?How easily u include something of reality into ur story so beautifully.

I really wish this type of normal conversation happens between dutta & nakku.😍

BTW are u planning to write the second part of this OS?

Few lines from taken from some site :(i felt this suits corrent state of tasha)

Dil chahta hai tumse pyaari si baat ho,

Khamosh tarane ho,lambi si raat ho,

Fir unse raat bhar yahi meri baat ho,

Tum hi meri jindagi ho,

Tum hi meri kaynaat ho.

Thanks a lot for this wonderful post.

Pooja😊

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Wanderbug

@Wanderbug

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: preety_219

Hey Shilpi,

How do u do it every single time?How easily u include something of reality into ur story so beautifully.

I really wish this type of normal conversation happens between dutta & nakku.😍

BTW are u planning to write the second part of this OS?

Few lines from taken from some site :(i felt this suits corrent state of tasha)

Dil chahta hai tumse pyaari si baat ho,

Khamosh tarane ho,lambi si raat ho,

Fir unse raat bhar yahi meri baat ho,

Tum hi meri jindagi ho,

Tum hi meri kaynaat ho.

Thanks a lot for this wonderful post.

Pooja😊

Lovely lines Pooja..

Yeah i do plan to but lets see how today's episode shapes up..😳

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kiran255

@kiran255

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Hey Shilpi !

Its always a pleasure reading ur Os

and this is one of them !

I love the way u described whole atmosphere of the jungle

their heart to heart talk

specially abt they being together with no secrets no lies :)

it was beautiful

You knoW*His is only the place where they can discuss their past

cuz when back to PN they have alot of battles to face !

I love it

and wow ehrn they are moving

i love the way Dutta took charge of the situation

he indeed is he brain ,

he wiothout eyes knows where to go !

a true dare devil :D

The way he guided her , alittle jokes and

woooo final blow out

who are these ppl

can we have continution

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz😳

Loved it sooooooo much !
2day ur os reminded me of a chapter i read in my school

The wise king

The story was like King son was send to teacher to be taught

and the teacher send himto jungle and ask him to tell him all the voices he hear

he came back after a year and tell him all the sounds(lions roar , birds chirping etc)

he again send him and ask him to hear it agin

and then he goes and everyday he hears the voice but oneday he

hears something differenrt

he came back

and told his teacher he heard the sound when the sun warms the aerth , when a flower opens (i kow its pointless )

but u make me remember this

he is hearing the unheard and that is his biggest success !

cuz Dutta is always kaan ka kacha

but now without eyes i think he has finally got his sight back :d

LOve it so much Shilpi

u are awesome !

P.S abt teh athanjali thing

i think its the sweetest thing man are and always will be the one protecting women

but it was his love for Naku k he calls her his half ang !

that is just too sweet :D

Forget abt what cvs trying to do just think

abt in the prespective of hubby and wife in love !

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prettywoman

@prettywoman

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

negative threads on our forum. Well done for keeping up that Tasha spirit and maybe even rekindling that spirit which may have dimmed for some of us here!

The conversation between them and their thoughts are just so natural that there is a beautiful flow in this OS. And I love how in spite of Dutta ebing blind and replying on Nakku, you have not made Dutta look weak or dependent on Naku.. same goes for naku too..and seriously the best bit that justifies what I said was in spite of just getting her back in his life, he still boils over when he realises that they have been going round and round! That was so DSP to the fore..he is and will always be DSP as long as he breathes. Yes, blindness is a temporary inconvenience at the least to him, but doesn't take away the essence of the man he is. And you have just portrayed that beautifully Shilpi.. I am so looking forward to the next part as I am sure we will see DSP in all his glory there too. Kudos for attempting this OS. I had to quickly write a few lines as soon as I read it. I am a bit rushed this morning, so will come back to this later :)

And of course, the prologue was the cherry on the cake! It amazes me how you always connect these lil incidents from your life to an OS or an FF so beautifully!

Edited by prettywoman - 14 years ago

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triasha banerji

@triasha

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.............SHILPI.............every os u write so well............as if i can c all the things happening.................loved it...............ahem ahem..........kya romance hai...☺️...........wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww u again put me to tasha land.....😍........